讀后續(xù)寫人與動(dòng)物類WaitingforGoldie講義-高三英語(yǔ)一輪專題

題目：Danny’sgrandfatherlovedtokeeppigeons,andGoldiewasoneofthem.Goldiehadgoldeneyes,whichwasveryrareinpigeons.Grandfathersaidhehadneverhadapigeonlikeher.Goldiewasachampionracingpigeonandhadwonloadsofcups.Butonce,aroundthetimeGoldiewasreleasedtwohundredmilesawayforarace,Danny’sgrandfatherwashospitalizedwithaheartattack.TheresponsibilityofwaitingforGoldieandtakingcareoftheotherpigeonsthenfellonDanny.However,Goldiedidnotflybackontimeasusual.Inordernottoupsethisgrandfather,whilevisitinghimthatnightwithhisparents,DannyliedthatGoldiehadalreadyreturnedandwonthefirstplace.“Iknewit”,saidDanny’sgrandfather,settlingbackonhispillows,“Ialwaysknewshewasawinner.She’soneinamillion.”Grandfatherbelievedthelie.Sometimesgrandfather’sracingpigeonsgotlostduetobadweatherorgotattackedbyfalcons(獵鷹)andnevercamebackhome,butthosehadneverhappenedtoGoldie.Shealwayscamehome,rightontime.“Goldiemusthavebeeneatenbythosefalconsnestinginthequarry(采石場(chǎng))onherwaybackhome”,Dannythoughttohimselfbitterlyandhischestwasburning.Dannysworetohimselftotakerevenge.“Theyareathreat,thosefalcons!Imustgetridofthemandpulldowntheirnest.”ItonlytookDannyfiveminutestoreachthequarry.Dannylookedaroundthequarrywallsandfoundtheirnestonasteepestside,whichwasalongwayup.Heclimbedfast—therewereoldtreerootstograbholdof.Hishandswerebleeding.Buthedidn’tfeelthepain.Hewashangingontherockwallwithhisfingertipslikeastarfish.Hisarmsweresoweakandtrembling,buthewasfinallythere.注意：1.續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive.【故事大意】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Danny的爺爺養(yǎng)了很多鴿子，其中Goldie是最好的一只，一天爺爺生病住院了，照顧鴿子的責(zé)任落在了Danny身上，但是Danny發(fā)現(xiàn)Goldie沒有回來(lái)，以為它被獵鷹殺死了，所以Danny決定摧毀獵鷹的巢穴幫Goldie報(bào)仇，但是當(dāng)他看到巢中的小獵鷹時(shí)，他放棄了復(fù)仇，確發(fā)現(xiàn)了受傷的Goldie，最后救下了Goldie。【續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展】1.

段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“就在她伸出手去摧毀獵鷹的巢時(shí)，他突然看到了里面的小獵鷹?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Danny看到小獵鷹從而放棄復(fù)仇。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“走到一半，他看到戈?duì)柕显趲r石的一個(gè)洞里，翅膀斷了，但還活著?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Danny救下Goldie，并慶幸自己沒有沖動(dòng)復(fù)仇。2.

續(xù)寫線索：去復(fù)仇——看到小獵鷹——放棄復(fù)仇——發(fā)現(xiàn)Goldie——救下Goldie——慶幸沒有復(fù)仇3.

詞匯激活行為類①消失：vanish/disappear②意識(shí)到：realize/beeawareof③摧毀：destroy/smash情緒類①生氣：anger/annoyed②慶幸：fortunate/thankfully【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalconswillfalltotheground.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)參考答案：Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.HesuddenlyrememberedGoldiewhenshewaslittle,fluffyandhelpless.Thefeelingofangervanishedlikewaterrunningdownadrain,andthefeelingofrevengewasthrownoutofthewindow.Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalconswillfalltotheground.Onlydeathawaitsthem.ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso.Withoutharmingtheyoung,helplessfalcon,hecontinuedtoclimboverthetopofthehill.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive.Withouthesitation,DannycarefullyliftedGoldieoutandrushedhimtothehospital.Luckily,withDanny’scare,Goldie’sinjurywascuredandGrandpaalsorecoveredandreturnedhome.Dannywasfortunatenottobecarriedawaybyangeranddidsomethingheregretted.Guesswhat?WhenGrandpamethischampionpigeon,Goldiehadalreadyjoinedherfellowracingpigeons.So,Grandpawasstillinthedarkabouttheepisodeofhergettinghurt.Goldiewouldalwaysbeourchampionpigeon.默寫版：Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.HesuddenlyrememberedGoldiewhenshewaslittle,________________毛茸茸且無(wú)助的.Thefeelingofanger______________________________________就像水從下水道里流下來(lái)一樣消失了，復(fù)仇的感覺被扔出了窗外.Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalcons___________________會(huì)掉在地上.Onlydeathawaitsthem.ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso._________________________________________他沒有傷害那只年輕無(wú)助的獵鷹，繼續(xù)爬上山頂.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive._____________________________________________丹尼毫不猶豫地小心翼翼地把戈?duì)柕媳Я顺鰜?lái)，并將它緊急送往醫(yī)院.Luckily,withDanny’scare,Goldie’sinjurywascuredandGrandpaalsorecoveredandreturnedhome.________________________________