考作文感謝父母信件

假如你是李華，在你18歲生日時(shí)，你收到了父母送給你的生日卡和禮物。為了表示感謝，你給父母寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝父母的生日禮物及18年來的養(yǎng)育之恩；2.讀生日卡后的感想；3.承諾高考后要為父母做一件事。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。書信體特點(diǎn)，簡潔流暢，語氣親切，用詞溫馨Iamwritingtothankyouforthebirthdaycardandthegiftyousentmeonmy18thbirthday.I’dliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforeverythingyouhavedoneformeinthepast18years.MumandDad,IpromiseIwillcookyouabigmealafterthecollegeentranceexaminationtoshowmydeeploveforyou.Opening:I’msohappytoreceivethebirthdaycardandthegift/presentyougavemeonmy18thbirthday.I’mwritingtoshowmygratitudetoyouforbringingmeupinthepast18years.para2Afterreadingthebirthdaycard,I’mdeeplymoved.Ican’thelpthinkingofthelove,care,devotion,encouragementandunconditionallovefromyou.I’msoluckytohavesuchcaringandunderstandingparentsasyou.Iwillliveuptoyourexpectationsandetheoneyouareproudof.endingMumandDad,inreturnforyourdeepestlove,Ipromisethatafterthecollegeentranceexamination,Iwillcookamealforyou/panyyoutothecinema/dohousework/takeyououtforatripwiththemoneythatIwillearnbydoingpart-timejobs.良好生活習(xí)慣的意義Itisofgreatimportancetokeepgoodhealthhabits.Goodhealthhabitscontributesto/leadstoahealthybody倡議內(nèi)容Iappealto/callon

usstudentstodo…..從我做起Startfromourselves一起努力Worktogether評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1. 審題2.語言得體性3.語言準(zhǔn)確性4.信息完善性5.字?jǐn)?shù)、書寫卷面作文自評要點(diǎn)1.卷面（A/B/C/D）2.字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求3.要點(diǎn)是否齊全、順序與要求一致：圍繞主題“為了表示感謝，你給父母寫一封信”展開 1)感謝父母的生日禮物及18年來的養(yǎng)育之恩 2)讀生日卡后的感想（感受+聯(lián)想） 3)承諾高考后要為父母做的一件事（具體可行、簡述意義或原因）4.合理分段（2–3段）5.語法錯(cuò)誤6.單詞錯(cuò)誤語法填空及填空題普遍問題：過度涂改，書寫不清晰，動(dòng)詞變化錯(cuò)誤多

寫出下列動(dòng)詞的ing形式sit/fix/swim/run/putpermit/begin/offer/refer/forbidforget/suffer/occur/infer/preferThehat_____(hang)intheclosetwasboughtyesterday.If______(relate)tothecase,hewillberathernervous.Thelaststudent______(leave)tothelabwasaskedtolockthedoor.After_________(wake)bythealarmclock,hehadtogetup.Janepausedinfrontofacounter______someattractivetieswereondisplay.Thisisthesecondtimethatthey______(sing)thesonginEnglish.CF:Itisabouttimethatthey____________(begin)theirgame.Withmoremoney______(invest),theprojectwentonsmoothly.Thestorythat______(ba