專題02寫事記敘文-2024年高考英語滿分作文考前必備

專題02寫事記敘文一、題型解讀與寫作攻略1.題型解讀故事性記敘文常見的形式有：故事、傳記、游記、日記、新聞報道等。高中英語書面表達一般是按時間發(fā)生的先后順序記敘一件事情?？臻g順序一般用于參觀某單位、某場所或某建筑物的記敘。二是在記敘的時候要注意夾敘夾議，適當?shù)匕l(fā)表議論或個人感想。三是文章結尾一定要點明主題，簡要說明活動的目的、意義或主要收獲等。2.寫作攻略寫作時需要注意以下幾點：1．要把握住記敘文的六個要素，即時間(when)、地點(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和過程(how)。2．要把握故事性記敘文的結構。在文章開頭要交代故事發(fā)生的時間、地點和人物，然后寫事件的原因及發(fā)展過程，最后寫結果。同時在結尾處要盡量自然，點明文章主題。并且要有一條線索貫穿全文，使整個文章融為一體。3．要把握好人稱。在寫此類文章時通常用第一人稱或第三人稱。4．要注意時態(tài)的運用。在故事寫作過程中，一般用過去時態(tài)。在描寫背景或景象時，常用過去進行時，這樣顯得更加形象生動。結構方面一般遵循“三段論”的方式，文章總體框架由開頭段、主體段和結尾段三部分構成：1.主題句（topicsentence）：文章展開關鍵句，交代文章主題（寫事的記敘文一般表述事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、人物、起因和結果(5”W”+1”H”)），以及感受。2.主體段（supportingsentences）：緊扣主題句展開（寫事的記敘文通常敘述事情經(jīng)過、發(fā)展及結果，可按時間，地點和事件發(fā)展為線索）。3.結尾句（concludingsentence）：事件帶來的感想體會。二、高分模板素材1.常用詞語1．常用的連接詞First...Then...Next...Finally；Some...Some...Others；Theboys...Thegirls...；Some...theothers...Therestofus/them...2．時間順序earlyinthemorning/intheearlymorning；inthemiddleoftheday/atnoon；lateintheafternoon/inthelateafternoon；far/deepintothenight；inthepast/atpresent/inthefuture；first，second，next，then，finally；atfirst，inthebeginning；atlast，intheend；shortlyafterwards，atonce，immediately，allofasudden，suddenly，soon；themoment，assoonas，thefirsttime，notuntil，nexttime，before，after，etc.2.常用句型★精彩開頭1．Oneday，onthewayto...一天，在去……的路上……2．LastSunday，mymotherandIweredoing...whenwesaw/heard...上周日，我和母親正在做……突然這時我們看到/聽到……3．About...o'clockoneeveningin...，my...wasdoing...大約在晚上……點，在……，我的……正在做……★豐滿主體1．Withoutdelay/hesitation，I/wedialed120/119.毫不猶豫，我/我們撥打了120/119。2．Itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulance/afireenginearrived.不久，一輛救護車/消防車到了。3．Wetriedourbesttohelp...，but...我們盡最大努力去幫忙……，但……4．Wemakeeveryefforttohelp...我們努力幫忙……5．Afterawhile，manypeoplecametohelpus.過了一會兒，許多人過來幫我們。★余味結尾1．Atlast，...wassaved/wesucceeded.最后，……被救了/我們成功了。2．Althoughwewereverytired，wefeltveryhappy.盡管我們很累，但我們很高興。3．Whatanunforgettableexperience!多么難忘的一次經(jīng)歷啊！三、模板作文典型模板Liferesemblesapacketofchocolatewhichhasavarietyofflavors,whenitestooneofthemostimpressivethingsinmylife,itsuddenlyoccurredtomethatwetookpartinanafterclassactivity—……withmyfriendslastweekendinthe……,anditwasafantasticexperience.Inthemorningwearrivedat……Meanwhile,I……Intheend,allofusnotonlygained……,butalsolearnt……Whatawonderfultimewehad!ItwasaverymeaningfulactivityandnotonlycanIhave

somenewdiscoveriesbutalsoIexperiencethejoyoflabor

andenrichmyknowledge.

模板范文上周你班舉行了“垃圾分類進社區(qū)”義務宣講活動，請用英語簡單介紹此次活動。內(nèi)容包括:1.活動目的;2.活動過程;3.你的收獲。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Aimedatenhancingourunderstandingofgarbagesortingandraisingtheawarenessofprotectingourenvironment,ourclasslaunchedamunityvoluntarypublicityactivity,whichleavesmeadeepimpression.AllthevolunteersgatheredatourgateearlyinthemorninglastSaturdayandthenwetookbustothemunity.Onarrival,weweredividedintofourgroups,eachmakingaspeechtopeoplelivingthere.Wegaveadetailedpresentationaboutthemeasuresofgarbagesorting.Meanwhile,westressedthedifferenceitwouldmaketoourmunity.Moreover,aninteractivequestionandanswerhelpedpopularizetheirmonsense.Throughthisactivity,wehavenotonlyenrichedoursocialexperience,butalsomadetheawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionmoredeeplyrootedinourhearts.Isincerelyhopewecansparejointeffortstomakeourhomemoreandmorebeautiful.四、高分必背范文10篇1.【2020年全國高考英語II卷】上周末，你和同學參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場情況；

2.采摘過程；3.個人感受。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。題目：MyWeekendMyweekendLastweekend,Iparticipatedinanactivityheldinthefarm,whereI

harvestedalot.Now,mybriefintroductionisasfollows.Locatedinthesuburb,thefarmismainlyintendedfortheorganicfarm.

Agreatnumberoftouristscanbeattractedtoexperiencethevariousactivitiesthere.However,whatinterestedmemostwasthefruitssectionwhereIfreelycarriedthebasketstogetwhatIwanted,suchaspeaches,strawberries

andcherries.

Whiledoingthetask,Ihadagoodknowledgeofthefruitsplanted,includingthenutritioncontainedandtechnologyapplied.Personally,Ifinditmeaningfultotastetheculture.

Beingfarawayfromthefarm,Ionceknewalittleaboutthefarming.Butmyhorizonisbroadenedandknowledgeisalsoenrichedthistime.SomygreatthanksshouldbegiventotheschoolUnionandthenextexperienceisexpected.【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求學生為英語角寫一篇關于和同學一起參加采摘活動的短文?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文。時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。結構：總分法。要求：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；第二步：列提綱（重點短語）tookpartin；wasresponsiblefor；ameaningfulday；shouldtreasure第三步：連詞成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits

theotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結構順序：介紹農(nóng)場；描述采摘過程；個人感受2.表示并列補充關系：and;But;Through第五步：潤色修改1、非謂語動詞：activityheldinthefarm（done作后置定語）；Locatedinthesuburb（作狀語）；thefruitsplanted（done作后置定語）；thenutritioncontainedandtechnologyapplied（done作后置定語）；Beingfarawayfrom...（Being作狀語）2、定語從句：...whereweharvestedalot...3、主語從句：...what

interestedmemostwasthefruitssection...

getwhatIwanted4、被動句：...touristscanbeattractedto...Butmyhorizon

isbroadened

andknowledgeisalsoenriched

thistime.SomygreatthanksshouldbegiventotheschoolUnionandthenextexperienceisexpected2.【2020年全國新高考Ⅰ卷】假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括:1.參加人員:2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下:3.活動反響。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ACrossCountryRunningRaceACrossCountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrosscountryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthepetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.[解析]這是一篇應用文。本篇要求考生就上周日學校舉行的5公里越野賽活動寫一篇新聞報道。體裁:應用文時態(tài):根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應以一般過去時為主結構:總分總要求:2.跑步路線第二步:列提綱(重點詞組)attend/witness/drawone'sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:連詞成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrosscountryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthepetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)表示并列的連詞:and/but/or/so...狀語從句連詞:because/if/though/although...定語從句連詞:which/that/when/where...第五步:修改潤色(加入高級詞匯或短語)【高分短語及句型]1.enthusiasticparticipants充滿激情的參賽者2.giveuphalfway半途而廢3.perseverein堅持4.enrichourschoollife豐富我們的校園生活5.thesignificanceofpersistence堅持的重要性6.Notonlydidtheraceenrichourschoollifebutmadeusrealizethesignificanceofpersistence.這場比賽不僅豐富了我們的校園生活，而且讓我們意識到堅持的重要性。(本句中notonly位于句首，其后面的分句用部分倒裝)3.【2021年6月浙江卷】昨天你參觀了學校舉辦的學生國畫作品展。請給校英文報寫一篇宣傳，內(nèi)容包括:1.展覽時間、地點;2.觀展感受;3.推薦觀展。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Inordertoenrichstudents’afterschoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollibrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks;everystudentisweletovisit.【高分詞匯、短語及句型]繪畫:drawing→painting激發(fā):spirit→spark欣賞:appreciate→admire歡迎:greet→wele原句:Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks;everystudentisweletovisit.合并句:Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,duringwhicheverystudentisweletovisit.[高分句型1]anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.(本句是which引導的非限制性定語從句。)[高分句型2]Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.(本句是which引導的非限制性定語從句。)[高分句型3]Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.(notonly...butalso連接的并列句。)4.【2023·浙江·統(tǒng)考模擬預測】假如你是李華，某英文網(wǎng)站發(fā)布了以“ASymbolofChina”為題的征稿啟事，請你撰稿介紹你眼中的中國象征。內(nèi)容包括：1.象征物名稱；2.象征物特色；3.推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ASymbolofChinaASymbolofChinaAmongthemanysymbolsrepresentingChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.TheGreatWallisoneofthegreatestmiraclescreatedbytheancientChineseasthewitnessofChina’slonghistory.OriginallybuiltbyEmperorQinshihuangandexpandedandstrengthenedintheMingDynasty,itbecametheworld’slargestmilitarystructure.Anditshistoricandstrategicimportanceismatchedonlybyitsarchitecturalsignificance,makingitasymboloftheunityandstrengthoftheChinesepeople.TheGreatWallisnowthebiggesttouristattractioninChina.Astheoldsayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman”.Soeandexperienceitatfirsthand.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生撰寫一篇英文稿，介紹自己眼中的中國象征，包括象征物名稱、象征物特色和推薦理由。許多的：many→numerous奇跡：miracle→wonder旅游景點：touristattraction→scenicspot親自：atfirsthand→byoneself簡單句變復合句原句：AmongthemanysymbolsrepresentingChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.拓展句：AmongthemanysymbolsthatrepresentChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.【點睛】【高分句型1】OriginallybuiltbyEmperorQinshihuangandexpandedandstrengthenedintheMingDynasty,itbecametheworld’slargestmilitarystructure.（運用了過去分詞作狀語）【高分句型2】Astheoldsayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman”.（運用了as引導的非限制性定語從句）5.【2023·福建模擬預測】假定你是李華，上周你校舉辦了中國傳統(tǒng)文化周活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動內(nèi)容；3.活動反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ATraditionalChineseCultureWeekATraditionalChineseCultureWeekAtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.Everyoneofuschoseonetoourtasteandweenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生為上周你校舉辦的中國傳統(tǒng)文化周活動寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：活動目的；活動內(nèi)容；活動反響。增加：enhance→boost參加：participatein→takepartin許多：numerous→massesof獲得：gained→obtained簡單句變復合句原句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.拓展句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschool,whosepurposewastoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.【點睛】[高分句型1]Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.(運用了非謂語動詞作賓語)[高分句型2]Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)6.假設你是李華，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音(TikTok)而不能自拔，寫信向你尋求幫助，請你給他回一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和關心；2.沉迷抖音的影響:花費大量時間觀看和分享視頻，影響學習。3.提出具體建議:1）開始一些其他的愛好，如閱讀，聽音樂或下棋。2）通過面對面的交流來結交更多的朋友要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJohn,IamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromTikTokaddiction.Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.Therefore,immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopit.Youshouldstartsomeotherhobbies,suchasreading,listeningtomusicorplayingchess.Besides,youhadbettermakemorefriendsthroughfacetofacemunication.Isincerelyhopethattheseideascanhelpyouwiththeproblem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。朋友John沉迷抖音而無法自拔，要求考生給朋友John回封郵件，表示理解并提出建議。【詳解】誠摯的：sincere→genuine專注：payattentionto→focuson采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction/takesteps不能做某事：can’tdosomething→makesbunabletodo簡單句變復合句原句：Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTok.Theyspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline.Itmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.拓展句：Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.【點睛】【高分句型1】IamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromTikTokaddiction.（hear后跟that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）7.【2022·云南師大附中高三階段練習】假定你是學生李華,你的外國朋友Sherry非常喜歡2022年北京冬奧會開幕式，但她對其中展現(xiàn)的一些中國元素不甚了解，請你寫一封電子郵件向她介紹一下開幕式中部分中國傳統(tǒng)文化的元素。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.開幕式以24秒倒計時代表了中國24個節(jié)氣；2.引導員服裝展示了中國國畫風格和虎年的標志。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：二十四節(jié)氣the24solarterms;立春theBeginningofSpring;虎年YearoftheTigerDearSherry,TheopeningceremonyofBeijing2022WinterOlympicGameswarmedChinesepeople’sheartwithsomuchexcitementandChineseculturethatIwillattempttoexplainthemtoyou.TheopeningceremonybeganonFebruary4th,whichcoincideswiththe“BeginningofSpring”,thefirstofthe24solartermsoftheyear.ThisdesignindicatesthattheWinterOlympicswillpaveawayforthevibrantfuture.Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwiththefeaturesoftraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.TheirhatsandshoesarecharacterizedwiththeYearoftheTiger,demonstratingpeople’sgoodwishesforthenewyear.Furthermore,snowflakesofunityandpapercutofjoybothshowedsplendidChineseculture.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutourculture,I’mherewaitingforyouringtoChina.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于告知信。要求考生給外國朋友Sherry寫信，向她介紹2022年北京冬奧會開幕式中部分中國傳統(tǒng)文化的元素?！驹斀狻块_始：begin→start表明：indicate→show充滿生機的：vibrant

→exciting/energetic此外：besides→moreover/inaddition簡單句變復合句原句：Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwiththefeaturesoftraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.拓展句：Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwhichfeaturesthetraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.【點睛】[高分句型1]TheopeningceremonybeganonFebruary4th,whichcoincideswiththe“BeginningofSpring”,thefirstofthe24solartermsoftheyear.(運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]ThisdesignindicatesthattheWinterOlympicswillpaveawayforthevibrantfuture.(運用了that引導賓語從句)8.【2022·湖北武漢·高三期中】你是校英文報主編，你報近期推出的“Myfavourite…”征文活動圓滿結束，你打算寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動簡介；2.活動評價。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Recently,theEssayWritingactivityheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.Manystudentsfromallgradesparticipatedinitactively.Theyhandedintheiressaysexpressingwhattheylikebest.Somelikemusic,somearefavouritefordrawing,andothersprefersports.Inordertodoittotheirbest,theykeptpracticingeverydayandhavewonmanyprizes,whichprovethattheirhardworkhaspaidoff.Allthejudgesandstudentsthoughthighlyoftheirabilitiesandskills.【導語】本文是開放性作文。要求考生對校最近舉辦的“Myfavourite…”征文活動寫一篇報道?！驹斀狻炕顒樱篴ctivity→game舉辦：hold→throw結束：etoanend→beover參加：participatein→takepartin簡單句變復合句原句：Recently,theEssayWritingactivityheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.拓展句：Recently,theEssayWritingactivitywhichwasheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.【點睛】[高分句型1]Theyhandedintheiressaysexpressingwhattheylikebest.（由what引導的賓語從句）[高分句型2]Inordertodoittotheirbest,theykeptpracticingeverydayandhavewonmanyprizes,whichprovethattheirhardworkhaspaidoff.（由which引導的非限制性定語從句）9.你擅長中國書法，最近創(chuàng)作了一幅作品，準備參加新西蘭朋友Jason下個月在他當?shù)嘏e辦的青少年書法展。應參賽方要求，你需要為作品寫一份英文介紹，內(nèi)容包括:1.創(chuàng)作目的;2.作品簡介;3.觀展要求。注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。AnIntroductiontoMyWorkIloveChinesecalligraphyandI’mgoodatit.TheChinesechar