2024屆高三英語一輪復習：讀后續(xù)寫遇險類 雪地遇險 講義素材

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Whenhe

wasachild,Mikeoftengotsickandhadfewfriends.Hisparentsoftenencouragedhimtodomoresports.Ashegrewup,hebecameinterestedinmountain

climbing.Whenhewas14,heclimbedhisfirstmountain—a3,600-footpeak.Andatthattime,hewasabitoverweightandbreathlesswhenhereachedthesummit.Buthewashookedbythechallengeofconqueringbiggermountains.Sincethen,he’dclimbednearly50peaksandmetmanyfriends.HeusuallywentclimbingwithhisfriendDavid,whomhemetwhile

climbingamountain.Twoyearsago,onNovember28,whenhewas16,MikeandDaviddrovetoOregontochallengeMountHood—11,130

feet.Bothofthemwereprepared.Startingwinterclimbing

atnightissaferbecausethere’slessriskofthesunmeltingthesnow.Thatday,theystartedat2a.m.,followingtrailsalongtheskiruns.Thetemperaturewasabout8degrees,andtheyworeeasylayersthattheycouldeasilytakeoff,knowinghikinginthesnowwouldkeep

themwarm.Afterabout

4hours,theyreachedDevil’sKitchen,aplainatabout10,000feet,justbeforethefinalpushtothepeak.

However,thewindconditionsherewerepoor.Mike’sexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning,butDavidandMikewerenotdiscouragedandkeptahead.Theywerepreparedandlongingfortheclimb.Thetrailtheyfollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper.Ataround8a.m.,theyreachedapatch(小塊)oficecalledanicestep.Itwasaboutthreeorfourfeettallandsloped(傾斜)ata70-degreeangle.Mikevolunteeredtogofirst.Heplacedhisrightfootontheicestep.Whenhesethisfootonit,itremainedgood.Confidenthewassafe,heputallhisweightonit.Suddenly,heheardacrack,andawholeslab(片)oficebrokeoffthestep,rightunderhisfoot.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答。文本解讀小時候的Mike有點胖，父母鼓勵他多運動，后來他喜歡上了爬山。16歲的時候，他和朋友David一起去爬雪山。他們在夜里出發(fā)，快到山頂時，天氣狀況變差，但他們沒有放棄。到達一處有70°傾斜角的冰塊時，Mike自告奮勇先往上爬，在他自認為安全的時候，腳下的冰塊卻坍塌了。思路點撥①由續(xù)文第一段首句“瞬間，Mike向后倒了下去?！笨芍酉聛砜梢悦鑼慚ike摔倒后的身體狀況，以及David做出的反應。根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容可知，David應該是到了Mike的身邊，看到了Mike的傷勢，以此與第二段銜接。②由續(xù)文第二段首句“看到Mike左腿上的血，David意識到他們需要幫助?！笨芍?，本段可以描寫David呼叫救援的情景，在等待過程中會采取哪些方式對Mike進行幫助，最后結(jié)果如何呢？結(jié)尾還可以描寫二人的心理活動，比如Mike感謝David，二人的友誼更加堅固等，來傳遞正確的價值觀。參考范文Inaninstant,Mikefellbackward.

MikecouldhearDavidcallinghisnameashefell.Hestuckouthisarmsandlegs,grabbingatanything.In

afewseconds,hecametoastoponashallowslope.Hetookasurveyofhisbodytoseewherehewashurt,startingwithhishead,thenhisneckandarms.Hewasfine,exceptthathewassufferingfromasharp,unbearablepaininhisleftleg.

Atthistime,DavidrantoMike.SeeingbloodfromMike’sleftleg,Davidrealizedtheyneededhelp.

AfterfixingMike’slegwithastick,DavidcalledtheMountainRescue.ThenhestayedbyMike’ssidewhileMiketriednottocryfromthepain.Bythetimetherescuersarrived,Mikehadbeenlyingontheiceshakingandinpainforfourhours.TheyfastenedMiketoasledandpulledhimdownthemountain.LyinginthesledandstaringatDavid,Mikesmiledfromthebottomofhisheart,notonlyforthetimelyrescue,butforthetruefriend.亮點詞匯1.stickout

伸出；突出2.takeasurvey

進行檢查3.sufferfrom

感到疼痛；遭受（痛苦）4.fix

vt.

使固定；安裝5.fasten

vt.

&

vi.

扣緊；系牢高級句型1.Hewasfine,except

thathewassufferingfromasharp,unbearablepaininhisleftleg.

(that引導賓語從句)他很好，只是左腿感到一陣難以忍受的劇痛。2.

Lyinginthesledan