作文公開課終

Haveyoueverhadtroublewithyourstudy?Haveyoueverhadtroubleingettingonwithyourclassmates?

WatchavideoIfeellonely.I’m______________________

withothersandIhavetroblein_______________notgoodatcommunicatingmakingfriends.Howcanwehelphim?Persuasivewriting:

letterofadvicewaystomakefriendsBehonest...BrainstormBefriendlytootherslistentootherspatientlyTakepartinmoreactivitiesLearntosharesuggestionsreasons2.2.3.3.4.4.5.5.1.toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikestojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinotherpeople’sideastolearntosmileatpeopletosaysomethingniceaboutyourclassmates

tosharethingsyouenjoywithyourclassmates1.tofindclassmateswiththesame

interests

togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly

toletpeopleknowyouarenice

andeasytotalk

Peopleliketomakefriendswiththeonewhoiskindtothemtohelpyourfriendknowyou

betterMakealistofsuggestionsandgiveyourreasons.Workingroup

1.Iadviseyouto…

2.You’dbetter…

3.Itwouldbeagoodideaif…

4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…

5.Youaresupposedto…

6.Whynot…7.Inmyopinion,themostsuitable

wayforyouisto….8.Itisveryimportantforyouto….Usefulsentencepatterns

Iadviseyoutoaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes.Bydoingthisyoucanfindclassmateswiththesameinterests.Howtogiveadvice

1.Iadviseyouto…

2.You’dbetter…

3.Itwouldbeagoodideaif…

4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…

5.Youaresupposedto…

6.Whynot…7.Inmyopinion,themostsuitable

wayforyouisto….8.Itisveryimportantforyouto….Iadviseyoutoaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes.Bydoingthisyoucanfindclassmateswiththesameinterests.

suggestions1.tolearntosmileatpeople.2.

tosharethingsyouenjoywithyourclassmates.3.tojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinothers’ideas1.toletpeopleknowyouarenice

andeasytotalk.2.tohelpyourfriendknowyou

better

3.togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly.

reasonsYou’dbetterlearntosmileatpeople.Thenyou’llletpeopleknowyouarenice.2.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyousharethingsyouenjoywithyourclassmates.Thatwayyou’llletthemknowyoubetter.重慶市綦江中學(xué)高一年級13班學(xué)生因不適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活最近感覺非常孤獨，他不擅長與同學(xué)交流，而且在交朋友方面遇到了困難特向你求助。請你用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。首尾段已給出。內(nèi)容要點：1、對該同學(xué)存在的問題提出建議并給出理由注意：1.詞數(shù)70左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

writingwriting

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Herearesometips.

First,whynot…?Ifyoudothis,…Secondly,youshould/can…Then/Thatway,youwill....Finally,itwouldbeagoodideaif...Bydoingthis,youwill…

Ihopeyoufindtheseideaspractical.

items

Structure(結(jié)構(gòu))

Language

body(正文)

(suggestions&reasons)goodwords&expressionssentence(祈使句,條件句,倒裝句...)

transitions

(連接詞)neat,beautiful…(整潔美觀…..)

Hand-Writing

Verygood

Good

Ok

Assessments

（評價）1.swapyourcompositionwithyourpartner.

2.

Makeanassessment.（進(jìn)行評價）

Shiningplaces(出彩處):“____________”

Imperfectplaces(不足之處):“~~~~~~~~~”Missingplaces(所缺之處):“∧”

Assessment

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Herearesometips.

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.IfyoudothisI’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyouwillsoonfindpeoplewhomyouhavesomethingincommonwith.Finally,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.

Ihopeyoufindtheseideaspractical.SamplewritingSamplewriting

Structure

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Herearesometips.

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,I’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,you’dbetterbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyou’llfindpeoplewhomyouhavesth.incommonwith.Finally,it’sagoodideatotrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.

Beginning:EndingBodySuggestions&Reasons(建議&理由)Wishes(祝愿)Writingpurpose(寫作目的)

Knowingthatyouhavetroublein…,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadvice.Herearemysuggestions.whynot+V(原)…?(建議1).Ifyoudothis,…原因1.You’dbetter+V(原)…?(建議2).Thatwayyouwill,…原因2.It’sagoodideato+V(原)…?(建議3).Onlybydoingthis,…原因3

.

Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.IfyoudothisI’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyouwillsoonfindpeoplewhomyouhavesomethingincommonwith.Finally,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.

Samplewriting

LanguageA.v-ingB.transitions

連接詞C.advanced

expressions

高級詞匯D.attributiveclause定語從句E.conditionalsentence條件句F.invertedsentence倒裝句

Samplewriting

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestanding

ontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.IfyoudothisI’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyouwillsoonfindpeoplewhomyouhavesomethingincommonwith.Finally

,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.

Samplewriting

LanguageA.v-ingB.transitions

連接詞C.advanced

expressions

高級詞匯D.attributiveclause定語從句E.conditionalsentence條件句F.invertedsentence倒裝句

SamplewritingB

C

A

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestanding

ontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.IfyoudothisI’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyouwillsoonfindpeoplewhomyouhavesomethingincommonwith.Finally

,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.

Samplewriting

LanguageA.v-ingB.transitions

連接詞C.advanced

expressions

高級詞匯D.attributiveclause定語從句E.conditionalsentence條件句F.invertedsentence倒裝句

SamplewritingB

C

A

D

E

F

Polishyourcomposition.

Self-improvementAppreciationingroup

Share

yourcompositionsingroupsandchoosethebestoneinyourgroupforustoappreciatetogether.

Furtherpolishyourcompositionafterclass.2.Trytowritealetterofadvicetoyourfriendintrouble.HomeworkSometimeslifemaygiveustrouble,butwecanjusttakethemasafriendwhohelps

usbecomestrongerandbetter.Thankyou!Thankyou!

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Herearesometips.

First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,I’msureyou’llsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,you’dbetterbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyou’llfindpeoplewhomyouhavesth.incommonwith.Finally,it’sagoodideatotrytojoininadiscussion.Onlybydoingthiswillyouletpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.Samplewriting

Structure

A.body(主體)B.beginning(開頭)C.suggestions(建議)D.ending(結(jié)尾)E.reasons(理由)

F.Writingpurpose

(寫作目的)G.

wishes(祝愿)CABDEFG

Knowingthatyouhavetroublein…,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadvice.Herearemysuggestions.whynot+V(原)…?(建議1).Ifyoudothis,…原因1.you’dbetter+V(原)…?(建議2).Thatwayyouwill,…原因2.it’sagoodideato+V(原)…?(建議3).Onlybydoingthis,…原因3.

Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.

1.Iadviseyouto…

2.You’dbetter…

3.Itwouldbeagoodideaif…

4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…

5.Youaresupposedto…

6.Whynot…7.Inmyopinion,themostsuitable

wayforyouisto….8.Itisveryimportantforyouto….

suggestions1.tolearntosmileatpeople.2.

tosharethingsyouenjoywithyourclassmates.3.tojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinothers’ideas1.toletpeopleknowyouarenice

andeasytotalk.2.tohelpyourfriendknowyou

better3.togettoknowdifferentpeople

andletthemseeyouarefriendly.

reasonsIadviceyoutolistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclass.

Ifyoudothis,youcanmasteryourlessonsassoonaspossible.

Itisagoodideatodevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary.

It

helpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandreviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.

WhynottrytospeakwithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.Inthiswayyou’llimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.

___anoldsayinggoeswherethereisawill,thereisaway._____yousticktothegoodlearninghabits_____yougreatlyimproveyourEnglishlearning.AsOnlyifwillListening

to

theteachercarefullyand______notesinclassis____

important

that

youcan….takingsoItisagoodideatodevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,_____

helpsimprove...whichTrytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass._____inthisway______

youimprove

….Onlywill

Tobeginwith,listening

to

theteachercarefullyandtaking

notesinclassissoimportant

that

youcanmasteryourlessonsassoonasyoucan.Secondly,asisknowntoall,vocabularyisofgreatimportance.Youshouldspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.What’smore,trytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.OnlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Lastbutnotleast,itisagoodideatodevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,

whichhelpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandhelpsyoureviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.

Inaddition,asanoldsayinggoeswherethereisawill,thereisaway.OnlyifyousticktothegoodlearninghabitswillyougreatlyimproveyourEnglishlearning.

Firstly,Iadviceyoutolistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclass.

Ifyoudothis,youcanmasteryourlessonsassoonaspossible.Secondly,Itwouldbeagoodideaifyouspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.That’sbecausevocabularyisimportant.Thirdly,whynottrytospeakwithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.Inthiswayyou’llimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.

Polish

Imitate

excellentwordsandphrases(詞匯短語的選擇靈活新穎)avarietyofsentencepatterns(句型結(jié)構(gòu)運用高級多變）

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COMPARISONWriteashortpassageabout60words.Thebeginningisgiven;trytousethefollowingwords:Task

WritingAfterIhelpedMandelablowupsomebuildings,...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________difficult;guidance;help;gratefulContentStandardEvaluation(

)structureIstheletterdividedintoparts?(

)Doseeachparagraphhaveatopic?(

)contentAreallthedetailsstated?(

)Iseverythingtothepoint(切題)?(

)languageDosethewriteruseanylinkingwords?(

)Aretherefewspellingmistakes?(

)Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary(高級詞匯)？(

)Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns(句式)？(

)EvaluationFormPleasegiveastartoeachitemifyoumeettherequirementintheform(8starsintotal).DearWangMei,KnowingthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.

Herearemysuggestions.

Firstly,Iadviseyouto

listentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclass.

Ifyoudothis,youcanmasteryourlessonsassoonaspossible.Secondly,Itwouldbeagoodideaifyouspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.That’sbecausevocabularyisimportant.Thirdly,whynottrytospeak

withyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.Inthiswayyou’ll

improveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Idohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Theme:AletterofadviceonhowtolearnEnglishstructure:Ending:wishesBody:advice＆reasonsBeginning:purpose

Firstly,Iadviseyouto+V(原形)…?(建議1).Ifyoudothis,youcan….(原因1).Secondly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyou+V(原形)…(建議2).That’sbecause…(原因2).Thirdly,whynot+V(原形)…(建議3).Inthisway,…(原因3).

Knowingthatyouhavetroublein___________,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadviceon_____________.Herearemysuggestions.

Idohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.

DearWangMei,

Yours,DearWangMei,KnowingthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.

Herearemysuggestions.Firstly,Iadviseyouto

listentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclass.

Ifyoudothis,youcanmasteryourlessonsassoonaspossible.Secondly,Itwouldbeagoodideaifyouspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.That’sbecausevocabularyisimportant.Thirdly,whynottrytospeak

withyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.Inthiswayyou’ll

improveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Idohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Theme:AletterofadviceonhowtolearnEnglishstructure:Ending:wishesBody:advice＆reasonsBeginning:purposeDearXXX----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Ihopethatmysuggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformorequestions.

Yours,

XXX

YouhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtomakefriendswiththenewclassmatesandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.

youradvice

Writeadraft(草稿)

1.Knowingthatyouhavetroublein…,I’mwritingtosharewithyou

someadviceon…

2.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein…..Herearesometipsto

helpyou.

3.Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout…andI’lltrytogiveyousome

suggestions.

4.Regardingthatyouhavetroublein….,I’mwritingtogiveyousome

adviceon…

KnowingthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.Herearemysuggestions.

Usefulsentencepatterns

Knowingthatyouhavetroublein____________,I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeadviceon_____________.Herearemysuggestions.

Beginning:purpose

Idohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.

Usefulsentencepatterns

1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.

2.Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.3.Ihopethatmysuggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontact

meformorequestions.