高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)女兒和爸爸一起努力實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想講義

杭州一模讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文及翻譯

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文

中文翻譯MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecrosscountryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimaxofmyexistence.我和我爸爸一直期待著我高中最后一年的州際越野賽，這將是我生活的高光時(shí)刻。Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andI

wassupposedto

makeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.我在隊(duì)里是跑得最快的，應(yīng)該能進(jìn)入前十五名。我們已經(jīng)為這場(chǎng)比賽準(zhǔn)備了三年。Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，對(duì)我爸爸來(lái)說(shuō)都是一切。他曾是一名賽跑運(yùn)動(dòng)員，他對(duì)我在跑步上取得的成功感到無(wú)比欣喜。Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.他參加了每一場(chǎng)比賽，甚至?xí)崆敖Y(jié)束差旅回家來(lái)看我比賽。Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowdtellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.

Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.我總是聽(tīng)著他的聲音，那聲音響亮地穿透了人群，他告訴我要放松雙臂，他會(huì)喊出我的成績(jī)。他鞭策我，鼓舞我，相信我。WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.我們?cè)趤喞Ｄ浅錆M沙子運(yùn)河旁花費(fèi)了無(wú)數(shù)個(gè)小時(shí)訓(xùn)練。吸過(guò)沙漠的塵土，聞過(guò)橘樹(shù)的芳香，品過(guò)牛奶場(chǎng)的臭氣，穿越了整個(gè)城市。Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.

Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.我們用腳步丈量著土地，朝著最后的目標(biāo)堅(jiān)定地前行著。這是只屬于我和父親的旅程。這是上一代傳下來(lái)的夢(mèng)想。Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.終于，比賽的日子到了。天氣比平時(shí)熱多了太熱了。我感覺(jué)我的喉嚨像一塊因夏日高溫而裂開(kāi)的棉花田，我等著發(fā)令槍的聲音。Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadeforme.Theywerecountingonme.我注視著人群；熟悉面孔閃過(guò)我的視線，他們有的是我的同學(xué)，有的是在教堂做禮拜認(rèn)識(shí)的朋友。他們是為了我來(lái)的。他們都對(duì)我抱以厚望。Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.我看到我的爸爸按下了手表，他的臉上既有擔(dān)憂也有隱隱的興奮。發(fā)令槍聲響起，比賽開(kāi)始了。Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.在前兩英里半的距離里，我感覺(jué)狀態(tài)很好。我從未為任何事情做過(guò)這么充分的準(zhǔn)備。在比賽前的幾個(gè)星期，我進(jìn)行了艱苦的訓(xùn)練和嚴(yán)格的飲食規(guī)劃。Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.灼熱的太陽(yáng)曬打著我的后背，刺眼的光芒讓我看不清前方的路。但是，沒(méi)有什么能阻止我。續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.然而，不知何時(shí)，我的力量開(kāi)始耗盡。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."我小聲說(shuō)道，“我很抱歉，爸爸，我讓你失望了。”文本分析：故事大意我和我爸爸一直期待著我高中最后一年的州際越野賽。我在隊(duì)里是跑得最快的，也為此準(zhǔn)備了三年。爸爸一直非常支持我，陪我訓(xùn)練，觀看我的比賽，為我加油。終于，比賽的日子到了。比賽那天，太陽(yáng)無(wú)情地炙烤著大地，不知何時(shí)，我的力量開(kāi)始耗盡。續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)：第一段：然而我的力量正在耗盡。盡管我知道我的勝利夢(mèng)想破滅了，但我必須完成比賽。我用盡全身力氣，手腳并用，一寸一寸地爬過(guò)終點(diǎn)線。第二段：我輕聲說(shuō)：“爸爸，我很抱歉讓你失望了。”他溫柔地笑了笑說(shuō)，你永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)讓我失望。有時(shí)這些事情就會(huì)發(fā)生。重要的是你盡了最大的努力。附：官方參考答案范文Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinch,acrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarms.Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid."Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest."Liftingmyface,Isawmydad'seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime.andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.Themileswehadruntogether,allforthisrace.flashedacrossmymind."Butweworkedsohard.Whataboutourdream?"Iasked.Inthatsecond,theworldstoodstill.Hereachedoverformyhand,holdingbackhisowntears,andsaid."Don'tyouknowthatyouaremydreametrue?"下水文：Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Theairinmylungsseemedtobeevacuated,andmyfeetturnedintolargestones,asifweighingathousandpounds.Oneofmybiggestopponentshasalreadyrunaheadofme.Icanseethefinishline,butitlooksveryfaraway.Whenmykneesbentandmylegsbent,Ihadalreadystartedthefinalsprint.Mylegsareasweakasjelly.AlthoughIknowmydreamofvictoryhasbeens