英語選修8教師用書Module6SectionⅤGuidedWriting

SectionⅤGuidedWriting——如何寫詩評eq\a\vs4\al([文體指導(dǎo)])本模塊的寫作項目為如何寫詩評，這種題目要求我們就有關(guān)詩歌進(jìn)行分析和評論。一、基本框架詩評的寫作大致可分為以下幾個步驟：1．簡述詩歌內(nèi)容。當(dāng)然這必須建立在很好地把握原詩主旨的基礎(chǔ)之上，而非羅列原詩的詩句。2．談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。一首好的詩歌，自然有動人之處?？蓚?cè)重詩中最打動你的某一方面抒發(fā)自己的感想。二、注意事項1．欣賞詩歌。好的詩歌應(yīng)該能做到形式和內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一，所以我們欣賞詩歌的著眼點(diǎn)也不能離開這兩個方面。2．根據(jù)高考的要求，中學(xué)階段的詩評不可能做過多的發(fā)揮，評價詩歌要言簡意賅，寫出精彩，不要拖沓冗長，重復(fù)表述。eq\a\vs4\al([亮點(diǎn)句式])1．Thisisapoemwrittenby...這是一首由……創(chuàng)作的詩歌。2．Thepoem，whoseauthoris...，showthedeepestfeelingson...……寫的這首詩表達(dá)了對……的深深的情意。3．Writtenby...，thepoemgivesusavividpictureof...由……創(chuàng)作，這首詩向我們展示了一幅……的生動畫面。4．Weareshownthat...我們從詩中可以看到……5．Thepoemtouchesmedeeply.這首詩深深地打動了我。6．Obviously，thepoemaimstoshow...顯然，這首詩想展示……7．Criticssinghighpraiseforthepoem.評論家們對這首詩評價很高。8．Itisthoughthighlyofbymanypeople.很多人對此高度贊揚(yáng)。eq\a\vs4\al([寫作任務(wù)])請閱讀下面這首小詩，然后按要求與提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。APoemofanIraqiChildMumistearing.Dad，wheredidyougo?Iamscaredfromhearttosoul.MumandIneededyousomuch.Butwhathappened？PeoplesaythatIamtooyoungtoknow.Iheardtheterriblesoundandsmelledthesmoke.Dad，eback.Butwhathappened？Idon'tknow.MumandIloveyousomuch.Dad，wheredidyougo?Shesaysyouwillbeback.MumandImissedyousomuch.Withgoodnewsandhope.eq\a\vs4\al([審題謀篇])體裁詩評時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時為主主題渴望和平的詩歌人稱第三人稱結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：簡述詩歌內(nèi)容第二段：談?wù)搶@首詩歌的感受eq\a\vs4\al([遣詞造句])Ⅰ.對接模塊詞匯1．a(chǎn)twar 處于交戰(zhàn)狀態(tài)2．suffer 遭受3．meaningless 毫無意義4．longforpeace 渴望和平5．touchmyheart 打動我的心Ⅱ.巧用模塊語法和句型1．這是一首伊拉克兒童寫的一首詩。Thisisapoem.ItwaswrittenbyanIraqichild.(用分詞作定語合并句子)ThisisapoemwrittenbyanIraqichild.2．雖然描寫簡明扼要，但是這首詩的意義卻很豐富。Thedescriptionissimpleandtothepoint.Themeaningofthepoemisrich.(用狀語從句合并句子)Thoughthedescriptionissimpleandtothepoint，themeaningofthepoemisrich.eq\a\vs4\al([妙筆成篇])【參考范文】ThisisapoemwrittenbyanIraqichild.Weareshown，ratherthantoldthatIraqisatwar.Thechild'sfatherhasgonetothebattlefieldfortheirfreedom.Iraqipeoplearesufferingalotfromthewar.Toasmallchildwarseemsmeaningless，butfathermeansmuchtohimandthefamily.Theyarelongingforthepeace.Thepoemtouchesmyheart.Ittrulybringstearstomyeyes.Oneobviousmeaningofthedescriptionisthathowmuchpeacemeanstoacountryanditspeople.Thoughthedescriptionissimpleandtothepoint，themeaningofthepoemisrich.Theyhavetobeseparatedatthemoment，however，t