專題23 讀后續(xù)寫（新高考）-（2019年-2023年）高考英語真題匯編（全解全析）

資料收集整理【淘寶店鋪：向陽百分百】資料收集整理【淘寶店鋪：向陽百分百】五年（2019-2023）年高考英語真題分項(xiàng)匯編專題23讀后續(xù)寫（新高考）（解析版）〖2023年高考真題題組〗【2023?新高考I&II卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者上中學(xué)的時(shí)候，社會學(xué)老師邀請作者參加一個(gè)寫作比賽。作者不喜歡寫作，于是想都沒想就拒絕了。但是在老師的鼓勵下，作者同意試一試。作者在寫作過程中雖然很累，但是沒有放棄，堅(jiān)持下來了。在作者最終完成寫作時(shí)，作者感到寫作讓他很快樂，他已經(jīng)不在乎輸贏了?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個(gè)星期后，當(dāng)我?guī)缀跬洷荣惖臅r(shí)候，傳來了消息?！焙偷诙问拙洹邦C獎后我去了老師的辦公室?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者獲得比賽一等獎，在頒獎典禮上作者表達(dá)了對社會老師的感激。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“頒獎后我去了老師的辦公室?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫老師鼓勵作者繼續(xù)寫作，自此作者堅(jiān)持寫作取得了成功，作者將這一切歸功于自己的老師。2.續(xù)寫線索：比賽消息傳來——作者獲獎——高興——頒獎典禮感謝老師——頒獎后來到老師辦公室——老師告訴作者堅(jiān)持寫作——作者表達(dá)了對寫作的喜愛——作者寫作取得了成功——感激老師3.詞匯激活行為類①告知：inform/tell②成功做到：makeit/succeed③表達(dá)：express/convey情緒類①高興的：happy/glad②激動地：excitedly/withexcitement【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.（運(yùn)用了由連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）[高分句型2]It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句）[高分句型3]Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）【2023?浙江1月卷】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.DuringthecookoutItoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者被邀請去一個(gè)農(nóng)場野餐，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)房子里有只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網(wǎng)困住了，作者把蜂鳥救了，把蜂鳥帶出去的時(shí)候它遲遲不肯走，當(dāng)作者走到一條布滿黑莓的小路時(shí)，它開始動了，但是卻不肯飛走，徘徊著，后來終于飛走了，當(dāng)作者準(zhǔn)備離開時(shí)，蜂鳥又飛到作者面前，好像是在和作者告別?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個(gè)星期后，我又去了農(nóng)場?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者回到農(nóng)場時(shí)所看到的和所想到的。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我正要離開，這時(shí)蜂鳥出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫蜂鳥是如何對作者的以及作者的感想。2.續(xù)寫線索：想起救蜂鳥的時(shí)候——回到那個(gè)房子——想到那只蜂鳥——看見蜂鳥——蜂鳥的表現(xiàn)——作者的感想3.詞匯激活行為類①思緒回到……：thoughtsdriftbackto/thoughtsreturnto②匆匆回到：rushbackto/hurrybackto③盯著：eyeslockedon/eyesstaringat情緒類①寬慰：feelasurgeofrelief/feelrelieved②感激：grateful/thankful【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.(由as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和when引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.(由that引導(dǎo)的主語從句)【2023?安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龍江省四省聯(lián)考卷】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It’samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(斷奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.”Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn’tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Butthefamilywasnonetoohappyabouthisvisit.Theyscoldedandswattedathim.AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.Andthenhequicklylearnedsomesocialskills.Hewouldtakesomesnackstomeetthem.Forseveraldaysheplayedalldayinthetreessurroundingourhousebutcamedownatbedtime.

Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgirlsfretted.TheywantedtoseekSquirt.Wepreventedthembecauseitwastoodangerous.Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.Andthatremainedthepatternforweeks.Theexperiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfamily.Inthewildandsomewhatsillymomentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirrel,ourchildrenlearnedtovalueandappreciatelife.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他們決定收養(yǎng)它，看著這只小松鼠從瘦弱幼小，慢慢變的健康活潑，讓作者一家感覺既有趣又溫暖?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天，在樹林里，Squirt遇到了一個(gè)灰色松鼠家庭?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Squirt遇到這一家灰松鼠的情況，Squirt如何與灰松鼠一家交往。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，Squirt沒有回到我們家，下起了大雨?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者一家的擔(dān)心，和最后的結(jié)果，以及作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：遇到灰松鼠——與灰松鼠一家交往——沒有回家，擔(dān)心它——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①責(zé)罵：scold/blame/rebuke②拍打：swat/slap/hit③尋找：seek/find/lookfor/searchfor④阻止：prevent/putastopto/headoff情緒類①高興的：happy/delighted②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.(so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)[高分句型2]Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【2023?浙江1月卷】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.DuringthecookoutItoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者被邀請去一個(gè)農(nóng)場野餐，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)房子里有只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網(wǎng)困住了，作者把蜂鳥救了，把蜂鳥帶出去的時(shí)候它遲遲不肯走，當(dāng)作者走到一條布滿黑莓的小路時(shí)，它開始動了，但是卻不肯飛走，徘徊著，后來終于飛走了，當(dāng)作者準(zhǔn)備離開時(shí)，蜂鳥又飛到作者面前，好像是在和作者告別。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個(gè)星期后，我又去了農(nóng)場?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡呋氐睫r(nóng)場時(shí)所看到的和所想到的。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我正要離開，這時(shí)蜂鳥出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫蜂鳥是如何對作者的以及作者的感想。2.續(xù)寫線索：想起救蜂鳥的時(shí)候——回到那個(gè)房子——想到那只蜂鳥——看見蜂鳥——蜂鳥的表現(xiàn)——作者的感想3.詞匯激活行為類①思緒回到……：thoughtsdriftbackto/thoughtsreturnto②匆匆回到：rushbackto/hurrybackto③盯著：eyeslockedon/eyesstaringat情緒類①寬慰：feelasurgeofrelief/feelrelieved②感激：grateful/thankful【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.(由as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和when引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.(由that引導(dǎo)的主語從句)〖2022年高考真題題組〗【2022新高考I&II卷】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone’sjoy,hereachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.【導(dǎo)語】本文以賽跑為線索展開。作者是一名特殊教育教師，在大型越野賽跑那天，發(fā)現(xiàn)患有大腦疾病的大衛(wèi)獨(dú)自站在一旁。作者問其原因，他說準(zhǔn)備放棄比賽。從教練口中得知，因?yàn)閾?dān)心同學(xué)們會嘲笑大衛(wèi)，所以教練想讓大衛(wèi)自己去決定是否參加賽跑。作者讓大衛(wèi)追尋自己的內(nèi)心，不理會別人的看法，大衛(wèi)最終參賽，盡管遇到困難，他戰(zhàn)勝了自己，這已經(jīng)無關(guān)名次，而是他的勇敢和堅(jiān)定讓這一切成為可能?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們挨著坐著，但大衛(wèi)不愿看我一眼?！焙偷诙问拙鋬?nèi)容”我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上。”可知，第一段可描寫作者鼓勵大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)完成比賽，大衛(wèi)經(jīng)過強(qiáng)烈的心理斗爭，最終決定參加比賽。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懘笮l(wèi)開始參賽，雖然中途遇到困難，仍然堅(jiān)持到最后，完成比賽。2.續(xù)寫線索：鼓勵大衛(wèi)——心理變化——決定參賽——克服困難——加油助威——完成比賽3.詞匯激活：行動類：①深呼吸：withadeepbreath/breathedeeply②堅(jiān)持做：insistedondoing/besticktodoing情緒類：①熱情：enthusiastically/withgreatpassion②驕傲：beproudof/takepridein【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere.(由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和why引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2].Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和省略that的賓語從句)[高分句型3].Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.(含有Itwas…that結(jié)構(gòu)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)〖2021年高考真題題組〗【2022新高考I&II卷】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.第二節(jié)本文是一篇記敘文。講述的是Jenna和Jeff這對雙胞胎兄妹為了在母親節(jié)早上給母親驚喜而精心策劃并制作早餐的故事；他們克服困難，永不放棄，折射的是他們對母親的拳拳之愛。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.Firstly,heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,askingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.Withallpreparationsdone,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.Paragraph1:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Eyesopened,thewomanheardaharmonious“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkidswithhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeher.Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.【導(dǎo)語】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懩赣H收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動。

2.續(xù)寫線索：指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①幫助：help/assist②完成：finish/complete

③擁抱：hug/embrace

情緒類

①高興：happy/delighted

②感動：moved/touched

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)

[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短語notonly…but(also)和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)〖2020年高考真題題組〗【2020新高考卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheMer