Unit3單元寫作指導(dǎo)典題例析跟蹤訓(xùn)練(譯林版2020)

Unit3Theworldonline(譯林版2020必修第三冊(cè))單元寫作指導(dǎo)&典題例析&跟蹤訓(xùn)練(網(wǎng)絡(luò)的用途和利弊的文章)I.單元寫作指導(dǎo)話題分析本單元的主題語(yǔ)境是“人與社會(huì)”，話題是“網(wǎng)絡(luò)”。單元寫作的話題關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)用途和利弊的文章屬于說明文，議論文。寫此類文章時(shí)首先要認(rèn)真通過相關(guān)的數(shù)據(jù)對(duì)某一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行客觀描述。寫作時(shí)要以事實(shí)為根據(jù),避免加入個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。2.話題詞匯(1)目的①send/receiveemails 發(fā)送/接收郵件②playonlinegames 玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲③doonlineshopping 網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物④lookupinformation 查找資料⑤chatonline 網(wǎng)上聊天⑥mobilepayment 移動(dòng)支付⑦travelbooking 旅游預(yù)訂(2)好處①benefitfrom 受益于②keepintouch/contactwith 與……保持聯(lián)系③relaxone’smood 放松心情④broadenone’shorizons 開闊某人的視野⑤improvesocialskills 增強(qiáng)社交能力3.句式整理(1)開頭①TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在我們的日常生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色。②RecentlyasurveywasconductedabouthowstudentsmakeuseoftheInternet.最近進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于學(xué)生如何使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的調(diào)查。(2)主體①ItgoeswithoutsayingthattheInternetdoesbringaboutalotofbenefitstous.毋庸置疑,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)確實(shí)給我們帶來了很多好處。②ThereisnodoubtthatwebenefitalotfromtheInternetinmanydifferentways.毫無(wú)疑問,我們以許多不同的方式從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)中受益良多。③BeinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork.迷失在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)可能會(huì)影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作。④Doingonlineshoppinghasbeepartoftheirlife.網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已經(jīng)成為他們生活的一部分。(3)結(jié)尾①Allinall,theInternethasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.總之,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)既有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)。②OnlyifstudentsaregivenproperguidancecantheymakethebestoftheInternet.只有給予學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)闹笇?dǎo),他們才能充分利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。II.典題例析假定你是李華，最近你就高中生網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查并寫了一篇報(bào)道。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示對(duì)你的調(diào)查作簡(jiǎn)要介紹,發(fā)給報(bào)社。要點(diǎn)提示:1.主要用途；2.出現(xiàn)的問題。注意:1.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.Recently,IdidasurveyabouthowthestudentsinmyschoolmakeuseoftheInternet.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________審核體裁/話題關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)用途的文章(調(diào)查報(bào)告)時(shí)態(tài)/人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)/第一，三人稱文章結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：引入話題：調(diào)查報(bào)告的目的第二段：上網(wǎng)的利弊第三段：調(diào)查報(bào)告的結(jié)果，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)核心要點(diǎn)1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)的主要用途，2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)出現(xiàn)的問題。二.造句1.學(xué)生們使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)主要有三個(gè)目的。Thereare____________________.2.尋找信息是最普遍的目的。____________________themostpopularpurpose.

3.此外,網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物正逐漸成為他們生活的一部分。Besides,____________________.4.我也注意到,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)同時(shí)給學(xué)生帶來了一些問題。Ihavealsonoticedthat____________________.5.(一句多譯)更糟的是,網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的不健康信息對(duì)學(xué)生造成了極大的危害。①____________________,unhealthyinformationontheInternet____________________harmtostudents.②____________________,unhealthyinformationontheInternet____________________harmfultostudents.6.這些學(xué)生是出于好奇才接觸到不健康的信息。Thesestudents____________________theunhealthyinformation____________________.【答案】1.threemajorpurposesforthestudentstousetheInternet2.Seekinginformationis3.doingonlineshoppingisgraduallybeingpartoftheirlife4.theInternetbringsaboutproblemstothestudentsatthesametime5.①Worsestill;doesgreat②What’sworse;isgreatly6.getaccessto;outofcuriosity三.句式升級(jí)1.用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句合并句1和句2。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用定語(yǔ)從句合并句5和句6。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.TherearethreemajorpurposesforthestudentstousetheInternet,amongwhichseekinginformationisthemostpopular.

2.Worsestill,unhealthyinformationontheInternetdoesgreatharmtostudentswhogetaccesstoitoutofcuriosity.

【參考范文】Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.Recently,IdidasurveyabouthowthestudentsinmyschoolmakeuseoftheInternet.TherearethreemajorpurposesforthestudentstousetheInternet,amongwhichseekinginformationisthemostpopular.TheyalsousetheInternetformunicationandentertainment,suchassendingandreceivingemails,enjoyingmusicandmoviesandplayingonlinegames.Besides,doingonlineshoppingisgraduallybeingpartoftheirlife.However,IhavealsonoticedthattheInternetbringsaboutproblemstothestudentsatthesametime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingonlinegames.Worsestill,unhealthyinformationontheInternetdoesgreatharmtostudentswhogetaccesstoitoutofcuriosity.Thus,onlyifstudentsaregivenproperguidancecantheymakegooduseoftheInternet.Ⅲ跟蹤訓(xùn)練應(yīng)用文寫作A(2024上·黑龍江·高一校聯(lián)考期末)假定你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友David正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，獲悉你英語(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀，因此他給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問你如何通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的，內(nèi)容包括：1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)觀看或者閱讀的工具和內(nèi)容；2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；3.你的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDavid,Howarethingsgoingwithyou?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid,Howarethingsgoingwithyou?Iamgladtohavereceivedyouremail,whichisabouthowtousetheInternettolearnEnglish.Tobeginwith,IoftenwatchEnglishmoviesandvideosonline,whoseplotsandimagesaresoappealingthatIamalmostaddictedtowatchingthem.SometimesIreadEnglishnewsandotherarticles,whichcanreallybroadenmyhorizon.Inaddition,ImakeuseofvariouslanguagelearningwebsitesandappstoimprovemyEnglishlevelquickly.Personally,IbelievethatusingtheInternettolearnEnglishprovidesuswithavastamountofresourcesandmaterialsthatcatertodifferentinterestsandlearningstyles,whichmakesthelearningprocessmoreenjoyableandeffective.IsuggestthatweshouldmakegooduseoftheInternet,butalsoweshouldlimittheonlinetime.HopethatmyexperienceandadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyourlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友David回復(fù)郵件，告訴他你如何通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累利用：takeadvantageof→makeuseof提高：improve→promote提供：provide→offer建議：suggest→advise2.句式拓展同義句原句：SometimesIreadEnglishnewsandotherarticles,whichcanreallybroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：SometimesIreadEnglishnewsandotherarticles,broadeningmyhorizon.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Personally,IbelievethatusingtheInternettolearnEnglishprovidesuswithavastamountofresourcesandmaterialsthatcatertodifferentinterestsandlearningstyles,whichmakesthelearningprocessmoreenjoyableandeffective.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,IoftenwatchEnglishmoviesandvideosonline,whoseplotsandimagesaresoappealingthatIamalmostaddictedtowatchingthem.(運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)B(2023上·福建南平·高一福建省浦城第一中學(xué)?？计谥?假定你是李華，你有一個(gè)好朋友Mike，你們?cè)?jīng)無(wú)話不談，有許多共同的愛好。可是他搬家后你倆的聯(lián)系變少了。最近他母親告訴你，他開始沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，不認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，從朋友的角度對(duì)他進(jìn)行勸告。內(nèi)容包括：1.充分利用時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)；2.養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但是不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,Wehaven’tseeneachotherforalongtime.Howisitgoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Wehaven’tseeneachotherforalongtime.Howisitgoing?I’veheardyouhaveaproblemnow.Itissaidthatyou’vebeenlostinnetworkgamesanddon’tstudyhardanylonger.Asyourbestfriend,I’dliketosaysomethinghere.Asastudent,themostimportantisourstudy.Weshouldspendourmosttimeonit.

putergamesareofcourseinteresting,buttheyareusedonlyforrelaxationafteralongtimeofstudy.Playinggamesshouldneverbewhatyourlifeisallabout.Besides,Youshouldformagoodlifehabitandbalanceyourtimebetweenstudyingandplayinggames.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生好朋友Mike寫一封電子郵件，針對(duì)他沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，不認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)的情況從朋友的角度對(duì)他進(jìn)行勸告。【詳解】1.詞匯積累沉迷于：belostin→beaddictedto有趣的：interesting→funny重要的：important→significant對(duì)……造成傷害：doharmto→beharmfulto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asastudent,themostimportantisourstudy.拓展句：Asastudent,what’sthemostimportantisourstudy.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itissaidthatyou’vebeenlostinnetworkgamesanddon’tstudyhardanylonger.(使用了that引導(dǎo)的真正主語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Playinggamesshouldneverbewhatyourlifeisallabout.(使用了動(dòng)名詞充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)以及what引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句)C(2023上·內(nèi)蒙古赤峰·高一赤峰二中?？茧A段練習(xí))假定你是某校學(xué)生李華，將參加主題為“BetterLifestyle,BetterOurselves”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.曾經(jīng)沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，身心受挫；2.改變生活方式(2項(xiàng)措施)，受益良多；3.發(fā)出倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Goodmorning,everyone!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodmorning,everyone!

MynameisLiHua.It’smygreathonortodeliveraspeechwhosethemeis“BetterLifestyle,BetterOurselves”.IusedtobeabsorbedinsurfingontheinternetandthereforeIwaswornoutallday.SoImadeupmymindtochangeit.Ihavereplacedtheinternetwithregularexercise,fromwhichIgetrefreshedbothphysicallyandmentally.Ialsospendmoretimemunicatingwithfriendsfacetoface,increasingmysocialabilityandhappiness.Thus,allthechangeshaveenhancedthequalityofmylife.Let’schangeourbadlifestyleandbetterourselves.Thankyouforlistening!【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“BetterLifestyle,BetterOurselves”為主題，寫一篇演講稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累發(fā)表演講：deliveraspeech→makeaspeech主題：theme→subject替代：replace→substitute因此：thus→asaresult2.句式拓展并列句變復(fù)合句原句：IusedtobeabsorbedinsurfingontheinternetandthereforeIwaswornoutallday.拓展句：IusedtobesoabsorbedinsurfingontheinternetthatIwaswornoutallday.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】It’smygreathonortodeliveraspeechwhosethemeis“BetterLifestyle,BetterOurselves”.(運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Ihavereplacedtheinternetwithregularexercise,fromwhichIgetrefreshedbothphysicallyandmentally.(運(yùn)用了“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)D(2023上·浙江寧波·高一浙江省寧波市鄞州中學(xué)校考期中)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)筆友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他最近沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，日常生活受到影響，他為此感到苦惱。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解；2.你的建議及理由。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtovideogames.Icanunderstandhowupsetandstressedyoumustbe.Hereareafewthingsyoucando.First,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthetimespentonvideogameseachday,soIcouldspendmoretimeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.Anotherstepwouldbefindingpurposeinreality,fromenjoyingfacetofaceconversationswithyourfamilyandfriendstotakingawalkinthesunshine.Immerseyourselfinthepleasureofreallifeinsteadofavirtualworld.Iamsurethatwithpersistence,you’lldefinitelygetridofyourvideogameaddiction.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.

Yours,

LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Jim寫一封郵件，針對(duì)他沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，日常生活受到影響表示理解并提出一些建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：first→firstofall盡全力：tryone’sbest→sparenoeffort沉浸：immersein→soakin確定無(wú)疑地：definitely→undoubtedly2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Anotherstepwouldbefindingpurposeinreality,fromenjoyingfacetofaceconversationswithyourfamilyandfriendstotakingawalkinthesunshine.拓展句：Anotherstepwouldbefindingpurposeinreality,whichincludesenjoyingfacetofaceconversationswithyourfamilyandfriendsandtakingawalkinthesunshine.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】First,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtrymybesttolimitthetimespentonvideogameseachday,soIcouldspendmoretimeonothermeaningfulactivitiesandhobbies.(運(yùn)用了if虛擬條件句)【高分句型2】Immerseyourselfinthepleasureofreallifeinsteadofavirtualworld.(運(yùn)用了祈使句)E(2023上·新疆伊犁·高一奎屯市第一高級(jí)中學(xué)?？计谥?你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以BeWiseInternetUsers為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.明智上網(wǎng)的重要性；2.提出具體建議(兩到三條)例如：正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，不能沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲；控制網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用時(shí)間等等。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。BeWiseInternetUsersHello,boysandgirls!Todaythetopicofmyspeechis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!【答案】BeWiseInternetUsersHello,boysandgirls!TodaythetopicofmyspeechisBeWiseInternetUsers.ItgoeswithoutsayingthattheInternetplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.However,tomakethebestuseoftheInternet,wemustbewiseInternetusers.Inthefirstplace,wemustusetheInternetfortherightpurposes.Besideshavingonlineclasses,wecansearchforsomeusefulinformationontheInternetinsteadofplayingputergames.What’smore,weneedtolimitourtimeontheInternet.It’smonknowledgethatlongscreentimedoesgreatharmtoourmentalhealthaswellaseyes.Nevershouldweenjoytheconvenienceoftechnologyatthecostofourhealth.Thanksforyourlistening!【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以BeWiseInternetUsers為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。【詳解】1.詞匯積累然而：however→nevertheless除……之外(還)：What’smore→Besides有用的：useful→helpful以……為代價(jià)：atthecostof→attheexpenseof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,tomakethebestuseoftheInternet,wemustbewiseInternetusers.拓展句：However,wemustbewiseInternetusers,thepurposeofwhichistomakethebestuseoftheInternet.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】It’smonknowledgethatlongscreentimedoesgreatharmtoourmentalhealthaswellaseyes.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Nevershouldweenjoytheconvenienceoftechnologyatthecostofourhealth.(運(yùn)用了never位于句首構(gòu)成的部分倒裝句)F(2023下·黑龍江牡丹江·高一牡丹江市第三高級(jí)中學(xué)?？计谀?假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校有個(gè)別學(xué)生迷戀網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，學(xué)習(xí)、生活受到不良影響，請(qǐng)你在你校英文報(bào)上發(fā)表一篇倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1.網(wǎng)癮的危害；2.培養(yǎng)良好的興趣愛好；3.合理安排課余時(shí)間。提示：beaddictedto(對(duì)……上癮)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dearfellowstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Atpresent,somestudentsinourschoolareaddictedtoplayingvideogamesontheInternet.Soattractivearethesegamesthattheyspendlargequantitiesoftimeonthemeveryday,whichdoesgreatharmtotheireyes.Worsestill,someevenstayuplate.Asaresult,theyfeelsleepyinclassnextday,andcan’tconcentrateontheirstudies.Therefore,it’shightimethatweteenagersarrangedoursparetimeinawiseway.Wecandevelopsomemeaningfulandenjoyablehabits,suchasreading,travellinganddoingsports.Also,wecanparticipateinthevariousactivitiesorganizedbytheStudents’Union.Thus,we’llbenefitfromthembothmentallyandphysically,andliveacolorfulandhealthylife.Students’Union【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校有個(gè)別學(xué)生迷戀網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，學(xué)習(xí)、生活受到不良影響，請(qǐng)你在你校英文報(bào)上發(fā)表一篇倡議書?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累吸引人的：attractive→appealing造成傷害：doharmto→causeharmto集中：concentrateon→focuson參加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Also,wecanparticipateinthevariousactivitiesorganizedbytheStudents’Union.拓展句：Also,wecanparticipateinthevariousactivitieswhichareorganizedbytheStudents’Union.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Soattractivearethesegamesthattheyspendlargequantitiesoftimeonthemeveryday,whichdoesgreatharmtotheireyes.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Therefore,it’shightimethatweteenagersarrangedoursparetimeinawiseway.(運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣)讀后續(xù)寫A(2024上·安徽合肥·高一統(tǒng)考期末)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Afewweeksafterthestartoftheschoolyear,MellonoticedthathisfriendMelvinwasbeinglaughedatbyotherclassmatesforthefactthathisshoeswerewornout(破舊的).Mellocouldn’tstandseeinghisfriendbeingbullied(欺凌).Hereallydidn’tappreciateotherpeopletalkingabouthimthatway.Infact,hehadbeenbulliedbecausehewasshort,sohedecidedtocallhismotherimmediatelyafterschool.Hetoldherthathewastiredofthisbadsituationandthathecouldn’tstandanyonelaughingathisfriend.So,inanactofgenerosity,MellosuggestedthatheusehispocketmoneytobuyMelvinanewpairofshoes.HealsosaidthathecoulddowithoutaNewYeargift.Seeingthelittleboyactedasanadult,themotherwasdeeplytouchedandagreedtohisrequest.Afterbuyingthem,Mellowenttobedearlierthanusual,sohecouldwakeupearlythenextdayandgotoschoolalittleearlier.Thiswayhecoulddelivertheshoestohisfriendwithoutbeingnoticedbyotherclassmates.However,shortlyafterhegavetheshoestohisfriend,theheadmaster,BryantBrown,calledhimintohisoffice.Mr.BrowntoldhimthathehadseenMelvinwithashoeboxaroundtheschool.WhenheaskedMelvinwhatwasinthebox,Melvinshowedhimthatitwasanewpairofshoes.MelvinexplainedthatitwashisfriendMellowhohadboughtthemforhim.MelloexplainedtoMr.Brownthatheboughtthemwithhispocketmoney.Mr.Brownwantedtosharethistouchingmomentwithmorepeople,andthenhetookapictureoftheshoes.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mr.Brownaskedthechildren’sparentsfor.permission(許可)tosharethestoryonline.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mr.Brownwasamazedtosee.hispostgetsomanylikes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Mr.Brownaskedthechildren’sparentsforpermissiontosharethestoryonline.Whentheysaidyes,hepostedit,withthemessage“MystudentMellotoldmehewastiredofotherstudentslaughingatMelvinforhisshoes.MellousedhispocketmoneyandboughtMelvinnewshoes.”Thepostquicklygotmanylikes,wassharedlotsoftimesandreceivedplentyofments.Netizenswereimpressedbythepurityandbeautyoftheirfriendship.Mr.Brownwasamazedtoseehispostgetsomanylikes.Hestatedthatitwastrulyakindgesturehehadneverseeninhislife,especiallywhenithappenedathisschool.HewaslostforwordsbecauseMello’smotivationwasthatweshouldalwaystreatpeoplethewaywewanttobetreated.Hepromisedtoengagechildrenbeyondtheclassroomandmakejoyanessentialpartoflearning.Inaddition,thestoryhasalsobeenfeaturedinmediaoutlets.Thechildren’sfamilieswereallimpressedbytheresponsestothetouchingstory.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了新學(xué)年開始幾個(gè)星期后，梅洛注意到他的朋友梅爾文因?yàn)樾哟┢屏硕黄渌瑢W(xué)嘲笑。于是梅洛給朋友買了一雙新鞋，這一舉動(dòng)被校長(zhǎng)發(fā)現(xiàn)了，校長(zhǎng)請(qǐng)求孩子們的父母允許他在網(wǎng)上分享這個(gè)故事。這篇帖子很快就得到了很多贊，被分享了很多次，也收到了很多評(píng)論，孩子和父母都被打動(dòng)了?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“布朗請(qǐng)求孩子們的父母允許他在網(wǎng)上分享這個(gè)故事”可知，第一段可描寫故事分享以后得到了很多贊，被分享了很多次，也收到了很多評(píng)論。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“布朗先生看到他的帖子得到這么多人的點(diǎn)贊，感到很驚訝”可知，第二段可描寫校長(zhǎng)的感悟以及孩子和父母都被打動(dòng)了。2.續(xù)寫線索：請(qǐng)求分享——帖子反響巨大——校長(zhǎng)驚訝——校長(zhǎng)感悟——孩子和父母感悟3.詞匯激活行為類購(gòu)買：buy/purchase嘲笑：laughat/makefunof說不出話：belostforwords/bespeechless情緒類討厭：betiredof/besickof動(dòng)人：touching/moving【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whentheysaidyes,hepostedit,withthemessage“MystudentMellotoldmehewastiredofotherstudentslaughingatMelvinforhisshoes.MellousedhispocketmoneyandboughtMelvinnewshoes.”(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Hestatedthatitwastrulyakindgesturehehadneverseeninhislife,especiallywhenithappenedathisschool.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)B(2023上·貴州遵義·高一遵義市南白中學(xué)?？茧A段練習(xí))讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Losingaparentisoneofthemostpainfulpartsoflife.Nomatterhowoldwearewhenourparentsleaveus,itcanbeaheartbrokenexperience.Ourmemoriesareallthatareleftofthemandhappyremindersoftheirloveturnintoourmostvaluabletreasures.That’showMaraSorianofeelsabouttheteddybearthatshetragically(不幸地)lostduringherrecentmovetoanewapartment.Diagnosed(診斷)withcancer,MaraSoriano’smother,Marilyn,gaveherdaughterthebearasagift.Afterhermother’sdeathlastJune,thegiftbecameevenmorespecial.“Thatbearwasbasicallythelastreminderofmymom.Itwashervoicethatacpaniedme,”shesaidinaninterview.Thetoydidn’tcostalot,butitcontainedarecordingofhermother’svoicetellingherthatshelovedhersomuchandwasproudofher.Thebear,calledMamaBear,wasinthebackpackthatcontainedelectronicslikeaniPad.Whenthebagwaslostlastweekduringthemove,the28yearoldwasheartbroken—notforthedevices(設(shè)備),butforMamaBear.MarapostedaphotoofherandherMamaBearontheInternet,explainingtheimportanceofthebear.Millionsofnetizensweretouchedbythestory.Moreandmorepeopleweretalkingaboutthebear,buttherewasnogoodnewsforMara.Soagainandagainshepostedonlineabouttheitemandthestorybehindit,hopingitcouldcatchmoreviewers’attentioninabigway.ActorRyanReynoldswasmovedbyMara’sstoryandthenpostedanappealforMamaBear’ssafereturn.“Ithinkweallneedthisbeartoehome,”hewrote.Alongwiththemessage,healsoofferedarewardforthepeoplewhofoundthebear.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Oneday,herecameapieceofgoodnewsfromtheInternet.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________