2019學年高二年級英語北師大版選修6課堂訓練：Unit16《Stories》寫作園地寫人記事記敘文

寫作園地對應學生用書P32寫人記事記敘文［感悟范文］請以“MyFirstClassintheNewSchool”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。注意：①內(nèi)容只需涉及一個方面；②詞數(shù)為100左右。［范文］Istillremember①hownervousIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthreeyearsago,②whenIfound③itdifficulttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.TheteacherspokeEnglishthroughouttheclass,④which⑤wastotallydifferentfromthelessonsIhadtakenbefore.Inthemorningclassthenextday,theEnglishteachercametome⑥whileIwasreadingthetextasaloudasotherstudents.Afterlisteningtomeforawhile,shegavemeabigsmileandsaidshelikedmyvoiceverymuch.Thesmileshoneonthewholedayandthefollowingdays.Aweeklater,Ivolunteeredto⑦takechargeofEnglishstudyinmyclass.⑧Thankstothecomfortingsmileinmyfirstmorningclass,Ibegantobeconfident.Sincethen⑨notonlycanIfollowtheteacher,butalsoIhavebeenimprovingmyEnglishgradually.［技法討論］本單元的寫作題材是寫人記事，要求寫出一件事或有關(guān)人物。一、寫人記事屬于記敘文范疇，包括人物介紹、講述故事、撰寫游記、新聞報道、校園軼事等。二、寫人時，要交代清楚人物的身份和事跡，大體分為三段。第一段寫出生年月和地點以及家庭背景。第二段要詳細描述人物的成績，例如，何時何地榮獲何種獎項。第三段要寫人物的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)對他人的影響。三、寫事時，要交代清楚事件發(fā)生的時間和地點，重點描述事件中感人的場面。黃金表達1．記事①Onenightaboutnineo'clock,Dr.GeorgereceivedacallfromDr.Jim...②Itwasaftersixo'clockinthemorningwhenhe...③ThismorningIwenttoashopto...④OnMarch23,at10：30,aterribleaccidenthappenedon...⑤LastSpringFestival,myparentsandIwent...⑥Schoolwasover.WangLinaskedWangGangtogohometogether.⑦Onmywaytothepark,Isawagroupofyoungmen...2.記人①Mrs.Smith,aged55,hasworkedforourschoolfor2years...②WuPing,whoisafamousyoungwriter,wasbornin...③Ihavealittleniece,whoiscalled...④LiuHaiyang,astudentfromChinesetopuniversity,badlyhuntsfor...⑤Oncetherewasamanwhowantedtobuyhimselfapairofshoes.⑥SunShuweiisaboyof14fromGuangdong...⑦OurEnglishteacher,Ms.Yang,cametoourschoolin1998.亮點分析：亮點一：本文第一部分講述了我作為一個新生在第一天的第一節(jié)英語課上遇到的困難；第二部分講述了老師的微笑幫我解決了困難；第三部分感謝老師給了我自信，且英語成績逐步提高。層次分明，條理清晰。亮點二：文中多處使用了復合句：①how引導的賓語從句，②④when和which引導的非限制性定語從句，⑥while引導的時間狀語從句。為本文增加了得分點。亮點三：精彩詞語⑤bedifferentfrom；⑦takechargeof；⑧thanksto；⑨notonly...butalso以及③形式賓語it的運用，使文章內(nèi)容生動，豐富。［類文演練］上周末你和你父親及他的朋友所組織的“驢友俱樂部(LVYOUCLUB)”去神秘大峽谷徒步穿越，由于準備充分，組織到位，非常成功。你收獲頗多，請你將此次穿越寫成一篇120個詞左右的短文發(fā)表在你的博客中，以便對此感興趣的英國網(wǎng)友了解。寫作提示：1.簡要描述此次活動。2.活動注意事項。3.感想和收獲。注意：開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。“LVYOU”，whichhasthesamepronunciationastravelinChinesefromtheInternet,isbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourcountry.［聯(lián)想詞匯］給某人留下印象答案：leavesb.animpression取得巨大成功答案：achievegreatsuccess對……感興趣答案：beinterestedin/takeaninterestin接近自然答案：comeclosetonature參加答案：takepartin/participatein［連詞成句］按要求完成下列句子LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUB.TheLVYOUCLUBwasorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends.Itleftmeadeepimpression.（用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)和定語從句合并句子）答案：LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUBorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends,whichleftmeadeepimpression.Becausewemadegoodpreparationsandhadexcellentorganization,thetripwasagreatsuccess.（同義句轉(zhuǎn)換）goodpreparationsandexcellentorganization,we.答案：Becauseof;achievedgreatsuccessIfso,theycancomeclosetonatureandappreciatethebeautyofnature.Theycanexperiencethegreatnessof廿￡6.（用aswellas合并句子）答案：Ifso,theycancomeclosetonatureandappreciatethebeautyofnatureaswellasexperiencethegreatnessoflife.［連句成章］“LVYOU”，whichhasthesamepronunciationastravelinChinesefromtheInternet,isbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourcountry.LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUBorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends,whichleftmeadeepimpression.Becauseofgoodpreparationsandexcellentorganization,weachievedgreatsuccess.Inthiskindofactivity,alltheparticipantsshouldbeinterestedinprotectingtheenvironmentandenjoytravelling.Theywillfacelotsofdifficultiesinnature,soeveryoneshouldhavegreatdetermination,takecareofeachotherandob