高考英語作文復習高級句式寫作導練一課件

高級句式寫作導練一寫作要領

高考評分標準中的“復雜結構的運用及較多的語法結構”是指句子結構的復合性和句型的多樣性。不論是復雜結構的運用(如強調句、倒裝句等句型、含有名詞性從句、定語從句或狀語從句的復合句),還是較多的語法結構(如分詞和不定式等非謂語動詞)的運用,都指向句式的轉換問題。不容置疑,這些復雜結構的運用及較多的語法結構會增加文章的表達力度、提升文章的檔次。1.改變簡單句的敘述方式,讓簡單句不簡單不要一味地采用“主謂賓”的文法結構,可以通過改變句子成分的位置,為簡單句增加亮點。(1)在主語和謂語間增加插入成分,補充信息I’mLiHua,_______________,whoisstudyinginLondon.(2019全國Ⅰ)(2)副詞提前,充分表情達意_________,Sallywasnotdrivenoutliketheformerteachers;_________,shewonrespectfromthestudents.anoutgoingboySurprisinglyinstead2.使用復合句,整合語義關聯(lián)的簡單句(1)使用定語從句尤其是非限制性定語從句的使用,可以使得文章句式復雜,提升表達的層次,成為增分的亮點,從而提升作文檔次。Tobeginwith,IhaveeverworkedasavolunteerinChinesepaintingsexhibitioninBeijing,______________________________________(2019全國Ⅰ)whichwillsurelygivemeanedgetothejob.(2)使用名詞性從句尤其是主語從句和表語從句的使用,能夠增加句子的層次感,使其結構緊湊,言簡意賅。如:thereasonwhy...is/wasthat...和what從句的使用。_______________IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity________itisoneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.(2018北京)_________________________you’dbetterbringsomegifts,suchasabookoraChineseknot.(2018全國Ⅰ)ThereasonwhyisthatWhatIwanttostressisthatwhilealthough3.使用非謂語動詞整合簡單句,尤其是分詞在句中作伴隨狀語和不定式作目的狀語。Onthesecondday,Chinesetraditionalinstrumentswilltakethestage,___________________________________________(2019全國Ⅲ)Iamwriting_______________________foryourhelponmyEnglishstudy.(2019浙江)presentingChineseclassicslikeErQuanYingYue.toexpressmygratitude

Sointerestedthat(3)the+比較級...,the+比較級____________

peopleareinvolved,__________theoceanenvironmentis.(2022全國甲)(4)使用強調句,包括強調謂語的“do/does/did+動詞原形”結構和強調句子其他成分的“Itis/was...that...”結構。_____________________________Irealizedthatlaborisglorious.(2019北京)ThemoreItwasthroughthisexperiencethatthebettercouldn’thavebeenprotectedWithmyfavoritemealservedwhatgreatfuntherewillbe寫作指導二在實際寫作中,必須在文章中靈活使用復雜句式和高級表達方式,才能從整體上提升文章的檔次。即時演練三一、按照要求改變句式1.Ididn’ttakehisadvice,soIfailedintheexam.(用虛擬語氣)__________________________________________________________2.Ifitisso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.(用省略句)__________________________________________________________3.Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway.(用倒裝句)__________________________________________________________IfIhadtakenhisadvice,Iwouldn’thavefailedintheexam.Ifso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.一、按照要求改變句式4.Muchtooursurprise,Maryfailedinthefinalexam.(用名詞性從句)________________________________________________________5.Thestadiumhasbeensetupandallthestudentsareaccessibletothefacilities.(用with復合結構)________________________________________________________WhatsurprisedusmostisthatMaryfailedinthefinalexam.Withthestadiumsetup,allthestudentsareaccessibletothefacilities.二、運用高級句式翻譯下列句子1.我寧愿步行回家也不愿坐擁擠的公交車。______________________________________________________2.我們正在欣賞美景,這時一聲巨響吸引了我們的注意力。________________________________________________________————————————————————————————Iwouldratherwalkhomethantakeacrowdedbus.Wewereenjoyingthewonderfulsightwhenaloudnoisecaughtourattention.二、運用高級句式翻譯下列句子3.我想借此機會表達你對我慷慨幫助的感激之情,沒有你的幫助,我不會取得如此快的進步。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.我們絕對不能忽視知識的價值。________________________________________________________I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourgeneroushelp,withoutwhichIwouldn’tmakesuchrapidprogress.Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.二、運用高級句式翻譯下列句子5.該是我們人類采取適當?shù)拇胧﹣砭S護生態(tài)平衡的時候了。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.我們再怎么強調保護環(huán)境的重要性也不為過。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itistimethatwehumanbeingstookpropersteps/measurestokeepthebalanceofnature.Wecannotemphasizetoomuchtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool.二、運用高級句式翻譯下列句子8.就我個人而言,一方面父母應該尊重孩子的觀點,給他們足夠的自由讓他們自己做決定;另一方面,父母應該鼓勵孩子找出自己的方法來解決問題。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsfarasI’mconcern