新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫突破：勞動故事

專題08高考英語專項突破“讀后續(xù)寫”-勞動故事

勞動，可以讓我們品嘗甜蜜……

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閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya'smother,Helenaloved

hostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'dmakeherSweetSixteena

hundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededtobe.Theyselectedathemeeveryyear

andstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe“SnowWhite^^andherninthhadbeenthe“Frozen”.

Theynevertoldherwhatthethemewasthedaybefore.She'djustwakeupherbirthdaymorning,

abrandnewbirthdayoutfit(——套月艮裝)laidneatlyonherdresser(anoutfitrelatedtothetheme,of

course)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadofherthatday.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.Aplayonthewords“Sweet

Sixteen^^waslikely-acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe'dhadabakingpartyafewyears

ago—andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn'thaveanyinterestincars,soshe

doubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She'dtriedtolookthroughhermother'spurchase

historyonline,buthermotherhadbeencarefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonly

clueleftwasthebirthdayoutfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandshelovedthedaythat

herbirthdaytookplace.ItwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitneverrained.Thismorningwas

nodifferentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinherbedandlookedtoherdresserbefore

slippingoutofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.Sheunfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeing

howitwaslike.Itreacheddown,justabovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorand

founditwasnotsomuchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.Itwastotallyonefor

blue-collarworkers!

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

【答案】例文1：

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.Helenawalkedin."Whatismybirthday

themethisyear,mum?”Myaasked."Labor!”Helenaansweredinafirmvoice."ButIwas

expectingaparty!”hervoicesoundedshaky.Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbomonLabor's

Day!Mya'sfeetbroughthersmallstepstofollowHelenatothevan.Onarrivingatafarm,she

noticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizonthatmadeasplendidviewitself.Their

jobwastoremovetheweeds.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.Severaldropsofsweattracedapath

onherredandpinkcheeksandsheturnedtoHelena:"thisisnotbad,mumandIfeelI'vegrown

upenoughtohelpyouwithsomething.^^HelenapulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabigkiss

onherforehead.ThesuninMaywasshiningbrighterthaneverlikeafireball.Picturingthegood

harvestofthisyear,theyhittheroadwithahappybirthdaysongechoinginthevan.

例文2:

Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock."Isthebirthdaygirlup?”Helenaasked.

Myaopenedherbedroomdoorandsurprisinglyfoundtheylookedthesame!LookingatMya's

surprisedface,Helenagrinnedandledhertothekitchen.Therewasnomealonthetable."Let's

preparefbrthepartytogetherthisAuntBeatricesaidgladlydressedinthesameoutfit.It

suddenlyoccurredtoMyathatthethemethisyearwassupposedtobe“SweetLabor,Sweet

Sixteen”.

Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.Lookingaroundthelivingroom,

Myafeltthehappinessbroughtbylaborthefirsttime."HappyBirthday!”Myaturnedaroundin

surprise.Allofherfriendsjumpedoutofanyhidingspotswitheveryonewearingthesameoutfit.

Theyenjoyedthepartyandcleaneduptogetherafterwards.TiredasMyawas,shepulledHelena

andBeatriceintoahugtightly,saying“thisisthebestsweetsixteenever.^^

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，主要講的是Mya的媽媽和阿姨喜歡為她辦生日派對，Mya一直在

猜測她16歲生日派對的主題，可是沒有結果，只能等生日那天早上看梳妝臺上的衣服，那

天早上她穿上衣服后發(fā)現(xiàn)自己完全是一個藍領工人。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內容“突然，敲門聲打斷了她的思緒?！翱芍?，第一段可描寫Mya的媽媽告

訴Mya今年生日的主題。

②由第二段首句內容“一切都做完了，她的臉上露出了甜蜜的微笑。”可知，第二段可描寫

Mya勞動后的感受。

2.續(xù)寫線索：告知主題——到農(nóng)場勞動——勞動后的感受——回家

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①回答：answer/respond

②到達：arriveat/getto

③掠過：traceapath/skimover

情緒類

①堅定的：firm/determined

②糟糕的:bad/terrible

【點睛】

[高分句型l]Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbomonLabor'sDay!（由that引導的賓語從句，

省略了that）

[高分句型2]Onarrivingatafarm,shenoticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizon

thatmadeasplendidviewitself.（由關系代詞that引導的限制性定語從句）

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ItwasearlyspringandNanawasinthebackyardwithhergrandchildren.Amy,Michael,and

JustinwereplayingwhenNanasaid,"I'mgoingtostartplantingmygarden.Whowantstohelp

me?”

“Whataregoingtoplant,Nana?,,askedAmy.likebig,yellowsunflowers.^^

'Tmgoingtoplantvegetables.Thatwaywecanhavethemtoeatwhentheyareready,“said

Nana.

“Howlongdoesthattake?”askedMichael.Helikedvegetablessometimes,especially

carrots.

“Itwilltakeafewmonthsbeforeanythingisreadytoeat,“answeredNana.Thechildren

weresurprised.

“Months?Whywouldyoudoallthatworkandthenhavetowaitsolong?^^askedAmy."You

shouldjustgotothestoreandbuythem.^^

“Patience,mysweeties!Don'tyouknowfoodalwaystastesbestwhenyougrowityourself?,,

repliedNana."Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon'tbetoomuchwork.”

"I'llhelpyou,Nana,“offeredJustin.Heputdownthesoccerballandwenttolookatthe

gardeningtoolsNanahadlaidout."Whatdowedofirst?”MichaelandAmycameovertolook,

too.

NanataughtJustinhowtouseatrowel（小鏟子）todigsmallrowsofholesfortheseeds.

Next,NanashowedAmyhowtopourtheseedsintoeachhole.AnditwasMichaeFsjobtocover

uptheholeswithsoil.Finally,AmywrotethevegetablenamesonsticksthatJustinpushedinto

theground.44Thiswaywecanrememberwhichvegetableseedswehaveplanted,saidNana.

Whentheyhadplantedeverything,thechildrentookturnsfillingupthewateringcansothat

Nanacouldmakethesoilniceandwetfortheseedstostarttogrow.

“Nowwejustwaterthemalittleeveryday,andwithsometimeandsunshine,we'Hhave

somedeliciousthingstoeatinthesummer,“saidNana.

注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.

Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.

【答案】Possibleversion1:

Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.Notsurprisingly,they

weregoingtoseehowthegardenwasgrowing.Afterwateringthevegetables,theywouldremove

theweedsthatpoppeduparoundtheplantsandapplyorganicfertilizerunderNana'sinstructionif

necessary.Astimewentby,theplantsweregrowingtallerandstronger.Whentheynoticedthe

vegetablesfloweringandproducingfruits,theireyesweresparklinglikediamonds.Neverhad

theylookedforwardtosummerlikethisbefore.Buttheyclearlyknewthatifsworthwhiletowait

fortheinvitingresults.

Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.Hearingthat,thechildrenalljumpedintothe

airandcheersfilledthewholegarden.Nanagavethemeachbasketsand,togethertheygathered

someofthecucumbers,carrotsandtomatoes,whichwereturnedintodelicacies,"Whowantsto

helpeatthisfreshsalad?”Nanaasked."Me!”everyonerespondedloudly.Tastingthesalad,they

thoughtnothingcouldbemoredelicious,becauseitwastheywhogrewthesevegetables.Theyall

learnedthatmanyhandsmakelightworkandpatiencereallypaysoff.

Possibleversion2:

Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.Eagertohelpgrow

thevegetableswell,theyfirsttookturnstowatertheplants.ThenNanashowedthemwhichplants

neededtrimmingorwhichneededtyinguptogrowtallandstraight.Dayafterday,springturned

intosummerandfinally,theplantsstartedrevealingtheircolorfulsecrets.Thechildrenwere

thrilledtoseethetomatoesturningred,thecucumbershidingunderthegreenleavesandthe

peppersgrowingbigger.NotuntilthendidtheyrealizethatNanawasright-alltheyneededwas

patience.

Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.Withbasketsready,Nanaandthechildren

startedoutontheirbusiness.Nanatookthemaroundthegardenandpickedsometomatoes,

cucumbers,peppersandcabbages.Thenforthefollowinghour,theywerebusyingmaking

vegetablesalad.ThechildrenhelpedwashthedirtoffthefoodwhileNanachoppedupthe

vegetables.WhenNanaaskedwhowantedtotrythefreshsalad,everyoneexpressedtheir

willingnessexcitedly.<6OK.Amy,gettheplates.Justin,getthewaterandcups,andMichael,get

theforks.Let'scelebratetheharvest!?,

【解析】

本文以奶奶和孫子們在后院一起種植蔬菜為線索展開，講述了那年早春，娜娜和她的孫子們

在后院，艾米、邁克爾和賈斯汀正在玩耍，奶奶提出要種植蔬菜，一開始孫子們建議奶奶去

商店買，因為自己種植蔬菜要做那么多工作，然后還要等這么長時間，奶奶讓孫子們耐心點,

因為自己種的食物總是味道最好的，奶奶認為如果大家都來幫忙，工作也不會太多?孫子們

聽了都樂意來幫忙，奶奶給孫子們分了工，奶奶耐心教導，當他們把所有的東西都種好后，

孩子們輪流往水罐里灌滿水，這樣奶奶就能把土壤弄濕，讓種子開始生長。奶奶說只要每天

給它們澆水，再加上一些時間和陽光，夏天就可以吃到美味的東西了。

【詳解】

段落續(xù)寫（以version1為例）：

①由第一段首句內容“每當孫子們來拜訪時，他們都會沖進花園?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫孩子

們怎樣照顧這些植物們，以及看著蔬菜開花并結出果實時的興奮心情。

②由第二段首句內容“最后，娜娜說是第一次收獲的時候了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫孩子們聽

到消息的喜悅之情，他們一起收集蔬菜，并把這些變成了美味佳肴，們認為沒有什么比這更

美味了，付出總有回報。

續(xù)寫線索：沖進花園一看如何生長——照顧花園——開花結果——高興

詞匯激活

行為類

①沖進：dashinto/stormin

②除草：removeweeds/cleanoutweeds

③注意：notice/note/find

情緒類：

①驕傲地：loudly/withpride

②興奮：jumpintotheair/beupintheair

【點睛】

［高分句型1J.Afterwateringthevegetables,theywouldremovetheweedsthatpoppeduparound

theplantsandapplyorganicfertilizerunderNanasinstructionifnecessary.（由關系詞that弓|導的

限制性定語從句）

［高分句型2］.Neverhadtheylookedforwardtosummerlikethisbefore4否定詞never提于句首

的部分倒裝句）

［高分句型3］.Theyalllearnedthatmanyhandsmakelightworkandpatiencereallypaysoff.（由

連接詞that引導的賓語從句作learned的賓語）

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TheTroubleWithChores（家庭雜務）

Thetwins,JennaandJeff,weregoodatmostthings.Theirdadwasgoodatmostthings,too.

ButtherewasonethingthetwinsandDadwerenotgoodat-thatwaschores.Itwasn'tthatDad

andthetwinsdidn'twanttodotheirchores.Itwasjustthattheyalwaysseemedtohavereasons

nottodothem.Andtheyhadsuchgoodexcuses.

“You'reright,mydear,"saidMum."Thegrassdoesneedcutting.Butaspiderhasspuna

wonderfulwebonthelawnmowerandIhaven9tthehearttoputallherhardworktowaste.”

“Mum,"saidJenna,UIknowit'smyweektoputupmycards.It'sjustthatI'mwaitingfor

themtodry.They'llbeeasiertoscoopupthatway.^^

"Mum,"saidJeff,“mayIskipsettingthetabletonight?There'saTVshowontheIceAge,

andIhavetodoareportontheBeastofBaluchistan.^^

Therewerealsotheendlessquarrelsaboutwhodidwhatandwhogottheeasyjob.Mum

sighed.IfonlyDadandthetwinswereasgoodatdoingtheirchoresastheywereatarguingabout

them,lifewouldbeeasier.Talkingofchores,Mumthoughtinsteadofpushingthemforchores,it

wouldbealoteasiertodothemherself.Andthatwaswhatshedid.Sheputawayallcardsandset

andclearedthetable.Shechasedthedustbunniesfromunderthefurnitureandcleanedupthe

twins'messyroom.

Thetwinsdidpickupandputawaythingsoccasionally.Daddidcutthegrassonceinawhile.

Notsuiprisingly,thingsbegantoslide.Everybodygotalittleunhappy,especiallyMum,whospent

muchtimedoingchores.Somethinghadtobedone.Butwhat?

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Mumdecidedtohostafamilymeeting.

Livinginallthatmessybuild-upwasn'tmuchfun.

【答案】Mumdecidedtohostafamilymeeting.€tMydear,“shesaid,“there'salotmoretolifethan

chores.I'vebeensoconcernedwiththehousethatIhaven'tbeentothegymfbrweeks.”"Goto

thegymtoworkout,“Dadandthetwinsapplauded.Thewholefamilyenjoyedthemselvesand

notworryingaboutchoresworkedprettywellatfirst.Butbitbybit,messybuild-upbegantotake

upthehouse.

Livinginallthatmessybuild-upwasnimuchfun.Daddecidedtohostafamilymeeting,too.

Nosoonerhadthemeetingbegunthaneverybodydecidedtodosomethingabouttheawfulmess.

Theypickedupallthewettowels.Theygotthedishesoutofthesinkandbanishedthedust

bunnies.Thentheysatdown,exhaustedbutpleased.Atlast,theyrealizedtherewerealotof

meaningfulthingsinlife,includingchores.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎和爸爸在大多數(shù)事情上都很擅長。但有一件事他們都

不擅長，那就是做家務。并不是他們不愿意做家務。只是他們似乎總有理由不去做。他們有

很好借口；有時這對雙胞胎確實偶爾會收拾東西，爸爸確實偶爾割草，但是似乎每個人都有

點不高興尤其是媽媽，因為她花了很多時間做家務。媽媽意識到必須做點什么。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內容“媽媽決定召開一次家庭會議”可知，第一段可描寫家庭會議的計劃和安

排。

②由第二段首句內容“生活在如此混亂的環(huán)境中并沒有多少樂趣?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫大家

決定一起打掃如此混亂的環(huán)境。

2.續(xù)寫線索：家務——找借口——拒絕——混亂——收拾干凈——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①拒絕：haveexcuses/didn'twanttodo/refusepolitely

情緒類

①.高興：pleased/happy

②.擔心：concerned/worry

【點睛】

［高分句型1|.Atlast,theyrealizedtherewerealotofmeaningfulthingsinlife,includingchores.

（省略連接詞that的賓語從句作realize的賓語）

［高分句型2］Nosoonerhadthemeetingbegunthaneverybodydecidedtodosomethingaboutthe

awfulmess.（否定詞置于句首的半倒裝句）

04

Ireachedintomybackpack,feelingformycellphone.IwastiredofAuntLettytalkingon

andonaboutherchickens,horsesandcows.Worse,Iwasafraidofhavingtospendspringbreak

atherfarm.

Inspiteofmyprotest,myparentsdecidedthatspendingtimeatthefarmwouldbeagreat

experienceforme.Myparentsbothgrewuponfarmsandbelievedthatresponsibility,hardwork

andrespectforthelandwerevaluablelessons."Lessonsyouneedtolearn,son,?,theysaid.

“So,haveyoueverriddenahorse?^^AuntLettyasked,tryingtoturnmyattentionawayfrom

myphone.

“Hmmm,no.ButI'veseenhorsesonTV"Ianswered,absent-minded.

“Well,we'vegotanicehorseIthinkyou'lllike.Hercules—soundslikeabeast,buthe'sa

gentlegiant.Theotheranimalshavenamestoo,butdon'tworry,youwon'thavetoremember

theirnames.Ifyoushowupatthegatewithfeed,they9rehappy!”shesaidsmiling.

Iglancedatmyaunt,angrythatIwasexpectedtowork.Vacationsweremeantforsleeping

late,playingvideogames,andmaybeskateboarding.Itriedtotextafriend.

“Phonesdon'tworkwellouthere.Withallthehillsandvalleys,it'shardtogeta

connection.,,

Icontinuedtexting,butshewasright—therewasnocellreception.

Thenextfewdayswerebusy.Wehadbreakfastbeforedawn.Thenwewentouttothebarnto

getthefeedwhiletheanimalswaitedtobefed.Theafternoonswereoccupiedwithhaulinghay,

clean-up,andcaringfortheanimals.TheanimalsdependedonAuntLetty,buttheyalsoprovided

herwithaffectionandnecessitiessuchaseggs,milkandcheese.

Atdusk,whenthefarmwasfinallyquiet,AuntLettystretchedherarmsoutandsaid,“Just

takeadeepbreathofthesweetcountryair!"I,exhausted,wasunabletoappreciatemywork.

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Onthefourthday,AuntLettyannounced,4ifstimetomeetHercules.^^

Aftertheride,timeatthefarmseemedtobedifferent.

［答案】Para1:0nthefourthday、AuntLettyannounced."It'stimetomeetHercules.”“Youmust

bejoking!^^Iresponded,aflushoffrightsweepingoverme.AuntLetty,grinning,headedtothe

stable.TheninfrontofmewasHercules,standingover2metershigh.Ahorribledarkgiant!I

backedaway,shootinganangryglanceatmyaunt."Oh,man,comeon!He'sanythingbuta

beast!”sheencouragedme.Sensingherinsistence,IscratchedmyheadandshuffledtoHercules.

AuntLettyhelpedmemountthehorseandhandedmetherein.Flickinghisheadandshakinghis

body,Herculesmovedoff,withastiffmeonit,"Relax!"Auntsaid,trottingjustbesideus.

Gradually,IadjustedmyselffollowingAunt'sinstructions.Andthen,Iwasenjoyingthegentle

rhythmicjolts.

Para2:Aftertheride,timealthefannseemedSobedifferent.Ihadafriend,Hercules.Thegentle

giant,everyevening,immersedinthesettingsun,gracefullycarriedmestrollingorgallopingat

thefarm.AndIhadAuntLetty.She,fromdawntodusk,tirelessly,caredfortheanimalsanddid

themanualwork,showingmeresponsibility,hardworkandrespect.Andshedidenjoythebusy

andseeminglyboringroutine.Infected,Ialsobegantoappreciatemylabor.Itpaidtoworkhard!

Lifewasfulfillingandtheanimalsrewardeduswithaffectionandnicefood.Onedayafter

enjoyingsometastycheesemydearauntmade,Ipickedupthephone,preparedtotellmyparents

thespringbreakwouldbeagreatexperience.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者討厭在Letty姨媽的農(nóng)場過春假，但作者的父母還是堅

持讓作者去，Letty姨媽告訴作者他們有一匹名叫Hercules的馬，最后作者和這匹馬成為了

朋友，作者也在Letty姨媽的感染下感激自己的勞動，認為這個春假很有意義。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內容“第四天，Letty姨媽宣布：’是時候見見Hercules了?！焙沃谝欢慰?/p>

描寫作者見到Hercules和騎馬的經(jīng)過和感受。

②由第二段首句內容“騎馬之后，在農(nóng)場的時間似乎變了?！翱芍?，第二段可描寫作者在農(nóng)

場的生活和體會。

2.續(xù)寫線索：作者見到Hercules——作者騎馬——作者適應農(nóng)場生活——作者被姨媽感染熱

愛勞動——作者認為這個春假很棒

3.詞匯激活

行為類

開玩笑：joke/kid

回答：respond/reply

照顧：carefor/lookafter

情緒類

溫柔：gentle/soft

憤怒：angry/mad

【點睛】

［高分句型1］Ibackedaway,shootinganangryglanceatmyaunt.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

［高分句型2JOnedayafterenjoyingsometastycheesemydearauntmade,Ipickedupthephone,

preparedtotellmyparentsthespringbreakwouldbeagreatexperience.（運用了動名詞作賓語）

05

Ihadadeadlineforahugeprojectatwork.Sincemyhusbandwasonbusiness,Ihurriedto

buyarotisseriechicken（烤雞）fordinner.Ifiguredthatwouldbuymeanextrahourtoworkon

myprojectsinceIwouldn'thavetocookthatnight.

Now,itwas6:00pm,andIwastypingaway,makinggoodprogress.Mykidswere

downstairswatchingTV.Myeleven-year-oldson,Nathan,cameinandsaid,"Mom,I'mhungry.

Canyouwarmupthechickennow?"

Inalittlebit,“Iansweredwithoutlookingupfromthecomputer."I'mtryingtowork.”

Tenminuteslater,myolderson,Jordan,cameintotellmethathewashungrytoo,andI

neededtowarmupthechicken,"FildoitassoonasI'matastoppingpoint,*'Isaid.

Fifteenminutesafterthat,myeighteen-year-olddaughter,Julia?madethesamerequest.

Iexploded."You'realloldenoughtoputtherotisseriechickeninthemicrowave/'Inearly

shouted."YouguysarewatchingTVwhileFmworkingonsomethingimportant.Youshouldjust

takesomeresponsibility."

Twentyminuteslater,apaperplatefilledwithchickenappearedonthedesknexttomy

computer.Ismiledatthekids,HSorryIyelledatyouguys.I'mjustsotiredofbeingATFaround

here."

ATF?"

AllThingsFood.It'smyresponsibilitytoplanthemeals,shopforthefood,cookthefood,

andthencleanupthedishesafterward.Ifit'sfood-related,itautomaticallyfallstome.Idon'twant

toyellatyouguysagain,butFmoverwhelmed（壓倒的）rightnow."

Julianodded,"Weunderstand,Mom.When'syourdeadline?*'

Intwodays,andIdon'tknowhowFmgoingtofinish.1'TearsthreatenedasIthoughtabout

howmuchworkIstillhadtodo.

Julialookedatherbrothers."Forthenext