10 航空航天 -中考英語(yǔ)高分作文（全國(guó)通用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語(yǔ)高分作文熱點(diǎn)10航空航天一、材料作文1．近期，三名中國(guó)宇航員完成了為期六個(gè)月的任務(wù)，安全返回地球。假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，你最欽佩的就是給女兒摘星星的女航天員王亞平大校，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿，講述王亞平的故事。要點(diǎn)如下：1.王亞平，41歲，再次創(chuàng)造歷史，成為在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天員。2.王亞平成為中國(guó)首位走出太空站的女航天員，邁出了中國(guó)女性艙外太空行走第一步。3.她站上了“最高講臺(tái)”，在太空艙內(nèi)給學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)直播的科學(xué)講座，成為我國(guó)首位在太空上課的女老師。4.要繼續(xù)進(jìn)行太空探測(cè)，還需要幾代人的努力。注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)90左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。參考詞匯：太空站：spacestation太空探測(cè)：spaceexploration講臺(tái)：platform欽佩：admire探測(cè)：exploration一代（人）：generationThreeChineseastronautshavecompletedtheirsix-monthmissionandreturnedtotheEarthsafely._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThreeChineseastronautshavecompletedtheirsix-monthmissionandreturnedtotheEarthsafely.IadmirethewomanastronautWangYapingmost.Shekeptherpromisethatshewouldbebackwithstarsforherdaughter.WangYaping,attheageof41,hasmadehistoryagainassheisnowthefirstChinesewomantostayinspaceformorethan100days.Moreover,sheisalsotheChinesefemalewhotookthefirststepontothespace,outsideofthespacestation.Believeitornot,sheevenstoodonthehighestplatformtogivestudentsalivesciencelecturefromspace.Studentsconsiderherasthefirstfemaleteacherinspace.Forspaceexplorationtocontinue,itrequirestheeffortsofgenerations.Asaresult,alltheteenagersshouldstudyhardertodevotetoourcountrylikeWangYaping,ourhero.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹王亞平的個(gè)人信息；第二步，介紹王亞平在太空方面取得的成績(jī)；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①attheageof在……歲時(shí)②morethan多于③considersbas把某人看作[高分句型]①Shekeptherpromisethatshewouldbebackwithstarsforherdaughter.（that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）②Asaresult,alltheteenagersshouldstudyhardertodevotetoourcountrylikeWangYaping,ourhero（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）2．假如你是李華，上個(gè)月你在“中國(guó)航天日”參加了科技館舉行的航天俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，描述這次活動(dòng)，并表達(dá)你的想法。（1）我聽了宇航員的故事，學(xué)習(xí)到了科學(xué)精神。（2）我做了物理實(shí)驗(yàn)，增長(zhǎng)了科學(xué)知識(shí)。（3）我參觀了展覽，使我對(duì)太空旅行更感興趣了。（4）我認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：科學(xué)精神

scientificspirit太空旅行

spacetravel要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,I_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,ItookpartinthespaceclubactivitiesheldbytheScienceandTechnologyMuseumonSpaceDayofChina.IntheScienceandTechnologyMuseum,firstofall,Iheardsomestoriesaboutastronautsandlearnedthescientificspirit.Next,wedidsomephysicsexperimentstoincreaseourknowledgeofscience.Finally,italsomadememoreinterestedinspacetravelbyparticipatingintheexhibition.Ithinkweshouldtakepartinmoreoftheseactivities.Theseactivitiescankeepourthirstforspaceknowledgealiveandenhanceourenthusiasmforscienceaswell.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，描述你參加的這次航天俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)，并表達(dá)你的想法。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。本文可以采用兩段式寫作，第一段描述這次活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，第二段則表達(dá)對(duì)此次活動(dòng)的看法。3．飛天夢(mèng)，強(qiáng)國(guó)夢(mèng)！2022年4月16日，神舟十三號(hào)載人飛行任務(wù)取得圓滿成功。航天任務(wù)取得成功離不開航天人的堅(jiān)守與努力。習(xí)總書記深情寄語(yǔ)航天人：“在航天事業(yè)發(fā)展的征程上勇攀高峰、不斷前行”，“你們是新時(shí)代中國(guó)航天事業(yè)無(wú)數(shù)奮斗者、攀登者的代表”……假如你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)公眾號(hào)正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給公眾號(hào)留言，推薦一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，對(duì)其作簡(jiǎn)要介紹，并說(shuō)明推薦理由。提示詞語(yǔ)：workhard,stickto,dream,difficulty,overcome提示問(wèn)題：●Whichspaceherodoyouadmiremost?●Whydoyouadmirehim/her?IamLiHuafromClass1,Grade9._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】IamLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.AllChinesepeopleareproudofthethreeastronauts,NieHaisheng,WangYapingandYeGuangfu.Amongthem,IadmireWangYapingmost.

WangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace.

Bornin1980,WangYapinglovedlearningandwasgoodatsportswhenshewasinschool.Herspacedreamstartedin2003.Shetrainedreallyhardandnevergaveup.Aftertenyears’effort,shejoinedtheShenzhouXmissionandgavewonderfulandlivelylessonsinspace.Moreover,sheisthefirstfemaleastronautwhowalkedinspacesuccessfullyinChina.Asastudent,ItrulyadmireWangYapingforhergreatspiritofdevotingherselftoherspacedream.WheneverImeetdifficulties,Ishouldalsolearnfromhertokeepontryingandneverloseheart.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題介紹自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹王亞平；第三段介紹自己欽佩王亞平什么。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。4．神舟十三號(hào)順利返航，宇航員王亞平再次圓夢(mèng)天宮，凱旋歸來(lái)。你校正組織以“Theheroinmyheart”為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)介紹王亞平的事跡并分享你對(duì)她的欽佩之情。經(jīng)歷與成就●出生于1980年，在學(xué)校里熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)，擅長(zhǎng)體育●太空夢(mèng)始于2003年，十年如一日艱苦訓(xùn)練、從不言棄●2013年加入神舟十號(hào)航天任務(wù)并太空授課●中國(guó)首位在太空行走的女宇航員你的觀點(diǎn)……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。3.參考詞匯：theShenzhouXmission神舟十號(hào)航天任務(wù)TheheroinmyheartWangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Theheroinmyheart

WangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace.

Bornin1980,WangYapinglovedlearningandwasgoodatsportswhenshewasinschool.Herspacedreamstartedin2003.Shetrainedreallyhardandnevergaveup.Aftertenyears’effort,shejoinedtheShenzhouXmissionandgavewonderfulandlivelylessonsinspace.Moreover,sheisthefirstfemaleastronautwhowalkedinspacesuccessfullyinChina.

Asastudent,ItrulyadmireWangYapingforhergreatspiritofdevotingherselftoherspacedream.WheneverImeetdifficulties,Ishouldalsolearnfromhertokeepontryingandneverloseheart.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目為一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。標(biāo)題和首段已給出，第二段介紹宇航員王亞平的經(jīng)歷與夢(mèng)想，包括題目中給出的四個(gè)要點(diǎn)；第三段寫出自己的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)并結(jié)尾。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)需采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用一般過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)描述宇航員王亞平的經(jīng)歷與成就；用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作過(guò)程中需要注意時(shí)間邏輯，時(shí)態(tài)的切換，行文流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。二、電子郵件5．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，2022年3月23日你和同學(xué)們一起觀看了神舟十三號(hào)航天員太空授課。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示內(nèi)容給三位航天員發(fā)送一封電子郵件，告訴他們你對(duì)天宮課堂的感受。提示：1.感謝航天員們的精彩授課；2.觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；3.祝愿祖國(guó)越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大，并希望自己的夢(mèng)想將來(lái)也能實(shí)現(xiàn)。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【參考范文】Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourwonderfulsciencelectureintheChineseSpaceStationonMarch23,2022.Afterwatchingthehour-longtelevisedperformance,Ihaveabetterknowledgeofspacescience.Itwillhelpmestudysciencewellatschool.What’smore,I’mmoreinterestedinourcountry’sspaceexplorationprogram.I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvanceinscienceandIhopeourcountrywillbestrongerandstronger.IwillstudyharderfromnowonandIhopemydreamwillcometrueinthefuture.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)”中對(duì)觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想，注意要點(diǎn)要齊全。[寫作步驟]第一步，由于短文開頭已給出，故接下來(lái)對(duì)航天員們的精彩授課表達(dá)感謝；第二步，具體描述自己觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。祝愿祖國(guó)越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大，并希望自己的夢(mèng)想將來(lái)也能實(shí)現(xiàn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①what’smore除此之外還②beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣③beproudof對(duì)……感到自豪④fromnowon從現(xiàn)在起⑤cometrue實(shí)現(xiàn)[高分句型]①I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvanceinscienceandIhopeourcountrywillbestrongerandstronger.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句）6．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，2022年3月23日你和同學(xué)一起觀看了神舟十三號(hào)航天員天宮授課，請(qǐng)你發(fā)送一封電子郵件給三位宇航員。內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝宇航員們的精彩授課；2.觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；3.祝愿宇航員凱旋歸來(lái)。注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouatriumphantreturn.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】：Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourmarveloussciencelectureinsidethespacestationonMarch23,2022.Afterwatchingthehour-longteleviseddemonstrations,Ihaveabetterknowledgeofspacescience.What’smore,I’mmoreenthusiasticaboutourcountry’sspaceexplorationprogram.I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvancesinsciencethatI’mdeterminedtobeengagedinspaceindustryandmakecontributionstoourmotherland.Wishyouatriumphantreturn.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一封電子郵件。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給神舟十三號(hào)三位宇航員發(fā)送一封電子郵件，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來(lái)敘述；時(shí)態(tài)上以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)使用一些副詞和連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)具有條理性。三、書信作文7．神舟十三號(hào)航天員已順利返回地球，此次載人飛船實(shí)驗(yàn)實(shí)現(xiàn)了幾代科學(xué)家的航天夢(mèng)，彰顯了我國(guó)的航天科技實(shí)力。為歡迎宇航員們回家，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以韓磊的名義給宇航員們寫一封信。要點(diǎn)：1.表達(dá)對(duì)宇航員的歡迎和敬佩之情；2.談?wù)勄嗌倌陮?duì)于航天生活的好奇和想象；3.結(jié)合實(shí)際談一談你的夢(mèng)想和打算。要求：1.文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2.詞數(shù)100左右。Dearastronauts,WelcomebacktotheEarth.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________yours,HanLei【參考范文】Dearastronauts,WelcomebacktotheEarth.Ourgreatheroes!Iknowyouhavebeeninthespaceforalongtime.YoumustmisstheEarth,missthemotherland,andespeciallyyourfamily.Sofirst,Iwanttoexpressmywarmwelcome.What’smore,Iwanttoexpressmyadmirationforyou.Youmakegreateffortandmakeagreatcontributiontoourcountry’sspacedream,andyouaretheprideofourwholenation.Duringyourstayinthespace,Ireallycareaboutyourworkandlife.EspeciallyI’minterestedinthetwospaceclassthatyouhavegivenus.Theyaresoamazingthattheymakemetakeagreatinterestinphysics.Couldyoutellusmoreaboutsuchinterestingexperiments?Couldyousaymoreaboutyourspacelife?Inthefuture,Ialsowanttodostudyinscienceandphysics.Whatyoudidtellsmenopainsnogains,soIwillmakegooduseoftimeandmakehardeffortinordertorealizemydream.yours,HanLei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信，屬于書信作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：書信開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接書信開頭，表達(dá)對(duì)宇航員的歡迎和敬佩之情；第二步，可以以自己的感受為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，談?wù)勄嗌倌陮?duì)于航天生活的好奇和想象；第三步，結(jié)合實(shí)際談一談你的夢(mèng)想和打算并書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①expressone’sadmirationforsb向某人表達(dá)敬佩之情②makeagreatcontributionto對(duì)……做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)③takeagreatinterestin對(duì)……產(chǎn)生極大的興趣④makegooduseoftime充分利用時(shí)間[高分句型]①Youmakegreateffortandmakeagreatcontributiontoourcountry’sspacedream,andyouaretheprideofourwholenation.（and連接兩個(gè)并列分句）②EspeciallyI’minterestedinthetwospaceclassthatyouhavegivenus.（that引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句）③Theyaresoamazingthattheymakemetakeagreatinterestinphysics.（so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）④Whatyoudidtellsmenopainsnogains,soIwillmakegooduseoftimeandmakehardeffortinordertorealizemydream.（what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句，so連接兩個(gè)并列分句）8．假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom來(lái)信說(shuō)他十分想要了解你心目中的英雄。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.介紹誰(shuí)是你心目中的英雄。2.他/她做過(guò)哪些令你印象深刻的事情。3.他/她有哪些令你敬佩的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。4.他/她對(duì)你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，用到提示詞，可適當(dāng)拓展，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2.語(yǔ)篇完整，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。3.文章已寫好的開頭句不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，80詞左右。4.特別注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)英雄人名之外的任何人名、校名或地名，否則不予評(píng)分。DearTom,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youwanttoknowabouttheheroinmyheart.Letmesharewithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howaboutyours?Pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】：DearTom,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youwanttoknowabouttheheroinmyheart.Letmesharewithyou.MyheroisYangLiwei.Whenhewasyoung,heworkedsohardthathebecameanexcellentpilot.Asaresult,hewaschosenasanastronaut.In2003,hetookShenzhouVspaceshiptothespaceandspentmorethan20hoursdoingexperimentsinspace.Finally,hemanagedtoreturntotheearth.Heisnotonlysmartbutalsobrave.HeistheprideofChina.HeisarealheroinmyheartbecauseheisthefirstChineseastronautwhotraveledinspace.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Hisexperienceencouragesmetoworkharderandnevergiveup.Howaboutyours?Pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本