11 感恩 中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析

11感恩NO.1（2022·湖北湖北·中考真題）在你的成長(zhǎng)歷程中，有許多值得感恩的人，如父母，老師，同學(xué)……他們或幫助過(guò)你，或影響到你，你最想感恩誰(shuí)？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)提示：1.他/她有什么特點(diǎn)（外貌，性格……）？2.他/她對(duì)你影響最深的一件事是什么？3.你想怎樣感謝他/她？寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：begratefulto對(duì)……心存感激；haveaninfluenceon對(duì)……有影響；careabout關(guān)心；unforgettable難以忘懷的ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostis..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostismyEnglishteacherMr.Lee.Heistallandthin.Hehasshortblackhairandwearsglasses.Heisalwaysfriendlyandpatientwithus.WhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Oneday,heaskedmetotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.Hesaid,“Yourpronunciationisreallygood.Tryyourbest.Ibelieveinyou”.WiththehelpofMr.Lee,Igotthefirstprize.MyEnglishimprovedalot.Mr.Leehasagreatinfluenceonme,Iamgratefultohim.Iwillworkhardtobecomebetter.Ithinkthat’sthebestgiftformydearteacher.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文主要以“ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanks”為題并結(jié)合題干中的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行寫作，介紹你最想感謝的人，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱以第二人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段介紹自己想感謝的人的特點(diǎn)；第二段講述他對(duì)你影響最深的一件事；第三段講述你會(huì)如何感謝他。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真題）親愛的同學(xué)，恭喜你即將畢業(yè)。在過(guò)去的三年初中學(xué)習(xí)中，你的老師教導(dǎo)、關(guān)心、幫助過(guò)你。請(qǐng)你選擇一位老師，表達(dá)你對(duì)他（她）的感激之情。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)這位老師的印象；2.你感謝他（她）的原因；3.你對(duì)他（她）的祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)舉例或拓展；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實(shí)身份的任何信息（如校名，師生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，本文開頭已經(jīng)給出，選擇一位你想要感謝的老師，表達(dá)感激之情，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱和第三人稱來(lái)描述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。本文可以采用一段式寫作，要求描述對(duì)老師的印象，感謝的原因以及對(duì)老師的祝福。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.3（2022·江蘇無(wú)錫·中考真題）生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無(wú)錫教育電視臺(tái)將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對(duì)你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下流程圖寫一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.流程圖中括號(hào)部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.演講稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息；5.演講稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforall