“讀后續(xù)寫”生命的守護者逆行的火焰藍講義-高三英語二輪復習

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文ThesceneoffirefightersinHulunbuir,InnerMongoliabeingfrozeninto“icemen”bravingthefiercesnowstormtorescuepeoplemovedmanytotears.OnMarch12,QiYuehua,headoftheBaerhuRoadStationoftheNewBaerhu'ZuoqiFireandRescueBrigadeinHulunbuir,saidinaninterviewthattheteammembersworkedcontinuouslyfornearlyfivehourstwodaysago,saving.8peopletrappedin3cars.Theoftemperatureatthetimewasaroundminus30degreesCelsius,sotherewaslaterascenefirefightersbeingfrozenintoicemen".“At12:46onMarch10,wereceivedacallforhelp,sayingthatavehiclewastrappedinthesnow35kilometersawayinthedirectionof'NationalHighway332.Adriverwastrappedinthecarwaitingforrescue,"saidQiYuehua.“Bynoon,afiercesnowstormhadformed,anditwasblowingstronglyand:thetemperaturewasverylow.Obviously,itwasdangeroustodriveout,buteveryonemustimmediatelygotothescene.”Thetworescuevehicleswith12firefighterssetoutat12:50.Thevisibilitywaslessthan5metersthatday,andthesnowyroadwasslippery,makingdrivingverydifficult.Itwashardtotellwhichwayitwastotherescuesite,andtherescueteamcouldonlymoveslowlybasedonpreviousdrivingexperience.Consequently,ittookmorethananhourthatdaytodriveforajourneythatusuallytakesonlytenminutes.At14:18,therescueteameventuallyarrivedatthesceneandfoundthelocationofthetrappeddriver:.Duetotheheavywindandsnow,thedoorofthevehiclecouldnotbepletelyclosed.Thedriverhidinthecar,tremblingviolentlywithcold.Thefirefightersfoundthattwoother.vehicleswithsevenpeoplewerealsotrappedthere.Theywereinvolvedinatrafficaccidentduetoslipperyroadsandpoorvisibility.注意:1續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para.1Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.Para.2Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.文本內容：

本文描述了一次在暴風雪中進行的緊急救援行動。主要事件包括接到求助、決定進行救援、艱難行進到達現(xiàn)場以及發(fā)現(xiàn)被困的司機和其他車輛乘客。文本通過具體的時間點和詳細的天氣、路況描述，展現(xiàn)了救援過程的緊迫性和困難性。結構分析：引入部分：開頭部分（...while

bravingthefiercesnowstormtorescuepeoplemovedmanytotears.

At12:46onMarch10,wereceivedacallforhelp...）：具有新聞報道導語特征，簡明扼要地介紹事件的來龍去脈及最終結果并簡要介紹了接到求助的時間和地點，以及被困車輛和司機的情況。救援準備與出發(fā)：描述了救援隊伍準備出發(fā)的情況（"Bynoon,afiercesnowstormhadformed..."）。強調了天氣惡劣和能見度低下的困難（"Thevisibilitywaslessthan5metersthatday..."）。敘述了救援車輛和消防員的出發(fā)時間（"Thetworescuevehicleswith12firefighterssetoutat12:50."）。行進過程中的困難：描述了救援車輛在暴風雪中艱難行進的情景（"Itwashardtotellwhichwayitwastotherescuesite..."）。強調了路況滑和能見度低的挑戰(zhàn)，以及救援隊伍不得不慢速前進的事實。到達現(xiàn)場與救援行動：描述了救援隊伍到達現(xiàn)場的時間（"At14:18,therescueteameventuallyarrivedatthescene..."）。敘述了發(fā)現(xiàn)被困司機和其他車輛乘客的經(jīng)過，以及他們所處的困境（"Thedriverhidinthecar,tremblingviolentlywithcold."）。整體上，文本結構清晰，通過時間順序和詳細的描述，讓讀者能夠身臨其境地感受救援行動的緊張與艱難。同時，通過對比惡劣的天氣和艱難的救援條件，凸顯了救援人員的勇敢和無私。接下來，我們可以按照以下思路續(xù)寫兩段內容：第一段續(xù)寫思路：描述救援人員如何迅速而有效地展開救援行動。他們首先確保被困人員的安全，然后采取措施保護他們免受嚴寒的侵襲。同時，他們與指揮中心保持聯(lián)系，報告救援進展和現(xiàn)場情況。第二段續(xù)寫思路：通過消防員Qi的對話，表達他們的工作態(tài)度和職業(yè)精神。Qi在被問到作為消防員是否覺得太艱難和太危險時，他微笑著表達了對工作的熱愛和責任感。他強調，保護人民生命財產(chǎn)安全是他們的使命，無論面對多大的困難和風險，他們都會毫不猶豫地沖上前線。下水文：Paragraph1:

Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.

Despitethe

freezingtemperaturesandblindingsnow,theymovedquicklyandefficiently.

(用環(huán)境描寫來襯托消防隊員們面對困難時的勇敢無畏）Theyfirst

providedblanketsandhotdrinks

tothetrappedindividualstohelpthemwarmup.（救人首先以人為本）

Then,

using

theirprofessionaltoolsandequipment,they

cleared

thesnowaroundthevehiclesand

opened

thedoors.（用動作鏈具體陳述救援動作過程）

Therescueteammembers

municatedclosely

witheachother,ensuringthattheiractionswere

coordinatedandeffective.（救援隊員彼此間的合作表明他們訓練有素，為下一段回答問題的續(xù)寫內容做鋪墊）

Despitethechallengingconditions,the“icemen",

firefightersshowedremarkableresilienceanddetermination,successfullyfreeingthetrappedindividualsonebyoneat5:06.

（用icemen與第一段中的icemen形成照應,at5：06與上文at12;46、at

14:18形成照應，符合描述事件時使用的時間順序）Untilthendidthey

realize

theybecame

"icemen"

andlaughedwitheachother.Thescenewasphotographedbyareporterandwentviral.

(為Paragragh2首句做鋪墊)Paragraph2:

Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.

"It'sourjob,andweare

trainedforsuchsituations,"he

saidcalmly.（such

situations與calmly表明Qi的謙虛，此句提及的平時訓練與續(xù)寫第一段提及的隊員的救援能力形成邏輯上的照應）

"Ofcourse,therearetimeswhenitcanbedangerous,butwearealwaysreadytofaceanychallenge.

（闡明事實上的危險，突出他們的能力和職責）Weknowthat

everyminutecounts

whenitestosavinglives,sowedoourbesttorespondquicklyandeffectivelyregardless

ofplicatedandchangeableriskysituation."

（用everyminutecounts諺語來陳述事實，突出Qi答語的專業(yè)和情感的真摯）Qi'swordsreflectedthededicationandcourageoffirefighters,whoarealwaysreadytorisktheirownsafetytoprotectandsaveothers.（用評價語言結尾，與文本首段形成新聞體裁語言上的照應）參考范文：Withoutanydelay,thefirefightersstartedtheirrescueeffort.“Wefirstdugupthesnowwithshovels,andthenpushedthevehiclesoutofthesnowwithmanpower,"QiYuehuarecalled,“Thethickestsnowaccumulationwasnearlyonemeter.Thewindwasparticularlystrongthatdayandthesnowhittingourfacesfeltlikeneedles."At17:12,thetrappedpeopleandvehiclesweresuccessfullymovedtoasafeplace,andatotalof8peopleincarsburiedinthesnowwereeventuallyrescued.Someofthefirefightershadbeenfrozeninto“icemen"bythen.Whenaskedifitwastoohardandtooriskytobefirefighters,Qismiled.“Iamveryhappyandsatisfiedthatwepletedthetaskandtherescuedpeopleweresafeandsound,"hesaid.“Ourfirefightersareallyoungmen