Unit2HealthyLifestylePeriod5ReadingforWriting建議信課件高中英語人教版選擇性

Unit2HealthyLifestylePeriod5ReadingforWritingWriteALetterToTheEditorAboutYourLifestyleWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬語Salutation稱呼TowhomwhoReadingforstructuresDivideeachletterintofourpartsandtrytomatchthemainideasbelowtoeachpart.identifyproblemsconsiderwhattodo describewhathe/shehasdonetochangegivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternProblemProblemDecisionDecisionAction(s)Action(s)Result(s)Result(s)ReadingforstructuresPart2-Writing:建議信letterofproposal概念：根據(jù)對方有關(guān)問題，委婉禮貌提出針對性建議，并讓對方接受的信件。注意：用語禮貌，條理清晰，建議具可操作性。要點(diǎn):1.明確寫信目的。(purpose)2.針對性提出建議。(proposals)三條為宜

3.希望對方采納建議并盼回復(fù)。(hope)開頭：.Iamgladtoreceiveyourletteranditismypleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3.ThanksforyourtrustingandnowIamhonoredtoofferyousomesuggestionson...here.

主體：建議一Firstofall,whatyouneedtodosthis...建議二

Additionally,ifIwereyou,IwoulddoB.

建議三

What’smore,IsuggestyoushoulddoC..Ithinkyouaresupposedto...2.Itisintelligentofyou/agreatideato...3.You’dbetter/Youmayaswell...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould...5.Itwouldbebeneficialif...

結(jié)尾：

希望對方采納：Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/beneficial.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...建議信模板

DearXX，

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroublewith...NowIamwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto....

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisagreatideato...(建議一)Inaddition,itwouldbebeneficialforyouif...(建議二)Lastbutnotleast,IfIwereyou,Iwould...(建議三).

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX

Practice假如你是李華，在一家報社工作，收到一封讀者來信說他朋友陳雷沉迷電腦游戲，希望你能給他一些意見去幫助他戒掉游戲。請根據(jù)提示寫一封建議信。1.告訴你朋友玩游戲的危害2.培養(yǎng)其他健康愛好3.多參加戶外活動注意：字?jǐn)?shù)80左右可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章連貫。DearWorriedFriend,I’msorrytohearthatyourfriendChenLeiisaddictedtocomputergames.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwithit.

Tostartwith,itisimportanttotellhimthatspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonhisstudies.Inaddition,

youmayaswellencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbieslikeplayingtheguitarorplayingbasketball.Lastbutnoleast,whynottakepartinsomeoutdooractivitiestogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

LiHuaproblemactionresult短語lead/liveahealthylifereplace……with/

insteadofkeepsb.inshapegetridofthehabitofdoingsth.breakthehabitofdoingsth.dosomeoutdooractivitiesphysicalexercisebegoodfor/behelpfulincontroltemperremainoptimisticaboutrefreshoneselfmakeachange過健康的生活代替保持某人身材戒除……的壞習(xí)慣做戶外運(yùn)動身體鍛煉有利于控制脾氣樂觀面對精神重振做出改變Recently,Ilearnthatyouhaveaunhealthylifestyle.So,I’mwritingtosharemyideasonhowyoucanliveahealthylife.開頭最近，我聽說你的生活方式不健康。所以，我寫信來分享對你如何過上健康生活的想法。Unhealthylifestyle,leadahealthylife正文你需要做的是多吃水果，而不是小吃，以保持你的體型。insteadof,

keep

you

in

shape,主語從句Whatyouneedtodoistoeatmorefruitsinsteadofsnakesinordertokeepyouinshape.我建議你應(yīng)該和你的朋友做一些戶外活動，因?yàn)轶w育鍛煉有助于控制你的脾氣。suggest,dosomeoutdooractivities,physicalexercise,asIsuggestyoushoulddosomeoutdooractivitieswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisgoodforcontrollingyourtemper.你也可以對生活保持樂觀，保持好心情，這有助于你恢復(fù)精神。remainoptimisticabout,keepagoodmood,refreshoneself,定語從句Youmightaswellremainoptimisticaboutlifeandkeepagoodmood,whichhelpyourefreshyourself.【句型】Youmightaswelldosth.…你不妨做某事正文結(jié)尾我希望我的建議對你有幫助。advice;helpfulIhopethat…Ihopethatmyadvicecouldbehelpfultoyou.【升級】我真心希望你覺得我的建議有用，并且你能從現(xiàn)在開始做出改變。Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionsusefulandmakeachangefromnowon.DearAlice,Recently,Ilearnedthatyouhaveaunhealthylifestyle.So,I’mwritingtosharemyideasonhowyoucanliveahealthylife.Firstofall,whatyouneedtodoistoeatmorefruitsinsteadofsnakesinordertokeepyouinshape.Additionally,Isuggestyoushoulddosomeoutdooractivitieswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisgoodforcontrollingyourtemper.Youmightaswellremainoptimisticaboutlifeandkeepagoodmood,whichhelpyourefreshyourself.Allinall,Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionsusefulandmakeachangefromnowon.寫作指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是給編輯寫一封關(guān)于健康生活方式的信。此類作文主要圍繞以下幾個方面寫作：1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.指出目前存在的不利于健康的問題。3.健康生活方式：加強(qiáng)鍛煉、注意飲食、均衡營養(yǎng)、養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣等。4.如何從自我做起，如何制定計劃改變不良的生活習(xí)慣等。DearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwasoverweight.Ididn'trealisehowIlooked,andnowIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butIrealiseIeattoomuch,andIdon'teatgoodthings.I