課后續(xù)寫強化練習-2025屆高考英語作文復習專項

ContinuationWriting表達積累1.她的心有點沉了2.鼓起勇氣

3.花費一大筆錢4.感到一陣喜悅5.堅決而認真地做家務

herheartsinkalittlegatherupone’scouragecostanawfullotofmoneyfeelaburstofjoyworkonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestly表達積累6.臉上帶著燦爛的笑容7.焦慮的表情扭曲著她的臉8.吻了一下她的臉頰9.輕聲低語10.笑得又甜又開心

withabroadsmileonherfaceananxiousexpressiontwistingherfacebrushhercheekwithakissmurmursoftlysmilebroadlyandsweetly表達積累11.完全心不在焉12.手指不自覺的顫抖13.滑到手中14.讓她心跳加速15.她臉上露出激動的表情

totallyabsent-mindedfingerstremblingautomaticallyslidintohandssetherheartracingathrilledexpressiontwistingherface表達積累16.他把她摟在懷里17.抬起她的嘴唇18.淚水開始模糊她的視線19.我欣喜若狂20.她高興得流下了眼淚

gatherherintohisarmsliftherliptearsbeginningtoblurhervisionIwaswildwithjoySheshedtearsofjoy聽故事的時候，珍妮心不在焉，雙手緊握著項鏈。故事結束時，出乎意料的是，珍妮把她心愛的項鏈送給了父親，她的手指不自覺的顫抖著。沒人知道項鏈對她意味著什么。她輕聲對父親說：“爸爸，你知道我愛你勝過愛項鏈?！比缓?，項鏈堅定地滑到她父親的手中。令珍妮驚訝的是，一條漂亮的真珍珠項鏈靜靜地放在盒子里，這讓她心跳加速。珍妮愣住了，一種激動的表情扭曲著她的臉。珍妮還沒來得及說什么，她父親就在她臉上輕輕地吻了一下，把她摟在懷里。珍妮手里拿著真的項鏈，抬起嘴唇，淚水開始模糊她的視線。句子潤色聽故事的時候，珍妮心不在焉，雙手緊握著項鏈。Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,andheldthenecklacetightlyandfirmlyinherhand.Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.absent-mindedholdthenecklacetightlyandfirmlyWith復合結構替換句子潤色故事結束時，出乎意料的是，珍妮把她心愛的項鏈送給了父親，她的手指不自覺的顫抖著。Whenthestorycametoanend,

Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,andherfingerstrembledautomatically.Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,withherfingerstremblingautomatically.trembleautomaticallyUnexpectedlyToone’ssurpriseContrarytoexpectationsWith復合結構替換句子潤色沒人知道項鏈對她意味著什么。Nooneknewwhatthenecklacemeanttoher.meantto句子潤色她輕聲對父親說：“爸爸，你知道我愛你勝過愛項鏈。”Shewhisperedsoftlyandgentlytoherfather,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”morethanWhispersoftlyandgently句型結構的多變句子潤色然后，項鏈堅定地滑到她父親的手中。Then,thenecklaceslidintoherfather’shandsdeterminedly.slideinto句子潤色令珍妮驚訝的是，一條漂亮的真珍珠項鏈靜靜地放在盒子里，這讓她心跳加速。Withabeautifulrealpearlnecklacelayingpeacefullyinthebox,shewassosurprisedthatherheartbeatfaster.Sosurprised…thatMuchtoone’samazement/surprise句子潤色令珍妮驚訝的是，一條漂亮的真珍珠項鏈靜靜地放在盒子里，這讓她心跳加速。句②Sosurprised…thatMuchtoone’samazement/surpriseMuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.句子潤色珍妮愣住了，一種激動的表情扭曲著她的臉。frozethereJennyfrozethere,athrilledexpressiontwistingherface.athrilledexpression句子潤色珍妮還沒來得及說什么，她父親就在她臉上輕輕地吻了一下，把她摟在懷里。BeforeJennywasabletosaysomething，herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandheldherinhisarms.brushawarmkissonherfaceBeforeJennywasabletosaysomething，herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandgatheredherintohisarms.句子潤色珍妮手里拿著真的項鏈，抬起嘴唇，淚水開始模糊她的視線。Holdingthegenuinenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.genuinenecklaceWithtearsstreamingdownherface,she...淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來Tearsfillinghereyes,she她熱淚盈眶續(xù)寫賞析Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,withherfingerstremblingautomatically.Nooneknewwhatthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”Then,thenecklaceslidintoherfather’shandsdeterminedly.注意with復合結構的使用。續(xù)寫賞析Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.Jennyfrozethere,athrilledexpressiontwistingherface.BeforeJen