寫作微技能訓(xùn)練

寫作微技能訓(xùn)練高中英語

寫作微技能訓(xùn)練第二章句子寫作微技能訓(xùn)練（略）第三章段落寫作微技能訓(xùn)練一篇好文章建構(gòu)于良好的段落上，沒有適當(dāng)?shù)亩温?，即使句子沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，也不算是一篇好文章。第一節(jié)段落=主題句+發(fā)展句+結(jié)尾句由主題句加上數(shù)個(gè)支持論點(diǎn)和結(jié)尾句就構(gòu)成一個(gè)段落，數(shù)個(gè)段落就構(gòu)成一篇文章。這就是英語作文的基本框架。Ihaveanoldbikewhichmyfathergavemeformy12thbirthday.Ireceivedalotofpresentsthatday,butthebikewasmyfavoriteone.Wehadcakeandicecreamattheparty.Thenwerodeourbiketothepark.Jimhadanaccidentonhisbikeandhadtoseeadoctor.Thenitstartedtorain.Irodemybikebackhomeanddidmyhomework.AfterdinnerItookmybikeoutagainandrodearoundtheneighborhood.Allmyfriendswantedtotrymynewbike.Itwasmyfavoritepresentthatday.WhatabusybirthdayIhad!B.Mybikeisold,butitisn’tuseless.ManyofmyfriendsandfamilymemberstellmathatIshouldbuyanewbike,,butmyoldonestillworkswell.Icanrideittothestores,tothepark,andtoschool.Itissooldthatnoonewillstealit.Someonemightstealanewbike,butnotanoldone.Lastweekmymother’smotorcyclehadaproblem,sosheborrowedmybiketovisitherfriend.Sometimesabikeisevenmoreusefulthanamotorcycle!Weshouldnotthrowthingsawayjustbecausetheyareold.Weshouldusethingstilltheybecomeuseless.B練習(xí)2.猜猜看到底哪一段寫得好，A段還是B段？Why?Thebirdsweresingingearlyinthemorning.Theywokemeup,andIdressedmyselfinmynewclothes.Ihadboughttheminadepartmentstorejustthedaybefore.Theywereonsale,andthereweremorepeopleinthedepartmentstorethanIhadeverseenbefore.IwasluckytofindtheclothesIwantedonsale.Afterbreakfast,Iwenttoschoolandshowedoffmynewclothes.Iheardthefirstbirdssinging,buttheydidn’twakemeup.Actually,.Icouldn’tgettosleepthatnight.Asthefirstlightenteredmybedroom,Isawthemlaidoutonmychair,justwaitingformetowear.ThedaybeforeIhadboughtthesenewclothesonsaleatadepartmentstore.Ididn’tmindallthepeoplebecauseIfoundjusttheclothesIwanted.IfeltsoexcitedbecauseIcouldshowthemoffatschool.B練習(xí)3.分析下面的段落，找出其主題句、發(fā)展句和結(jié)尾句。總共有幾個(gè)論點(diǎn)來支持主題句？主題句與結(jié)尾句以哪些相同的字來連貫Mybrother’sroomisthemessiestroomintheworld!Ifyouopenhisdoor,youwillfirstnoticethatyoucannotwalkeasilyinsidehisroom.Oldmagazinesandcomicbooksarealloverthefloor.Idon’tthinkthatadogwouldsleepinhisbedbecauseofallthedirtyclothesonit.Hisdesklookslikeagarbagecan.Onlyapigwouldbehappyinmybrother’sroom.Canyouimagineamessierroomthanmybrother’s?B.Isupportthecitygovernment’spunishmentondrunkdriving.Manypeoplecomplainthatthenewlawagainstdrunkdrivingistoostrict,butIdon’tagree.Noonehastherighttohurtothers.Drunkdriverssometimeshitothercarsandevenkillotherpeople.Lawsaremadetoprotecteveryone,notonlypeoplewholiketodrink.Besides,youcandrinkandhavesomeoneelsedriveyouhomeorsimplytakeataxi.Drunkdrivingisdangerousforeveryone,soIsupportthestrictnewlawbythecitygovernmentagainstdrunkdriving.第二節(jié)主題句寫作微技能訓(xùn)練大多數(shù)的段落寫作，作者會(huì)在一開頭就把中心思想點(diǎn)出。這叫主題句。主題句是由主題（Topic）加上作者對(duì)主題的看法（idea)構(gòu)成。主題句不一定是一個(gè)句子，有時(shí)也可能是兩個(gè)句子構(gòu)成一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。e.g.Computersarenotalwayssoconvenient!Computers是主題，notalwayssoconvenient是作者對(duì)主題的看法練習(xí)1指出下列主題句中的主題和作者對(duì)主題的看法。Ridingabicyclecanbefun.2.Kiteflyingisnotonlyforchildren.3.Sometimes“l(fā)ittlewhitelies”cangetyouintotrouble.4.Myfavoritegiftcostnothing.5.Ithoughtsummercwasboringuntillastsummer.練習(xí)2.到底哪一段寫得好，A篇還是B篇？Why?Iworkedveryhardyesterday,butIfeltreallygoodattheendofthatlongday.Myfatheraskedmetohelphimpaintournewapartmentyesterdaymorning.AtfirstIwantedtowatchTVorgooutwithmyfriends.Afterthinkingaboutit,though,IrealizedthatIshouldhelparoundourhouse,too.Ourhouseisnotahotel.Besides,myfatheroftendoesalotofthingsforme.Weworkedtogetherallmorningandafternoon.BydinnertimeIwastiredandhungry,butIfeltgood.Wefinishedthepainting,andthehouselookedandsmellednew.Playingaroundisnottheonlywaytofeelgood.Myfatheraskedmetohelphimpaintournewapartmentyesterdaymorning.AtfirstIwantedtowatchTVorgooutwithmyfriends.Afterthinkingaboutit,though,IrealizedthatIshouldhelparoundourhouse,too.Ourhouseisnotahotel.Besides,myfatheroftendoesalotofthingsforme.Weworkedtogetherallmorningandafternoon.BydinnertimeIwastiredandhungry,butIfeltgood.Wefinishedthepainting,andthehouselookedandsmellednew.Playingaroundisnottheonlywaytofeelgood.A選出最恰當(dāng)?shù)闹黝}句，并簡(jiǎn)要分析原因。_________Youmaythinkthattheringhasadiamondinit,butitdoesn’t.Youmaythinkthattheringismadeofgold,butitisn’t.Youmayalsothinkthattheringwasveryexpensive,butyou’rewrong.Itcostnothingtomake.Myboyfriendmadeitoutofsomeoldleather,buthemadeitwithlove.Thatiswhyitismyfavoritegift.A.Myboyfriendmadealeatherring.BMyfavoritegiftisaringfrommyboyfriend.CMyfavoriteringisadiamondring.D.Myboyfriendgavemeagoldring.BB.___________.MyneighborJoeisaquietboy.Hedoesn’thavemanyfriends.Nooneinviteshimtopartiesbecausetheydon’tknowhimverywell.OnedaywhenIwaswalkinghome,someboysfromanotherschoolstoppedmeandaskedmeformoney.WhenIsaidno,oneofthemstartedhittingme.Aminutelater,Joewasbymysidehelpingme.Theotherboysranaway.Peoplesay,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Joeisnowmybestfriend.A.AgoodfriendishardtoknowwellB.HowImetmybestfriendataparty.C.NowIunderstandwhatarealfriendis.D.Joeismybestfriendwhodoesn’tlikeparties.CC___________Testcanbeuseful,butnoteverythingimportantisontest.Wecantestwhatininsideofbooks,butwecannottesthowwefeelorwhatweimagine.Studentsneedmoretimetothinkabouttheirownlives,notonlytaketestsinschool.Teachersshouldhelpstudentstolearnbyexperience,notonlyreadingandwriting.Fortheabovereasons,Ithinkteachersshouldgivestudentsfewertests.Testplayapartinlearning,soweneedtests.Shouldteachersgivestudentsalotoftest?Idon’tthinkso.C.Shouldteachersgivestudentstimetothinkaboutlife?Ithinkso.D.Shouldteachersgivestudentsaboutlifeexperience?Ithinkso.BD._________changingthecolorofone’shairislikechangingthecolorofone’sclothes.Ifastudentwearsblackshoesonedayandbrownshoesthenext,hashedoneanythingwrong?Whyshouldstudentslookallthesame?Modernpeoplearefreetochoosetheirownclothes.Whyshouldn’tstudentshavetherighttochangethecoloroftheirownhair?Ithinkstudentsshouldnotcolortheirhair.Ithinkcoloringtheirhairisanewtrendforstudents.Ithinkcoloringtheirhairmakesstudentslookcool.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtocolortheirhair.DE._______LastmonthItookanimportantmathtestatschool.Isatnexttothesmartestkidinourclass,andIcopiedalmostallofhisanswers.Hegot98onthetest,andIgota92.Myparentswerehappy,myteacherwashappy,andmyclassmateswereproudofme.ButIfeellousy.Ididn’tlearnanything.Ican’tcheatallthroughmylife.Fromnowon,I’mgoingtoworkhardersoIdon’thavetocheatagain.I’llnevercheatonatestagain.I’llcopyharderfromnowon.Feelingproudisnotgoodforus.Gettinggoodgradesmakesmefeelhappy.AF._____.FromtheearlymorningbeforemyalarmringsuntilafterIgotosleepatnight,thatdogisalwaysmakingnoise.Heisfriendlytomyneighbor,ofcourse,butheisunfriendlytoeveryoneelseintheneighborhood.Childrenareevenafraidtowalkbyhishousebecauseofhisdog.Whenevertheyseethatbig,browndog,theyrunhomequickly.Iwouldliketotellmyneighborabouthisdog,butI’mafraidofit,too!Dogsarepeople’sgoodfriends.Idon’tlikemyneighbor’sdog.Barkingdogswon’tbite.Dogssometimesaredangerous.B給下面的段落寫出恰當(dāng)?shù)闹黝}句。偷偷地告訴你一個(gè)秘笈，下筆前先看看結(jié)尾句A.___________________________________________.WhenIdecidedthatIreallywantedtolearnEnglish,ImadethemistakeofthinkingthatIcouldlearnitquickly.Iboughtsomebooksandtapesthatsaid,“LearnEnglishinthreemonths!”Nonsense!Noonecanlearnaforeignlanguagequickly.IevendatedanAmericangirl,butIpaidmoreattentiontoherthanherEnglish,soIdidn’tlearnverymuch.NowIunderstandthatonlyifIworkhardforalongtimewillIlearnEnglishwell.NobodycanlearnEnglishwellveryquickly.B________________________________________________.First,learninghowtodress,wearmakeup,andgroomourhairareallimportantsocialskillswhichwillbecomeimportanttousaftergraduation.Mostkidswhohavetowearuniformslooklikeslobs()ontheweekend.Anotherreasonthatstudentsshouldnotwearuniformsisbecausestudentslooklikepiecesofmachineryinafactory.InthismodernInformationAge,creativityismoreimportantthanconformity().Howcananyonebecreativewhenhelookslikeeveryoneelse?Finally,wearinguniformscanbeuncomfortable.We’resupposedtochangeourwinteruniformtoourspringuniformonacertaindayeveryyear,butnobodytoldMotherNaturethat!Wefreezeorsweatbecauseofthisseveraldayseveryyear.Fortheabovereasons,Iamtotallyopposed(反對(duì)的）tostudentshavingtowearuniformstoschool.Iamstronglyagainsttheideathatstudentsshouldalwayswearuniformtoschool.第三節(jié)結(jié)尾句寫作微技能訓(xùn)練結(jié)尾句是把段落內(nèi)所提過的事情，再簡(jiǎn)要地?cái)⑹鲆槐?，從而形成完整的文章。常常換句話再把開頭的主題重申一次或重申之外再加上某種教誨或感受。練習(xí)1選出最恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾句，并簡(jiǎn)要分析原因。Whatisyourfavoriterestaurant?MineisFriday’s,ofcourse!AtFriday’sIcanorderanykindofWesternfoodIlike,suchashamburger,salad,Frenchfries,steak,andallkindsofsandwiches.Thewaitersandwaitresseswearfunnyandinterestingclothes,too,andtheirserviceisverygood.AlthoughFriday’sisnotascheapasMcDonald’s,itisnotveryexpensive,either.______________.A.Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurantbecauseofitsdeliciousfood.B.Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurantbecausetheyservewell.C.Tosumup,becauseitspriceishigh,Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurant.D.Allinall,becauseofthegoodfood,greatservice,andreasonableprice,Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurant.DB.Afieldtriptoamuseumisthebestwaytolearnaboutart.LastmonthourartteachertookusonafieldtriptotheMuseumofModernArt.Wetookabustothemuseumandspenttwohoursthere.Lookingatrealpaintingsandsculpturesismuchmoreinterestingandeducationalthanlookingattheminbooks.Themuseumalsogaveeveryoneasmallbooktoexplaintheart._____________Lookingatpaintingsandsculpturesinbooksgivesusmuchfun.Schoolsarrangefieldtripsforstudents.Seeingrealworksofartinamuseumisthebestwaytoappreciateart.Amuseumgivesstudentsalotofinformationaboutart.CC.Ofthefourseasonsinayear,summerismyfavorite.Inautumn,youneverknowwhattowear.Onedayishot,nutthenextdayiscold.Winterinnotonlycold,butitisalsothetimewhenmanypeoplegetsick.Springbringstoomuchrain.Summeristhetimefortravel,relaxationandfun._______________.That’swhypeoplelikesummerverymuch.Forme,summeristhebestseasonoftheyear.Summerbringsusalotoffun.Springisthebestseasonofall.BD.Doyouknowthedifferencebetweenredmeatandwhitemeat?Redmeatmeansmeatswhichareredincolor,likebeefandpork.Whitemeat,ofcourse,meansmeatswhicharewhiteincolor,likechickenandduck.Seafoodisusuallyconsideredwhitemeat,too.Doctorssaythatwhitemeatisbetterforourhealththanredmeat,butitisallrighttoeatsomeredmeat._________Redmeatandwhitemeatareboththesame;theyareofthesamekind.Althoughwhitemeatisbetterforourhealththanredmeat,remembernottoeattoomuchmeat.So,thereisnodifferencebetweenredmeatandwhitemeat.Truly,peoplelikebothredmeatandwhitemeat.B練習(xí)2下面有兩篇文章，請(qǐng)選出較好的一篇，并分析原因?！癙racticemakesperfect”isreallyagoodsaying.Atthebeginningofoursummervacation,myfriendsinvitedmetogoswimmingwiththem.IwasembarrassedtotellthemthatIcouldn’tswim.MybestfriendJilltoldmethatshewouldhelpme.Everydayduringthevacationforanhourortwo,Jillslowlytaughtmehowtoswim.Beforeourclassesbeganagain,Icouldswimonetimeacrosstheswimmingpool.HowhappyIwas!Inowunderstandthetruemeaningoffriendship.NowIreallyunderstandwhat“Practicemakesperfect”means.Halfayearago,Ididn’tknowhowtoswim.Tobehonest,Iwasevenafraidofgoingintoswimmingpool.MybestfriendJilltoldmethatshewouldhelpme.Dayafterdayduringthesummervacation,Jillspentanhourortwowithmeeveryday,showingmehowtoswim.Attheendofthesummervacation,Icouldswimonceacrossthepool.Ineverfeltsohappyinmylife!NowIrealizethat,ifyouwanttosucceedatanything,youmustpracticedayafterdayuntilyouaresuccessfulB第四節(jié)發(fā)展句寫作微技能訓(xùn)練發(fā)展句是用來細(xì)述主題句的中心思想，把觀點(diǎn)解釋清楚。主題句NightmarketsareverypopularinAsiabecausetheyprovidemorethangoodsandservice.發(fā)展句Bothdayandnightmarketsofferfood,clothing,andschoolsupplies,etc.Theybothofferfurniture,thingsforthehome,andmedicine.However,mostlyhousewivesusethedaymarket.Atnight,thewholefamilycangoouttoeatorshoptogetherandenjoythegamesandshows.結(jié)尾句Thus,nightmarketsarealsoanimportantformofentertainmentinAsiansocieties.

練習(xí)1請(qǐng)找出主題句，發(fā)展句及結(jié)尾句。A.Choosingtherightgiftdoesnothavetobeaproblem.Knowingthepurposeofthegiftisveryimportant.Youdon’twanttobuyfoodforsomeone’sgraduationorwedding.Knowingthepersonwellhelps,too.Whatdoesyourfriendorrelativelikebest?Don’tworryabouttheprice.Remember,“It’sthethoughtthatcounts.”Asimple,practicalgiftismoreappreciatedthananexpensivebutuselessone.Keepingtheaboveadviceinmindwillmakeshoppingforyournextgiftmucheasier.B.Manypeopletrytoloseweight,buttheyusuallyfail.Therearetwomainreasonstoexplainthis.Peopleoftentellthemselvesthattheycanlosealotofweightinashorttime.Actually,losingweighttakesalongtimeifyouwanttostaylighter.Eatingstrangefoodsdoesnothelp,either.Peoplewillloseinterestintheirdietandgobacktotheiroldways.Eatinglessgraduallyisthebestwaytoloseweight.C.EveryoneknowsthatlearningEnglishisveryimportanttoday.Inourcity,however,Englishisnotusedverymuch.HowcanastudentlearnEnglishwellinsuchanenvironment?Besidesreading,studentscanlistentoEnglishonradioprogrammeseveryday.TheycanjoinanEnglishclubatschooltopracticelisteningandspeaking.Theycanalsopracticespeakingwithclassmates,relatives,orotherswhoknowsomeEnglish.MakingEnglishahabitisasurewaytosucceedatlearningit.練習(xí)2下面有兩篇文章，判斷哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Ifyoucouldhaveonlythreebooks,whatwouldtheybe?Iwouldfirstchooseadictionary.Adictionaryisnotveryexpensiveandhasalotofinformationinit.Therearedictionariesforeverylanguage.MaybeIwouldbuyaChinese-Englishdictionary.ThenIwouldwantahistorybook.Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinhistory.IlovetowatchmoviesonTVaboutourcountry’shistory.Theirlivesweredifficultbutinteresting.ThelastbookIwouldwantwouldbeamedicalbook.Ihopetobecomeadoctorsomeday,andIwouldhaveplentyoftimetoreadabouthealthinthatbook.Doctorsmakealotofmoney,andthenIcouldbuymorebooks,iftherewereanymore.Whatbookswouldyoubuy?B.Ourteacheraskedus,“Ifyoucouldhaveonlythreebooks,whatwouldtheybe?“Ithoughtaboutthisquestionalongtime.ThefirstbookIwouldwantisadictionary.Adictionaryhasalotofinformationinitandisthemostimportantbookaboutone’slanguage.Thenextbookisahistorybook.Everyoneshouldknowhiscountry’sandhispeople’shistory.Ifwedonotknowourownhistory,wecan’tknowwhoweare.Finally,Iwouldwantabookabouthealth.Weallhavemanyofourgoodfriends,books,withus,butifwehavetochoosethreebooks,Iwouldchooseadictionary,ahistorybook,andabookabouthealth.B第五節(jié)連接語寫作微技能訓(xùn)練寫作時(shí)，除按邏輯組合信息點(diǎn)外，還要學(xué)會(huì)靈活運(yùn)用連接性詞語。連接語是上下文之間的潤(rùn)滑劑。表遞進(jìn)besides,what’smore,what’sworse,inaddition;表列舉foronething…andforanotherthing,firstly,secondly,thirdly,lastbutnotleast表總結(jié)inshort,inaword,inconclusion,inbrief,generallyspeaking,tosumup,allinall.練習(xí)1下面有兩篇文章，判斷哪篇更好，并分析原因。Doyouknowhowtomakeasandwich?Itisreallyeasy.Here’showtomakeone.H\First,ofcourse,youneedbread..Mostpeopleusetwopieces,butifyou’rereallyhungry,youcanmakeaverybigsandwichwiththreepieces.Whatkindofsandwichdoyoulike/Therearethousandsofkindsofsandwich.Next,justputthefoodyouwant,likemeatorvegetables,ononepieceofthebreadandthencoveritwiththeotherpiece.Youcanaddbuttertothebreadfirst,ifyoulike,too.That’sall.Nowyoucanfindsthyouliketodrinkandenjoyyourownsandwich.Asandwichisoneoftheeasiestfoodstomakeintheworld.B.Mybigbrothertaughtmehowtomakeasandwichyesterday.Ithoughtmakingasandwichwouldbehard,butactuallyit’sveryeasy.You’llneedbread,thingsforthesandwich,andmaybesomebutterifyoulikeit.Thebreadkeepsthethingslikemeatorvegetablestogether.Youcanaddbuttertothebread.Besuretoputthebutterontheinsideofthebread..Whenyoufinish,you’llhaveasandwich.Itoldyoumakingasandwichwaseasy,didn’tI?Nowyoucanenjoymakingasandwichwhenyouarehungryandwantjustalittletoeat.A練習(xí)2下面有兩篇文章，判斷哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Everyonecanprotecttheearthfrompollutioninsimplebutimportantways.First,everyonehastogoshopping,butnoteveryonehastouseaplasticbageachtimehebuysth.Ifyoudon’tneedabag,don’ttakeone.Betteryet,takeyourownbagswithyouwhenshopping.Second,don’twastefood.Growingfoodtakesupalotofland.Finally,usepublictransportationinsteadofacarormotorcycle.Thisreducesairpollution.Thesesimplewayswillmakeourplanetcleanerforall.BEveryonecanprotecttheearthfrompollutioninsimplebutimportantways.Everyonehastogoshopping,butnoteveryonehastouseaplasticbageachtimehebuysth.Ifyoudon’tneedabag,don’ttakeone.Betteryet,takeyourownbagswithyouwhenshopping.Don’twastefood.Growingfoodtakesupalotofland.Finally,usepublictransportationinsteadofacarormotorcycle.Thisreducesairpollution.Thesesimplewayswillmakeourplanetcleanerforall.A練習(xí)3下面有兩篇文章，判斷哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Mostpeopleenjoyplayingbaseballorbasketball,butmyfavoritesportisvolleyball.Inbaseball,theplayersarefarapartfromoneanother.Youcan’ttalktoyourteammateswhileyouplay.Basketballcanbeaveryviolentgame.Manypeoplearehurtwhileplayingbasketball.Volleyballplayersplaytogetherlikeasingleperson.Ilikethatfeeling.Iknowwhateveryoneofmyteammatesisdoingallthetime.Weworktogetherlikeafamily.Volleyballisandwillalwaysbemyfavoritesport.BMostpeopleenjoyplayingbaseballorbasketball,butmyfavoritesportisvolleyball.Inbaseball,theplayersarefarapartfromoneanother.Youcan’ttalktoyourteammateswhileyouplay.Basketballcanbeaveryviolentgame.Manypeoplearehurtwhileplayingbasketball.Ontheotherhand,volleyballplayersplaytogetherlikeasingleperson.Ilikethatfeeling.Iknowwhateveryoneofmyteammatesisdoingallthetime.Weworktogetherlikeafamily.Forthesereasons,volleyballisandwillalwaysbemyfavoritesport.B第六節(jié)人稱一致性微技能訓(xùn)練寫文章時(shí)，人稱盡量要一致，不要第一、第二、第三人稱夾雜使用。首先，要認(rèn)真審題，該用第幾人稱來完成寫作；其次，人稱要盡量一致，除非有必要。練習(xí)1.請(qǐng)把下面文章中人稱不一致的粗體字加以改正，并說明理由。Letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.Itisanaveragefamily.Ihaveparents,anolderbrother,andayoungersister.Thisfamilyhasadog,too.ItsnameisCloudbecauseitisallwhitewithsofthair.Myfatherisateacher,andmymotherisahousewife.Thebrotherisacollegestudent,andthesisterisajuniorhighschoolstudent.I’mafirstyearhighschoolstudent.Thisfamilydoesnotsoundimportant,butitisthemostimportantthingintheworldtome.EveryonelikesTV,right?Wrong!SomepeopledonotwatchTVverymuchorevenatall.Theyliketoreadorspendtimewiththeirfriendsinstead.Youcanreadgoodbooksorthenewspaper,oryoucanchatwithyourfriendsinyourfreetime.ThesepeoplethinkthatTVdoesnothavegoodenoughprogramstowatch.TheyalsothinkthatTVisalittlestupid.Youcandobetterthingswithyourfreetime,andIthinkso,too.練習(xí)2下面有兩篇文章，判斷哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Shouldseniorhighschoolstudentstrytomakeboyfriendsorgirlfriends?Parentsandteachersusuallyagreethatseniorhighschoolstudentsshouldworkhardsothattheycanentergoodcollegesanduniversities.Whenseniorhighstudentsarealittleolder,theyarebetterabletokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.Besides,ifyoureallyfallinlovewithsb.,youcanwaitforthatpersonuntilheorshefinishedhisorhereducation.Don’tbeinsuchahurry!Truelovewaitsforyou.Seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldconcentrateontheirstudiessothattheywillhaveamorecomfortablelifewiththeonetheylovelater.Don’twasteyourtimenow.Getbusyandstudy!

B.seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldnottrytomakeboyfriendsorgirlfriends.Seniorhighschoolisatimeforstudentstopreparefortheirfuturecareers.Theycanhavefriendsanytime.Inseniorhighschool,studentsmuststudyhardtopasstestsothattheycanmoveaheadtomoreeducation.Theydonothavetimetogooutondatesallthetime.Theywillhavemoretimeincollegetostudyandmakefriends,evenboyfriendsofgirlfriends,then.Besides,iftwopeopletrulyloveeachother,theycanwaituntilschoolisfinishedbeforetheybecomeseriousabouttheirrelationship.Inmostcases,therefore,itisbettertowaituntilone’seducationisfinishedbeforestartingalovecareer!BA篇人稱不一致第五章寫作微技能實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練第一節(jié)英語寫作流程微技能寫作實(shí)戰(zhàn)流程6+1：審題—列綱—造句—連句—修改—抄寫—---復(fù)查（以上步驟和環(huán)節(jié)可根據(jù)不同階段的需要或時(shí)間進(jìn)行取舍。）

第二節(jié)英語造句成文六原則小詞語原則：即少用那些空洞的大詞，如形容一個(gè)人好的時(shí)候，不要用nice、good等既普通又空乏的詞，而最好用generous，kind-hearted，considerate等形象而具體的小詞。狀語提前原則：即把句子的狀語提到句子的開頭，以增強(qiáng)連貫性和可讀性。短語優(yōu)先原則：即合并簡(jiǎn)單句，簡(jiǎn)化復(fù)合句，單詞換成短語等。如cause可改為leadto/contributeto/resultin.MybrotherwasridingthebikeandIwassittingbehindhim.Mybrotherwasridingthebikewithmesittingbehindhim..4.并列句、復(fù)合句原則：即合并簡(jiǎn)單句，使用特殊句式如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，以提升文章的檔次水平。練習(xí)：a.當(dāng)遇到困難的時(shí)候，我們不要灰心，而要勇敢面對(duì)。只有這樣我們才能克服困難。b.在進(jìn)入大學(xué)后，我計(jì)劃要在學(xué)習(xí)上建立新的目標(biāo)，改進(jìn)我的學(xué)習(xí)方法。Whenmeetingwithtrouble,weshouldnotloseheartbutfaceitbravely.Onlyinthiswaycanweovercomeit.AfterIentercollege,Iplantosetnewgoalsinmystudyandimprovemywayoflearning.5.長(zhǎng)段句交替原則：即一篇文章中，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，交替使用長(zhǎng)短句，簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)合句，使句子錯(cuò)落有致，以提升文章的節(jié)奏感和可讀性。多樣化的句式，能顯示較強(qiáng)的語言功底，提升作文檔次。6.整潔、分段原則：為使文章條理清楚，文章要分層分段，高考一般分二至四段即可。落實(shí)到書面上，要求書寫整齊美觀，富于美感，以提高印象分。

第三節(jié)分類實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練一、記敘文語篇模板（交代活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和目的）We

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onthemorningofApril10th,talkingandlaughingalltheway.（描述過程）Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes;somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees,andotherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleaving,wetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.（感想）Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement./wefeltproud,thoughalittletired.二、說明文語篇模板（描述現(xiàn)象）Withthedevelopmentofsociety,heavytraffichasarousedgreatconcern.Somepeoplethink…,whileothersthink…（分析原因）Therearemanyreasonsinvolved.Amongthem,theincreaseofprivatecarsplaysanimportantrole…（指出趨勢(shì)或措施）Thefirstmeasureistolimitthenumberofprivatecarsrunningonthestreeteveryday.Immediateafterthat,weshould….Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblem.模擬訓(xùn)練1某雜志就現(xiàn)代人的健康狀況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，其結(jié)果是與以前相比，人們的健康狀況有所下滑，其主要原因有：1.工作忙碌，壓力過大，缺少鍛煉；生活沒有規(guī)律，熬夜，休息不夠；3.不少人有抽煙喝酒的習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.調(diào)查結(jié)果；2；主要原因；3建議：養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣、戒煙，戒酒，多運(yùn)動(dòng)。三、議論文語篇模板1（提出論點(diǎn)）Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.（列舉論據(jù)）ononehand,advertisinggreatlypromotessales.Ontheotherhand,intheireffortstotellpeopleaboutproductsandevents,advertisersprovideuswithgreatamountofthelatestinformation.Therefore,ithasbecomepartofourdailylife.Meanwhile,tomakeanadvertisement,alotofpeoplewillworktogetheronit.Sowiththedevelopmentofadvertising,alotofjobsarebeingprovided.（得出結(jié)論）Inconclusion,advertisingisanimportantbusiness.語篇模板2(點(diǎn)明討論主題)Thestudentsinourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhethertheonlywayforseniorhighstudentstosucceedistogotocollege,whichinfactisahottopicnowadays.Theresultisasfollows:(描述討論結(jié)果或正反方觀點(diǎn)）About75%ofthestudentsthoughtitnecessarytogotocollegewhile15%hadoppositeopinion.Thereststatedthattherewasnoneedtalkingaboutitfortheydidn’tcare….（發(fā)表自己觀點(diǎn)）Inmyopinion,goingtocollegeisgoodforustolearnmoreandimproveourselves.Also,ithelpsusmoreeasilytofindasuitablejobinthefuture.However,therearedifferentroadstoRome,whichmeanstobesuccessfulmayhaveotherchoicesbesidesgoingtocollege.模擬訓(xùn)練2失敗一定是壞事嗎？生活中，失敗是常有的事，不同的人對(duì)失敗有不同的態(tài)度，你對(duì)失敗的態(tài)度是什么？請(qǐng)以“IsFailureaBadThing?”為題寫一篇短文。

IsFailureaBadThing?Failureiscommonthinginourdailylife._______________________________________________________________四、應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文種類較多，此處只選幾個(gè)典型范文模板。（1）書面通知模板

Notice（時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）AmeetingisgoingtobeheldinRoom213ofBuilding3at7o’clockontheeveningofDecember13.(內(nèi)容）Problemstobetalkedaboutatthemeetingincludethesafetyofthedormitories,properuseofelectricity,whattodoincaseoffir