外研版（2019） 選擇性必修 第二冊Unit6 Survival Writing課件

Unit6

Survival

Readthestoryandanswerthequestions.Whereisthepersoninthestory?Whatdifficultiesishefacing?ThepersoninthestoryisonMars.Hehastokeephimselfsafefromthedeadlyradiationoutside.Andheisfacingthelackofwater,oxygenandfood.Whathashealreadydonetostayalive?Whatwillhedonext?Hehasresumedcommunicationwiththebase.Hehasdiscoveredanundergroundicedeposittogetwater,andproduceoxygenwiththewater.HewillworkouthowtofarmonMarsandgrowplantswithseeds.Findoutthemainideaofeachparagraph.TheproblemthewritermeetsThethingsthatcanhelphimtosurviveThedifficultiesheisfacingImagineyouhavetosurviveinadangerousplace.Planyourstorybyansweringthequestions.Whatarethedangers?(eg.animals,thecold,noair)Whereisthedangerousplace?(eg.Antarctica,space,thejungle)Howdoyoufeel?(eg.confident,anxious,optimistic)Howdoyoumanagetosurvive?(eg.catchfish,meltsnow,makeafire)【審題定調(diào)】本寫作任務要求寫一篇求生故事，屬于記敘文的范疇。講述故事，就是要通過完整的情節(jié)和生動形象的語言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時，有所感、有所悟。寫作時應注意：1.可以按照時間的先后順序展開，也可以采用倒敘或插敘的手法進行寫作；2.故事的開頭要交代故事發(fā)生的時間、地點、人物及背景。具體內(nèi)容可根據(jù)實際情況進行適當調(diào)整；3.在講述故事的經(jīng)過時，條理要清晰、重點應突出，同時語言要準確、生動；4.故事的結尾要簡潔明了，既在意料之外，又在情理之中，這樣才可以給讀者留下深刻的印象。本寫作人稱主要用第一人稱。時態(tài)主要用一般過去時?！局\篇布局】本寫作可分為三部分：第一部分：故事發(fā)生的背景；第二部分：故事的經(jīng)過（可穿插你的感受）；第三部分：故事的結局。WhatanAdventure! It’sbeenthreedayssinceIgotseparatedfromtheotherteammembers.WewenthikingtogetheronMonday,butbecameseparatedduetoaheavyrainstorm.Withoutacompass,Ilostdirection,andnowIamlostindensejungle. Therearenoroadsatall,soIhavetomakemyownwaystepbystep.Ihavehurtbothmyhandsquitebadlyfromallthethorns—theyareeverywhere.Tomakethingsworse,Istumbledandsprainedmyankle.Thepainiskillingme!Snakes,monkeys,insectsandotheranimalsappearfromtimetotime.Yesterday,Iheardtheroarofatigerfromfaraway.Iwasterrified!Irubstickstogethertomakeafireeverynighttokeepmyselfwarmandsafe.It'sreallyadifficulttechniquetomaster,andittakesmeseveralfrustratingandworryingattemptseveryevening.Ihavetoremindmyselftobecalmandoptimisticateverymoment. Foodalsoworriesmealot.I'vebeeneatingberriestoappeasemyhunger,butIhavetobeverycarefultoavoidanythingpoisonous. TodayIhavesomeluckwhenIfindastreamwhichIcanfollow.Itgive