專題16 寫作技巧及專練20篇（解析版）-2021-2022學年六年級英語上學期期末考點大串講（牛津上海版）

專題16寫作技巧及專練20篇（解析版）英語寫作時的幾個原則，希望你可以在作文上取得好成績哦?。ㄒ唬┱莆占记桑?/p>

1.注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局一般為三段式開始部分——說出文中的要點、核心問題。

正文部分——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。

結(jié)尾部分——對全文的總結(jié)和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機地聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng)，祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。

如何開篇：技巧一：主旨設(shè)問更給力

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustodosports.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforourhealthand

study.

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustoprotectenvironment.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforliving.

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustolearnEnglish.Why?Becauseit’sthemost-widelyusedlanguageintheworld.

技巧二：頭文字D----從D開始，從我們到我

Differentpeoplehavedifferent_____,but/andIhave/prefer______

如何寫正文：變形原則1：表達觀點要“自我”

In

my

opinion,

we

should

pay

much

more

attention

on

the

weak

subjects!

變形原則2：兩句之間要過渡

I

left

my

pen

at

home.

What

was

worse,

the

drugstore

was

closed

that

day.

變形原則3：凡是問題闡述用形容詞句型??！

普通級句型The

environment

is

bad.

比較級句型The

environment

is

getting

much

worse

than

before.

The

environment

is

getting

worse

and

worse

最高級句型

I

have

never

seen

the

worse

environment

.

變形原則4：表達作用多用it句式

…is

a

…way

to…

閱讀能幫助我放松自己。Reading

is

a

good

way

to

relax

myself.

看電影能幫助我們學習英語。Watching

movies

is

a

wonderful

way

to

learn

English.

變形原則5：增強情感轉(zhuǎn)感嘆

閱讀對我們很有益.

How

beneficial

it

is

for

us

to

read！

作運動對學生很重要.

How

important

it

is

for

students

to

do

sports.

變形原則6：事情到感情句型It

makes

sb.

feel

…

that

…

I

was

very

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

It

makes

me

feel

happy

that

I

got

an

A

in

English

last

term.

變形原則7：形容詞句型升級：it

is

one

of

the

most

…It

was

an

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

It

was

one

of

the

most

unusual

experience

in

my

life.

變形原則8：活用there

be結(jié)合定從:

Many

reasons

made

me

like

reading.

There

are

many

reasons

why

I

enjoy

reading詞匯變化變化原則1：make

更有feel

After

doing

sports,

I

feel

relaxed.

It

makes

me

feel

relaxed

to

do

sports.

I

made

a

progress

in

English.

I

feel

proud.

It

makes

me

feel

proud

to

make

a

progress

in

English.

變化原則2：連詞不再用and增補

not

only…but

also…,

as

well

as…

進階

what’s

more/worse

,

furthermore

轉(zhuǎn)折

while,

however

變化原則3：喜歡不再like，用be

fond

of,

enjoy,

be

crazy

about

I

am

fond

of

reading

books.

變化原則4：凡是提出措施咱盡量不用should??！

用“suppose”

、“had

better”，“have

no

choice

but

”，

“it’s

our

duty

to

”

如何結(jié)尾1.各種號召--事不宜遲Don’t

put

it

off.

2.各種越--多多益善the+比較級+主謂，the

+比較級+主謂

越…就越…The

better

we

take

care

of

the

environment,

the

more

beautiful

the

world

will

be.

2.

名言警句

學習類Practice

makes

perfect.

運動類Rome

was

not

built

in

a

day.

環(huán)保類Nothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

.

愛好類Interest

is

the

best

teacher.

沒有？編唄！Once

there

was

a

great

man

said“……”.議論文結(jié)構(gòu)開頭方式：

In

my

opinion,

we,

students,

are

supposed

to

take

more

after-class

activities!議點闡述：There

are

many

reasons

why

I

support

it!

(列舉式)

總結(jié)陳述：

Above

all,

it

is

so

obvious

that

we

...

(強調(diào)主題！)

2.確定主題句

主題句是對全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭，而后，全文對主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進行解釋，擴展。寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點：

①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個要點

②提煉出一句具有概括性的話

③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者。

（二）巧用連接詞

要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學會正確使用連接詞

（三）掌握常用句型下面只列舉比較常用的。

1.in

order

to

為了實現(xiàn)他的夢想，他學習非常努力。

Heworkedveryhardinordertorealizehisdream.

3.so…that

他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了。Theywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbutyawn.

5.would

rather…than

他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。Hewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself.

6.not

only…but

also

在短短的三年的時間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學位。Injustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherdoctor’sdegree.

7.either…or

如果考試過關(guān)，你可以買一個MP3或去云南玩一趟。

YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupasstheexam.

8.Neither…nor

他是一個無聊的人，既不愛娛樂，也不愛讀書。Heisaboringman.Helikesneitherentertainmentnorreading.

9.not…until

直到他告訴我發(fā)生的事，我才了解真相。

Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.

10.find

it

adj

to

do…

我覺得作聽力時有必要作筆記。

Ifinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.11.as

well

as

他善良又樂于助人。

Hewaskindaswellashelpful.

12.…as

well

這個小孩活潑又可愛。

Thechildisactiveandfunnyaswell.

13.One…the

other

你看見桌子上有兩只筆嗎？一支是紅色的，另一支是黑色的。Haveyouseentwopensonthedesk?Oneisred,theotherisblack.

14.Some…others

每個人都很忙，有些在讀書，有些在寫作。

Everyoneisbusyinclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.寫作專練（共20套）一、話題作文1．假如你是LiHua，你正參加“最美社區(qū)”英語征文活動。請用一個詞概括社區(qū)的特點將標題補充完整，并圍繞這一特點描述社區(qū)設(shè)施以及人們在社區(qū)的日?；顒印Ｗ⒁馐马棧?.必須包含以上主要信息，且適當合理發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80左右。表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名。My_________Community_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyLovelyCommunityHello!MynameisLiHuaandIliveinZhonghuaCommunity.Ilikethecommunitysomuchbecauseitislovely.WhydoIsayso?Firstly,ithaslovelyexerciseequipment.Manypeopledoexercisebyiteveryday,includingoldmenandchildren.Secondly,ithaslovelytreesandflowers.Therearealwaysallkindsofflowerswhetherinspring,insummerorinautumn.Manypeopletakephotosofflowerseveryday.Thirdly,ithaslovelypeople.Peopleherearefriendlytoeachotherandoffertohelpthepersonintrouble.Don’tyouthinkmycommunityislovely?【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。寫作時注意首先要補全題目，然后圍繞題目展開敘述。內(nèi)容要包括社區(qū)設(shè)施和人們的日?；顒樱瑑刹糠挚梢苑珠_敘述，也可以放在一起敘述，但都要寫到。內(nèi)容要積極向上，條理清晰。2.寫作指導：本文寫作應(yīng)該使用第一人稱。時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。補全題目的詞用形容詞較合適，但無論是什么詞，正文的敘述一定要緊緊圍繞所填的詞展開。為使文章層次清晰，可使用first/firstly,second/secondly等詞。文章要有總述的開頭和總述的結(jié)尾。二、材料作文2．假如你的好朋友是Frank，他13歲了，生日是在2月8日。請你根據(jù)下面表格提供的信息，以“MyGoodFriend”為題目，寫一篇介紹Frank的短文。食物喜歡雞肉、蔬菜（健康的）不喜歡冰激凌（不想變胖）運動喜歡籃球（容易的，令人放松的）不喜歡排球（乏味的）學科喜歡英語、科學（有用的，有趣的）不喜歡數(shù)學（困難的）學?；顒?月23日英語演講比賽（Englishspeechcontest）12月9日在圖書館舉辦特價售書活動要求1.書寫規(guī)范，語句要通順、連貫，語法正確。（適當使用and，but，because等）2.必須包含所有提示信息，內(nèi)容充實，可適當發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及相關(guān)信息。不少于60詞。MyGoodFriend_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Frankismygoodfriend.He’s13yearsold.HisbirthdayisonFebruary8th.Helikeschickenandvegetablesbecausetheyarehealthyfood.Hedoesn’tlikeice-creambecausehedoesn’twanttobefat.Helikesplayingbasketballwithhisfriendsafterschool.Hethinksit’seasyandrelaxing.Buthedoesn’tlikeplayingvolleyballbecauseit’sboring.HisfavoritesubjectsareEnglishandsciencebecausethey’reusefulandinteresting.Buthedoesn’tlikemathbecausehethinksitisdifficult.OnSeptember23rd,theyhaveanEnglishspeechcontest.OnDecember9th,theyhaveabooksaleintheschoollibrary.Youcancomeandbuyyourfavoritebooks.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求學生們根據(jù)題目中提供的信息，介紹自己的好朋友Frank。題目中的表格中列出了Frank的相關(guān)信息，包括他的一些喜好，如食物、運動、學科和學校活動等，學生們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些信息表達出來。2.寫作指導：審題可知，這篇作文應(yīng)用第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)敘述，注意謂語動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)形式。寫作時應(yīng)將題目中給出的所有要點都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點以及與漢語表達習慣的區(qū)別。以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，適當使用一些連詞，用并列句、復合句等句式，提升作文檔次。3．學校是充滿光明、自由和知識的地方！為更好地了解你在校的學習生活體驗與想法，你所在學校的英語社團正面向全校開展以“MyFavouriteSchoolDay”為題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你寫一篇英語短文，你最喜歡星期幾？為什么喜歡這一天？你在這一天通常會參加什么具體活動？注意：1.不少于50詞。2.不要寫出你的校名和姓名提示詞：Wednesday,club,excited,draw提示問題：◆Whatisyourfavouriteschoolday?◆Whydoyoulikethatday?◆Whatactivitiesdoyouoftendoonthatday?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFavoriteSchoolDayMyfavoriteschooldayisWednesday,becausetherearelotsofinterestingthingstodoonWednesday.WehaveEnglish,Chineseandscienceinthemorning.Englishismyfavoritesubject.TheEnglishteacherisfriendly,soallofuslikeherverymuch.Intheafternoon,Ihavemaths,historyandbiology.Ilikebiologybest.Thebiologyteacheralwaystellsussomethingaboutnature.Allmyclassesfinishat5:30p.m.Afterschool,Ijointhebasketballclub.It’sexciting.Ihavealotoffunplayingbasketball.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求介紹在學校最喜歡的一天，講述這一天的課程及活動。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述最喜歡的一天的學習課程及活動，要敘述完整，條理清晰。4．雙減之后，學生們在周末有了更多的屬于自己的時間。請以MyWeekend為題，談一談你現(xiàn)在的周末生活。要求：1.介紹一下你在周末不同時間的安排；簡單評價一下你的周末生活。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名與校名；3.100詞左右。MyWeekend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyWeekendIt’sreallywonderfulnewsthatthepolicyof“double-lighteningtheburden”hasbeencarriedout.Ourschoollifehaschangedalot.Iusedtohavealotofhomeworkonweekends.Idon’thavetimetodowhatIwanttodo.Nowthestudypressureisreducedandthehomeworkisreduced.Wesleepmoreandexercisemore.Wehavemoretimetodowhatwelike.Wecanreadbookstolearnmoreknowledge.Wecanalsogoonatrip.Moreimportantly,wehavemoretimetostaywithourparentsandliveahappierlife.Thesechangeshavegivenstudentsmoretimetodeveloptheirhobbies.Theyhavemoretimetotakepartinoutdooractivitiesonweekends.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的周末”為題談一談周末生活。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹雙減之后周末生活的改變；最后一段介紹這些改變的好處。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。5．最近學校在評選“你心目中最喜歡的教師”。請你以“Myfavoriteteacher”為題，根據(jù)以下提示、要點及要求，用英語寫一篇短文，參加學校的英語評選活動。提示詞：favorite,teacher,helpful,care1.要點：1）你最喜歡的老師是誰；2）你一周中哪天上他/她的課；3）你為什么認為他/她是你最喜歡的老師？2.要求：1）文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學校的校名和師生姓名；2）詞數(shù)80左右。Myfavoriteteacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfavoriteteacherMissWangismyfavoriteteacher.SheismyEnglishteacher.Sheisayoungandbeautifulgirlwithapairofglasses.IhaveherclasseveryWednesdayandFriday.IlikeherbecauseshehelpedmelearnEnglish.Inthepast,Ihadalotofdifficultiesinlisteningandspeaking.ItalkedtoMissWangandshegavemesomesuggestions.Forlistening,shetoldmetocatchsomekeywords.Forspeaking,sheaskedmetousesimplewordsandsentences.Withherhelp,Iimprovedalot.IthinkMissWangisverykindandhelpful.Ilikeherbest.Whataboutyourschoolteachers?【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己最喜歡的教師，包括上課時間以及喜歡的原因等，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。寫作時，首先點出最喜歡的老師是誰，然后進行具體介紹，注意包括提示要點。注意內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。6．今天是星期天，是你的好朋友李明的12歲生日。你給他買了本書作為生日禮物，他的媽媽為你們做了一桌豐盛的晚餐。在晚會上，你們唱歌跳舞，過得很愉快。請根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TodayisSunday.It’smybestfriendLiMing’s12thbirthday.IwenttohisbirthdaypartytonightandIboughthimabookashisbirthdaypresent.Heloveditverymuch.Hismothercookedabigdinnerforus.Thefoodwasverydelicious.Attheparty,wehadagoodtimesinginganddancing.Whatalovelydayitis!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題要求根據(jù)題目的提示內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，內(nèi)容是你去朋友生日聚會上的經(jīng)歷。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用第一人稱進行寫作，時態(tài)主要采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時；本文可在提示內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上進行自我發(fā)揮，以豐富文章內(nèi)容和達成字數(shù)要求；寫作完成后應(yīng)確保文章內(nèi)容齊全，行文流暢，語言符合規(guī)范和英文表達習慣。7．請根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇以“AHappyDay”為題目的文章，介紹你和家人在五一勞動節(jié)早上9點鐘正在做的事情，并表達出家庭的幸福，節(jié)日的快樂，和你對勞動的熱愛。人物干什么人物干什么人物干什么人物干什么媽媽包餃子爸爸掃地爺爺讀報紙奶奶看電視弟弟踢足球妹妹和小狗玩耍我洗盤子提示詞：MayDay勞動節(jié)；work勞動，工作；garden花園要求：1.要點要全，可適當發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實信息。2.書寫規(guī)范，思路連貫。3.字數(shù)80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。AHappyDayTodayisMayDay.It’s9o’clockinthemorning.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AHappyDayTodayisMayDay.It’s9o’clockinthemorning.Mymotherismakingdumplings.Myfatheriscleaningthehouse.Nowourhouseiscleanandtidy.MygrandfatherisreadinganewspaperandmygrandmotheriswatchingTV.Shelikeswatchingsoupoperas.Mysisterisplayingwithourlittledog.Shelovesanimals.Mybrotherisplayingsoccerwithhisfriendsinthegarden.Helikesplayingsportsverymuch.WhatamIdoing?Iamdoingthedishesinthekitchen.WeloveMayDay.Wecanstayathomeanddomanyinterestingthings.Wearehappy.Ilovemyfamily.AndIloveworkingbecauseitcanmakemehappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)表格中漢語提示的內(nèi)容，敘述在五一勞動節(jié)早上9點鐘家人們正在做的事情：媽媽在包餃子；爸爸在掃地；爺爺在看報紙；奶奶在看電視；弟弟在踢足球；妹妹在和小狗玩耍；我在洗盤子；最后表達出家庭的幸福，節(jié)日的快樂，和對勞動的熱愛。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第三和第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用現(xiàn)在進行時為主。在敘述內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，語法正確，保證提示內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，行文連貫。8．你的筆友Amy想要來你家鄉(xiāng)參觀。請你按照下面提示，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的文章，向她介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。要點：1.我的家鄉(xiāng)是一個離江陰不遠的小鎮(zhèn)。每天都有去市中心的公交車。2.當?shù)厝藰芬怆S時幫助別人，一些人可以幫忙設(shè)計家，另一些人可以幫忙修理洗衣機或者冰箱。3.沿著街道走，在第二個十字路口，有一個美麗的公園，公園里鳥語花香，我們……4.每年有許多游客來參觀我的家鄉(xiāng)。我期盼著……要求：1.文章內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫，詞數(shù)在80個左右。2.對第3,4要點的省略號部分作1—2句話的合理發(fā)揮；3.作文內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卷指定的位置，寫在試卷上其他位置無效。Hi,Amy,I’mgladtohearthatyoulikemyhometown.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hi,Amy,I’mgladtohearthatyoulikemyhometown.MyhometownisatownnotfarawayfromJiangyin.Therearebusestothecitycentereveryday.Localpeoplearereadytohelpothersatanytime.Somepeoplecanhelpdesignhomes,otherscanhelpfixwashingmachinesorfridges.Walkalongthestreet.Atthesecondcrossing,thereisabeautifulpark.Wecansmelltheflowersandhearthebirds.Wecanrowboatsonthelakeandflykites.Everyyear,manyvisitorscometomyhometown.Ilookforwardtoshowingyouaroundmyhometownsomeday.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示向筆友Amy介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，學生需要圍繞題目所給的四點提示從不同的方面展開介紹。必須要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時使用第一人稱和第三人稱，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。正文根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容逐步展開介紹，并對第三第四點進行適當補充，同時注意選用合適的連詞、短語和句型來將內(nèi)容進行串聯(lián)和拓展；文章做到思路清晰，層次分明，要點齊全；行文要語句通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系；無語法、單詞拼寫和標點錯誤。9．網(wǎng)購已成為人們熱衷的購物方式，人們輕點鼠標就能完成。但人們對此持有不同觀點。請結(jié)合下面表格內(nèi)的信息提示，以“OnlineShopping”為題，寫一篇60-70詞左右的英語短文。觀點原因喜歡方便、便宜不喜歡商品不真實，付款不安全OnlineShopping__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

OnlineShoppingDoyoulikeonlineshopping?Herearesomeideasofmyclassmates.Somestudentslikeonlineshopping.Theythinkitiseasy.Theydon’tneedtogotoshopsbutcanbuyalmosteverythingatanytime.Andmostthingsarecheap.Somestudentsdon’tlikeit.TheythinkproductsontheInternetlookverynice.Butsometimesthey’renotgoodwhenyougetthem.AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要以“OnlineShopping”為題，可以根據(jù)表格中的觀點和原因進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段寫喜歡購物的人的原因；第三段寫不喜歡購物的人的原因。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。10．根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，80個詞左右。提示：1.林濤和王軍是鄰居，他們住在同一座居民樓的二樓，他倆是好朋友；2.今天是星期天，他們不去上學，他們?nèi)游飯@；3.從他們住的居民樓到動物園有10千米，所以他們坐公共汽車去；4.動物園里動物很多，他們玩得很高興。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：LinTaoandWangJunareneighbors.Theyliveinthesamebuilding,andtheyareonthesamefloor-thesecondfloor.They’regoodfriends,sotheyoftenplaytogether.TodayisSunday.Theydon’tgotoschool.Theydecidetogotothezoo.It’sabouttenkilometersfromtheirbuildingtothezoo,sotheygotothezoobybus.They’reveryhappytoseesomanyanimals.Theyhaveagoodtimetoday!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，先介紹林濤和王軍的關(guān)系和住所，然后敘述星期日他們一起去動物園的情況，最后敘述感受。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。在敘述內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，語法正確，故事發(fā)生的起因、過程等敘述完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。11．父親是我們生命中最重要的人之一，也是我們最堅強的依靠。他不僅陪伴我們成長，也教會了我們很多東西。假如你是Tommy，你想向你的同學們介紹你的父親。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文介紹他。要求：60詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示：1.Whathelookslike2.Whathedoes3.Whyyoulovehim4.…Myfather______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfatherIlovemyfather.Heisagreatheroinmyheart.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.Myfatheristallandstrongwithblackhairandbigeyes.Heisadoctor.Heispatientandfriendly.Healwaystrieshisbesttohelpothers.Heisbusywithhiswork,butwhenheisfree,healwaysspendstimewithme.Hetakesmetothezooandplaystabletenniswithmeinthepark.Heisalsostrictaboutmystudies.Heteachesmemanythings.What’smore,heoftenencouragesmeandgivesmesupport.Ilikemyfatherbecauseheisahard-workingandhelpfulman.Heisagooddoctor.Inthefuture,Iwanttobeagooddoctorlikehim.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Myfather”為題，結(jié)合提示問題進行寫作。注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從外貌，工作，日常生活等方面介紹父親；第三段介紹為什么愛父親以及對父親的評價。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。12．友誼(friendship)是我們生活中必不可少的一部分。每個人或多或少都有自己的好朋友。請你以“MyFriend”為題，根據(jù)下面的要點和要求，寫一篇短文介紹你身邊的一位好朋友。1.要點：1）你對友誼的看法；2）你和他/她的相似之處和差異；3）你們一起經(jīng)歷的某次有意義的事情及感受。2.要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學校的校名和師生姓名；2）詞數(shù)100左右。MyFriend__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFriendFriendshipisakindofhumanrelationshipanditisimportantinourlife.Weallneedfriends.Whenweareintrouble,weneedfriendstoofferushelpandencouragement.Whenwesucceed,wealsoneedfriendstoshareourjoys.Lifewithoutfriendsisjustlikelifewithoutsunshine.MybestfriendisJack,whoisthemonitorofmyclass.Wearebothoutgoingandenjoysports.Buthe’stallerandstrongerthanme.Wealwayshelpeachother.HeisnotgoodatEnglish.IoftenhelphimwithhisEnglish.Everytimehemadeamistakeinpronunciation,Ihelpedhimtocorrectit.Withmyhelp,hedidwellintheEnglishexam.Weareveryhappyandrelaxedwhenwearetogether.【詳解】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，要求寫一篇短文介紹你身邊的某位好友，寫作內(nèi)容包括：對友誼的看法；朋友之間的相似之處和差異；一起經(jīng)歷的某次有意義的事情及感受。2.寫作指導：該作文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。可以采取三段式的寫作方式，第一段寫對友誼的看法；第二段寫我們的相似之處和差異；第三段寫在一起時的活動及感受，注意這里描述過去的經(jīng)歷，時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時。寫作前可以提前列舉出可能會用到的單詞、短語或句型等；寫作時注意寫作手法要符合英語的表達習慣；寫作后注意檢查。三、電子郵件13．假如你是李華，你們班交換生Peter下周要來你們班上課，作為班長你需要用郵件先和Peter溝通，讓他提前做好準備。根據(jù)中英文提示信息，完成一篇不少于40詞的文段寫作。所給提示詞僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。要求:1.語句通順、意思連貫；2.不少于5句話，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示信息:January10th,MondayA．M08:00Science09:00English10:00Chinese11:00P.E.12:00Lunch(atschool)P.M.01:30Music02:30Geography03:30History04:30Interestingclubs05:30GohomeDearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】參考范文：DearPeter,HereisourschoolscheduleforMonday.WehavesevenclassesonMonday.Therearefourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon.Ourclassesbeginateightinthemorningandfinishattwelveatnoon.Intheafternoon,webeginourclassesathalfpastoneandendatfivethirty.WehaveScience,English,ChineseandP.E.inthemorningandMusic,GeographyandHistoryintheafternoon.Athalfpastfour,wecantakepartininterestingclubs.Youcanchoosewhatyoulike.Andwecangohomeathalfpastfive.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹周一的課程安排情況給Peter，并告知不同課程的具體時間等，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。14．學校環(huán)保俱樂部GreenClub正在招募新成員（member），假如你叫李華，請根據(jù)提示給俱樂部負責老師Ms.Zhang寫一封60詞左右的電子郵件，向他推薦你自己并提出一些環(huán)保建議。年級七（2）班外貌高瘦，短發(fā)身高1.68米愛好運動、騎自行車特長跑步、游泳夢想成為一名園丁課后活動請你補充環(huán)保建議1.多種樹木2.節(jié)約水電3.……（請你補充）4.……注意：1.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.不能透露個人的任何信息（如：具體的學校和姓名等），否則不予評分3.電electricity；園丁gardenerDearMs.Zhang,IknowtheschoolGreenClubwantssomenewmembersnow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopetogetthechancetobeamemberoftheclub.I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreply.Thanks!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMs.Zhang,IknowtheschoolGreenClubwantssomenewmembersnow.MynameisLiHua.I’minClassTwo,GradeSeven.I’mtallandthin.Ihaveshorthair.Iam1.68.Ilikesports,suchasridingandsoon.I’mgoodatrunningandswimming.Ioftenrunafterclass.Iwanttobeagardenerinthefuture.Ihopetoplantmoretrees.Wealsoneedtosavewaterandelectricity.