Unit+4+Scientists+Who+Changed+the+World+Integrated+skills高中英語譯林版(2020)必修第三冊

英語應(yīng)用文寫作英語應(yīng)用文日記演講稿通知推薦信感謝信求職信慰問信求助信投訴信建議信道歉信邀請信①Thinking(審題）②Outlining（列提綱,寫要點）③Expanding（擴詞成句）④Linking（連句成篇）⑤Polishing（潤色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問誰是你最欽佩的科學家，請你詳細介紹。請你用英文回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.科學家的簡介；2.欽佩他/她的原因；3.他/她對你和世界的影響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thinking(審題）Step1Para.1開頭Para.2正文Para.3結(jié)尾Outlining（列出提綱，寫要點）Step2要點二要點一寫作背景+寫作目的簡介和貢獻影響

我最欽佩的科學家是屠呦呦。知道你要了解屠呦呦，我熱切地寫信給你詳細介紹她。ThescientistwhoIadmiremostisTuYouyou.Knowingthatyouwanttolearnabouther,I’meagerlywritingtointroducehertoyouindetail.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step31.屠呦呦，出生于1930年，是中國第一位獲得諾貝爾獎的女科學家。TuYouyou,bornin1930,isthefirstChinesefemalescientisttoreceiveaNobelPrize.2.屠呦呦畢生致力于發(fā)現(xiàn)青蒿素，她的努力終于成功。Tudevotedallherlifetodiscoveringqinghaosu,andfinallyhereffortspaidoff.Para2：簡介及貢獻Expanding(擴詞成句）Step33.由于她的發(fā)現(xiàn)，現(xiàn)在全世界的瘧疾患者的生存率大大增加了。Thankstoherdiscovery,malariapatientsallovertheworldnowhavehadagreatlyincreasedchanceofsurvival.Para2：簡介及貢獻Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3

Para.3影響Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3我欽佩她，是因為她的努力和毅力激勵我不畏艱難去追求夢想，對我的學習和生活都產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響。Iadmireherbecausehereffortsandperseveranceinspiremetopursuemydreamsdespitevariouschallenges,makingabigdifferencetomystudyandlife.假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問誰是你最欽佩的科學家，請你詳細介紹。請你用英文回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.科學家的簡介；2.欽佩他/她的原因；3.他/她對你和世界的影響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thinking(審題）Step1DearPeter,

TuYouyou,bornin1930,isthefirstChinesefemalescientisttoreceiveaNobelPrize.Tudevotedallherlifetodiscoveringqinghaosu,andfinallyhereffortspaidoff.Thankstoherdiscovery,malariapatientsallovertheworldnowhavehadagreatlyincreasedchanceofsurvival.Iadmireherbecausehereffortsandperseveranceinspiremetopursuemydreamsdespitevariouschallenges,makingabigdifferencetomystudyandlife.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(潤色定稿）Step5ThescientistwhoIadmiremostisTuYouyou.Knowingthatyouwanttolearnabouther,I’meagerlywritingtointroducehertoyouindetail.假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Simon寫信告訴你他沉迷于打籃球，每天花很多時間打球，結(jié)果家庭作業(yè)不能準時上交。父母和老師很不滿，要他放棄這個愛好，他很生氣。根據(jù)以下提示，請你就Simon的問題給他提一些有用的建議。1.認真計劃好自己的時間；2.不要放棄自己的愛好，也不要忘記學習；3.保持學習和愛好之間的平衡。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thinking(審題）Step1DearSimon,Knowingthat

,I’m

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.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearSimon,

Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,

youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(潤色定稿）Step5Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendmuchtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack來信向你求助，說進入高中后因為考試壓力大。晚上常要難以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼問題對健康和學習產(chǎn)生了不良影響。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2條建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

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.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnottheleast,an

examisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友英國交換生Lily正在中國學習漢語。她發(fā)郵件向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應(yīng)新的學習環(huán)境，很孤獨。請給她回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：表示理解給予安慰；2.提出建議并給出理由注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫1、交換生anexchangestudent;2、做某事很困難：havetroubledoingsth./haveproblemsdoingsth;3、適應(yīng)新的學習環(huán)境：adapttothenewlearningenvironment;4、很孤獨：Youfeellonely.（Youarealone你很孤單）DearLily,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearLily,

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Afterquicklyfinishingyourhomework,youwillhavetimetodowhatyouwanttodo.Secondly,youneedtomakesomefriends,withwhomyoucanshareyourfeelings.Don’tbeafraidtotalktoothers.Theyarefriendlyandwillingtohelpyou.What’smore,youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Lastbutnotleast,askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp,goouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood,whichwillhelpmesuittothenewenvironmentquickly.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假如你是李華，你的英國朋友San發(fā)來Email說，考試臨近時，他總會感到焦慮，請你給他回復，內(nèi)容主要包括：1.向Sam表示問候和安慰。2.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSan,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,LiHua23DearSan,Knowingthatyoufeelanxiousbeforeexams,I’mwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime.Onlyinthiswaycanyouarrangetimeefficientlyandknowhowlongasinglereviewingtaskwilltake.Ifyoucanreviewalltheknowledge,youwon’tbesoconcerned.Secondly,youneedtokeepapositiveattitude.Thatistosay,youneedtohaveconfidenceinyourselfandlookateverythingpositively.Thirdly,itisadvisableforyoutolistentomusic,takeexerciseandcommunicatewithyourfriends,whichhelpsyoutogetridofpressure.Inaddition,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnotleast,anexamisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua讀后續(xù)寫好難不想寫看不懂不會寫無從下手看到讀后續(xù)寫的你“兩個讀，一個寫”一讀前文理情節(jié)二讀段首續(xù)發(fā)展三寫后文重表達“讀”什么？(5W1H)When

ithappened?Whereithappened? Whoisinvolved?Whathappened?Whyithappened？Howtosolvetheproblem?Thevendor