人教版高中英語選擇性必修第二冊UNIT1 Part 4 Writing練習(xí)含答案

Part4Writing關(guān)于科學(xué)精神的寫作寫作題目假設(shè)你校下個月要舉行科技節(jié),現(xiàn)面向全體學(xué)生征文,請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勀銓茖W(xué)精神的見解。要點包括:1.你認(rèn)為科學(xué)精神包括哪些品質(zhì);2.列舉兩個相關(guān)的科學(xué)家;3.作為學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣對待科學(xué)精神。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

思路點撥遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞填空1.vt.處理;操縱

2.n.導(dǎo)彈

3.vt.&vi.減少;降低

4.adv.此外;再者

5.adj.生動的;鮮明的;豐富的

答案1.handle2.missile3.decrease4.furthermore5.vividⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子第一段:闡述對科學(xué)精神的理解AsfarasI'mconcerned,thescientificspiritincludessome(基本的品質(zhì)).

(2)Scientistsshould(投入并且有創(chuàng)造力).

(3)Scientistsmust(有豐富的想象力).

第二段:列舉偉大的科學(xué)家(4)BecauseofQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,China(成為一個如此強大的國家)intheworldinashorttime.

(5)ThehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedhas(減少了……的數(shù)量)thehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.

第三段:學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣對待科學(xué)精神Asstudents,weshouldapplythescientificspirittoourstudy,(以便)wecanhandlethedifficultiesandproblemswemeetwith.

答案(1)essentialqualities(2)bedevotedandcreative(3)haveavividimagination(4)becamesuchapowerfulcountry(5)decreasedthenumberof(6)sothat2.句式升級(7)用without短語把句(4)變?yōu)槭褂煤钐摂M語氣的句子,表示“如果沒有……的話,中國就不會……”

(8)把句(5)變?yōu)閺娬{(diào)句,強調(diào)主語

答案(7)WithoutQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,Chinawouldn'thavebecomesuchapowerfulcountryintheworldinashorttime.(8)ItisthehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedthathasdecreasedthenumberofthehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.連句成篇AsfarasI'mconcerned,thescientificspiritincludessomeessentialqualities.Scientistsshouldbedevotedandcreative.Furthermore,theymusthaveavividimagination.Forinstance,withoutQianXuesen'sdevotedworkonmissilesandrockets,Chinawouldn'thavebecomesuchapowerfulcountryintheworldinashorttime.Similarly,itisthehybridriceYuanLongpingdevelopedthathasdecreasedthenumberofthehungrypeoplearoundtheworldgreatly.Asstudents,weshouldapplythescientificspirittoourstudy,sothatwecanhandlethedifficultiesandproblemswemeetwith.寫作積累關(guān)于議論文的增分佳句1.開頭:引出話題,提出論點①Thereisnodoubtthatpositiveattitudesandvaluesareboundtomakeabigdifferencetoeveryone.毫無疑問,積極的態(tài)度和價值觀必然會對每個人產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。②Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat...Butitiswellknownthattheopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.人們普遍擔(dān)憂……的問題。但是眾所周知,關(guān)于這個熱門話題的觀點因人而異。2.主體:分層論述,闡明觀點①Amajorityofpeopleapproveoftheopinionthat...Fromtheirpointofview,therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitude,whichareasfollows:inthefirstplace...;furthermore...大多數(shù)人都贊同這種觀點……從他們的角度來看,有兩個因素促成了這種態(tài)度,如下:首先……;此外……。②Onthecontrary,somepeopledifferintheiropinionsonthismatter.Theyholdtheviewthat...Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...相反,有些人在這件事上意見不一。他們認(rèn)為……。一方面……。另一方面……。3.結(jié)尾:總結(jié)全文,亮明己見①Thesescientistswhomadeexcellentcontributionstohumanbeingssetgoodexamplestousstudents.這些為人類做出卓越貢獻的科學(xué)家為我們學(xué)生樹立了良好的榜樣。②Notonlyshouldweshowrespectforthegreatscientists,butwealsoshouldlearnthescientificspiritfromthem.我們不僅要尊重偉大的科學(xué)家,而且要向他們學(xué)習(xí)科學(xué)精神。實戰(zhàn)演練(2022河北保定期末)假設(shè)你是李華。為了響應(yīng)國家“了解中國科技發(fā)展的偉大成就,堅定文化自信”的號召,你校計劃舉辦一場主題為“WhatMakesaGreatScientist?”的演講比賽,請你寫一篇英語演講稿參賽。內(nèi)容包括:1.列舉一位偉大的科學(xué)家并介紹其偉大之處;2.你的感想。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

讀后續(xù)寫寫作題目閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。EmilyWhitewasbornseventeenyearsagowithsomanybirthproblemsinherbody.Someofherorgans,bonesandmuscleswereoutofshape.Nooneexpectedhertosurvive.Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.InEmilyWhite'shometown,therewasayearlyperformanceintheschoolauditorium(禮堂).IthadbeenperformedforsomanyyearsandactuallyhadbecomeoneofthemostimportanteventsoftheChristmasseasonformanyofthetown'speople.Manypeopletriedoutforiteachyearbutsomanywereturnedaway.Itcouldonlyincludethemostexcellentpeopleinthefield.Emilyhadabeautifulsingingvoice.LastyearshewenttoMrs.Owens—hermusicteachertoasktojoinintheperformance.Withoutlettinghersing,Mrs.OwenstookalookatEmily'sbodyandsaid,“Child,youarenotsuitable.Everyonewouldstareatyouandthatwouldmakeyouuncomfortable.Itwouldmakethemuncomfortable,too.”Withoutsingingasinglenote,Emilywassentbackthroughthedoorofthechoral(合唱的)room.Hurtandupset,shedecidednevertotryoutagain.ButMrs.Owensthenretired.Thisyear,therecameanewmusicteacher,Mr.Butler.HeheardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry.Emilydidn'twanttoberejectedagain,soshehesitatedalittleaboutit.AsEmilystruggled,thedoorwaspushedopenandMr.Butlercalled,“Emily,you'renext.”Althoughkindofnervous,EmilydidasMr.Butlertoldher.Mr.ButlersatatthepianotoaccompanyEmily.WhenEmilyfinishedhertrialperformance,shethankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Emilycouldn'tsleepthatnight.Shewassufferingfromthefeelingsthatshewasnotsuitableandthegreatneedtobeaccepted.Bythenextmorning,herstomachwaseveninpainbecauseofstress.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.

Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.

文本分析初識文本重點詞匯1.outofshape變形的;不健康,身體不好2.makeit幸免于難,渡過難關(guān)3.recognizev.認(rèn)出4.performancen.表演5.tryoutfor...參加……選拔(或試演)6.turnaway把……拒之門外7.rejectvt.拒絕接受,不予考慮8.hesitatev.猶豫,遲疑不決9.strugglev.掙扎;斗爭10.sufferfrom...受……之苦;遭受……11.inpain疼痛;在痛苦中障礙詞匯accompanyvt.為……伴奏長難句原句Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance.分析本句為并列復(fù)合句,but連接兩個并列分句。第二個分句中,withherstrangebodyfigure作原因狀語。譯文她的確活了下來,但由于她奇怪的體形,每個人甚至從遠處都能認(rèn)出她。故事要素深研文本預(yù)測情節(jié)發(fā)展第一段:第二天,Emily緊張地瀏覽合唱室門上的名單(首句)→Emily被選上→Emily心情復(fù)雜,興奮之余流露出不自信→Mr.Butler對Emily說了一番話,引導(dǎo)Emily接下來堅定信心,刻苦訓(xùn)練第二段:終于到了演出那天(首句)→Emily走上舞臺后觀眾因她的外表而作出不好的回應(yīng)→Emily不受影響,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,觀眾的態(tài)度發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變→Emily戰(zhàn)勝自己,完成蛻變遣詞造句1.在橫線上填入適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~(1)toone's讓某人驚訝的是

(2)adj.神秘的

(3)remain保持冷靜

(4)withallone's全心全意地

(5)come遇到

(6)beusedsth.習(xí)慣于某事

(7)one'sbreath屏息

(8)break突然開始

答案(1)surprise(2)mysterious(3)calm(4)heart(5)across(6)to(7)hold(8)into2.完成句子(9)Shewas(喜出望外)but(心存疑慮).

(10)Shehitherhandhard(卻發(fā)現(xiàn))shewasn'tdreaming.

(11)ThenMr.Butlerwalkedoutoftheroom(面帶微笑).

(12)Emilywas(深受鼓舞),andshe(堅定地點點頭)andpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.

(13)(一……就)appearingonthestage,shewas(迎接)scornfuleyes.

(14)Suddenly,theaudience(爆發(fā)出)thunderousapplause.

(15)Mr.Butlerwasmoved,andhegaveEmily(一個大大的擁抱).

(16)ThenheknewthatEmilyhad(戰(zhàn)勝她自己).

答案(9)overjoyed;doubtful(10)onlytofind(11)withasmile(12)greatlyencouraged;noddeddeterminedly(13)Upon/On;greetedwith(14)brokeinto(15)abighug(16)overcomeherself3.句式升級(17)用形容詞作狀語合并句(9)和句(10)

(18)用倒裝句改寫句(11)

(19)用過去分詞作狀語改寫句(12)

(20)用so...that...結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(15)

(21)用強調(diào)句改寫句(16),強調(diào)時間狀語

答案(17)Overjoyedbutdoubtful,shehitherhandhardonlytofindshewasn'tdreaming.(18)ThenoutoftheroomwalkedMr.Butlerwithasmile.(19)Greatlyencouraged,Emilynoddeddeterminedlyandpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.(20)Mr.ButlerwassomovedthathegaveEmilyabighug.(21)ItwasthenthatheknewthatEmilyhadovercomeherself.連句成篇Thenextday,Emilynervouslyglancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom.Tohersurprise,ontopofthelistwashername!Overjoyedbutdoubtful,shehitherhandhardonlytofindshewasn'tdreaming.ThenoutoftheroomwalkedMr.Butlerwithasmile.“Emily,wehaveanotherpieceofgoodnewsforyou,”hesaidinamysteriousvoice.“Wechooseyoutobetheleadsinger.Doyoubelieveinyourself?”Greatlyencouraged,Emilynoddeddeterminedlyandpromisedtopracticehardfortheperformance.Finally,thedayoftheperformancecame.Uponappearingonthestage,shewasgreetedwithscornfuleyes.Butremainingcalm,shebegantosingwithallherheart.Whoknewhowmanysuchsituationsshehadcomeacross?Shewasreallyusedtoit.Whenshefinishedhersong,therewasamomentofsilence,asiftheworldwereholdingitsbreath.Suddenly,theaudiencebrokeintothunderousapplause.Mr.Butlerwassomovedthathegaveherabighug.ItwasthenthatheknewthatEmilyhadovercomeherself.寫作積累與“神態(tài)描寫”相關(guān)的表達1.臉上激動的表情:anexpressionofexcitementonone'sface2.堅定的眼神:adeterminedlook3.滿意的微笑/神情:asmile/lookofsatisfaction4.燦爛的微笑:abrilliantsmile5.拉著長臉:drawalongface6.怒視某人:glareatsb.7.怒火燃燒的眼神:alookofburninganger8.因憤怒而顫抖:tremblewithanger9.她的臉上浮現(xiàn)一絲微笑。Asmil