高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國(guó)）09慰問(wèn)信

09慰問(wèn)信（2013年，山東卷）假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)雙下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：1.未及時(shí)回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本書面表達(dá)考查提綱類作文。從寫作要點(diǎn)和得分點(diǎn)來(lái)看，考生應(yīng)在宏觀上把握書信體寫作的要求，如格式、文體等，寫作段落以三段式為宜，首段體現(xiàn)問(wèn)候、寫信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可詢問(wèn)Tom暑假里的打算，體現(xiàn)書信體的交際性；而中間段具體交待未及時(shí)回信的原因、假期的打算?？忌谖⒂^層面上應(yīng)具體把握寫作的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言，做到句子之間有效的連接，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，多用doing及物做主語(yǔ)，句子加半句原因、結(jié)果、目的等具體細(xì)節(jié)的解釋、利用簡(jiǎn)單而有效的中文思路擴(kuò)展英文細(xì)節(jié)?？忌裟茉趯懽鞑糠肿龅絻?nèi)容充實(shí)符合要求、語(yǔ)言精彩與眾不同、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰一目了然，相信這樣的文章能讓考生獲得一個(gè)相對(duì)滿意的成績(jī)。【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】此范文表達(dá)流暢，語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。其中值得學(xué)習(xí)的句型有：不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)：Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和定語(yǔ)從句：Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.【經(jīng)典套路】第一段：?jiǎn)柡?寫信背景+寫信目的第二段：“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分第四段：補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明+客套話慰問(wèn)信（含抗“疫”慰問(wèn)信）開頭句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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句子

(your

teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

I

amtohearabout

sth.

(yourloss

…)4.

Knowingyoursituation,

I

feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中間段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特別能理解你現(xiàn)在的感覺，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和時(shí)間3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是眾所周知，做...本身就極其困難4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.為了準(zhǔn)備這次...,你已經(jīng)盡了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的錯(cuò)結(jié)尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

If

I

candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.（交代事由）It’sunderstandableforyouto.（表明主要觀點(diǎn)）However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.（提出建議）First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto（直面）theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具體實(shí)情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(進(jìn)一步安慰并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供幫助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表達(dá)愿望與祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________一、題型特點(diǎn)慰問(wèn)信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天災(zāi)人禍的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類信要寫得及時(shí)、簡(jiǎn)明扼要，感情要真誠(chéng)，措辭要貼切，盡量以樂觀的口吻減輕親友的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方對(duì)日后煩人生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作充滿信心。二、寫作思路第一步：引出事實(shí)，表達(dá)惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰對(duì)方或鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方，預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái)；第三步：表達(dá)愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)驚人的、未曾預(yù)知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.聽到地震的消息我們很難過(guò)。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我們非常遺憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我無(wú)法告知你當(dāng)你聽到你發(fā)生事故我是多么難過(guò)。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我剛剛得知上個(gè)星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…當(dāng)我聽說(shuō)……時(shí)，我非常關(guān)心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我們是多么擔(dān)憂。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我們真心/祈禱你能很快完全康復(fù)。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我們真心希望你早日康復(fù)。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我們只有不屈不撓才能戰(zhàn)勝自然災(zāi)難。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.請(qǐng)向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的幫助，請(qǐng)告知。1．假定你是李華，得知你的筆友Mike的家鄉(xiāng)最近發(fā)生了大地震，損失慘重。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封慰問(wèn)信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你所了解的災(zāi)情；2.你的擔(dān)憂；3.你的幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，得知你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Bill的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生山火，房屋被燒毀，他現(xiàn)在住在臨時(shí)避難所。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件慰問(wèn)他，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.詢問(wèn)受災(zāi)情況，表示關(guān)心；2.鼓勵(lì)他振作起來(lái)，重建家園。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：山火mountainfireDearBill,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)好友Joe競(jìng)選籃球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)失敗了。他給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他很受挫敗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫一封慰問(wèn)信。要點(diǎn)：1.得知消息；2.安慰并鼓勵(lì)他；3.表達(dá)自己的關(guān)心和祝愿。提示：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)：不少于100詞（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.參考詞匯：競(jìng)選runforDearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Zack來(lái)郵件告訴你說(shuō)，他未能通過(guò)"朗誦唐詩(shī)"選拔賽。請(qǐng)你用英文給Zack寫一封慰問(wèn)郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.點(diǎn)明得知的情況；2.表達(dá)理解和安慰；3.鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)和連貫語(yǔ)。參考詞匯：

"朗誦唐詩(shī)"選拔賽thetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)男孩Trump得知自己身患癌癥（cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)（ACS）決定，每當(dāng)Trump收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就多為他分擔(dān)3美元的治療費(fèi)。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Trump寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.表亦鼓勵(lì)；3.祝他早日康復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假設(shè)你叫王紅，得知你的英國(guó)朋友Andrew的愛犬Sparky發(fā)生了意外永遠(yuǎn)離開了他，請(qǐng)你給他寫—封慰問(wèn)信。注意:1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假設(shè)你是李華。重陽(yáng)節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，校學(xué)生會(huì)決定組織大家去敬老院開展慰問(wèn)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給你的外國(guó)朋友一來(lái)自英國(guó)的交換生John寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括;1.活動(dòng)簡(jiǎn)介;2.具體安排（出發(fā)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等）。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫;3.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:重陽(yáng)節(jié)“DoubleNinthFestival”;敬老院“nursinghome”DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假定你是某國(guó)際中學(xué)的李華，將參加校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)慰問(wèn)社區(qū)的留守兒童。請(qǐng)寫信邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Cathy一起參加，內(nèi)容包括：1．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；2．發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。提示詞：留守兒童left-behindchildren注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCathy,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua9．假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國(guó)朋友Jenny的來(lái)信。她在信中說(shuō)，由于剛進(jìn)入高中，還不能適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境，不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給她回信。1.向Jenny表示問(wèn)候和慰問(wèn)。2.針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出幾點(diǎn)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Eric最近總吃外賣，導(dǎo)致消化不良。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示慰問(wèn)；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。得知英國(guó)好友Jim在他們學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的接力賽(therelayrace)中摔倒，導(dǎo)致腿部骨折，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一封郵件給他，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示慰問(wèn)；2.康復(fù)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)語(yǔ)已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua12．假設(shè)你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友David剛隨父母搬家并換了一所新學(xué)校，他希望在新學(xué)校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的幫助。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，提供在新學(xué)校交朋友的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)他搬新家表示慰問(wèn)；2.提供在新學(xué)校交朋友的建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假定你是李華，上周與交換生Henry一起參加為期三天的社區(qū)志愿者活動(dòng)，但Henry因故缺席了最后一天的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)向他介紹相關(guān)情況：1.表示慰問(wèn)；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及流程；3.個(gè)人感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1．DearMike,Howareyoudoing?Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.I’mreallyworriedaboutyou,yourfamilyandallyourfriendsthere.I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.Bestwishestoyouall!Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生給家鄉(xiāng)最近發(fā)生大地震的筆友Mike寫一封慰問(wèn)信，需描述自己所了解的災(zāi)情，表達(dá)擔(dān)憂，并說(shuō)明自己的幫助?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累難過(guò)的：sorry→sad,sorrowful糟糕的：terrible→dreadful,awful,horrible發(fā)生：happen→occur,takeplace困難的：difficult→hard,tough為……擔(dān)心：beworriedabout→beconcernedabout一定程度上：tosomeextent→insomeway,toacertainextent,tosomedegree克服：getover→conquer,overcome困難：difficulty→obstacle,barrier2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates.Tosomeextent,itmayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.拓展句：I’vecollectedsomedonationsfrommyclassmates,which,tosomeextent,mayhelpyougetoverthedifficulty.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Iamsorrytohearthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourhometown.(運(yùn)用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作hear的賓語(yǔ))[高分句型2]Icanimaginehowdifficultthismomentmustbeforyou.(運(yùn)用了連接副詞how引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作imagine的賓語(yǔ))[高分句型3]I’mcrossingmyfingersforyounowinthehopethatyouareallsafe.(運(yùn)用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作hope的同位語(yǔ))2．DearBill,Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.Areyouoryourfamilyinjured?Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.Howabouttheconditionsthere?Doyouhaveenoughclothesandfood?Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.Cheerup!I'msureyouwillrebuildyourhometownsoon.Anyway,tomorrowisanotherday!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。得知你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Bill的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生山火，房屋被燒毀，他現(xiàn)在住在臨時(shí)避難所，現(xiàn)要求你根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一封郵件慰問(wèn)他。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累非常：extremely→badly擔(dān)心的：worried→anxious損害：damage→harm導(dǎo)致：cause→leadto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yourhousewasburneddownandyouarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.拓展句：Becauseyourhousewasburneddown,youarelivinginthetemporaryshelternow.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Onhearingthenewsthatthedestructivemountainfirebrokeoutinyourhometown,Iamextremelyworriedaboutyou.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Thefirehascausedgreatdamagetoyourfamily,butIfirmlybelievethatallthingswillgetbetter.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）3．參考范文：DearJoe,Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeel.However,wecanlearnmorelessonsfromfailurethanfromsuccessMaybeitisagoodthingforyourfuture.Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.Learnfromtheexperienceandthinkaboutwhattodonext.Tobeexact,first,didyoumakegoodpreparationsforthecompetition?Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.Second,whatareyourstrengthsandshortcomings?Thisisanotherquestionforyoutothinkdeeplyabout,becauseitwillmakeyournextattemptmoresuccessful.Havefaithinyourself.Youareacapable,wisepersonandIbelieveinyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Joe寫封信，對(duì)他競(jìng)選籃球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)失敗，予以安慰。并簡(jiǎn)要分析失利的原因?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累競(jìng)爭(zhēng)（崗位）：competefor→runfor聰明的：smart→wise有能力的：able→capable確切地說(shuō)：exactlyspeaking=tobeexact2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities.拓展句：Itisveryimportanttobewellpreparedforallkindsofactivities,whichrangefrompracticingyourspeechestodrawingupafutureworkplan.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Nowwhatisimportantistocheerup.(運(yùn)用了由what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Iamsorrytohearthatyoufailedinyourattempttorunforthepositionofthebasketballteamleader.(運(yùn)用由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)4．DearZack,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.YouhavedevotedyourselftolearningChinese,especiallyChinesepoetry.Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficultforChinesethemselvestolearnChinesepoetrywell,muchlessaforeigner.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.It’snotyourfault.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給加拿大朋友Zack寫一封慰問(wèn)郵件，對(duì)他未能通過(guò)“朗誦唐詩(shī)”選拔賽表示理解和安慰。【寫作分析】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),少量一般過(guò)去時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.點(diǎn)明得知的情況；2.表達(dá)理解和安慰；3.鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）devoteto,asweallknow,madeeveryeffort,getreadyto,makeit,bestwishes,第三步：連詞成句1.I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.2.Topreparethecontest,youhavemadeeveryeffort.3.SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.4.Youarecertaintomakeitnexttime.5.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow,butyoustillhavemanychances.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：but,2.表因果關(guān)系：So,連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedthetryoutfor“TangPoetryRecitalContest”,whichmeansthatyouhavetowaitforanotheryeartoattendthenextone.（運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]SoIsincerelyhopethatyouwillnottakethistoheart,andwillgetreadytotryagain.（運(yùn)用that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）5．DearTrump,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.Pleasecheerupandholdon!I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.Don’tworryaboutthemoneybecausetheACSwilldonatethreedollarsforeachcomfortletteryoureceive.Iwillalsotellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyourtreatment.Hopeyouwillrecoversoon.Yours,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作。【寫作分析】題目要求假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Trump寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.表示鼓勵(lì)；3.祝他早日康復(fù)。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫?！镜湫途涫健窟@封書信的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)的拓展，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。I’msorrytohearthatyouhavegotacancerwhichhasbeenbringingyougreatpainButyoushouldrealizethatyouarenotaloneinfightingagainstthedisease.定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用；I’msurethatthedoctorswillfindthecuresoon.賓語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用。6．DearAndrew,I'msosorrytohearthenewsaboutyourdog.Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.Ourpetsgiveusmuchenjoymentandpleasantcompanionship.Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.Iknowthatourpetsarenotonlyanimalsbutalsoourchildren.Theyareloyaltousandwewillfinditinterestingtoplaywithourpets.Theycanknowouremotionsasamanthinks.Theycanbringusjoyandpositiveeffectsaswell.Ihopethegoodmemorieswilleasethefeelingsofloss.YourssincerelyWangHong【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作?！緦懽鞣治觥康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信：假設(shè)你叫王紅，得知你的英國(guó)朋友Andrew的愛犬Sparky發(fā)生了意外永遠(yuǎn)離開了他，請(qǐng)你給他寫—封慰問(wèn)信。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：sadnessandloneliness（悲傷孤獨(dú)）；enjoymentandpleasantcompanionship（快樂和陪伴）；warmgreeting（熱烈歡迎）；not…but（不是而是）；等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！镜湫途涫健勘疚膬?nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。同時(shí)文中使用高級(jí)句子。Asonewhohashadthesamesadexperienceoflosingapetdog,IknowsomethingofthesadnessandlonelinessyoufeelafterSparky'sdeath.使用了定語(yǔ)從句；Sparky'swarmgreetingofrunningcirclesaroundmewhenIarrivedisonethingIwillmiss.運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句。顯示出作者扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)功底。值得大家學(xué)習(xí)與借鑒。7．DearJohn,Nextweekend,anactivitythemedtheDoubleNinthFestivalwillbeheldbytheStudentUnion.Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.Thisyear,we'regoingtovisittheoldinthelocalnursinghome.Livingawayfromtheirchildren,theyoftenfeellonelyandunhappy.Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.We'llgatherattheschoolgateat8amnextSaturdaymorningandgobybus.Iwouldbegladifyoucouldcome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是李華。重陽(yáng)節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，校學(xué)生會(huì)決定組織大家去敬老院開展慰問(wèn)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給你的外國(guó)朋友一來(lái)自英國(guó)的交換生John寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累喜歡：beinto→befondof參觀：visit→payavisitto計(jì)劃：plan→arrange肯定：surely→definitely2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：FallingonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,theDoubleNinthFestivalisheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.拓展句：TheDoubleNinthFestival,whichfallsonSeptember9hofthelunarcalendar,isheldtoshowrespectandloveforoldpeople.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowingyou'reintotraditionalChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】Tocheerthemup,weplantobringsomeflowerstodecoratetheirroomsandgivesomeperformances,suchassinginganddancing,whichwillbesurelyfavoredbythem.（運(yùn)用了不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）8．DearCathy,Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolvolunteerassociationplanstovisittheleft-behindchildreninthecommunitythisweekend.Wearewonderingwhetheryoucanjoinus?Withtheirparentsworkingfaraway,thoseleft-behindchildrenareinneedofloveandcare.Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.Yourparticipationwillsurelyaddpleasuretothismeaningfulday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Cathy一起參加校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)慰問(wèn)社區(qū)的留守兒童活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累因此：Therefore→Thus計(jì)劃做：bescheduledtodo→plantodo玩得開心：havefun→enjoyoneself真誠(chéng)地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem.拓展句：Therefore,wearescheduledtodoourbitstohelpthem,whichcanmakethemfeelwarm.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Notonlywillwebringthemthecarefully-selectedgifts,butalsowewillhavefuntogetherbyplayinggamesandgivingperformances.(notonly…butalso連接句子時(shí)，notonly位于句首，該部分用部分倒裝)[高分句型2]Sinceyouhavealwaysbeenenthusiasticaboutvoluntarywork,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinplayingtheguitar.(運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句，不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ))9．DearJenny,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringthehighschool.Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.Youcanbuildupagoodrelationshipwiththembyrespectingyourteachersandhelpingyourclassmates.Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.Inaddition,itisalsohelpfultodevelopvarioushobbies,whichcanmakeyourlifemorecolorful.Allinall,Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourhighschoollife.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求給朋友提出建議幫助她更好的適應(yīng)高中生活?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion適應(yīng)：adjustto→adaptto此外：beisides→what’smore重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展并列句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementanditwillrelieveyourpressure.拓展句：Besides,focusingonyourstudieswillgiveyouasenseofachievementwhichwillrelieveyourpressure.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice,whichcanhelpyouadjusttohighschoollifefaster.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。）【高分句型2】Firstly,itisimportantthatyoushouldlearnhowtogetalongwithyourteachersandclassmates.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。）10．DearEric,I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.Firstly,youshouldstopeatingtakeoutfood.Instead,it’sagoodideatocookbyyourself.Inaddition,regularexerciseisalsonecessarybecauseworkingoutproperlyhelpsyoudigestbetter.Lastbutnotleast,keepagoodmoodeveryday,whichcanpositivelyaffectyourphysicalhealth.Ifyoustilldon’tgetbetteraftertwodays,youshouldseeadoctor.Ihopemyadvicewillworkforyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Eric最近總吃外賣，導(dǎo)致消化不良。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，給出建議。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion緊急的：urgent→pressing獨(dú)自：byoneself→onone’sown此外：inaddition→moreover2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Iunderstandhowbaditis,soit’surgentforyoutomakesomechanges.拓展句：It’surgentforyoutomakesomechangesbecauseitisbadforyourhealth.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveadigestiveproblemthesedaysbecauseyouhaveeatentoomuchtakeoutfood.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)