閱讀與寫作學(xué)案- 高三英語上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項

閱讀與寫作學(xué)案Fallinginlovewithbiking愛上騎自行車1Thefirsttimemyparentswatchedmecompeteinamountainbikerace,theytriedtogetmetoquit.WhileIwasridingdownahill,Ihitahugerock,flewthroughtheairandcrashedtotheground.However,thiskindofthinghappensallthetime.IjustgotupasfastasIcould,gotbackonmybikeandkeptgoing.AndIwonthatrace,despitetakingquiteaspill!2Myearliestbikememoriesareofmyfathertakingmeoutforridesinthechildseatonthebackofhisten-speed.Acoupleyearslater,Igotmyfirstbike.Butmyparentswouldn'tletmeridemorethanafewblocksfromthehouseuntilIwasten.Themorningofmytenthbirthday,Igotmyeldersistertotakemeonalongride.Weendedupatmyaunt'shouse.AlthoughIwastotallyexhaustedandeverymuscleinmybodyached,Ididn'tcare.Iknewthatthiswasonlythebeginning,andallIcouldthinkaboutwaswheremynexttripwouldtakeme.3WhenIwasintheeighthgrade,ourgymteacher,MrRaines,sentoutaflyeraboutstartingamountainbikeclub.Irantohisofficebetweenclassesandsignedup.Overthenextfewmonths,thetenofuswhojoinedtheclubworkedonourbikingskills.Besidestakingusoutriding,MrRainestaughtusaboutbikesafety,andshowedushowtoproperlymaintainandrepairourbikes.Healsohelpedusformamountainbiketeam.Atfirst,wecompetedagainsteachother.Later,wewentupagainstotherschools.Wecontinuedtotrainandcompeteallthroughhighschool.4Bikinghasbeenthemajorfocusofmylife.Thoseearlytripsonthebackofmyfather'sbikegotmestarted.Thelongrideswithmysisterincreasedmyenthusiasm.Then,thetrainingandcompetitionsinthebikeclubguaranteedthatIwouldturnintoalifelongbikefan.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhaveahobbylikethis——somethingthatisgoodforthemandmakesthemhappy.ActivityAReadingforunderstanding語篇解碼（一）主題歸納Whatisthetextmainlyabout?（二）結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理Fillintheblanksaccordingtothetextwithonlyonewordforeachblank.（續(xù)表）ActivityBReadingforwriting一、詞塊積累competeinamountainbikerace參加山地自行車比賽crashtotheground摔倒在地allthetime一直；始終endup結(jié)束startamountainbikeclub成立一個山地自行車俱樂部signup報名howtoproperlymaintainandrepairone'sbike如何正確保養(yǎng)和維修某人的自行車formamountainbiketeam組建一支山地自行車隊competeagainsteachother相互競爭goupagainstotherschools與其他學(xué)校競爭increaseone'senthusiasm增加某人的熱情turnintoalifelongbikefan成為一個終生的自行車迷begoodfor有益于二、典句賞析1.讓步狀語從句AlthoughIwastotallyexhaustedandeverymuscleinmybodyached,Ididn'tcare.盡管我筋疲力盡，渾身肌肉酸痛，但我不在乎?！军c石成金】本句中，Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，強調(diào)主句內(nèi)容。在該句型中，主句前不可以加but，這是一個易錯點，寫作中使用該句型時應(yīng)多加注意。【例句仿寫】盡管我們彼此很少見面，但我們?nèi)允呛门笥选?.定語從句Ithinkeveryoneshouldhaveahobbylikethis——somethingthatisgoodforthemandmakesthemhappy.我認為每個人都應(yīng)該有這樣的愛好——使他們獲益并讓他們感到快樂的愛好?！军c石成金】本句用了一個that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，用來說明人們應(yīng)該擁有使他們獲益并讓他們感到快樂的愛好。由于先行詞為不定代詞something，所以關(guān)系代詞只能用that而不能用which。【例句仿寫】當你正承受著學(xué)習(xí)的壓力時，你可以試著找一些能幫助你放松自己的東西。三、寫作假定你是李華，山地自行車俱樂部最近組織了一場山地自行車比賽,作為自行車愛好者,你很想?yún)⒓?可是父母擔心這會影響你的學(xué)習(xí)并且擔心你的安全,不同意你參加。請你寫一封信勸說父母同意你去參加，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達參加山地自行車比賽的愿望；2.闡述騎自行車的益處；3.懇請父母同意自己去參加比賽。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.至少需要使用一個本文中解析過的句式；4.注意段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系。DearMomandDad,Yourssincerely,Yourbelovedson,LiHua寫作導(dǎo)引本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封勸說信（persuasiveletter）。學(xué)生需要表達自己非常想去參加山地自行車比賽的愿望，客觀分析和闡釋參加山地自行車比賽的益處并懇請父母支持自己熱愛騎行的愛好，同意自己去參加比賽，并且需要使用讓步狀語從句或定語從句。這些寫作要點和要求與所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。素材積累本文是基于同一主題的閱讀和寫作，我們可以通過學(xué)習(xí)、模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。（一）指出問題、表明寫信目的1.Ifeelalittleupsettolearnthatyoudon'twantmetotakepartinthemountainbikerace.得知你們不想讓我參加山地自行車比賽，我有點不開心。2.Knowingthatyoudon'tallowmetoparticipateinthecompetition,Iamwritingtoexpressmyownthoughts.得知你們不允許我參加比賽，我寫信來表達我自己的想法。3.Iamwritingtopersuadeyoutoallowmetocompeteinthemountainbikerace.我寫信是為了說服你們允許我參加山地自行車比賽。（二）闡述勸說的具體理由1.Thereisnodenyingthatgoodhobbiesmakelifemorecolorfulandenjoyable.不可否認，好的愛好使生活更加豐富多彩和快樂。2.Bikingasakindofexercisewillbeanidealopportunityformetokeepfit.騎自行車作為一種運動，對我來說將是保持健康的理想機會。3.Althoughcompetinginamountainbikeracemaybeabitdangerous,Iamnotscaredatall.雖然參加山地自行車比賽可能有點危險，但我一點也不害怕。4.ThemostimportantthingisthatIwilllearntoprotectmyself.最重要的事情是，我會學(xué)會保護自己。5.Inaddition,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutmysafetyatallasourcoachwillteachusaboutbikesafety,andproperprotectionandsafetymeasureswillbedonebeforeeachexercise.此外，你們完全不必擔心我的安全，因為我們的教練會教我們關(guān)于自行車的安全知識，并且每次訓(xùn)練前都會做好適當?shù)谋Ｗo和安全措施。6.Asformystudy,IamsurethatIcankeepabalancebetweenstudyandtraining,whichwillbearrangedduringthetimeofafter-classphysicalactivitiesonceaweek.至于學(xué)習(xí)，我確信我能在學(xué)習(xí)和訓(xùn)練之間保持平衡。我們的訓(xùn)練每周一次，被安排在課外體育活動時間。（三）總結(jié)核心觀點、表達期望1.Inaword,exerciseisasusefulandimportantasourstudy.總之，鍛煉和學(xué)習(xí)一樣有用且重要。2.Inconclusion,Iwouldbemorethanhappyifyoucouldtakemythoughtsintoconsideration.總之，如果你們能考慮我的想法，我將會非常高興。3.Therefore,Ireallyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandallowmetotakepartintherace.因此，我非常希望你們能夠站在我的立場上考慮，允許我參加比賽。寫作框架本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封勸說信。根據(jù)任務(wù)中的要求，語篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定為“引出問題+寫作目的+闡述勸說的具體理由+總結(jié)并表達期望”。文章的框架如下：DearMomandDad,Ifeelalittleupsettolearnthat...ButIreallywanttogoforit.Thus,I'mwritingto...（引出問題+寫作目的）Firstofall,althoughcompetinginamountainbikeracemaybeabitdangerous,...Inaddition,properprotectionandsafetymeasureswillbedone...Furthermore,Iamsure...（闡述勸說的具體理由）Inshort,Ireallyhopethat...（總結(jié)并表達期望）Yourssincerely,Yourbelovedson,LiHua興趣與愛好ActivityAReadingforunderstanding語篇解碼（一）主題歸納Itmainlytellsusthereasonswhytheauthorlovesbiking.（二）結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理1.crashed2.exhausted3.ached4.skills5.safety6.team7.other8.started9.enthusiasm10.lifelongActivityBReadingforwriting二、典句賞析例句仿寫1.Althoughwerarelyseeeachother,wearestillverygoodfriends.2.Whenyouaresufferingthestressfromstudy,youcouldtrytofindsomethi