應(yīng)用文類(lèi)型4：咨詢信

咨詢信【試題探究】

假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國(guó)旅游。請(qǐng)你給TravelAmerica國(guó)際旅行社寫(xiě)一封電子郵件進(jìn)行咨詢,內(nèi)容如下:

1.請(qǐng)其推薦合適的旅游路線;

2.請(qǐng)其告知相關(guān)的旅游費(fèi)用。注意:

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Step

1:審題布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.寫(xiě)信目的2.咨詢的內(nèi)容:旅游路線,旅游費(fèi)用Step

2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:我打算在美國(guó)住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨(dú)特的自然風(fēng)景,品味一下當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗。一般表達(dá):I______________________________________,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,_____________Ihopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.intendtostayinAmericaforabout10daysduringwhich

要點(diǎn)2:除此之外,我想了解路線的價(jià)格,包括所有旅游費(fèi)用。一般表達(dá):Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(jí)(分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ))Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,________________________________.coveringallthetravelingexpensesStep

3:銜接成篇DearSir/Madam,

I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.

IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開(kāi)篇表明寫(xiě)信目的IamLiHua,aChinesestudent,studyinginNewZealand.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomeinformationregarding/concerningtravel.我是李華,一名在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)的中國(guó)學(xué)生。我寫(xiě)信是想詢問(wèn)一些關(guān)于旅行的信息。2.篇中——陳述要咨詢的內(nèi)容①Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknowthedeparturetimeandtravelingroute.首先,我很想知道出發(fā)時(shí)間和旅行路線。②Secondly,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?其次,我需要支付多少旅費(fèi)?③Thirdly,isthereanythingIshouldpayspecialattentionto?第三,有什么我應(yīng)該特別注意的嗎?3.結(jié)尾——表感謝,盼回復(fù)①I(mǎi)wouldbemuchappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewiththeaboveinformationandyoucancontactmevia1234456@df.erf.如果您能提供我上述信息,我將不勝感激,您可以通過(guò)1234456@df.erf與我聯(lián)系。②Thankyouandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝你,如能及時(shí)回復(fù)我將不勝感激。【拓展訓(xùn)練】

假定你是李華,高考過(guò)后計(jì)劃暑假期間到美國(guó)去參加中美學(xué)生交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封咨詢信,詢問(wèn)相關(guān)事宜。內(nèi)容包括:

1.對(duì)申請(qǐng)者的相關(guān)要求;

2.課程的相關(guān)事宜;

3.住宿和吃飯的條件;

4.需要做的相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,

Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.

Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandaccommodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtom