廣東省深圳高三下學(xué)期二模英語應(yīng)用文解析講義

24深圳二模應(yīng)用文解析第四部分寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第一節(jié)(滿分15分)假定你是李華，你班在校英語戲劇節(jié)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，外教James打算為此慶祝，并委托你調(diào)查同學(xué)們喜歡的方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果，給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)感謝;2.提出個(gè)人建議；3.說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJames,Yourssincerely,LiHua審題1.單向的表達(dá)感謝及理由；（段一）2.扼要的圖表調(diào)查結(jié)果描述；（段二）3.個(gè)人抽取其中一項(xiàng)或多項(xiàng)推薦給外教James;（段二）4.并對(duì)推薦項(xiàng)目輔以理由；（段二）5.禮貌性收尾和回扣首段。（段三）句型積累一、表示感謝1.Iamwritingtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudeforyourintentiontocelebrateourclass’sfirstprizewin(n.勝利)attheschool’sEnglishDramaFestival.Itisamomentofprideforallofus,andyoursupportmeansalot.2.Thankyoufortrustingmewiththetaskofsurveyingourclassmates’preferredactivitiestocelebrateoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearethesurveyfindingsalongwithmypersonalopinion.3.It’smyhonortoextendourheartfeltthanksforyourgenerousoffertocelebrateoursuccess.Yoursupportandenthusiasmaretrulyinspiring.二、描述圖表1.BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.2.The‘outingatweekends’wasthetopchoiceforcelebration,favoredbyasignificantmajoritywith88%ofthevotes.Sharingfoodanddrinkscameinsecond,preferredby32%,whilewatchingEnglishmoviesattractedtheleastinterestat59%.3.Thesurveyrevealsthat88%ofstudentsarekeenoncelebratingwithaweekendouting.Sharingfoodanddrinksalsofoundfavor,accountingfor59%.Ontheotherhand,watchingEnglishmoviesfellbehind,withonly32%ofthevotes.4.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively（分別）,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.三、建議+理由1.Mysuggestionisinlinewith（與……一致)thedesireofmanytoengageinamoreactiveandoutdooractivity,whichwouldserveasarefreshingbreakfromouracademicroutine.Moreover,anoutingallowsustorelaxandcelebrateoursuccessinawaythatisbothhealthyandinclusive(包容性強(qiáng)的;各種人都有的),acmodating(acmodate熟詞生義考慮到;顧及)avarietyofinterestsandpreferences.2.Iwouldoptfor(選擇)the“outingatweekends”asthecelebrationmethodduetoitsoverwhelmingpopularity(壓倒性人氣很受歡迎)andtheopportunityitpresentsforfostering(促進(jìn)，培養(yǎng))camaraderie(/?k?m??rɑ?d?ri/友情)andcreatinglastingmemoriesamongstudents.Additionally,itoffersachanceforrelaxationandpersonalinteraction,whichcanbebothrefreshingandeducational.3.Mypreferenceagreeswith(與……一致)themajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews(壯麗的風(fēng)景).Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable.四、禮貌回扣1.Ieagerlyawaityourthoughtsonthissuggestionandlookforwardtocelebratingourvictorytogether.2.Thanksagainforyourthoughtfulgesture.Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!3.I’llappreciateitifyoucantakemysuggestionintoaccount.4.Iamconfidentthatanoutingwillnotonlybeadelightfulexperiencebutalsoameaningfulwaytocelebrateoursuccess.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthisproposal.官方范文：DearJames,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.WearegratefulforyourenthusiasmincelebratingourclasswinningthefirstprizeattheEnglishDramaFestival.Yoursupportmeansalottous!BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.Mypreferenceisinlinewiththemajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews.Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable.Thanksagainforyourthoughtfulgesture.Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!Yourssincerely,LiHua我希望這封郵件能讓你感覺良好。我們非常感謝您對(duì)我們班在英國戲劇節(jié)上獲得一等獎(jiǎng)的熱情慶祝。您的支持對(duì)我們意義重大！根據(jù)我的調(diào)查，88%的人熱衷于周末出游，59%的人喜歡英國電影之夜，其次是32%的人喜歡美食派對(duì)。我的偏好與大多數(shù)人一致，所以我建議沿著附近的綠道徒步旅行，那里有活潑的植物和迷人的景色。這樣的郊游非常適合我們從日常學(xué)習(xí)中解脫出來，加強(qiáng)友誼，讓我們的成功更加難忘。再次感謝你周到的姿態(tài)。期待我們激動(dòng)人心的慶?；顒?dòng)！Anothertwoversions.Thankyoufortrustingmetosurveyourclassmates’preferredactivitiesforcelebratingoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearetheresultsandmypersonalopinion.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.Tomeetthevariedinterests,Iwouldremendweorganizeanoutdoorgatheringatthecitypark,wherewecanbringalongvariousfoodsanddrinkstoshare.Ibelievethisplanwouldideallysatisfythoseseekinganadventureandthosewhowishtorelaxandenjoygoodpany.Thankyouonceagainforyoursupportandforconsideringmysuggestion!(116詞)Yourssincerely,LiHuaHopethisemailfindsyouwell.I’mLiHua,writingtosharesomeconcernsregardingourEnglishdramaelectiveclass.Ithasetomyattentionthatthechoiceofscriptsmaynotbeengagingenoughforallstudents,andthetimingseemstoconflictwithotherimportantschoolactivities.Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeselectingvari