Unit 2 Lets play sports.-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年七年級上冊英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）

第頁Unit2Let’splaysports！單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度體育運(yùn)動我最喜歡的運(yùn)動本單元的話題是“體育運(yùn)動”，要求學(xué)生能簡單介紹自己或他人喜愛的體育運(yùn)動，本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能根據(jù)相關(guān)信息提示簡單地介紹自己或他人喜愛或者擅長的體育運(yùn)動。內(nèi)容包括喜愛的原因、能力、身體健康情況、運(yùn)動的頻率以及理想和崇拜的體育人物等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點：1.能用一般現(xiàn)在時介紹自己或朋友喜愛或者擅長的體育運(yùn)動；2.能用多種表達(dá)方式表達(dá)喜好；3.能正確使用標(biāo)點符號：4.能正確書寫英語句子。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）【詞匯積累】1.walkingn.散步,步行2.timen.次,回3.tennisn.網(wǎng)球4.volleyballn.排球5.enjoyv.享受...的樂趣;欣賞;喜愛6.goswimming去游泳7.playern.運(yùn)動員8.membern.成員【句型積累】1.Ilovesports.2.Ilike…verymuch.3.Ienjoy4.…ismyfavouritesport.5.…ismyfavourite...player/star.6.Ilikewalking/swimming/...7.Ilikeplayingfootball/basketball/volleyball/tennis.8.Ioftenplay...with9.…make(s)mehappy/feelgreat.10.Itisfun.【句式積累】1.Ilikesports,Ilikefootball(basketball:根據(jù)作文,填具體的運(yùn)動)verymuch.2.YaoMing(根據(jù)作文,填最喜歡運(yùn)動員是誰)ismyfavouritebasketballplayer.Heplaysbasketballverywell.Heismyhero.(這三句話可以放一起寫)3.Heisamemberofourschoolbasketball

team.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhis

friendsafterschool.(日常如何)4.HestudiesEnglishinhisfreetime.He

alsoenjoyslisteningtomusic.Becauseit

makeshimhappy.(業(yè)余時間)5.IwanttobeabasketballplayerwhenI

growup.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.

(夢想)6.Ilovemusic.SometimesIlistentomusic,

becauseitmakesmefeelgreat.(音樂)7.Ilovereading.Ireadalotofinteresting

books.Readingisfun.(閱讀)請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，介紹一下你的幾位同學(xué)的愛好。NameJimbasketballtabletennis(boring)Davefootballtennis(difficult)Tomtabletennisfootball(notinteresting)要求：1.要點齊全，語句通順，語意連貫；詞數(shù)60左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】Jim,DaveandTomaremyfriends.Theylikeplayingsports.Jimlikesplayingbasketball,buthedoesn'tlikeplayingtabletennis.It'sboringforhim.Davelikesplayingfootball.Hedoesn’tlikeplayingtennis.It’sdifficultforhim.Tomdoesn’tlikeplayingfootball.Forhim,it'snotinteresting.Helikesplayingtabletennis.一、詞匯。(每小題1.5分。共15分)A.根據(jù)句意及中文提示完成單詞。1.Who(其他)knowstheanswertothequestion?2.YaoMingisagreatbasketballplayer.Heismy(偶像).3.My(夢想)istostudyatTsinghuaUniversityoneday.4.Canwewatchthefootball(比賽)thisevening?5.Tonyisgoodat(畫畫).HeisintheArtClubatschool.B.用所給單詞的適當(dāng)形式填空。6.ThatsongmakesPeter(feel)great.7.Howmanybasketball(club)arethereinyourschool?8.Jackisafootball(play).Heplaysfootballverywell.9.Andy(watch)TVeveryday.10.Simon(notdo)houseworkonSundays.二、單項選擇。(每小題3分，共30分)()1.Mybrotherlovesplayingvolleyball.Look!Heisplayingwithvolleyballoverthere.A.the;aB.a;theC./;/D./;a()2.Mysisterthepianoverywell,butshedoesn'thavetimetoplaythesedays.A.willplayB.playingC.playedD.plays()3.—Lucy,doyouwanttojointheArtClubortheChessClub?—.Ilikedrawingpictures.A.Yes,IdoB.TheArtClubC.No,Idon'tD.TheChessClub()4.I'mSunshineFootballTeam.A.thememberB.memberofC.amemberofD.amember()5.Whatabout?A.gowalkingB.goingwalkingC.gotowalkD.goingawalk()6.—Ifyoutryhard,yourdreamwill.——Yes,I.A.cometrue;willB.betruly;willC.cometrue;doD.betrue;do()7.IlivemyparentsSuzhounow.A.with;withB.with;inC.in;withD.in;in()8.MymotherlikeswatchingTV,butmyfatherlikeit.A.isB.isn'tC.don’tD.doesn't()9.—Jackenjoythegame?—Yes,he.A.Does;watching;doesB.Do;watch;doC.Do;watching;doD.Does;watch;does()10.HowdoyouitChinese?tell;inB.say;inC.say;withD.tell;with三、根據(jù)中文提示完成句子。(每小題3分，共l5分)1.杰克看上去很強(qiáng)壯而且他籃球打得非常好。Jackandheplaysbasketballverywell.2.林書豪是我最喜歡的籃球明星。JeremyLinisbasketballstar.3.他們經(jīng)常談?wù)撟闱虿⒃陔娨暽嫌^看足球比賽。Theyoftentalkaboutfootballand.4.瓶子里有許多牛奶。Thereismilkinthebottle.5.基蒂是舞蹈俱樂部的一名成員。KittyistheDancingClub.四、完形填空。(每小題2分，共20分)Iamastudent,Ihaveagoode-friend.HisnameisTony.Heisfrom1.HelivesinasmalltownnearLondon.HeisinClass4,Grade7.Heandhisclassmatesarelearning.2intheirschool.HisChineseteacherisWangLan.Sheisverynice.ShecomesfromBeijing,Tonyhassomegoodfriends.3ofTony'sfriendsisJimmy.Jimmyistallandhe4blackhair.Heisgoodat5basketball.Heis6theschoolbasketballteam.Heplaysbasketballafterschooleveryday.Tony'ssisterisMary.She7ayellowdresssometimes.Shecan8Chinesewell.Sheisabeautifulgirl9glasses.Shelikesswimmingverymuch.SheisamemberofSunshineSwimmingClub.Maryisfriendlyand10.Tonyandhisfriendsalllikeher.()1.A.AmericaB.EnglandC.ChinaD.Japan()2.A.EnglishB.JapaneseC.ChineseD.French()3.A.TheoneB.TwoC.TheyD.One()4.A.hasB.haveC.isD.are()5.A.doingB.playingC.makingD.taking()6.A.ofB.atC.inD.for()7.A.putsonB.wearingC.beinD.wears()8.A.speakB.sayC.tellD.talk()9.A.wearsB.withC.onD.in()10.A.hardB.wellC.strongD.helpful(樂于助人的)五、根據(jù)首字母提示補(bǔ)全短文。(每空2分，共20分)Mybrotherisasportsfan(迷).Helikesw1allkindsofgames.Helikesbasketball,football,volleyball,badmintonandt2.Andheisgoodatfootball.Heisinhisschoolfootballteam.Mybrotherisalsoam3oftheFootballClub.Hetakesmoreexerciseintheclube4day.Whenhegoesshopping,healwaysbuysnewspapersa5sportsandheoftenr6sportsnews.Heusuallyplaysfootballw7hisfriendsafterschool,andhewantstob8afootballplayerinthefuture(將來).Mybrotheroftengoestothestadium(體育館)towatchthefootballm9onSaturday.Hed10wanttomiss(錯過)anywonderful(精彩的)ones.1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.答案一、A.1.else2.hero3.dream4.match5.drawingB.6.feel7.clubs8.player9.watches10.doesn'tdo二、1.D句意：我的弟弟喜愛打排球?？?！他正在那兒玩排球。play后接球類名詞不需要加冠詞，playwith后接球類名詞則需加冠詞。2.D句意：我妹妹彈鋼琴彈得很好，但她這些天沒有時間彈。說一個人在某方面做得好，用一般現(xiàn)在時。由從后句用的現(xiàn)在完成時可知，說的是目前情況，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時。3.B句意：“露西，你想要加入美術(shù)俱樂部還是象棋俱樂部?”“美術(shù)俱樂部。我喜歡畫畫。”該問句為選擇疑問句，因此其答句選擇其中的一個，而不是用yes或no來回答；又根據(jù)“我喜歡畫畫”可知答案選B。4.Camemberof……的一名成員。5.B“Whatabout…?”中about是介詞,后接動名詞;“go+doing”表示“去做”。6.A句意：“如果你努力嘗試，你的夢想會實現(xiàn)的?！薄笆堑模視?。”前一空考查“實現(xiàn)，成真”，應(yīng)用cometrue；后一空考查表示將來時的“能、會”，應(yīng)用will。前句是條件句，遵循的是“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。7.B句意：現(xiàn)在我與我的父母住在蘇州。livewithsb.insomeplace與某人一起住在某地。8.D句中謂語動詞like是實義動詞且主語myfather是第三人稱單數(shù),否定句中要用doesn't。9.A一般現(xiàn)在時的疑問句中主語Jack是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞enjoy是實義動詞，要借助助動詞does;enjoy后接動詞用固定結(jié)構(gòu)enjoydoingsth.。10.Bsay說,側(cè)重說話的內(nèi)容;tell告訴。表示“使用某種語言”用介詞in。三、1.looksverystrong2.myfavourite3.watchfootballmatchesonTV4.alotof5.amemberof四、1.B由下一句中的nearLondon可知,應(yīng)選England。2.C由下一句中的Chineseteacher可知,應(yīng)選Chinese。3.D由謂語動詞is可知，應(yīng)該是其中的一個，故用one來表示。4.A表示“有黑頭發(fā)”應(yīng)用實義動詞have，因主語he為第三人稱單數(shù)，故用has。5.Bbegoodat擅長于,后接動詞時應(yīng)用動詞-ing形式,且playbasketball是固定結(jié)構(gòu),故選playing。6.C表示“在?；@球隊”用介詞in。7.D表示“穿,戴”用動詞wear,she為第三人稱單數(shù),故用wears。8.A表示“說一門語言”用動詞speak。9.B分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語。10.D句意：瑪麗既友好又樂于助人。五、1.watching2.tennis3.member4.every5.about6.reads7.with8.be9.matches10.doesn't（一）假如你是湯姆，想去應(yīng)聘夏令營。請你根據(jù)表格中的信息發(fā)一封電子郵件，介紹你的個人情況，如學(xué)校、愛好及能力等。要求60詞左右，字跡清晰，條理清楚，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。NameAgeSchoolHobbyAbilityTom13No.2MiddleSchoolreading,playingbasketball,drawing（自擬兩點）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir,Ihopetojoinyoursummercamp.IthinkIcanhelpchildrenwithartandsports.I'dliketointroducemyself.MynameisTom.Iamthirteenyearsold.IamastudentatNo.2MiddleSchool.Iamfriendly.Ilikereadingbooks,playingbasketballanddrawing.Icanplayfootballandvolleyballwell.AndIcansingmanyEnglishsongs.Besides,I'mgoodatcomputers.IhopeIcangetthejob.Yours,Tom【范文點評】這是一片提綱作文，本文要求按所給的題目及提示的的開頭和結(jié)尾寫一篇文章，寫作中應(yīng)包含姓名，年齡，學(xué)校，愛好及自己會做的兩件事。注意上下文的過渡要符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c評】寫作時注意文章的內(nèi)容要包含提示的所有要點，可以結(jié)合實際談?wù)撘幌伦约簳龅膬杉拢陶Zlikedoing，喜歡做某事,begoodat,擅長……,運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。過渡詞besides(此外)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確。（二）假如你是趙江，劉偉和趙娜是你的好朋友。請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇英語短文，介紹你們?nèi)齻€各自喜歡和不喜歡的運(yùn)動，并簡要說明理由。姓名趙江劉偉趙娜籃球排球網(wǎng)球乒乓球足球棒球要求：1)詞數(shù)60左右;2)要點完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順、連貫；3)正確使用時態(tài)，語法正確，書寫整潔。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi,I'mZhaoJiang.Ilikebasketball.Becauseit'sinteresting.Idon'tlikeping-pong.Ithinkit'sboring.Ihavetwogoodfriends.TheyareLiuWeiandZhaoNa.LiuWeilikesvolleyball.Hethinksit'srelaxing.Hedoesn'tlikesoccer.It'sdifficultforhim.ZhaoNalikestennis.Shethinksit'sfun.Shedoesn'tlikebaseball.Shethinksit'sdifficult.【范文點評】這是一篇提綱作文，要求你以趙江的身份寫一篇英語短文，介紹你和你的朋友三人各自喜歡和不喜歡的運(yùn)動，并簡要說明理由。寫作提示已經(jīng)給出，需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括。寫作時用第一和第三人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意主謂一致，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意書寫工整美觀。【點評】本篇作文要點齊全，時態(tài)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的簡單句，偶爾穿插一個復(fù)合句，整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。例如:Ithinkit'sboring.和Hethinksit'srelaxing.運(yùn)用了賓語從句。（三）寫一篇介紹你最喜愛的足球運(yùn)動員的短文，不少于50詞提示：l)我最喜愛的足球運(yùn)動員是貝克漢姆(Beckham)，1975年5月生于倫敦。目前效力于洛杉磯銀河隊。(LosAngelesGalaxy.)2)他身高1.83米。他看起來高大并且強(qiáng)壯，足球踢得非常棒。很多人都喜歡他。3)他非常喜歡足球，也很喜歡流行音樂，這讓他很開心。4)他希望每場比賽都踢得很好。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyfavouritefootballplayerMyfavouritefootballplayerisBeckham.HewasbornonMay2nd,in1975.HeisanEnglishfootballmidfieldercurrentlyplayingforMajorLeagueSoccerclubLosAngelesGalaxyandtheEnglandnationalteam.Heis1.83metrestall.Helooksverytallandstrong,andheplaysfootballverywell.Manypeoplelikehimalot.Henotonlylikesplayingfootballbutalsolikespopmusic,becauseitmakeshimfeelrelaxed.Healsohopesthathecouldplayfootballwellateveryfootballmatch.【范文點評】這是一篇提綱作文，要求中給出的材料比較全面。涉及到貝克漢姆的出生年月，效力的球隊，身高，體貌特征，興趣與愛好，還有他的愿望。由于是介紹一位自己喜歡的足球運(yùn)動員，所以本文的人稱應(yīng)該是第三人稱，在完成句子是應(yīng)特別注意動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)形式，如：is、makes、likes等。在寫作時，盡量使句型順暢并符合英語的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方法?！军c評】這是一篇不錯的范文。首先用MyfavouritefootballplayerisBeckham.引出本文的主人公――貝克漢姆;其次介紹了他的出生年月，涉及到的短語beborn，并正確運(yùn)用了介詞on與in；然后描述了貝克漢姆的體貌特征，運(yùn)用的短語有1.83metrestall,tallandstrong.最后寫出了他的興趣愛好及愿望,固定短語notonly…butalso的運(yùn)用非常到位,準(zhǔn)確。整篇文章的題裁是記敘文，運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)?？傮w來說短語使用準(zhǔn)確，時態(tài)正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)的補(bǔ)充，行文連貫，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。是一篇不錯的習(xí)作。（四）本周是學(xué)校的SportsWeek，班級要評選運(yùn)動之星。假設(shè)你是Daniel，也想?yún)⒓釉u選。請根據(jù)下面圖片和表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇50詞左右的短文，介紹自己的運(yùn)動情況。NameDanielLooksstrongFavouritesportbasketballTimeweekends,sometimesafterschoolWithwhomplaywithclassmates_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Hello,everyone!MynameisDaniel.IamastrongboybecauseIlikesports.Myfavouritesportisbasketball.Ioftenplayitattheweekend.SometimesIplayitwithmyclassmatesafterschool,too.Ithinkbasketballmakesmestrongandhappy.Anditisalwaysfun.Ihaveadream.IhopetobeagreatplayerlikeKobe.【范文點評】這是一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)列表提示，介紹自己的運(yùn)動情況。要從姓名，相貌，最喜歡的運(yùn)動，運(yùn)動時間以及與誰一起運(yùn)動五個方面去描述。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱。最后發(fā)表個人的觀點，為自己的評選加分，為文章增加亮點?！军c評】這篇作文語句通順、行文流暢，要點齊全，根據(jù)所給提示，利用所學(xué)句式，寫出Daniel最喜愛的運(yùn)動項目，參見運(yùn)動的時間，一起打籃球的人，時態(tài)和人稱使用正確，是一篇好作文。（五）你和你的兩個好朋友都喜歡運(yùn)動，請根據(jù)下面的中文提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。提示：我叫…，今年…歲，我有兩個好朋友，TomandJack。我們都住在鎮(zhèn)江，是第三中學(xué)的學(xué)生。我們都喜歡游泳，我喜歡踢足球，Tom籃球打得好，Jack擅長排球，我們最喜歡的體育明星是汪順。(要求：條理清晰，書寫工整，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MynameisDavid.Iam15.AndIhavetwogoodfriend.TheyareTomandJack.WeallliveinZhenjiang,andwearestudentsofNo.3MiddleSchool.Welikeswimmingandplayingfootball.Tomdoeswellinplayingbasketball.AndJackisgoodatplayingvolleyball.OurfavouritesportstarisWangShun.【范文點評】本題是寫一篇人物介紹，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，句子表達(dá)正確，語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。【寫作步驟】一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點。1.我叫…,今年…歲,2.我有兩個好朋友,TomandJack。3.我們都住在鎮(zhèn)江，是第三中學(xué)的學(xué)生。4.我們都喜歡游泳，我喜歡踢足球。5.Tom籃球打得好,Jack擅長排球6.我們最喜歡的體育明星是汪順二、根據(jù)要點，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時。【點評】本題考查對本單元所學(xué)知識的綜合運(yùn)用，熟練使用相關(guān)短語、單詞和句型，注意詞性的搭配，時態(tài)的把握，人稱的使用等細(xì)節(jié)問題。（一）假設(shè)你是英國一所中學(xué)的初一學(xué)生Peter，你校足球隊正在招募新隊員，你很想加入。請你根據(jù)以下提示給負(fù)責(zé)人MrBlack寫一封自薦信。Joinus!Wewanttoknow;1.Yourageandhobby;2.Yourfavouritesportandwhyyoulikeit;3.Yourdream要求：1.短文應(yīng)包含所有給出的信息，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2.字?jǐn)?shù)70詞左右(開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))DearMrBlack,Yours,Peter_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearMrBlack,I'mPeter.I'm13yearsold.I'mtallandstrong.Ilovedoingsports.Myfavouritesportisfootball.I'mgoodatit.Ioftenplayfootballwithmyfriendsatweekends.Playingfootballcankeepmehealthyanditalwaysmakesmehappy.MydreamistoplayfootballintheWorldCupinthefuture.CanIbeintheschoolfootballteam?IhopeIcan.Thanksalot.Yours,Peter（二）新學(xué)期開學(xué)已經(jīng)有一個月了。初一年級舉辦了一個活動，要求大家寫一篇80字左右的短文介紹自己，以增進(jìn)同學(xué)之間的相互了解。為此,短文需要包括以下幾個方面:yourlooks,yourhobbies,yourfavouritesportandplayer,yourfavouritesubjectandteacher.短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出。要求：(1)短文應(yīng)包括所有信息，并適當(dāng)拓展(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名(3)詞數(shù)：80詞左右，短文首句不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone.MynameisJack/Nancy.I'mgladtointroducemys