Unit 1 Past and present -【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）（教師版）

第頁Unit1Pastandpresent單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度家鄉(xiāng)變化社會發(fā)展本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能用所學(xué)的詞語和句型簡單地介紹家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化。介紹的內(nèi)容主要為家鄉(xiāng)過去的情況、現(xiàn)在的變化、感想和打算等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能用一般過去時描述家鄉(xiāng)過去的情況；2.能用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時描述現(xiàn)在的變化；3.能利用多種句式，豐富寫作內(nèi)容；【詞匯積累】1．重要的important2．發(fā)生happen3．改善improve4．關(guān)系；聯(lián)系relation5．從……中學(xué)到很多l(xiāng)earnalotfrom6．飼養(yǎng)寵物

keeppets7．太陽能solarpower8．過去常常usedto9．代替insteadof10．變成turninto11．在很短的時間內(nèi)inashorttime【句式積累】※開頭句1.Manychangeshavetakenplacein…theseyears.這些年來，在……發(fā)生了很多變化。2.Inrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacein….在最近的幾年中，在……發(fā)生了很大變化?！虚g句1.Tenyearsagoitwasaverypoorplace.十年前，它是一個貧窮的地方。2.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.例如，自從政府采取了一些有效措施，環(huán)境發(fā)展地更好了。3.…h(huán)asdevelopedrapidlysincethen.自從那時起，……飛速發(fā)展。4.Butnowaftertheopen-gatepolicy,ourhometownisbecomingricherandricher.但是現(xiàn)在，開放政策以后，我們的家鄉(xiāng)變得越來越富有。5.Manynewthingslikecomputers,newschoolsandnewbuildingsarebecomingmoreandmorecommon.許多像電腦、新的學(xué)校和新的建筑變得越來越普遍。6.Almostallthepeoplehaveownedmobilesorevenprivatecars.幾乎所有人都有了手機(jī)甚至私家車。※結(jié)尾句1.I’mproudofour…andIhopeI’llbetheprideofour…inthefuture.我為我們的……而自豪，并且希望未來為我們的……而自豪。2.Asa…,Iamveryproud.AlsoIfeelexcitedforthestrengthof….做為一名……，我很自豪。我也為……的強(qiáng)大而振奮。3.Ifeelveryproudandexcitedtoseethechangesinmyhometown.Welcometomyhometownandexperienceitschangesonyourown!看到我的家鄉(xiāng)的變化我感到很自豪而且振奮。歡迎來到我的故鄉(xiāng)并親自體驗(yàn)它的變化。【諺語積累】1.Peoplemisstheirhometownswhengrowingmature,birdsmisstheirnestswhengrowingold.人老思故鄉(xiāng)，鳥老思巢穴。2.Tomakeyourhometownbeautiful,youneedtoplanttreesandflowers.要想家鄉(xiāng)美，要種樹和花。Thewaterinmyhometownisfairywater,andthesoilinmyhometownisgold.家鄉(xiāng)的水是仙水，家鄉(xiāng)的土是金子。3.Whetheryouarecloseornot,youarefromyourhometown.Whetheritisbeautifulornot,there’swaterinthecountryside.親不親，故鄉(xiāng)人。美不美，鄉(xiāng)中水?！救f能寫作模板】Inthepast,myhometownwas（過去的特點(diǎn)）,peopleliveda/anlife.Thehouseswereand.Pollutionwas,andtherewas.Theroadswereand,andpeoplewenttowork.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.（開始介紹變化）Thereislessandlesspollution.Theroadsareand.Themountainshaveturned.Theriversareandtheskyis.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peoplelivealife.Theirhousesareand.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyearthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.（表達(dá)感受）Ialsohopemorepeoplewillvisitmyhometown.（表達(dá)愿望）請你根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的成長經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在變化。最后談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.環(huán)境：

過去：房屋矮小破舊，道路狹窄……現(xiàn)在：搬進(jìn)新公寓，街道寬闊整潔2.生活：

過去：聽廣播，看電視

現(xiàn)在：網(wǎng)上沖浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：過去：步行，騎自行車

現(xiàn)在：坐地鐵或開車，火車站和飛機(jī)場投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：過去：寫信保持聯(lián)系

現(xiàn)在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏信息提示中需要補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容。第一步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容從環(huán)境、生活、交通方式和交流方式四個方面描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化；第二步，表達(dá)自己的看法和感受。【佳作欣賞】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.Inthepast,peoplelivedinsmalloldhouses.Nowmostofthemhavemovedintonewflats.Yearsago,therewereonlynarrowanddirtyroadsinthesmalltown.Therewasrubbisheverywhere.Butnowthestreetsarewideandclean.PeopleusedtolistentotheradioorwatchTVintheirfreetime,butnowmostfamilieshavecomputersandtheInternet.PeoplearecrazyaboutsurfingontheInternetandtakingexercise.Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundonfootorbybicycle,butnowtheycangoaroundbycarorbyunderground.Therailwaystationandtheairporthavebeeninuseforyears.Peopleusedtokeepintouchbyletter,butnowweusemobilesorsendandreceiveemails.Ithinkmyhometownisbetterthanbefore.Nowpeopleareenjoyingacomfortablelife.一、閱讀下列短文，根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從每個方框內(nèi)所給11個詞匯中選擇10個意義相符的詞匯，必要時進(jìn)行詞形變化，填入空白處。all,

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anythingNowwecanseemoreandmoreelectricbikesinthestreet.Electricbikesareeasytoride.Theyrunfastandmake1pollution.Sotheybecomeverypopularinmanybig2inChina.Buttheelectricbikesalsocause3trafficaccidents.4Chinaplanstomakeanewrulefortheelectricbikeriders.If5electricbikeisheavierthan40kilosandcangofasterthan20kilometersanhour,itsridermustgetalicense(執(zhí)照).Itmeansridershavetopassdrivingtestsbeforetheyride6electricbikesontheroad.Peoplehavedifferentideas7theplan.Somewelcometheplanbecausetheythinkitwillmakethestreetmuch8.Butsomearenothappywiththenewruleatall.Oneridersaid,“Idon’twanttogetalicenseor9.That’s10muchtrouble.”What’syouridea?Doyouagreewiththeplan?【答案】1．no2．cities3．more/many4．So5．a(chǎn)n6．their7．a(chǎn)bout8．safer9．a(chǎn)nything10．too二、完成句子1.自從2015年以來，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大變化。________________________________________inmyhometownsince2015.2．我媽媽在這家超市工作了三年。Mymotherinthesupermarketthreeyearsago.3．現(xiàn)在，很多人通過微信來交流。Nowadays,manypeopleWeChat.4．現(xiàn)在很多沙漠已經(jīng)變成了良田。Nowmanydesertshavegoodlands.5．這些工廠已經(jīng)采取了一些行動來保護(hù)環(huán)境。Thefactory.6．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)使交流容易多了。TheInternetnow.7．自從上個月以來，我們一直通過電子郵件保持聯(lián)系。Wesincelastmonth.8．MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschoolfor5years.(改為同義句)MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschool.9．JuliahasnoteverbeentotheWestLake.（改為同義句）JuliabeentotheWestLake.10．Alicealwayswenttotheparkinthemorninglastyear.（改為同義句）Alicegototheparkinthemorninglastyear.11．ShebegantoteachEnglishintheschoolin2005.（改為同義句）SheEnglishintheschool2005.12．IhavealreadyreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.(改為否定句)IreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.13．Hisfatherusedtosmokealot.（改為反意疑問句）Hisfatherusedtosmokealot,?14．Thegovernmenttookactiontoimprovethesituationlater.(改為一般疑問句)thegovernmentactiontoimprovethesituationlater?【答案】1．Greatchangeshavetakenplace2．hasworkedsince3．communicateby4．turnedinto5．havetakensomeactionstoprotecttheenvironment6．makescommunicationmucheasier7．havekeptintouch(witheachother)byemail/havestayedintouch(witheachother)byemail/havebeenintouch(witheachother)byemail8．since5/fiveyearsago9．hasnever10．usedto11．hastaughtsince12．haven’tyet13．didn’t/usedn’the14．Didtake1．請以“Myhometown”為題，寫一篇關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)過去和現(xiàn)在變化的短文。要求：字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰，80詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于話題作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章標(biāo)題以及寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照要求介紹家鄉(xiāng)過去和現(xiàn)在的變化，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。【寫作步驟】第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，說明家鄉(xiāng)變化很大；第二步，從不同的角度說明家鄉(xiāng)的變化，如人們的生活、學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境等方面進(jìn)行說明，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，書寫結(jié)語?！緷M分作文】MyHometownOurhometownhaschangedalot.Tenyearsagoitwasaverypoorplace.Peopletherehadnothing:noTVorradio,noricetoeat,nofreshwatertodrink.Sometimestheywerestillhungry.Moststudentsatschoolwerestillusingverybaddesks.Butnowaftertheopen-gatepolicy,ourcountrysideisbecomingricherandricher.Manynewthingslikecomputers,newschoolsandnewbuildingsarebecomingmoreandmorecommon.Sopeoplearrivingherearesayingourhometownhaschangedalot.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①richerandricher越來越富有②moreandmore越來越多【高分句型】①Sopeoplearrivingherearesayingourhometownhaschangedalot.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）2．假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示，給你的筆友Mary寫一封郵件，介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)SunshineTown這些年來的變化。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過去現(xiàn)在環(huán)境狹窄骯臟的道路；到處堆放的垃圾兩旁種有樹木花草的寬廣干凈的街道；還有高樓和商店生活房子又舊又?。粖蕵分挥惺找魴C(jī)和電視機(jī)房子是新的公寓套房；娛樂有手機(jī)、電腦和網(wǎng)絡(luò)等交通步行或自行車出租車、小車、火車、飛機(jī)、地鐵等感受……注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有信息；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個人信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearMary,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesinmyhometown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干提示信息，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。【寫作步驟】第一步，表明寫作意圖。開篇點(diǎn)出寫作主題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體介紹家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了哪些變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己對家鄉(xiāng)變化的感受?！緷M分作文】DearMary,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesinmyhometown.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,therewereonlynarrowdirtyroadswithrubbisheverywhere,butnowtherearewideandcleanstreetswithtrees.Andweusedtoliveinsmalloldhouses,butnowwehavenewflatsintallbuildings.Weusedtogooutonfootorbybikeandweseldomwentout.Butnowwecangooutbytaxi,bycar,byair,bytrainorbysubway,andwecangoabroadandtravelonline.Weusedtowriteletterstoeachother,butnowwecommunicatebymobilephones.Inoursparetime,weusedtolistentoradioorwatchTV,butnowwehavecomputersandtheInternet.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①takeplace發(fā)生②goabroad出國③usedto過去常?！靖叻志湫汀縄noursparetime,weusedtolistentoradioorwatchTV,butnowwehavecomputersandtheInternet.（but引導(dǎo)的并列句）3．假設(shè)你們學(xué)校要開展一個以“家鄉(xiāng)的過去與現(xiàn)在”為主題的英語有獎?wù)魑幕顒?，請你以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，從道路、交通以及環(huán)境條件等三方面來描述你所居住的小鎮(zhèn)發(fā)生的變化。寫作要求：1.字跡工整、規(guī)范；2.字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右；3.語句通順，無語法錯誤，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“現(xiàn)在時完成時”；③提示：本文主要介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。【寫作步驟】第一步，引出話題；第二步，從道路、交通以及環(huán)境條件等三方面來描述你所居住的小鎮(zhèn)發(fā)生的變化；第三步，介紹自己的感想?！緷M分作文】ThechangesinmyhometownSincetheReformandOpening-uppolicywascarriedout,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Nowtheroadsarewideandclean.People,whosehousesarelargeandbright,arelivingahappyandcomfortablelife.Almostallthe

peoplehaveownedmobilesorevenprivatecars.What’smore,ahigh-speedrailwaystationhasbeenbuiltinmyhometown,whichmakesitconvenientforpeopletotravelorvisitfriends.Mostimportantly,theenvironmenthasbecomemoreandmorebeautifulwithtrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Ifeelveryproudandexcitedtoseethechangesinmyhometown.Welcometomyhometownandexperienceitschangesonyourown!【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①takeplace發(fā)生②what’smore而且【高分句型】①SincetheReformandOpening-uppolicywascarriedout,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.(since引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)②People,whosehousesarelargeandbright,arelivingahappyandcomfortablelife.(whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句)③What’smore,ahigh-speedrailwaystationhavebeenbuiltinmyhometown,whichmakesitconvenientforpeopletotravelorvisitfriends.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)4．某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。過去生活貧困，房屋小而破舊。污染嚴(yán)重，到處是垃圾。道路臟且狹窄，上班靠步行和自行車。現(xiàn)在住房寬敞明亮；污染減少，環(huán)境變得很漂亮。道路寬敞干凈，許多人有自己的汽車上下班；每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客來參觀。將來希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求:

1.短文不少于100詞。2.語句通順，意思連貫，字跡工整。3.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的要點(diǎn)，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作要點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，介紹家鄉(xiāng)過去的情況，包括房屋，污染和道路等情況；第二步，介紹現(xiàn)在家鄉(xiāng)的情況，包括住房，污染，道路，交通工具和游客情況；第三步，介紹將來的情況，表達(dá)自己對家鄉(xiāng)的期望?！緷M分作文】TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,peoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Theroadsweredirtyandnarrow,andpeoplewenttoworkonfoot.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.Thereislessandlesspollution.Theroadsarewiderandcleaner.Themountainshaveturnedgreener.Theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyearthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.Ialsohopemorepeoplewillvisitmyhometown.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①lessandless越來越少的②thousandsof成千上萬的【高分句型】①Theroadsarewiderandcleaner.（比較級并列）②I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.（賓語從句）5．假如你是李華，你的一個美國網(wǎng)友Bob想了解你家鄉(xiāng)的變化，請根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖寫一封英文電子郵件給他，并表達(dá)你的感受。注意事項(xiàng)：1、郵件內(nèi)容根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖自擬，要求語句通順，意思連貫，符合題意。2、字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Manychangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，開頭已給出，引出家鄉(xiāng)的變化；第二步，從生活，環(huán)境以及交通等方面介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化。【滿分作文】DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Manychangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.

Inthepast,thehouseswereveryoldandthestreetswerenarrow.Butnowtherearealotofnewtallbuildings.Thestreetsareverywidesothatthetrafficislessheavy.Inthepast,thepollutionwasheavy.Theriversweredirtyandfullofrubbish.Butnowtheskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Inthepast,peoplehadnoentertainment,butnowpeoplecanlistentoradioorwatchTVaftersupper.TheycangetinformationthroughcomputersandInternet.Asfortransport,peopleusedtoworkonfootorbybicycle.Butnowtheycangosomewherebybusorunderground.

Iamgladtoseethesechanges.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①takeplace發(fā)生②fullof充滿③asfor至于④usedtodosth過去常常做某事【高分句型】①Butnowtherearealotofnewtallbuildings.（therebe句型）②Thestreetsareverywidesothatthetrafficislessheavy.（sothat引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）6．請你根據(jù)下面的提示，結(jié)合你的成長經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。過去現(xiàn)在將來至少列舉兩例說明過去的情況。環(huán)境優(yōu)美：空氣新鮮；碧水藍(lán)天：污染減少你對家鄉(xiāng)未來的暢想（至少一句）。交通便利：各種交通方式：地鐵已經(jīng)beinuse（投入使用）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，根據(jù)提示材料介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化；第二步，表達(dá)自己對家鄉(xiāng)未來的暢想?！緷M分作文】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotovertheyears.Inthepast,thereusedtobeoldhouses.Theriverwasverydirty.Wecouldhardlyseethebluesky.Butnow,therearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometown.Theairisfresh,theriveriscleanandthewaterisclear.Thereislesspollutionthanbefore.WhenIwasyoung,theroadswerenarrowandthetransportationconditionswerehard.Peoplewenttoworkonfootorbybike.Ittookalotoftime.Astimegoesby,thosehavechanged,too.Thesubwayhasbeeninuseformanyyears.Itisconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Iamgladtoseethesechanges.Ihopemyhometownwillbebetterandbetter.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①usedtodosth過去常常做某事②beinuse投入使用③begladtodosth高興做某事【高分句型】①Butnow,therearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometown.（therebe句型）②WhenIwasyoung,theroadswerenarrowandthetransportationconditionswerehard.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）7．請以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，向你的網(wǎng)友描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化及你的感受。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：變化過去現(xiàn)在環(huán)境青山綠水，空氣新鮮路多，樓多，人更多交通自行車或步行公交車、出租車或火車問題發(fā)展少綠化少注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名：2.詞數(shù)在80~100之間。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：本文時態(tài)以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主；③提示：注意時態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用，描述過去用一般過去時，描述現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要具體闡述，并表達(dá)自己感受。【寫作步驟】第一步，描述過去的家鄉(xiāng)；第二步，描述家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在情況；第三步，結(jié)束語，描述自己的感受?！緷M分作文】ThechangesinmyhometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Thereweregreenhillsandclearwater.Theairwasverycleanandfresh.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,solocalpeoplewenttothenearesttownonlybybikeoronfoot.Butpeoplecouldhardlychangetheirdailylives.Therewaslessdevelopmentinthepast.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Myhometownhasbecomemorebeautiful.Theremoreroads,buildingsandpeople.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Peoplecangoanywherebybus,bytaxiorbytrain.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitmyhometown.Buttherearefewerandfewertreesaroundnow.Ifwepaymoreattentiontotheenvironment,I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthenearfuture.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①convenient便利的②hardly幾乎不③theirowncars他們自己的的車【高分句型】Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitmyhometown.（介詞短語作后置定語）8．學(xué)校英語俱樂部正組織題為“Greatchangesinmyhometown”的征文比賽。請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文參賽。1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?(environment,life,transport...)2.Whatisyourhometownlikenow?(environment,life,transport...)3.Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?注意事項(xiàng)：(1)

詞數(shù)：90詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；(2)

文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、班級等信息；(3)

文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。Greatchangesinmyhometown

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，考生需要圍繞主題提示補(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮；②時態(tài)：一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時注意不要偏題，需要圍繞家鄉(xiāng)的變化來展開，注意內(nèi)容的完整和正確使用詞匯和句型?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出后文的變化；第二步，闡述過去的樣子，從環(huán)境，生活和交通幾個方面闡述，也要表明現(xiàn)在的樣子，突出其變化；第三步，結(jié)尾總結(jié)，并表明自己對變化的看法。【滿分作文】Greatchangesinmyhometown

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutthechanges.

Inthepast,thelifeinmyhometownwassimplebutpoor.Peopleusuallywalkedorrodeabiketogoshopping.Ittookalotoftime.Andthereweren’tmanykindsofgoods.Buttheenvironmentwasgood.Thereweremoretreesonthehillsandthereweren’tanyrubbishoutside.

Butnow,thelifeinmyhometownistotallydifferent.Almosteveryfamilyhasacaranditisveryconvenienttogoshoppingbycar.Therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsintheshoppingmallandpeoplehavemoreactivitiestodothanbefore,likegoingtothegym,playingboardgamesandsoon.Buttheenvironmentisnotasgoodasthatbefore.Peoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbish.That’snotagoodchange.

Inmyopinion,ourlivesarebecomingbetterandbetter,butweshouldalwayspayattentiontotheenvironment.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①betterandbetter越來越好②differentkindsof不同種類的③asgoodas和……一樣好④inmyopinion在我看來【高分句型】①Itisveryconvenienttogoshoppingbycar.（it作形式主語）②Thereweremoretreesonthehillsandthereweren’tanyrubbishoutside.（therebe句型表示“存在”）9．學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語欄目組織征文活動“GreatChangesinMyHometown”，請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文投稿。GreatChangesinMyHometown1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?2.Whatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourhometown?3.Whatdoyouthinkofthegreatchanges?注意事項(xiàng)：(1)詞數(shù)：120詞左右；(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名班級等信息；(3)文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。GreatChangesinMyHometownWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.Inthepast,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，根據(jù)文章開頭提示，介紹家鄉(xiāng)過去的情況。第二步，介紹家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的情況。第三步，發(fā)表對這些變化的看法?！緷M分作文】GreatChangesinMyHometownWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.Inthepast,theroadsherewerenarrowandcrowded.Thehouseswereveryoldandsmall.Theairwasnotfreshenoughandsometimestherewasterriblesmell.Theriverwaspollutedbadlyandtherewasrubbishinit.Nowadays,theroadsbecomewideandclean.Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsofwaystogoanywhere.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinthecity.Mostofusmovetobigandbeautifulhouses.Theskyisalwaysblueandtherearemanybirdssinginthetrees.Myhometownlookslikeabiggardenwithgreengrassandcolorfulflowers.Ithinkthesechangesmakeourlifemorecomfortable.Howgreattheyare!【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①differentkindsof不同種類的②looklike看起來像【高分句型】Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.(itisadj.forsb.todosth.句型)10．請你根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的成長經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在變化。最后談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.環(huán)境：

過去：房屋矮小破舊，道路狹窄……現(xiàn)在：搬進(jìn)新公寓，街道寬闊整潔2.生活：

過去：聽廣播，看電視

現(xiàn)在：網(wǎng)上沖浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：過去：步行，騎自行車

現(xiàn)在：坐地鐵或開車，火車站和飛機(jī)場投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：過去：寫信保持聯(lián)系

現(xiàn)在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏信息提示中需要補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容從環(huán)境、生活、交通方式和交流方式四個方面描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化；第二步，表達(dá)自己的看法和感受?！緷M分作文】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.Inthepast,peoplelivedinsmalloldhouses.Nowmostofthemhavemovedintonewflats.Yearsago,therewereonlynarrowanddirtyroadsinthesmalltown.Therewasrubbisheverywhere.Butnowthestreetsarewideandclean.PeopleusedtolistentotheradioorwatchTVintheirfreetime,butnowmostfamilieshavecomputersandtheInternet.PeoplearecrazyaboutsurfingontheInternetandtakingexercise.Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundon