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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inthegoldenmistoflatesummer,FrankandJohn,twoinseparablefriends,setoffonanadventuretheyhadparticularlyplannedforweeks:acampingtripbytheriver.Theairwasfilledwithexcitementastheypackedtheirbackpackswithessentials—tents,cookers,andamap,thoughtheywereconfidentintheirknowledgeofthearea,havingexploreditsboundariessincechildhood.Asthesunbeganitsfall,castinglongshadowsacrossthegreenlandscape,theyarrivedattheirchosenspot—aquietbendintheriver,farfromcivilization’snoisiness.Theysetupcamp,andthecracklingofthecampfireandthegentlelappingofwateragainsttheshoreweretheironlycompanions.Underastarrysky,theysharedstoriesanddreams,unawarethattheircomfortableescapewasabouttotakeadangerousturn.Thefollowingmorning,astheyventureddeeperintothewoodstogatherfirewood,thesky,whichhadbeenclearandblue,turnedfrightening,withheavycloudsgathering.Inthedistance,alow,powerful,rollingthunderechoed(回響)throughthevalley,awarningtheyshouldhavenoticed.Notfrightened,theycontinued,theirlaughternowwasdrownedoutbythegrowingroar(咆哮)oftheriver.Ithappenedswiftly.Awallofwater,causedbythestorm,rusheddowntheriver,catchingthemoffguard.Inaheartbeat,theirreturnpathwascutoff,theoncefamiliarplacewastransformedintoamaze(迷宮)ofrushingcurrentsandmudslides.Panicrosewithinthem,butFrank,alwaysthecalmerofthetwo,rememberedasurvivaltipfromhisfather:“Whenlostorindanger,stayputifpossible,assessyourresources,andthinkreasonably.”Withtherivertoodangeroustocross,theycamebacktohigherground,seekingshelterbeneatharockyoverhang.Astherainpoundeddown,theygatheredtogether,theirspiritsdampenedbutnotdefeated.Johnrememberedanothercruciallesson:usingnaturalresourcesforsurvival.Hesuggestedtheystartafireusingdryleavesandbranchestheyhadcollectedbeforethestormandtheymanagedtolightasmallflame,providingwarmthandalightofhope.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThenewsunrisebroughtnewchallengesandopportunitiesforFrankandJohntoprovetheircourage.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,ashopewasbeginningtofade,arescuehelicopterappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了弗蘭克和約翰這對形影不離的朋友在夏末的黃金霧靄中開始了他們期待已久的河邊露營之旅。他們在河邊安營扎寨,享受著篝火的噼啪聲和河水的輕拍聲。然而,第二天,當(dāng)他們深入樹林收集柴火時,天氣突變,一場風(fēng)暴導(dǎo)致河水暴漲,阻斷了他們的歸途。兩人被困,但弗蘭克保持冷靜,回憶起父親的求生建議,他們決定留在原地,評估資源。在巖石下找到避難所后,約翰利用他們之前收集的干燥樹葉和樹枝成功點燃了火,帶來了溫暖和希望。隨著新的一天的到來,他們面臨著新的挑戰(zhàn),但同時也有機會證明他們的勇氣。他們爬上更高的地方,希望能找到出路。第三天,當(dāng)希望開始消退時,一架救援直升機出現(xiàn)了。他們利用樹枝和樹葉制作了一個SOS標(biāo)志,并成功被直升機發(fā)現(xiàn),最終被安全救出。這次經(jīng)歷考驗了他們的韌性和友誼的力量,也讓他們學(xué)到了關(guān)于自然、生存和不可破壞的紐帶的寶貴教訓(xùn)。在原文中,有幾處伏筆為故事的發(fā)展和續(xù)寫部分提供了基礎(chǔ):1.伏筆一:弗蘭克和約翰對這片區(qū)域非常熟悉,因為他們從小就探索過這里。這為續(xù)寫中他們能夠回憶起地標(biāo)和求生提供了基礎(chǔ)。2.伏筆二:他們攜帶了地圖,盡管他們對這片區(qū)域非常熟悉。地圖在續(xù)寫中成為他們嘗試定位和回憶地標(biāo)的工具。3.伏筆三:弗蘭克記得父親的求生建議。這在續(xù)寫中成為他們在危險中保持冷靜和制定生存計劃的關(guān)鍵。4.伏筆四:他們收集了干燥的樹葉和樹枝。這在續(xù)寫中成為他們在避難所生火的重要資源。在續(xù)寫中,這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng):1.回應(yīng)一:他們利用對區(qū)域的熟悉,嘗試回憶地標(biāo),這幫助他們在困境中導(dǎo)航。2.回應(yīng)二:他們使用地圖來輔助導(dǎo)航,盡管在惡劣天氣和環(huán)境變化中,地圖的作用可能有限。3.回應(yīng)三:弗蘭克的冷靜和父親的求生建議幫助他們決定留在原地,這是他們在危險中生存下來的關(guān)鍵決策。4.回應(yīng)四:他們使用之前收集的干燥材料成功生火,這不僅提供了溫暖,還為他們提供了希望,并最終幫助他們被救援直升機發(fā)現(xiàn)。續(xù)寫部分通過這些回應(yīng),展示了主角們?nèi)绾卫盟麄兊馁Y源和知識來應(yīng)對緊急情況,并最終獲救。主旨升華句1.Theordealbytheriver'sedgetaughtFrankandJohnthateventhemostfamiliarlandscapescanharborunexpecteddangers,underliningtheimportanceofpreparednessandadaptability.2.Theiradventureunderscoredtheunbreakablebondoffriendship,provingthatintimesofadversity,itisthehumanconnectionthatoftenservesasthemostreliablelifeline.3.Theexperiencehighlightedthevalueofknowledgepasseddownthroughgenerations,asFrank'sfather'sadvicebecameaguidinglightintheirmomentofcrisis.4.Theincidentservedasapoignantreminderofthepowerofnatureandthehumilityitdemandsfromthosewhoventureintoitsdomain.5.Ultimately,thetaleofFrankandJohn'ssurvivalisatestamenttotheindomitablehumanspirit,which,whenfacedwiththerawelementsofthenaturalworld,canfindthestrengthtopersevereandovercome.參考答案ThenewsunrisebroughtnewchallengesandopportunitiesforFrankandJohntoprovetheircourage.Theycraftedfishinghooksfrombentwiresfoundamongtheirscatteredbelongings,cleverlyattachingthemtoflexiblebranchestocatchfishintherunningriver.Thedaywasalsomarkedbytirelesseffortstosignalforhelp,arrangingbranchesandrocksintomassivearrowsthatpointedtowardtheirlocation,hopingthesemarkerswouldcatchtheeyeofapassingaircraft.Frank,withhiskeenobservationskills,noticedpatternsinthehelicoptersearchpatterns,suggestingtheymoveclosertotheriverbankduringflyovers,increasingtheirchancesofbeingspotted.Thenextday,ashopewasbeginningtofade,arescuehelicopterappeared.Thebrightclothestheyhadhungbetweentreesandthepersistentsmokefromtheircontrolledfireservedasasignalinthewilderness.Astheywereairliftedtosafety,FrankandJohnlookedateachother,theireyesreflectinganewfoundappreciationforlife,friendship,andthepowerofpreparationandquickthinkinginthefaceofdisaster.Theadventurewasalsoareminderthateveninthemostunexpectedanddangerouscircumstances,thereisalwaysawayout—ifoneremainscalm,resourceful,andneverlosessightofhope.下水文1ThenewsunrisebroughtnewchallengesandopportunitiesforFrankandJohntoprovetheircourage.Therainhadceased,buttheriverwasstillswollenandtreacherous.Theyspentthedayrationingtheirfoodandwater,takingturnskeepingwatchforanysignsofhelp.Theyalsousedthetimetoreinforcetheirshelter,usingfallenbranchesandmudtocreateamoresecurebarrieragainsttheelements.Despitethediresituation,theyremainedoptimistic,theirfriendshipabeaconofstrengthinthefaceofadversity.Thenextday,ashopewasbeginningtofade,arescuehelicopterappeared.Thesoundofitsrotorswaslikemusictotheirears.Theyquicklygatheredtheirbelongingsandrushedoutintotheopen,wavingtheirbrightlycoloredjacketstosignaltheirlocation.Thereliefontheirfaceswaspalpableasthehelicopterdescended,andtheywereliftedtosafety.Theiradventure,whichhadstartedwithsuchexcitement,hadendedinaharrowingordealthattestedtheirmettleandthebondoftheirfriendship.Buttheyhadsurvived,andintheprocess,theyhadlearnedvaluablelessonsaboutnature,survival,andtheunbreakabletiesthatbindthem.下水文2ThenewsunrisebroughtnewchallengesandopportunitiesforFrankandJohntoprovetheircourage.Asthefirstlightofdawnbrokethroughthecanopyoftrees,theysetouttoclimbhigher,hopingforabetterviewoftheirsurroundings.Thegroundwasslipperyfromtherain,andtheairwasfilledwiththescentofwetearthanddecayingleaves.Theymovedcautiously,usingtr
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