《課時(shí)把關(guān)練》英語選擇性必修第四冊RJUNIT 1 Part IV Writing 寫作專練含答案

UNIT1SCIENCEFICTION第課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartIVWriting妙筆生花——讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。DreamforFuturePeoplewerebusyintheirownlaboratoriesonMars.Turtextoldme，“LetusgototheEarthtohaveacupofcoffee.”IlaughedforsuchachildishjokeandIalsojokinglyaskedhim，“IstherenocoffeeshoponMars?”Hereplied，“Ithasbuttheycan’tpreparecoffeeastastyasthatontheEarth.”However，forawhileIthoughtitwouldbebettertotakeacupoftastycoffeefromRamu’sCoffeeShoplocatedatourvillage，Kushmandi.Turtextoldmetoenteraroomnearhislaboratory.Weenteredthereandfoundthattheroomwasinternallycoatedwithsomematerialslikesponge.Turtexclosedthedooroftheroomwithaclap.Isawsomecolorfulbuttonsinsidetheroom.AfterafewsecondsIheardanotherclapandnoticedthatthedooropened.Turtexsaid，“Comewithme.”Iasked，“Where?”Hereplied，“NowweareatKushmandi.”Ishouted，“What?”WecameoutoftheroomandIastonishinglyviewedtheskyscrapersaroundme.Turtexsaidloudly，“What’swrongwithyou?Comewithme.”EventuallyweenteredacoffeeclubdesignedlikeaFiveStarRestaurant.SuddenlyInoticedadisplayboardwithanelectronictexton，“WelcometoKushmandi.NowyouareinfamousRamu’sCoffeeShop.EnjoythetasteofthebestcoffeeontheEarth.”Suddenlymanyhazyandcrazyquestionscametomymind.“Whatwasthenearbyroomofthelab?HowwasitpossibletotravelanenormousdistancefromMarstotheEarth?IsitlikeopeningmyfavoriteTVchannelwitharemote?HowdidthepoorcoffeestallofourvillageturnintoaFiveStarCoffeeClub?Inwhichcenturywerewe?”注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵前文概要審體裁：本文是一篇科幻故事，屬于記敘文。審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)審前文大意以及要點(diǎn)：Turtex和作者從火星來到地球上喝咖啡，因?yàn)榈厍蛏系目Х缺然鹦巧系目Х雀用牢?。作者和Turtex進(jìn)入了實(shí)驗(yàn)室附近的一個(gè)房間，瞬間來到了Kushmandi。結(jié)合故事的結(jié)尾，作者感到困惑，腦海中出現(xiàn)了許多問題。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)①第一段所給首句：Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.提示句1提到作者跟著Turtex走進(jìn)了咖啡店，續(xù)寫部分應(yīng)該描寫他們進(jìn)入咖啡店之后發(fā)生的事情。②第二段所給首句：Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft.提示句2提到服務(wù)員端來了兩杯咖啡，然后離開了。本段應(yīng)該描寫作者品嘗咖啡的過程。既然是科幻故事，續(xù)寫的故事應(yīng)該有一個(gè)出人意料的結(jié)尾。因此，如何構(gòu)思一個(gè)巧妙而且符合邏輯的結(jié)尾也是本文續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動描述情節(jié)話題激活詞匯地點(diǎn)：laboratory，Mars，theEarth，coffeeshop，Ramu’sCoffeeShop，Kushmandi動作：haveacupofcoffee，laugh，ask，reply，prepare，taste，locate，notice心理活動：bebusyin，achildishjoke，jokingly，astoni-shingly句式翻譯1.咖啡的香味撲鼻而來。（主謂狀）_______________________________________________________________________________________2.我渴望立刻喝一杯?。ㄖ飨当頎睿______________________________________________________________________________________3.我仍然沉浸在那些模糊的問題中，我跟著Turtex坐在一張桌子旁邊。（as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）_______________________________________________________________________________________4.桌子上覆蓋著奇怪的材料，我等待著享受地球上最好的咖啡。（and連接的并列句）_______________________________________________________________________________________5.咖啡太熱了，我的嘴像是燙傷了。（主系表）_______________________________________________________________________________________6.最后我意識到我在Kushmandi的鄉(xiāng)村醫(yī)院而不是咖啡俱樂部。（賓語從句）_______________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級1.把第2句升級為how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句_______________________________________________________________________________________2.把第3句升級為過去分詞短語作狀語的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________3.把升級后的第3句和第4句再次升級為which引導(dǎo)的定語從句_______________________________________________________________________________________4.把第5句升級為so...that...句式_______________________________________________________________________________________5.把第6句升級為Itis...that...強(qiáng)調(diào)句型_______________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，認(rèn)真謄寫并仔細(xì)檢查Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thewaiterbroughtustwocupsofcoffeeandleft. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartIVWriting參考答案步驟三句式翻譯1.Thedelicioussmellofcoffeerushedintomynose.2.Iwaseagertohaveacupofitatonce!3.AsIwasstillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable.4.Thetablewascoatedwithstrangematerials，andIwaswaitingtoenjoythebestcoffeeontheEarth.5.Itwastoohotanditseemedthatmymouthgotburnt.6.I?nallyrealizedthatIwasinourvillagehospitalatKushmandinotthecoffeeclub.步驟四1.HoweagerIwastohaveacupofitatonce!2.Stillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable.3.Stillabsorbedinthosehazyquestions，IfollowedTurtexandsatbesideatable，whichwascoatedwithstrangematerials，waitingtoenjoythebestcoffeeontheEarth.4.Itwassohotthatitseemedthatmymouthgotburnt.5.IfinallyrealizedthatitwasourvillagehospitalatKushmandithatIwasin，notthecoffeeclub.步驟五Thinkingsuchhazythings，IfollowedTurtexintothecoffeeclub.Thedelicioussmellofco