新高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)講練測(cè)專題01 提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧（練習(xí)）（解析版）

專題01提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧目錄TOC\o"1-1"\p""\h\z\u提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)Ⅰ.根據(jù)提示提升句子----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)Ⅱ.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3頁(yè)Ⅲ.用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------4頁(yè)二、應(yīng)用文寫作------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------6頁(yè)01提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)Ⅰ.根據(jù)提示提升句子1.Ourannualautumnouting,_________________________________（以“通過(guò)勞動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)”為主題）,willbeheldatthepracticaltrainingbaseonSeptember20th.（with介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)）2．Andthereisawidevarietyofactivities____________________________（像這里春節(jié)期間的龍舟舞）．(列舉活動(dòng)讓表達(dá)豐富)3.Tofacilitatemovementforthemselvesandthefuturegeneration,Yugong,___________________（臨近90多歲了）,wasdeterminedtoremovethemountains,_________（一鏟一鏟地）.（運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)和方式狀語(yǔ)增加細(xì)節(jié)，豐富內(nèi)容）4.Intheafternoon,we’lltraveltothecountrysidewhereyoucanenjoy______________________________（美麗的風(fēng)景和各種有機(jī)食品）.（用并列連詞both...and...提升句子品質(zhì)）5．AsfarasIknow,traditionalChineseculture,_________________________________________（包括剪紙藝術(shù)、古箏等）,hasitsuniquecharacteristics.（用介詞including列舉具體內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）6._________________________________________（已經(jīng)審閱了你的關(guān)于“保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物”的海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)競(jìng)賽的初稿）,I’mwritingtooffersomesuggestionsforimprovement.（用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的完成式提升句子品質(zhì)）7．WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture，______________________________________________________________（所以我希望我們學(xué)生在業(yè)余時(shí)間讀更多關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書籍）．(增加希望)8.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldreviewthearticleandprovideanysuggestionsorcorrections______________________________________________________________（提高其整體的清晰度、連貫性和準(zhǔn)確性）.（用不定式作定語(yǔ)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）9.Thisactivitywashighlythoughtof,____________________________________________________（因?yàn)檫@不僅產(chǎn)生了作用，而且提高了學(xué)生的參與意識(shí)）.（增加原因）10.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.___________________________________（他們?yōu)槲腋械津湴粒?增加評(píng)價(jià))11.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.________________________________________________________________（例如，我們可以使用可回收的塑料袋代替塑料袋，拒絕使用一次性產(chǎn)品，節(jié)約能源）．(用forexample舉例增加細(xì)節(jié))12．Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyou____________________________________________________（這樣我們就可以一起取得進(jìn)步）．(增加結(jié)果)13．Asforme,I'mpassionateaboutbasketball____________________________________________________（因?yàn)樗o了我力量去面對(duì)我生活中的挑戰(zhàn)）．(增加原因)14.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,____________________________________________________（我想，這肯定會(huì)吸引游客的目光）.（用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句增加擴(kuò)展細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容）15.______________________________（常言道）,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.(用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果)【答案】1.withthethemeof“LearningthroughLabor”2.likethedragondanceduringtheSpringFestivalhere3.approachinghis90s;shovelbyshovel4.boththebeautifulsceneryandvariouskindsoforganicfood5.includingpaper-cutting,guzhengandsoon6.Havingreviewedyourinitialdraftfortheposterdesigncompetitionon“ProtectingWildlife”7.soIhopewestudentsshouldreadmorebooksabouttraditionalChinesecultureinoursparetime8.toimproveitsoverallclarity,coherence,andaccuracy9.becauseitnotonlymadeadifference,butalsoraisedthestudents’senseofparticipation10.Andtheywereveryproudofme11.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproductsandsaveenergy12.sothatwecanmakeprogresstogether13.sinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife14.whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors’eyes15.AsthesayinggoesⅡ.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)1.I’mveryprivilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.→I’m_________privilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.2．Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.→Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，where____________sportsactivitiesareheldthere.3．Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.→I_____________ourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanconsidermyslogan.→Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan_______________.5．Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.→__________thatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.6．Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.→Aimedtohelpusto_________theimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.7．Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.→Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarm_________thefootofthehillnearourschool.8.Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.→Ishouldbe____________anytimeafterschoolnextweek.9.Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralgoodactivities.→Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveral________activities.10.Hearingthebadnews,theboycriedsadly.→Hearingthebadnews,theboy_________________sadly.【答案】1.morethan2.alargenumberof/varietiesof3.amconvincedthat4.takemysloganintoconsideration5.Keepinmind6.beawareof7.islocatedat8.available9.instructive10.burstintotearsⅢ.用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子1．Theydidn'trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdied.→____________________________________________________________________.(倒裝句)→_________________________________________________________________________.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)2.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.Theexhibitionwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou.→Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme,______________________________.(定語(yǔ)從句)3．Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.→_______________________________________________________________.(倒裝句)4.Thetournotonlyinstilledmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(倒裝句)5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity—“ShowGratitudetoOurSchoolthroughLabor”whichwasorganizedbytheStudentUnion.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ))6．IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.→__________________________________________________________________________________.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)7．Therearealotoftreesandflowersinourschoolandourschoollookslikeabiggarden.→_____________________________________________________________________.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))8．Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(定語(yǔ)從句)9.Wecanenjoythepleasureindoinghouseworkwhenwereallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoingit.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(倒裝句)10.Youshouldmakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellforthefuture.→_______________________________________________________________________________.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣提出建議)【答案】1.Notuntilallthefishintheriverdieddidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection;Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.whichwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou3.Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove4.Notonlydidthetourinstillmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity—“ShowGratitudetoOurSchoolthroughLabor”organizedbytheStudentUnion.6.ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish7.Withalotoftreesandflowersinourschool，ourschoollookslikeabiggarden8.Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose9.Onlywhenwereallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoinghouseworkcanweenjoythepleasureindoingit.10.IfIwereyou,Iwouldcertainlymakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellforthefuture.二、應(yīng)用文寫作1.（2024·福建省漳州市高中畢業(yè)班第二次質(zhì)量檢測(cè)）假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人李華。你的英國(guó)外教Andrew詢問你在接下來(lái)的課程中是否需要介紹一些有關(guān)英國(guó)的歷史知識(shí)。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件回復(fù)他。內(nèi)容如下：（1）你的態(tài)度；（2）你的理由；（3）你的建議。注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右；（2）可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearAndrew,ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.However,Ibelievethatitisn’tnecessary.Ourfocusshouldbeonimprovingstudents’Englishlanguageskills.WhilelearningaboutBritishcultureisinteresting,itmaynotbedirectlyrelevanttotheirlanguagedevelopment.Therefore,Isuggestwecontinuewithourcurrentlessonplan.However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.Butoverall,ourprimaryobjectiveshouldbetoimprovestudents’languageproficiency.Bestregards.

Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)外教Andrew寫一封郵件，就是否需要在接下來(lái)的課程中介紹一些有關(guān)英國(guó)的歷史知識(shí)表明態(tài)度并提出建議。1.詞匯積累感謝：thank→appreciate應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto集中于：focuson→concentrateon建議：suggest→advise2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.拓展句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhetheryoushouldintroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcominglessons.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]However,Ibelievethatitisn’tnecessary.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）2.（2024·湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市高三上學(xué)期1月新高考適應(yīng)性考試）為了豐富校園生活，你校將組織迎新年音樂會(huì)，請(qǐng)你寫一則通知，刊登在學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站上。內(nèi)容包括：1.舉辦時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)的意義。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。Notice________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】NoticeAimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadi