下載本文檔
版權(quán)說明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權(quán),請(qǐng)進(jìn)行舉報(bào)或認(rèn)領(lǐng)
文檔簡介
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WayneBooneisa53-year-oldtruckdriverforapaper-recyclingcompanyinSuffolk,Virginia.Everyday,hedrivestheempty18-heeltruckupInterstate64inChesapeaketowardVirginiaBeach,about50kilometersaway,wherehewillpickuphisfirstloadoftheday.OnemorninginApril,thestrongwindsgaveWayneBoone’struckagoodwhipping(鞭打).HeplannedtochangeintotheleftlaneoftheG.A.TreakleMemorialBridgewhenthestormletlooseitsfullforce.RainhammeredBoone’swindshield.Windsgrewfierce.Ashewasturning,Boone’sfrontwheelsmetthewetsurfacejustasapowerfulwindblewthedriver’ssideofhistruck.Itfeltlikethewindliftedthetruckclearoffthesurface.Histruckcrashedintotheguardrail(護(hù)欄)onthefarrightedge.Hestruggledtoregaincontrol,butanotherwind,blowingmoreviolently,pusheditupwardfrombelow,liftingthetruckcab(駕駛艙),withBooneinside,overtheedgeofthebridgebeforedroppingitagain.Ifhefeltanyhopeofsurvivalbefore,itdisappeared.Thetruckaimedstraightdowntowardthegrey-blackwater.Intheend,Boone’struckwashangingoverthebridge,under21metersofwhichwasadeepriver.Boonewasbadlyinjuredhalfblindedbythebloodpouringintohiseyesandsufferingfromshock.Heforcedhimselftofocus.Ifhehadanychanceofescapingthecabandsurviving,hehadtogetoutofhisseatbelt.Gatheringallhisstrength,hepulledhimselfbetweentheseatsandputhimselfbackasfarashecouldbehindthedriver’sseat.Hestruggledtograbhismobilephone,butitwasoutofhisreach.Afterhewashunginthewindforanhour,waitingtodie,Boonewasalmostexhausted.Washegoingtogetoutofherealive?Hehadneverpanicked.Hehadacceptedhisfate(命運(yùn)).Hewasreadytogoifthat’swhatwasmeanttobewhenheheardanoisewasdrawingnearer.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens(汽笛).____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意53歲的卡車司機(jī)WayneBoone在四月的一天駕駛卡車時(shí)遭遇強(qiáng)風(fēng)。在G.A.Treakle紀(jì)念橋上,他的卡車先是撞到護(hù)欄,后被強(qiáng)風(fēng)掀起,駕駛艙懸在橋邊,下方是深河。Boone受傷嚴(yán)重,被困在車內(nèi),在絕望中等待死亡時(shí)聽到了聲音靠近。他原本已接受命運(yùn),卻又燃起了一絲希望。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆:Boone從未驚慌且接受命運(yùn),為后續(xù)他在救援到來時(shí)的心態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)變做鋪墊,體現(xiàn)他堅(jiān)韌又無奈的心理。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)示例:在續(xù)寫中,可描寫當(dāng)救援人員到來時(shí),Boone內(nèi)心從絕望到希望的強(qiáng)烈轉(zhuǎn)變,以及這種轉(zhuǎn)變?nèi)绾误w現(xiàn)在他的行動(dòng)和情感上。比如他可能會(huì)更加積極地配合救援,眼神中重新煥發(fā)出求生的渴望等。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:描述Boone聽到警笛聲后的反應(yīng),救援人員的行動(dòng),如如何接近他、對(duì)他進(jìn)行安撫和采取救援措施等,以及Boone在這個(gè)過程中的感受和表現(xiàn)。第二段:講述Boone和救援人員出現(xiàn)在橋上時(shí)人們的反應(yīng),Boone被救后的狀態(tài)和心理活動(dòng),以及他對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感悟和可能產(chǎn)生的影響。情感線從遭遇事故時(shí)的驚恐、絕望,到聽到警笛聲后的希望燃起,再到被救后的欣慰、感激以及對(duì)生命的重新認(rèn)識(shí)。故事線卡車事故-被困等待-聽到救援聲音-救援過程-成功獲救及感悟主旨升華句(英文)Inthefaceofextremedanger,hopeisthelightthatguidesusthroughthedarkestmoments.(在極端危險(xiǎn)面前,希望是引領(lǐng)我們度過最黑暗時(shí)刻的光。)Thepowerofperseveranceandthearrivalofhelpcanturnadesperatesituationintoanewbeginning.(堅(jiān)持的力量和救援的到來可以將絕望的局面轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樾碌拈_始。)Eveninthejawsofdeath,thehumanspiritcanfindthestrengthtoholdonuntilsalvationarrives.(即使在死亡的邊緣,人類的精神也能找到堅(jiān)持的力量,直到救援到來。)Anear-deathexperienceteachesustocherishlifeandappreciateeveryopportunityforsurvival.(一次瀕死的經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我們珍惜生命,感激每一個(gè)生存的機(jī)會(huì)。)Whenallseemslost,thekindnessandcourageofotherscanbringusbackfromthebrinkandgiveusasecondchanceatlife.(當(dāng)一切似乎都失去時(shí),他人的善良和勇氣可以將我們從邊緣拉回,給我們第二次生命的機(jī)會(huì)。)寫作示范一Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Hisheartleapedwithaglimmerofhope.Soon,hesawtherescueteamarrivingatthescene.Theyquicklyassessedthesituationanddevisedaplantosavehim.Onerescuerrappelleddowntothetruck,carefullymakinghiswaytoBoone.HecomfortedBooneandsecuredasafetyharnessaroundhim.Then,withthehelpoftheotherrescuersabove,theyslowlyliftedBooneuptothebridge.Allthewhile,Booneheldontightly,hisbodystilltremblingfromtheordeal.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Therewerecheersandsighsofrelief.Boone,weakandexhausted,wasimmediatelyrushedtothehospital.Ashelayonthestretcher,hecouldn'tbelievehehadsurvivedsuchaterrifyingordeal.Hewasgratefultotherescuersandthestrokeofluckthathadbroughtthemtohimintime.Thisexperiencewouldforeverchangehisperspectiveonlife,makinghimcherisheverymomentandappreciatethepowerofhopeandhelpinthefaceofextremedanger.寫作示范二Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Thesoundgavehimnewstrengthandasenseofrelief.Therescueteamwastednotimeinsettinguptheirequipment.Askilledclimberdescendedtowardsthedanglingtruck,reachingBoonewithareassuringsmile.HecarefullycheckedBoone'sinjuriesandhelpedhimintoaspecialrescuedevice.Astheybegantheascentbacktothebridge,Boonefeltamixoffearandhope.Thewindstillwhippedaroundthem,butheknewhewasingoodhands.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Camerasflashedasthedramaticrescuewascaptured.Boonewasoverwhelmedwithemotions.Hewasgratefultobealiveandfortheheroiceffortsoftherescueteam.Inthefollowingdays,hewouldreflectontheincident,realizingthateveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysachanceforsalvation.Thisnear-deathexperiencewouldinspirehimtolivelifetothefullestandnevertakehissafetyandthekindnessofothersforgranted.寫作示范三Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens.Hisspiritliftedasheknewhelpwasontheway.Therescueoperationcommencedpromptly.AbraverescuerwaslowereddowntoBoone'sposition.HecalmedBoone'snervesandworkedquicklytoensurehissafety.Together,theypreparedfortheascent.Witheverypassingmoment,Boonefeltabitmoreatease.Therescuer'ssteadypresencegavehimthecourageheneededtofacethedifficultsituation.WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Theatmospherewaselectricwithreliefandcelebration.Boonewastakentoawaitingambulance.Ashelookedaroundatthepeoplegathered,hewasdeeplytouchedbytheoutpouringofconcern.Thisharrowingexperiencehadtaughthimthevalueoflifeandtheimportanceofnevergivinguphope.Hewouldcarrythislessonwithhimalways,andbeforevergratefulforthesecondchancehehadbeengivenonthatfatefulday.讀后續(xù)寫Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens(汽笛).Tohim,thenoisysoundcouldhavebeenangelssinging.Hopefinallyfloodedthroughhimasarescuercamedownwitharope.Hesighedinreliefwhentherescuergavehimstep-by-stepin
溫馨提示
- 1. 本站所有資源如無特殊說明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請(qǐng)下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
- 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請(qǐng)聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權(quán)益歸上傳用戶所有。
- 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁內(nèi)容里面會(huì)有圖紙預(yù)覽,若沒有圖紙預(yù)覽就沒有圖紙。
- 4. 未經(jīng)權(quán)益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文庫網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲(chǔ)空間,僅對(duì)用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護(hù)處理,對(duì)用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對(duì)任何下載內(nèi)容負(fù)責(zé)。
- 6. 下載文件中如有侵權(quán)或不適當(dāng)內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
- 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準(zhǔn)確性、安全性和完整性, 同時(shí)也不承擔(dān)用戶因使用這些下載資源對(duì)自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。
最新文檔
- 2025擔(dān)保旅游合同書
- 2025貨物保險(xiǎn)合同范文
- 二零二五年度幼兒園園長任期幼兒身心健康保障合同3篇
- 2025年度農(nóng)村宅基地房買賣合同(農(nóng)村旅游特色小鎮(zhèn)開發(fā))
- 二零二五年度農(nóng)村土地承包權(quán)土地經(jīng)營權(quán)流轉(zhuǎn)信息化建設(shè)合同
- 二零二五年度城市民宿租賃規(guī)范合同關(guān)于房屋出租3篇
- 二零二五幼兒入園早教托班全日制服務(wù)協(xié)議樣本3篇
- 二零二五年度漁業(yè)養(yǎng)殖市場調(diào)研與養(yǎng)魚合同3篇
- 二零二五年度新能源汽車核心零部件供貨協(xié)議模板3篇
- 2025年度園林景觀設(shè)計(jì)樹木補(bǔ)償合同3篇
- Unit 4 Plants around us Part A(說課稿)-2024-2025學(xué)年人教PEP版(2024)英語三年級(jí)上冊
- “小城鎮(zhèn)建設(shè)”論文(六篇)
- 安徽省蕪湖市2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期期末考試 生物 含解析
- 設(shè)備維護(hù)保養(yǎng)培訓(xùn)
- 三管三必須-新安法宣貫課件
- 農(nóng)戶種地合作協(xié)議書范本模板
- 住院病人身體約束護(hù)理
- 公共機(jī)構(gòu)能耗定額 第3部分:教育機(jī)構(gòu)DB41-T 1960.3-2021
- “雙減”初中九年級(jí)英語課時(shí)作業(yè)設(shè)計(jì)案例
- 廣東省潮州市暨實(shí)高級(jí)中學(xué)2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期9月月考語文試題
- GB/T 44415-2024基于全球衛(wèi)星導(dǎo)航的機(jī)動(dòng)車制動(dòng)性能路試檢驗(yàn)要求和方法
評(píng)論
0/150
提交評(píng)論