讀后續(xù)寫+復(fù)活節(jié)的驚險：河中救援彰顯人性溫暖+講義 高一下學(xué)期期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Krymzen,aged10andhersisterSamaraWagner,aged9,livedinEdmonton,neartheNorthSaskatchewanRiver.Itwas4p.m.onEasterSundayandtherewasstillsnowontheground.ThesistersdressedintheirfavoriteT-shirtsandpinkleggingsrantothewoodlandbehindtheirhome.TheylovedRundleParkintherivervalley.Itwasaperfectplacetoplaywhiletheirmom,MirandaWagner,wasbusypreparingthefamily’sfestivedinner.Beforelong,theygotbored.Theydecidedtodosomethingdifferent.KrymzenledthewayandSamarafollowed.Theywereheadingtotheoneplacetheirmomhadtoldthemnevertogo—theriver.Theystartedtakinglittlecarefulstepsacrosstheice,dippingtheirrubberbootsintothewater.Thentheyheardabigcrack.Afterhearingthecrack,Krymzenturnedaroundfastandgotbacktosafety.ButSamaradidn’t.Shefellintothecoldriver.Seeingthedangeroussituation,sheranbacktoSamara.“Samara,canyoureachmyhand?”shecriedashersisterstruggledinthewater.Notfarawayfromtheriver,ayoungcoupleAdamandKelseyShawwerewalkingtheirdogRocky,aneight-year-oldhusky.TheywerecrossingtheRundleParkfootbridgeonthewaybacktotheparkinglotwhentheyheardscreams.Theylookedoverthesideofthebridgeandspottedagirlwhohadfallenthroughtheiceandanothertryingtopullhertosafety.“Weseeyou!”Theyshouteddowntothem.“Helpiscoming!”AdamtoldKelseytocallanambulance.Thenheturnedtothedog.“Rocky,”hesaid,“we’regoingdown.”HeandRockyslippedandsliddownthesamehillthegirlstookjustminutesearlier.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

文章大意10歲的克里姆岑（Krymzen）和9歲的薩馬拉（Samara）在復(fù)活節(jié)周日下午到屋后的林地玩耍，這片靠近北薩斯喀徹溫河的林地是她們玩耍的好地方。玩了一會兒她們覺得無聊，決定前往媽媽禁止她們?nèi)サ暮舆?。在冰面上行走時，冰面開裂，克里姆岑及時返回安全地帶，但薩馬拉掉進了河里。不遠處，亞當(dāng)（Adam）和凱爾西（Kelsey）夫婦正帶著他們8歲的哈士奇洛基（Rocky）散步，聽到尖叫聲后發(fā)現(xiàn)了這一情況，亞當(dāng)讓凱爾西叫救護車，然后帶著洛基前去救援。伏筆與續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆：媽媽告誡姐妹倆不要去河邊，為后文薩馬拉掉入河中這一危險情況埋下伏筆，續(xù)寫中姐妹倆不聽勸告遭遇危險，引發(fā)了救援情節(jié)。伏筆：亞當(dāng)讓凱爾西叫救護車，為薩馬拉獲救后的救治情節(jié)做鋪墊，續(xù)寫中救護車及時趕到將薩馬拉送往醫(yī)院，使情節(jié)發(fā)展連貫。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線：緊張、堅定。亞當(dāng)和洛基到達裂縫處時氣氛緊張，亞當(dāng)?shù)男袆颖憩F(xiàn)出他救人的堅定決心，同時也為薩馬拉的安危揪心。故事線：詳細(xì)描述亞當(dāng)在冰面上艱難爬行接近薩馬拉并成功拉她上來的過程，以及洛基在旁邊的反應(yīng)。續(xù)寫示范：Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adamcarefullystretchedhimselfontheice,hisheartpounding.Rockystoodby,whiningsoftly.AdammanagedtoclaspSamara'sarmandpulledwithallhismight.Inchbyinch,hedraggedheroutoftheicywater.Samarawastrembling,herfacepalewithfear.Adamheldherclose,tryingtowarmher.第二段情感線：慶幸、感激。救護車及時趕到，大家為薩馬拉能得到救治而慶幸，薩馬拉的家人對救援者充滿感激之情。故事線：講述救護車到來后的情景，包括將薩馬拉送往醫(yī)院、醫(yī)生救治，以及家人的反應(yīng)。續(xù)寫示范：Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Theparamedicsquicklyputheronastretcherandintothevehicle.Atthehospital,doctorsworkedurgentlytostabilizehercondition.KrymzenandhermotherwereintearsofreliefwhentheysawSamarawasoutofdanger.TheythankedAdamandKelseyprofuselyforsavingSamara'slife.情感線從姐妹倆玩耍時的快樂、違反禁令的好奇，到薩馬拉掉入河中的驚恐，再到救援時的緊張和獲救后的慶幸、感激，情感起伏，扣人心弦，使讀者仿佛置身其中。情感變化推動故事發(fā)展，讓讀者更關(guān)注救援結(jié)果和人物命運。故事線故事圍繞姐妹倆在河邊的冒險展開，從玩耍、涉險到救援、送醫(yī)，情節(jié)完整、邏輯清晰，有起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果。每個環(huán)節(jié)緊密相連，突出了在危險面前人與人、人與動物互助的主題，展現(xiàn)了人性的溫暖和勇敢。主旨升華句"Inthefaceofdanger,ahelpinghandandaloyalcompanioncanbethelightthatguidesusbackfromthebrink."（在危險面前，援助之手和忠誠的伙伴可以成為將我們從邊緣拉回的光。）"Therescueontheicyrivershowsthatcourageandkindnesscanbreakthroughtheiceoffearandindifference."（冰河上的救援表明，勇氣和善良可以打破恐懼和冷漠的堅冰。）"Whendisasterstrikes,thebondbetweenstrangersandtheloveofourfurryfriendscancreatemiraclesonthefrozenwaters."（當(dāng)災(zāi)難來襲時，陌生人之間的情誼和我們毛茸茸朋友的愛可以在結(jié)冰的水面上創(chuàng)造奇跡。）"Thisincidentbytheriverisareminderthateverylifeisprecious,andouractionsintimesofcrisisdefineourhumanity."（河邊的這一事件提醒我們，每一個生命都是寶貴的，我們在危機時刻的行動定義了我們的人性。）"Theheroicdeedsontheriverprovethateveninthecoldestoftimes,thewarmthofthehumanheartandtheloyaltyofananimalcansavelives."（河上的英勇事跡證明，即使在最寒冷的時候，人心的溫暖和動物的忠誠也能拯救生命。）寫作示范范文一Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adam'seyeswerefixedonSamaraasheslidcloser.RockyusedhisstrongbodytostabilizeAdam.AdamfinallygotholdofSamara'shand.Withahugeeffort,hepulledherontotheice.Samarawascrying,herbodyshakingfromthecold.Adamhuggedhertightly,tryingtotransferhiswarmth.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Themedicalteamquicklytookover.Theywrappedherinwarmblanketsandstartedmedicalprocedures.Krymzenandhermomarrived,theirfacesfilledwithworryandgratitude.Thankstoeveryone'sefforts,Samaragraduallyrecovered.范文二Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adamlayontheice,ignoringthecoldseepingthroughhisclothes.Hereachedoutasfarashecould.Rockybarkedloudly,givinghimstrength.AdamgraspedSamara'swristandpulledherup.Shewashalf-conscious,herclothessoaked.Adamheldher,whisperingwordsofcomfort.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Theparamedicswereefficient.TheycheckedSamara'svitalsignsandrushedherinside.Atthehospital,thefamilyreunited.TheythankedAdamandKelseyfromthebottomoftheirhearts.Theeventmadethemcherishlifemore.范文三Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Adammovedslowly,hismindfocusedonsavingSamara.Rockystayedbesidehim,providingsupport.AdamgotSamara'sarmandpulledhertowardshim.Itwasastruggle,buthedidn'tgiveup.WhenSamarawasoutofthewater,Adamrubbedherarmstogetherbloodflowing.

Luckily,theambulancearrivedintimetorushSamaratohospital.Thedoctorsandnursesworkedquickly.TheywarmedSamaraupandtreatedherforpossibleinjuries.Krymzen'sfamilywassorelieved.Theyrealizedtheimportanceofsafetyandthepowerofkindnessduringthisharrowingexperience.參考答案

Adamandhisdogmanagedtoreachthecrack.Atthismoment,ifthegirlhadalsoslippedintothecrackduetopullingtheother,thethingwouldhavebeenevenworse.