高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作倡議書(shū)課件

ProposalEnvironmentalProtection學(xué)情分析：學(xué)生已經(jīng)掌握基本的環(huán)保相關(guān)話(huà)題詞匯，但句子結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)較基礎(chǔ)。教學(xué)目標(biāo)：通過(guò)倡議書(shū)必備要點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練，幫助學(xué)生鞏固寫(xiě)倡議書(shū)的寫(xiě)作模式。通過(guò)詞匯和句子的層層升級(jí)，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫(xiě)出環(huán)保主題相關(guān)的亮點(diǎn)句。LookatthepicturesbelowLead-in:Thedevelopmentofindustryhascausedseriousairpollution.Globalwarminghasledtomeltingglaciersanddrought.Risingsealevelandextremeweatherarealsosevereproblemsofourenvironment.Whatcanwedotoprotectourenvironment?Givenalltheseseriousenvironmentalproblems?TalkwithyourpartnerTopic-basedchunkCheckyourmemory1.空氣污染______________2.全球氣候變暖__________3.冰川融化______________4.干旱__________________5.海平面上升____________6.極端天氣______________7.棲息地減少_____________1.makesomerules_________________2.publicizerelevantknowledge________________________________3.callonsb.todo..._________________4.keepecologicalbalance________________________________5.improvepeople'sunderstandingof...

________________________________6.takeactions______________________7.liveinharmonywith...______________8.tryone'sbesttodo..._______________airpollutionglobalwarmingmeltingglaciersdroughtrisingsealevelextremeweatherhabitatloss制定規(guī)則宣傳相關(guān)知識(shí)呼吁某人做...維持生態(tài)平衡提高人們對(duì)...的認(rèn)識(shí)采取行動(dòng)與...和諧共處竭盡全力做...

假如你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來(lái)之際，請(qǐng)你向報(bào)社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點(diǎn)如下：1.環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。Anexampleofproposal題型解讀：倡議書(shū)由個(gè)人或集體發(fā)出，作用是倡導(dǎo)某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。StepsofWritingaComposition

Thinking(審題）01

Outlining（列提綱,寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)）02

Expanding（擴(kuò)詞成句）03

Linking（連句成篇）04

Polishing（潤(rùn)色）05

假如你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來(lái)之際，請(qǐng)你給報(bào)社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點(diǎn)如下：環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。02Thinking話(huà)題:環(huán)境保護(hù)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)體裁:倡議書(shū)（呼吁學(xué)生保護(hù)環(huán)境）Thinking(審題）Step1人稱(chēng):第一人稱(chēng)話(huà)題:環(huán)境保護(hù)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)開(kāi)頭正文結(jié)尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3

總結(jié)倡議，表達(dá)希望。要點(diǎn)1環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀(what)

要點(diǎn)2具體措施和作用(howandwhy)Outlining（列出提綱）Step2交代背景、原因和目的。

寫(xiě)明倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求。要點(diǎn)3發(fā)出倡議(acallforaction)

Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴(kuò)詞成句）Step3...iscomingseriousproblemsgettingworseandworseleadtoaswellasurgesb.todosth.1.WorldEnvironmentDayiscoming,manypeoplehaverealizedtheseriousproblemsoftheenvironment.2.Globalwarmingisgettingworseandworse，it

alsoleadsto

extremeweather.3.Meltingglaciersaswellashabitatlossareurgingusto

protecttheenvironment.世界環(huán)境日即將到來(lái)，很多人已經(jīng)意識(shí)到了環(huán)境的嚴(yán)重問(wèn)題。全球變暖正在日益惡化，這也導(dǎo)致了極端天氣。冰川融化和棲息地減少都在敦促我們?nèi)ケＷo(hù)環(huán)境。makesomelawsdrawpeople'sattentiontakeonresponsibilitiestodo...dolessharmto...improveone'sunderstandingof...liveagreenlifestyle1.Governmentshouldmakesomelawstodrawpeople'sattentiononenvironmentalprotection.2.Companiesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilitiessoastodolessharmtonature.3.Asindividuals，wecanimproveourunderstandingof

environmentalprotectionandliveagreenlifestyle.Expanding(擴(kuò)詞成句）Step3Para2（Body）政府應(yīng)該制定相關(guān)的法律來(lái)吸引人們的關(guān)注。企業(yè)應(yīng)該承擔(dān)他們的職責(zé)以便減少對(duì)自然的傷害。作為個(gè)人，我們可以提高環(huán)保意識(shí)，過(guò)綠色生活。

para3（Ending）

Itishightimethat...tryone'sbestto...withourjointeffortspayoffExpanding(擴(kuò)詞成句）Step31.It'shightimethatweshouldtryourbestto

protectourownplanet.2.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatwithourjointefforts,ourhardworkwillfinallypayoff.是時(shí)候竭盡全力來(lái)保護(hù)我們的地球了。我堅(jiān)信在我們的努力下，我們的辛苦付出終會(huì)獲得回報(bào)。Linking(連句成篇）Step4添加合適的過(guò)渡詞：1.表順序：首先：Initially,...Tobeginwith,…Firstandforemost,…Inthefirstplace,…Whatcomesfirstisthat...其次：Inaddition,...Additionally,...What'smore,..Moreover,...

Whatcomesnextisthat...Asidefromthat,...最后：Ultimately,...Lastbutnotleast,...2.表邏輯：表原因：since...as...because...dueto...owingto...onaccountof...表目的：inorderto...soasto...inorderthat...sothat...Step5makesomelaws

laydownrelevantlawsimprovepeople'sunderstandingof...enhancepeople'sawarenessof...

0203getworseandworse

getincreasinglybad01Polishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5tryone'sbestto...sparenoeffortto.../gotoone'slengthsto...0506keepecologicalbalance

maintain/sustainecologicalbanlance04

rememberbearinmindPolishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5TheWorldEnvironmentDayiscoming...Theairpollution

isgettingworse...01WithWorldEnvironmentDay

coming...with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):with+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)With

theairpollution

gettingworse...approaching...Polishing(錘煉句式1-非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）Step5Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad.Italsoleadstoextremeweather.Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

Itcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.02Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad,whichalsoleadstoextremeweather.定語(yǔ)從句合并簡(jiǎn)單句Polishing(錘煉句式2-定語(yǔ)從句）Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,whichcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.Step5Governmentshouldlaydownrelevantlawsandcompaniesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.Maintainingecologicalbalanceissocrucialforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnature.03Notonlyshouldgovernmentlaydownrelevantlaws,companiesalsoneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.1.notonly...,(but)also...2.so+adj.位于句首3.否定詞位于句首4.only+狀語(yǔ)位于句首Polishing(錘煉句式3-部分倒裝）SocrucialismaintaningecologicalbalanceforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnatureStep5Manymarineanimalsaredyingoutduringthepastdecades.Ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamagedinthepastfewcenturies.04Thepastdecadeshaswitnessedthatmanymarineanimalsaredyingout.時(shí)間+haswitnessedthat...Polishing(錘煉句式4-巧用witness）Thepastfewcenturieshaswitnessedthat

ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamaged.

Polishing(潤(rùn)色定稿）Step5

Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurgent.Toprotectourenvironment,weshouldworktogether.Firstly,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoraisepeople'sunderstandingofenvironmentalprotection.Secondly,companiesshouldneverpourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisimportantforkeepingthetheecologicalbalance.Thirdly,ourgovernmentshouldalsomakesomerulestobananyillegalbehaviors.It'shightimethatwetriedourbesttoprotectourplanetfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Rememberthatwecanliveahappierandhealthierlifebyprotectingourenvironment!Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurgent.

Polishing(潤(rùn)色定稿）Step5要點(diǎn)一：環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀Thelastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthat...ledto/broughtabout/accountedforwhich，increasingly

Polishing(潤(rùn)色定稿）Step5

Toprotectourenvironment,weshouldworktogether.Firstly,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoraisepeople'sunderstandingofenvironmentalprotection.Secondly,companiesshouldneverpourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisimportantforkeepingthetheecologicalbalance.Thirdly,ourgovernmentshouldalsomakesomerulestobananyillegalbehaviors.Weshouldmakejointeffortssoastoprotectourenvironment.要點(diǎn)二：具體措施nevershouldcompaniespourifofgreatsignificanceenhancepeople'sawarenessmaintaininglaydownbynomeansshouldcompaniespour

Polishing(潤(rùn)色定稿）Step5

It'shightimethatwetriedourbesttoprotectourplanetfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Rememberthatwecanliveahappierandhealthierlifebyprotectingourenvironment!wenttoourlengthsBearinmindonlybyprotectingourenvironment,canweliveahappierandhealthierlife!要點(diǎn)三：發(fā)出倡議

Polishing(潤(rùn)色定稿）Step5

Thelastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthatourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghasbroughtaboutbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather,whicharewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingincreasinglyurgent.

Weshouldmakejointeffortssoastoprotectourenvironment.

Inthefirstplace,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoenhancepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Additionally,

bynomeansshouldcompaniespourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisofgreatsignificanceformaintainingthetheecologicalbalance.Asidefromthat,ourgovernmentshouldalsolaydownrelevant