讀后續(xù)寫+情暖冬日：由泰迪熊開啟的友誼故事+講義- 高三下學期總復習質量測試英語試卷（二）

閱讀下面文章，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一個完整短文，續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右。SeeingthepictureofKellyandIholdingteddybearswithgreatjoy,Icouldn’thelprecallingthesweetmemory.Afewyearsago,beforeChristmas,mydadplacedalargeboxinhisgrocerystoreforpeopletodonatetoysforchildreninneed.Kelly,mybestfriendcameovertohelpwiththewrapping.Knowingthatoureffortswouldbringjoytosomanychildrenduringtheholidayseason,wethoughtitwasarewardingexperience.Asweworked,wesharedmomentsoflaughterandjoy.Afterashortwhile,wehadalmostfinishedwrappingallthetoyswithjustonelittleteddybearleft.Lookingatit,Isaid,“Itisthesweetest!Itremindsmeofmyteddybear.Isoldallmylittlekidstuffatourgaragesalewhenwemoved.ButnowI’mreallymissingit!”Kellycametoseeitandshared.“Ihaveasadteddybearstorytoo.Whenmylittlebrotherwasababy,IlethimplaywithmyRosyBear,butherefusedtogiveherback.Ever.”Afterourchat,weknewbothofushadaspecialstorywithateddybear.Rightthen,mydadenteredtheroomandexclaimed.“Wow,greatwrappingjob!Thekidsaregoingtobethrilledwhenopeningthesepresents.”“Theydefinitelywill.Maybewebothwanttobetheonewhocangettheteddybear.Icanjustimaginehowdelightedakidwouldbetounwrapthissweetteddybear.”saidKelly.Welaughed,gazingattheperfectlywrappedbears.Mymom,joininginthelaughter,suggested,“Whydon’tyougatheratourhousenextSaturdayforacookie-decoratingpartyandexchangeyourChristmasgiftsinadvance?I’llpreparethecookiesforyou.”“Goodidea!Iwillenjoythegreatjoyofunwrappingthegift.”Isaidcheerfully.Hearingwhatwesaid,Kelly’seyeslitup,saying,“Countmein!”“Allright,girls,”saidmydad.“Weneedtodothetoy-loadingworknow.Wehavetodropoffallthesepresentsbeforefiveo’clock!”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：幾年前圣誕節(jié)前，作者和好友Kelly在爸爸的雜貨店幫忙包裝捐贈給貧困兒童的玩具，剩下一只可愛的泰迪熊，兩人都對其有特殊情感且都希望有孩子能得到它。媽媽提議下周六在作者家舉辦餅干裝飾派對并提前交換圣誕禮物，之后作者和爸爸去送玩具，故事在此處展開續(xù)寫。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：作者和Kelly都講述了自己與泰迪熊的故事，且都對剩下的那只泰迪熊有特別的情感，為后續(xù)兩人準備禮物時可能與泰迪熊相關做鋪墊?；貞鹤髡咚奶帉ふ遗c泰迪熊有關的禮物，最終買到一只復古的小熊鑰匙鏈，呼應了前文對泰迪熊的情感，也使故事圍繞泰迪熊這一元素展開，情節(jié)連貫且主題突出。伏筆：媽媽提議舉辦派對并交換禮物，引發(fā)了作者準備禮物的行動，推動故事發(fā)展?；貞鹤髡哂眯臏蕚涠Y物，在派對上與Kelly交換，這一情節(jié)順理成章，同時也營造了溫馨歡樂的氛圍，豐富了故事內容，體現了朋友間的情誼。伏筆：作者提到賣了小時候的東西后想念泰迪熊，暗示她可能對泰迪熊相關物品有渴望，這為她尋找禮物提供了方向?；貞鹤髡哔I到復古小熊鑰匙鏈，滿足了自己對泰迪熊的情感寄托，也讓這份禮物更具意義，既符合人物心理，又使故事更加完整，強化了情感線。伏筆：作者和Kelly都期待派對上拆禮物的快樂，表現出她們對這次活動的重視和期待?；貞号蓪ι蟽扇私粨Q禮物時的驚喜和開心，回應了之前的期待，將氣氛推向高潮，展現了友誼的美好，使情感線更加豐富和飽滿。伏筆：之前包裝玩具的歡樂場景，營造了溫馨和諧的氛圍，為后續(xù)派對的歡樂氣氛做了鋪墊?；貞号蓪ι洗蠹乙黄鹧b飾餅干、交換禮物，充滿歡聲笑語，延續(xù)了之前的溫馨氛圍，使整個故事的情感基調保持一致，突出了愛與分享的主題。續(xù)寫要點情感線：第一段：作者在準備禮物的過程中，心情既興奮又有些忐忑，興奮的是即將和Kelly交換禮物，忐忑的是擔心自己準備的禮物不夠好，同時懷著對童年泰迪熊的懷念之情，努力尋找能讓Kelly開心的禮物，這份用心體現了對友誼的珍視。第二段：派對當天，作者起初有些緊張，當看到Kelly時又充滿期待，在交換禮物環(huán)節(jié)，收到Kelly的禮物后，心中滿是驚喜和感動，感受到了友誼的深厚和溫暖，兩人的情誼在這個過程中進一步升溫，整個氛圍溫馨而幸福。故事線：第一段：接下來的一周，我絞盡腦汁想為派對準備一份完美的禮物。我逛了好幾家商店，都沒有找到合適的。直到有一天，我在一家二手店的角落里發(fā)現了一個復古的小熊鑰匙鏈，它看起來和我小時候的泰迪熊有幾分相似。我立刻把它買了下來，精心包裝好，期待著在派對上給Kelly一個驚喜。我想象著她看到禮物時的表情，心中充滿了喜悅和期待。第二段：終于，派對的日子到了。Kelly早早地來到了我家，我們一起開心地裝飾餅干。當交換禮物的時刻到來時，我緊張地把禮物遞給Kelly，她也笑著遞給我一個包裝精美的盒子。我打開一看，里面是一只手工縫制的小熊玩偶，和我們之前看到的那只捐贈的泰迪熊一樣可愛。Kelly說她知道我想念小時候的泰迪熊，所以特意做了這個送給我。我感動得熱淚盈眶，緊緊地抱住了她。這個圣誕節(jié)，因為有這份真摯的友誼，變得格外溫暖。主旨升華句Truefriendshipislikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,alwaysbringingcomfortandhappiness,andmakingeveryordinarydayshinewithextraordinarymeaning.（真正的友誼就像寒冬里的一團溫暖火焰，總能帶來慰藉和幸福，讓每一個平凡的日子閃耀出非凡的意義。）Thebeautyofgivingliesnotinthevalueofthegift,butintheloveandthoughtfulnessbehindit.Itistheseintangiblethingsthattrulytouchtheheartandstrengthenthebondoffriendship.（給予的美好不在于禮物的價值，而在于背后的愛和體貼。正是這些無形的東西真正觸動心靈，加強了友誼的紐帶。）Inthesimpleactofexchanginggifts,wefindtheessenceofChristmas-thespiritoflove,sharing,andthejoyofmakingothershappy,whichisthemostpreciousgiftwecangiveandreceive.（在交換禮物這一簡單行為中，我們找到了圣誕節(jié)的精髓——愛、分享的精神以及讓他人快樂的喜悅，這是我們能給予和收到的最珍貴的禮物。）Sometimes,thethingsweholddearfromourchildhoodcaninspireustocreatenewmemoriesanddeepenourrelationships.Itshowsthatthepastisnotjustamemory,butasourceofinspirationforthepresentandthefuture.（有時，我們童年珍視的東西可以激勵我們創(chuàng)造新的回憶并加深人際關系。這表明過去不僅僅是一段記憶，更是現在和未來的靈感源泉。）Thewarmthoffriendshipcanfillthevoidleftbylostchildhoodtreasures.Itteachesusthatwhilethingsmaycomeandgo,theloveandconnectionwesharewithourfriendswillalwaysremain,makingourlivesricherandmoremeaningful.（友誼的溫暖可以填補童年失去的珍寶所留下的空白。它教導我們，雖然事物可能來來去去，但我們與朋友分享的愛和聯(lián)系將永遠存在，使我們的生活更加豐富和有意義。）寫作示范第一篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.Irummagedthroughmyroom,lookingforsomethingspecial.ThenIrememberedthestoryKellytoldaboutherRosyBear.Idecidedtosearchforasimilarteddybearonline.Afterhoursofbrowsing,Ifinallyfoundonethatlookedjustlikeit.Iordereditimmediatelyandwaitedanxiouslyforittoarrive.Whenitcame,Iwrappeditupwithabigredbowandahandwrittennote,expressinghowmuchourfriendshipmeanttomeandhowIhopedthisbearwouldbringhersomecomfortandjoy,justlikethememoriesofherRosyBear.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Kellywalkedinwithabigsmileonherface,holdingabeautifullywrappedbox.Wespenttheafternoondecoratingcookiesandchattinghappily.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,myheartracedwithexcitement.Ihandedhertheteddybear,andhereyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelight.Shethengavemehergift,andinsidewasascrapbookfilledwithpicturesofusandthememorieswehadsharedovertheyears.Aswelookedthroughittogether,tearsofhappinessfilledoureyes.ThisChristmas,throughthesesimplegifts,werealizedthatthemostpreciousthingsinlifearethefriendshipswecherishandthelovewesharewitheachother.第二篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.IthoughtaboutallthethingsKellyandIhaddonetogetherandwhatshemightlike.Idecidedtomakeherapersonalizedphotoframewithpicturesofusandthetoyswehadwrapped.Ispentdayscuttingandpastingthephotos,decoratingtheframewithglitterandstickers.Ialsoaddedasmallcharmintheshapeofateddybeartothecorner.Whilemakingit,IthoughtabouthowluckyIwastohavesuchagreatfriend.Icouldn'twaittoseeherreactionwhenshereceivedmygift.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Thehousewasfilledwiththesmelloffreshlybakedcookies.Kellyarrived,andwehuggedeachothertightly.Aswedecoratedthecookies,welaughedandsharedstories.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,Ihandedherthephotoframe.Shegaspedwithdelightandgavemeawarmhug.Thenshegavemehergift,whichwasaknittedscarfinmyfavoritecolor.Shesaidshehadspentweeksmakingitforme.Iwasdeeplytouched.Thatday,aswesattogether,enjoyingthecookiesandourgifts,Iunderstoodthatthebestgiftsaretheonesthatcomefromtheheart,andthatourfriendshipwasthegreatestgiftofall.參考答案

Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.HopingtobringgreatjoyandsurprisetoKelly,Isearchedforsomethingunique.Oneday,walkinghomefromschool,Isawitintheshopwindow.ItisateddybearexactlyliketheoneI’dbeenwrapping.Iquicklyran