中考英語解題技巧模板專題02 記敘文之?dāng)⑹骂悾▽懽鞔痤}模板）（解析版）

專題02記敘文之?dāng)⑹骂愵}型概述｜模板構(gòu)建｜真題試煉本節(jié)導(dǎo)航本節(jié)導(dǎo)航模板01日?；顒幽０?2難忘的事件模板03旅行經(jīng)歷識識中考·題型解讀書面表達(dá)是中考的必考題型,它應(yīng)符合以下要求。1.中心明確2.連續(xù)流暢3.語言得體(1)寫作時(shí)應(yīng)盡量避免使用冗長、復(fù)雜、易犯錯誤的句子,用簡潔、精練的語句表達(dá),做到言簡意賅。(2)寫作前把要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容整理歸納,理清思路,做到條理分明,要點(diǎn)齊全,切忌逐詞逐句按漢語方式翻譯,生編硬造。(3)能清楚表達(dá)文章內(nèi)容的前提下,盡量措辭,不時(shí)出現(xiàn)“閃光點(diǎn)”,這將為你的文章增光添彩。高分要求1.寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2.語句流暢；基本無語法和詞匯方面的錯誤，少數(shù)錯誤主要是由于較高級詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致；

3.詞數(shù)達(dá)到要求；基本無單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。善善總結(jié)·模板構(gòu)建答｜題｜步｜驟第一步：審題，列提綱第二步：1.根據(jù)提綱撰寫文章2.檢查文章，改正錯誤第三步：全文抄寫于答題卡，不出現(xiàn)涂改。模｜板｜構(gòu)｜建模板模板01日?；顒覫’mwritingtosharewithyoumyexperienceon（活動內(nèi)容）.（誰）wenttovisit（時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)）.Wetookabustogetthere.（怎么去）Whenwearrived,theheadofthefarmgaveusawarmwelcome.First（活動內(nèi)容一及收獲）.Then（活動內(nèi)容二及收獲）.Themostinterestingthingwasthat（活動內(nèi)容三及收獲）.Thoughweweretired,wedidhaveagreatdayandlearnedalot.（結(jié)尾）參考詞句單詞1.忙碌的busy2.緊張不安的nervous3.談話；交談conversation4.令人厭煩的boring5.有趣的interesting6.多姿多彩的colorful7.活動activity8.野餐picnic9.家務(wù)勞動housework10.舒服的；安逸的comfortable11.每天的everyday 12.可得到的；有空的available13.私人的private14.日常的daily15.醒著awake16.瞌睡的；困倦的sleepy句型1.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聰明的孩子也變傻。2.Weshouldgotobedearlysothatwecanfocusonourlessonsinclass.

我們應(yīng)該早點(diǎn)睡覺,以便上課時(shí)能夠集中精神聽課。3.Onweekdays,Iamalwaysbusywithmyschoolwork.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendtimewithmyfamily.

在工作日,我總是忙于我的學(xué)業(yè)。在周末,我通常和我的家人一起度過。4.Afterschool,Iusuallytakeexercisewhichhelpsmekeephealthy.放學(xué)后,我通常做運(yùn)動保持健康。

5.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.孩子們越早學(xué)會獨(dú)立,對他們的未來就越好。

6.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.

做家務(wù)能幫助發(fā)展孩子們的獨(dú)立性,并且教他們?nèi)绾握疹櫵麄冏约骸！旱湫屠}』假如你是李華，上周五參加了學(xué)校組織的研學(xué)旅行。請根據(jù)下圖提示，用英語寫一封郵件，向你的外國筆友David介紹活動情況以及自己的收獲或感想。寫作指導(dǎo)要點(diǎn)提示詞塊串聯(lián)開頭：

引出主題我的游學(xué)經(jīng)歷（my

experience

on

the

study

tour）正文：

描述研學(xué)旅行的活動內(nèi)容參觀紅軍博物館（visit

the

Red

Army

Museum）喂動物（feed

animals）煮飯（cook

the

meal）結(jié)尾：個人感受度過很愉快的一天（haveagreatday）學(xué)到很多（learnalot）【高分范文】DearDavid,I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyexperienceonthestudytour.MyclassmatesandIwenttovisittheRedArmyFarmlastFriday.Wetookabustogetthere.Whenwearrived,theheadofthefarmgaveusawarmwelcome.HeledustotheRedArmyMuseumandtoldusthestoriesoftheRedArmy.Thenwevisitedanimalsintheanimalhouseandlearnedtofeedthem.Themostinterestingthingwasthatwecookedthemealbyourselves.Thoughweweretired,wedidhaveagreatdayandlearnedalot.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板模板02難忘的事件I'llneverforgetthedaywhen(說明時(shí)間、人物和地點(diǎn)).WhenIwasinGrade8,.Mymom(說明事件背景).Onesunnymorning,shetookmetothechildren'shome.WhenIgotthere,I(到達(dá)目的地后的感受).Therewere,Others(所見所聞).I(所做的事).Ifelt(自己的感覺).Fromit,Iknew(對此事的感悟)參考詞句單詞forget忘記；experience經(jīng)歷；problem問題；disabled殘疾的；happiness福短語besatisfiedwith對...滿意；takesb.to..帶某人去..；giveaway捐贈句型Factsspeaklouderthanwords.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。Careanddiligencebringluck.謹(jǐn)慎和勤奮才能抓住機(jī)遇。I'llneverforgetthedaywhen.…我將永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記.…….的那天。Some..others.一些...其他...『典型例題』Writeapassageaboutaneventthat'sthemostunforgettableforyouduringyourjuniorhighschool.(寫一件在三年的初中生活中你最難忘的事情。)請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫出一篇90—120詞的短文。注意不要出現(xiàn)自己的信息：諸如姓名，學(xué)校，人名可以用英文名字。1.Thetitleofyourstory.(你的故事的標(biāo)題。)2.Firstwriteabouttheevent(whenandwhereithappenedandwho).(首先寫關(guān)于事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、相關(guān)人物等。)3.Nextwriteabouthowithappened.(接下來寫事件是如何發(fā)生的。)4.Thenwriteabouthowyoufeelaboutthisevent.(然后寫一下你關(guān)于這件事的感受。)5.Atlastwriteabouthowthiseventhaschangedyourlifeorwhatyoulearnfromit.(最后寫一下這件事如何改變你的人生或者你從中學(xué)到什么。)寫作模板Givingisbetterthantaking【高分范文】GivingisbetterthantakingI'llneverforgetthedaywhenmymomtookmetothechildren'shome.WhenIwasinGrade8,IwasnotsatisfiedwithwhatIhad.Mymomknewallaboutmyproblem.Onesunnymorning,shetookmetothechildren'shome.WhenIgotthere,Icouldn'tbelievewhatIsaw.Thereweresomepoorkids.Someweredisabled.Othersworeoldclotheswithouttoys.Igaveawaymybeautifulclothes,toysandbookstothem.IfeltIwashappyandluckyenoughtoliveinafamilyfulloflove.Fromit,Iknewhappinessisgivingnottaking.參考譯文給予比索取更好我將永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記媽媽帶我去兒童之家的那天。當(dāng)我在8年級時(shí)，我對自己所擁有的并不滿意。我媽媽知道我的問題。一個晴朗的早晨,她帶我去了兒童之家。當(dāng)我到達(dá)那里時(shí),我簡直不敢相信我所看到的。那里有一些可憐的孩子。有些人是殘疾人。其他人穿著破舊的衣服，沒有玩具。我把我漂亮的衣服、玩具和書籍贈送給了他們。我覺得我足夠地幸福和幸運(yùn),生活在一個充滿愛的家庭中。這件事讓我明白了幸福是給予而不是索取。模板模板03旅行經(jīng)歷和介紹I’mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I’dliketoinviteyouto（地點(diǎn)）foravisit.lies（地理位置）.Ithasapopulationof（人口）.Becauseoftheniceenvironment,itattractsmillionsoftouristsfromhomeandabroad.Ifyoucome,youcanenjoy.Manyfamousplacesofinterestlike（名勝古跡）arewellworthvisiting.Besides,youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood（美食）.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!參考詞句單詞forget忘記；experience經(jīng)歷；problem問題；disabled殘疾的；happiness福短語besatisfiedwith對...滿意；takesb.to..帶某人去..；giveaway捐贈句型1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游開闊眼界。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmore.遠(yuǎn)行者見識廣。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.讀萬卷書，行萬里路。4.IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoBeijing,whichwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceforme.我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記第一次去北京的旅行,對我來說這是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。

5.Guangzhouisabeautifulcitywithplentyoffamousplacesofinterest.

廣州是一個美麗的城市,有很多名勝古跡。6.Travelingcannotonlyenrichourknowledgeaboutthelocalculturebutalsomakeusgetrelaxedandkeephealthy.旅游不但能夠豐富我們對當(dāng)?shù)匚幕恼J(rèn)識,也能夠讓我們放松和保持健康。

『典型例題』你的美國朋友John計(jì)劃暑假來中國旅游。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建。審題指導(dǎo)1.本題要求考生寫一段留言介紹福建，并向友人發(fā)出邀請；2.使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);3.短文須涵蓋以下五個要點(diǎn)：1）地理位置；（2）省會；（3）人口；（4）環(huán)境；（5）名勝;4.可在其他方面進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展。列提綱寫作指導(dǎo)要點(diǎn)提示詞塊串聯(lián)開頭：

引出主題邀請你來我的家鄉(xiāng)福建（inviteyoutomyhometownFujian）

正文：描述福建的地理位置、省會、人口、環(huán)境和名勝等地理位置（southeastofChina）省會（withFuzhouasitscapitalcity）人口（over41million）環(huán)境（niceenvironment）名勝（placesofinterest）結(jié)尾：個人期望期待見到你（lookforwardtomeetingyou）【高分范文】Hi,John,I’mgladtohearthatyou’replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I’dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.Ithasapopulationofover41million.Becauseoftheniceenvironment,itattractsmillionsoftouristsfromhomeandabroad.Ifyoucome,youcanenjoyfreshair,blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers.ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiandGulangyuIslandarewellworthvisiting.Besides,youcantastevariouskindsofdeliciousfood.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!解解真題·思維剖析一（2023·山東東營·統(tǒng)考中考真題）旅游是我們看世界的重要方式，它可以讓我們開闊視野，增長見識，豐富閱歷，陶冶情操。如果你有機(jī)會出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？為什么想去那個地方？你想在那個地方干些什么？請以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、學(xué)校及其他相關(guān)信息。2.照抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分。TheplaceIwanttovisit_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】TheplaceIwanttovisitBeijing,thesecondlargestcityinourcountry,istheplaceIwanttovisit.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,andhasahistoryofmorethan3,000years.Ithasbeenthecapitalformanydynasties.Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.Therearealsosomenewstadiums,includingtheBirdNestandtheWaterCube,whichwerebuiltforthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Iamreallylookingforwardtogoingthereandvisitingallthewonderfulplaces.Atthesametime,IhopeBeijingwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.二（2023·四川眉山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）勞動創(chuàng)造美好生活，勞動實(shí)踐從我做起。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)下表要點(diǎn)，以“LaborisGlorious(勞動光榮)”為題，向校報(bào)“英語園地”欄目投稿。勞動實(shí)踐在學(xué)校，和同學(xué)一起打掃教室和操場；在家里，做飯、洗衣服、整理房間；在社區(qū)，做志愿者，幫助老人或殘疾人。勞動收獲學(xué)到一些基本生活技能，學(xué)會照顧自己；獲得滿足感，變得更加獨(dú)立和有責(zé)任心。發(fā)出倡議……注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。LaborisGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】LaborisGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelptheoldordisabled.Bydoingthese,I’velearntsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.Besides,Ihavenotonlygotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionbutalsobecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.Allinall,laborcreatesabetterlifesolet’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.(2021江蘇蘇州)在日常生活中,沖突難免發(fā)生。請以“Aconflictwith...”為題,用英語寫下你與他人(如:家人、老師、同學(xué)等)或自己內(nèi)心發(fā)生過的沖突故事。故事需包括沖突的發(fā)生和解決。注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右;2.請先將標(biāo)題填寫完整,再寫文章;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;4.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。參考詞匯:conflictn.沖突Aconflictwith

【高分范文】AconflictwithmyfriendEveryoneneedsfriends,butsometimeswemayhavesomeconflictswithourfriends.IquarrelledwithmygoodfriendJohnduringabasketballgamelastweek.Iknockedintohimwhenweweretryingtocatchtheball.Thenwestartedshoutingateachotheranditturnedintoanawfulquarrelfinally.Threedayslater,Ibecamecalmandrealizedmymistake,soIwenttosaysorrytoJohn.ButJohnsaiditwashewhocausedtheconflict.Finally,wehuggedeachother.Nowweknowthatwhenwehaveconflicts,weshouldstaycalmandputourselvesinothers'place.Onlyinthiswaycanwesolveconflictswell.（2021·四川南充市·中考真題）某英語雜志社以“我勞動，我快樂”為主題向中學(xué)生開展征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。要點(diǎn)：(1)分享你最難忘的勞動經(jīng)歷；(2)談?wù)勀愕膭趧痈惺埽?3)表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)并發(fā)出倡議。要求：1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutfiveorsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedmewithabigsmile.Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.Alittlebittiredbuthappy,IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,I’vealsogotadeeperunderstandingofmyparents.Ithinkit’sourdutytosharesomehousework.Besides,doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Asteenagers,weshouldtakeactiontohelparoundthehouse!練練好題·題型通關(guān)一上周六你校為了慶?！拔濉に摹鼻嗄旯?jié)，特意在校內(nèi)舉行了一次為貧困兒童募捐的活動。假如你參加了此次周末活動，請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹這次活動的情況。活動時(shí)間5月4日上午活動地點(diǎn)學(xué)校操場活動目的幫助貧困兒童籌到物資各種學(xué)習(xí)用品(如書本……)數(shù)千元錢你的感想……(不少于兩點(diǎn))寫作要求：1．短文內(nèi)容必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；2．語句通順、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范；3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名；4．詞數(shù)不少于90。參考詞匯：playground操場；meaningful有意義的；adonationactivity募捐活動【高分范文】OnthemorningofMay4th，ourschoolheldadonationactivityontheplaygroundtocelebratetheYouthDay.Inordertohelppoorchildren，manystudentsandteacherstookanactivepartintheactivity.Wecollectedallkindsofthingsforthem，suchassomenewbooks，dictionaries，clothesandschoolbags.Besidesthese，wealsocollectedseveralthousandyuan.Thoughthemoneycan'tmakeabigdifferencetothosechildren'slife，itcanmakethemfeelhopefulabouttheirlife.Also，itcanhelpmorestudentsgobacktoschoolandcontinuetheirschoollife.Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.Itcanhelppoorchildrengetthethingsthattheywant.Moreimportantly，notonlyourstudentsbutalsothosechildrencanlearnsomethingfromtheactivity.Comeandjoinus!二予人玫瑰,手有余香。你是否參加過志愿者活動,幫助社會上需要幫助的人呢?或者曾經(jīng)在某方面幫助過同學(xué),盡管是一件小事卻給你留下了深刻的記憶?請你在志愿者活動和幫助同學(xué)的經(jīng)歷中選擇其一描述過程,并說說自己的感想。DovolunteerworkHelpclassmatesworkas...hurtone’slegwhilehavingabasketballgamehaveastrongfeelingofsatisfactiontakehim/hertothehospitallearnalotfromtheexperiencefeelhappytohelpothers......要求:(1)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)和連接詞,使文章通順連貫;(2)開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(3)詞數(shù):100左右。Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.

_______【高分范文】Possibleversion1:Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.Inmysparetime,Ioftenworkasavolunteer.Istillrememberthatonacoldwinterafternoon,IwenttotheChildren’sHospitaltovisitsickchildren.MyclassmatesandIpreparedsomegiftsforthem.Whenthechildrengotthegifts,theyweresoexcitedthattheycouldn’thelplaughinghappily.Tomakethemhappy,wealsosangsongsforthemandplayedgameswiththem.Atthattime,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.

Ithinkit’squitemeaningfultovisitsickchildrenbecauseitnotonlybringsthemjoybutalsohelpsmelearnalotfromtheexperience.Possibleversion2:Astheoldsayinggoes,“Therose’sinherhand;theflavorinmine”.Iamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Twomonthsago,oneofmyclassmatesJackhurthislegwhilehavingabasketballgame.Ifoundthathefelldownonthefloorandseemedpainful.SoItookhimtothehospitalnearby.Luckily,thedoctorsaiditw