Unit4 解透單元寫作

2/2Unit4解透單元寫作主題寫作——逆境和勇氣1.寫作任務(wù)假設(shè)你是李華，受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文電影，主要內(nèi)容包括：（1）放映時間、地點；（2）影片內(nèi)容；（3）歡迎對影片進(jìn)行評論。注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.寫作思路（1）一審：體裁、結(jié)構(gòu)與主題體裁：應(yīng)用文——通知第一段：基本信息及影片內(nèi)容介紹結(jié)構(gòu)：兩段第二段：電影評價及歡迎對影片進(jìn)行評論主題：觀影通知（2）二定：時態(tài)與人稱時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主人稱：第三人稱（3）三明確：寫作要點基本信息：時間、地點、影片內(nèi)容電影介紹：故事梗概電影評議：電影評價、歡迎發(fā)表評論3.素材整理（1）關(guān)鍵詞語beduetodosth.預(yù)計做某事theexpeditionto去……的探險aftertenmonths’voyage在十個月的航行后becrushedintopieces被壓成碎片getoutofdanger擺脫危險inthefaceofadversity面對逆境bebelievedto被認(rèn)為voiceone’sopinion發(fā)表某人的看法（2）完成句子①這部英語電影，預(yù)計將在周五下午2點在學(xué)校大廳放映。TheEnglishfilm________________________________________at2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.②它講述了由著名的歐內(nèi)斯特沙克爾頓爵士帶領(lǐng)遠(yuǎn)征南極的故事。Itdepictsthethe________________SouthPole________________thefamousSirErnestShackleton.③不幸的是，經(jīng)過十個月的航行后，他們的船被冰擠壓成了碎片，他們不得不放棄船只。________,aftertenmonths’________,theirship________________intopiecesbyiceandtheyhadto________it.④正是船員們在面對逆境時的堅持、忍耐力和決心拯救了他們。Itwasthecrewmembers’________,________and________inthefaceof________________savedthem.⑤人們認(rèn)為這部電影很有教育意義并且非常精彩。Thefilm________________________be________andwonderful.⑥看完電影后，歡迎所有學(xué)生發(fā)表對這部電影的看法。Allthestudentsarewelcometo________________________aboutthefilm________seeingthefilm.答案：①isduetobeshown②expeditionto,ledby③Unfortunately,voyage,wascrushed,abandon④perseverance,endurance,resolution,adversitythat⑤isbelievedto,instructive⑥voicetheiropinions,after4.高分作文NOTICEAnEnglishfilm,TheEndurance：Shackleton’sLegendaryAntarcticExpedition,isduetobeshownat2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.ItdepictstheexpeditiontotheSouthPoleledbythefamousSirErnestShackleton.In1914,ShackletonsailedtowardstheSouthPolebutunfortunately,aftertenmonths’voyage,theirshipwascrushedintopiecesbyiceandtheyhadtoabandonit.Theyfinallysucceededingettingoutofdangerin1916.Itwasthecrewmembers’perseverance,enduranceandresolutioninthefaceofadversitythatsavedthem.Thefilmisbelievedtobeinstructiveandwonderful.Allthestudentsarewelcometovoicetheiropinionsaboutthefilmafterseeingthefilm.TheStudents’Union5.佳作背誦（1）佳作一假設(shè)你是校學(xué)生會主席李華，你校將舉辦一次主題為“逆境和勇氣”的英語演講比賽，請你給外籍教師史密斯太太寫封信，邀請她擔(dān)任演講比賽的評委。主要內(nèi)容包括：①寫信目的；②演講比賽舉辦的時間、地點和主題；③注意問題。注意：①詞數(shù)80左右；②可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMrs.Smith,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMrs.Smith,AnEnglishspeechcontest,themed“AdversityandPerseverance”,willtakeplaceinourschool.Isincerelyinviteyoutoserveasajudge.Thecontestwillbeheldintheschoolhallfrom2to5pmonJune15.Tenqualifiedcandidateswilltakepart.Youarerequiredtoprovideathoroughanddetailedassessmentoftheirspeech.Besides,specificguidanceisalsowhatwearereallyexpected.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbepresent.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（2）佳作二假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter非常喜愛看小說，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他介紹一本你最喜歡的小說。主要內(nèi)容包括：①小說名稱；②小說內(nèi)容；③對你的影響。注意：①詞數(shù)80左右；②開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketosharewithyoumyfavoritenovel.ThenovelisTheOldManandtheSea,tellingaboutanoldfishermanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightswithgreatenduranceandperseverance.Althoughfinallyhefails,hisoptimisticattitudeandspiritofnevergivingupreallycount.Thenovelteachesmealot.Ishouldbeconfidentwhateveradversitymaylieahead.AslongasIpersevere,nothingcanpreventmegoingahead.Whataboutyou?Yours,LiHua【附】話題寫作常用表達(dá)和句型1.Itwastheirperseveranceandenduranceinthefaceofadversitythathelpedthemsucceedintheend.正是他們在面對逆境時的堅持和忍耐力幫助他們最終獲得成功。2.Nodifficultycannotbeovercomeaslongaswehavefaithinourselves.只要我們自己有信念，沒有什么困難克服不了。3.Weareconvincedthat,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.我們相信，有志者事竟成。4.Oncewehavemadethedecision，wearesupposedtosparenoeffortstoachieveit.一旦我們做出決定，我們應(yīng)該不遺余力地去實現(xiàn)它。5.Thesecretofsuccessistosticktoyourgoalsandbeliefs.成功的秘訣在于堅持自己的目標(biāo)和信念。6.Whateveradversitymaylieahead，aslongasIpersevere，nothingcanstopmefromgoingahead.無論前方有多困難，只要我堅持下去，沒有什么可以阻止我前行。7.Thestorydepictsanoldmanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightsagainstadversitywithgreaten