Unit4 Journey across a vast land （直擊高考+寫作指導(dǎo)+素材寶庫+實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練）-【同步作文課】高二英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版2019選擇性必修第二冊）

Unit4JourneyAcrossaVastLand單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度旅游郵件人與自然本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是讓學(xué)生寫一封關(guān)于旅游方面的電子郵件，電子郵件是互聯(lián)網(wǎng)時(shí)代人們進(jìn)行書面交流的主要文體。它與一般信件一樣，也包括信頭、正文和結(jié)尾部分；電子郵件寫作要簡單明了，便于閱讀，屬于應(yīng)用文的范疇，是高考寫作中常見的形式之一。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1.主體時(shí)態(tài)：常用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.主體人稱：常用第一人稱和第二人稱。旅游方面的文章寫作要點(diǎn)可分為三部分：第一部分：簡要介紹自己所去的地方。第二部分：詳細(xì)列出旅游所見的內(nèi)容。第三部分：對(duì)旅游活動(dòng)的總結(jié)?！驹~塊積累】1.placesofinterest名勝古跡2.historicalsite歷史遺跡3.culturalrelics文化遺址4.athomeandabroad國內(nèi)外5.feature特征、特色wonderful極好的7.underconstruction在建設(shè)中8.man-made人造的9.ancienttimes.古代10.datefrom/datebackto追溯到11.belocated/situatedin位于、坐落在12.beknown/famousfor因……而聞名13.beusedfor被用于做某事自我放松14.coveranareaof占地面積為15.hasahistoryof...有……歷史16.beopentothepublic對(duì)公眾開放17.beworthvisiting值得參觀18.can'twaittodo迫不及待做某事19.hearfromsb收到某人的來信20.anamazingsight令人驚嘆的景象21.touristattraction旅游景點(diǎn)22.understandthelocalculture了解當(dāng)?shù)匚幕?3.setout/off出發(fā)【旅游景點(diǎn)素材】TheGreatWallofChina,aUNESCOWorldHeritageSite,stretchesover13,000milesacrossmultipleprovincesandregions.Visitorscanexploredifferentsectionsofthewallandenjoythesurroundingscenery.中國的長城是聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界遺產(chǎn)，綿延1.3萬英里，跨越多個(gè)省份和地區(qū)。游客可以探索長城的不同部分，欣賞周圍的風(fēng)景。TheYellowMountains,alsoknownasHuangshan,isaUNESCOWorldHeritageSitelocatedinChina'sAnhuiprovince.Visitorscanhikethestunningtrailsandenjoybreathtakingviewsofthemountains,clouds,andsunrise.黃山，又稱黃山，是聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界遺產(chǎn)，位于中國安徽省。游客可以在令人驚嘆的小徑上徒步旅行，欣賞山脈、云層和日出的壯麗景色。TheTigerLeapingGorgeinYunnanprovinceisoneofthedeepestgorgesintheworld,withstunningviewsoftheJinshaRiverandsurroundingmountains.Visitorscanhikethetrailandenjoybreathtakingscenery.云南省的虎跳峽是世界上最深的峽谷之一，可以看到金沙江和周圍群山的迷人景色。游客可以在這條小徑上徒步旅行，欣賞驚險(xiǎn)的風(fēng)景。TheZhangjiajieNationalForestParkinHunanprovinceisastunningnaturalattractionwithuniquesandstonepillarsandrockformationsthatinspiredthemovie"Avatar."Visitorscanexplorethepark,hikethetrails,andenjoylocalcuisine.位于湖南省的張家界國家森林公園是一個(gè)令人驚嘆的自然景點(diǎn)，其獨(dú)特的砂巖柱和巖層激發(fā)了電影《阿凡達(dá)》的靈感。游客可以探索公園，徒步旅行，享受當(dāng)?shù)孛朗?。TheWestLakeinHangzhouisaUNESCOWorldHeritageSiteandascenicspotwithstunningviewsofthelake,islands,andsurroundinghills.Visitorscantakeboatrides,explorethegardens,andenjoylocalcuisine.杭州西湖是聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界遺產(chǎn)，風(fēng)景秀麗，湖、島、山盡收眼底。游客可以乘船游覽，探索花園，享受當(dāng)?shù)孛朗?。TheForbiddenCity,locatedinBeijing,isaUNESCOWorldHeritageSiteandasymbolofChina'simperialpast.Visitorscanexplorethepalace,halls,andgardensthatoncehousedtheemperorsofChina.位于北京的紫禁城是聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界遺產(chǎn)，也是中國帝國歷史的象征。游客可以探索曾經(jīng)居住過中國皇帝的宮殿、大廳和花園。TheTerracottaArmyMuseuminXi'an,Shaanxiprovince,isanarchaeologicalmarvelofthousandsoflife-sizeterracottawarriorsandhorsesthatwereburiedwiththefirstemperorofChina.VisitorscanexplorethemuseumandlearnaboutancientChinesehistory.位于陜西省西安市的兵馬俑博物館是一個(gè)考古奇跡，它有數(shù)千個(gè)真人大小的兵馬俑和馬，這些俑和中國第一個(gè)皇帝葬在一起。游客可以探索博物館，了解中國古代歷史。TheMogaoCavesinDunhuang,Gansuprovince,isaUNESCOWorldHeritageSiteandanimportantcenterofBuddhistartandculture.Visitorscanexplorethecavesandviewthestunningartworkthatdatesbackoveronethousandyears.位于甘肅省敦煌的莫高窟是聯(lián)合國教科文組織世界遺產(chǎn)，也是佛教藝術(shù)和文化的重要中心。游客可以探索這些洞穴，欣賞這些令人驚嘆的藝術(shù)品，這些藝術(shù)品可以追溯到一千多年前?！揪涫椒e累】★精彩開頭1.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou？/Howareyougettingonwitheverything?你最近一切都好嗎？IamgladtohearthatyouaregoingtoChinaforaholiday.聽說你要來中國度假，我很高興。3．I'dliketoshareoneofthemostfascinatingexperienceswithyou.我想和你分享一次最有趣的經(jīng)歷之一?！镓S滿主體1.Asaprofessionalstudenthere,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvicetovisitthescenehere.作為這里的專業(yè)學(xué)生，我很樂意給你一些關(guān)于這里風(fēng)景的建議。2．Everytouristattractionhasbeautifulsceneryandisveryattractive.每個(gè)景點(diǎn)都是風(fēng)景秀麗，十分迷人。3．Jinzhaicounty,inwesternAnhui,isoneoftheplacesI'dliketointroduceyouto.安徽西部的金寨縣是我最想給你介紹的地方之一。4．It'sveryconvenienttotraveltothecentreofNewYorkbysubway.乘地鐵去紐約市中心非常方便。5．DuringtheChinese“RedCulture”，youcanvisitsomemuseums.在體驗(yàn)中國的“紅色文化”期間，你可以參觀一些博物館。6．Standingonthetopofthemountain,thebuildinghaswitnessedmanychangesinthisarea.坐落在山頂?shù)慕ㄖ镆娮C了這個(gè)地區(qū)的許多變化?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Iamlookingforwardtoyourcominganditiscertainthatyouwon'tregretforthetrip.我期待著你的到來，你一定會(huì)不虛此行。2．Itisaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryviewwillmakeyouunwillingtoleave.這是一個(gè)你必須參觀的地方，非凡的景色會(huì)讓你流連忘返。3．Ithasbeenagreattrip，fillinguswithsomanyhappymemories.這是一次很棒的旅行，給我們留下了很多美好的回憶。4Ithinkthat'sallfornow.就說到這吧。5．...isreallyworthyourvisiting.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.非常值得去參觀，期待你的到來I'llneverforgettheplace...我將永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這個(gè)地方......7．I'lltravelhereagainifIhavetimeinthefuture.要是我以后有時(shí)間的話，我會(huì)再來這旅游。8．Ihopeyouwillhaveatripwithme...我希望有機(jī)會(huì)和你一起去旅游......9．Inaword，thetravelmakesme...總之，這次旅游讓我......10.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.方便的話，請(qǐng)給我回信【諺語積累】1.Eastwest,homeisbest.金窩銀窩不如自己的草窩。2..Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.生活沒有目標(biāo)就像航海沒有羅盤。3.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游開闊眼界。4.AllroadsleadtoRome條條大路通羅馬。5.Traveleastortravelwest,amansownhomeisstillthebest走東西，最好還是家里6.Readtenthousandbooks,traveltenthousandmiles.讀萬卷書，行萬里路【萬能寫作模板】寫作模板Dear_____,Iamextremelypleasedtohearfromyou.AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat(寒暄句加主題句)(擴(kuò)展句一)(擴(kuò)展句二)(擴(kuò)展句三)Withallsensessatisfied,thememoryofthisoncejourneytothecitylivesuptothisdayasfreshasithappenedyesterday.Ican’twaittoembraceitagain.Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyourearliestconvenience./Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.(結(jié)束主體段落)Bestregards.(結(jié)束語)Sincerelyyours,LiHua假定你是李華,你的美國朋友Tom打算暑假來北京騎車旅行。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫一封郵件介紹相關(guān)情況,并對(duì)他的旅行提出建議。1.地勢平坦,適合騎車;2.用護(hù)照可以租到公共自行車;3.停車、修車都很方便。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))參考詞匯:平坦的flat租用rentDearTom，IamhappytohearaboutyourplantotravelaroundBeijingbybike.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【寫作思路】第一：開門見山，簡要介紹自己所去的地方第二：詳細(xì)列出旅游意見第三：表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)旅游活動(dòng)的總結(jié)【寫作提綱】【注意事項(xiàng)】主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主主要人稱：以第一人稱和第二人稱為主【優(yōu)秀范文】DearTom，IamhappytohearaboutyourplantotravelaroundBeijingbybike.Itisagoodcityforcyclingbecauseitisflatandthereforeitisconvenientforridingbikes.Andyoudon'thavetobuyanewbikesinceyoucanrentoneinBeijingwithyourpassport.Moreover,youcanalwaysfindamechanicinthecityifyourbikebreaksdownontheroad.Parkinglotsareeverywhere,too.Beforeyoustartaday'sride,Isuggestyouspendsometimepreparingforit,andyoumaywanttotakeamapwithyouincaseyougetlost.IhopeyoucanenjoyyourcyclingexperienceinBeijing,andaboveall,keepsafe.Letmeknowifthere'sanythingelseIcanhelp.Yours,LiHua假定你是李華，你的英國朋友蒂姆(Tim)想在寒假時(shí)到中國旅游，于是發(fā)郵件向你征求建議。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦一個(gè)旅游城市；2.給出推薦理由。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。DearTim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【優(yōu)秀范文】DearTim，Knowingthatyou'llvisitChinainthecomingwinterholiday,I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Irecommendthecapitalcity,Beijing,toyou,foritisanamazingcitywithalonghistoryandvariousplacesofinterest.YoumayfirstgotoTian'anmenSquare,wheremanytouristsadmirethenationalflagbeingraisedeveryearlymorning.Thenextplacethatyoucan'tmissistheGreatWall,whichisoneofthegreatwondersintheworld.ThePalaceMuseumandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting,too.Besides,thelocalsnackswillsurelybeappealingtoyou.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Yours，LiHua假設(shè)國慶節(jié)到了(星期二)，你帶著外國朋友Mary到青島海邊游玩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示語寫一篇英文日記來記敘一下你們的游覽經(jīng)過。一大早開車前往目的地，首先去海邊拍照、散步、游泳；隨后去啤酒城品嘗海鮮燒烤；午后開車去嶗山賞景；下午5點(diǎn)開車回家。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.日記開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

4.參考詞匯：啤酒城BeerCastle；燒烤barbecue。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________