2025屆中考英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作培優(yōu)冊（外研版廣西專用）01-一、遣詞造句技巧講練

高分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

了解高分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是寫出優(yōu)秀作文的基礎(chǔ)，以下是高分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.寫作內(nèi)容：要點(diǎn)全，能根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.語言表達(dá)：句式豐富且靈活，錯誤極少；語言流暢，表意清楚、連貫。3.邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式，首尾點(diǎn)題，事例典型；能運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~來表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系。4.卷面要求：書寫工整，卷面整潔。寫作步驟

考生可遵循以下步驟寫出高分作文：【遣詞造句技巧講練見P2；改錯潤色技巧講練見P8】第一部分

書面表達(dá)提分講練一、遣詞造句技巧講練編者按：在進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)試題的解答過程中，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)遵循以下原則：1.確保準(zhǔn)確性：對于那些對高級詞匯或復(fù)雜句式運(yùn)用不夠熟練的考生，建議優(yōu)先使用自己熟悉的詞匯和句型，避免因過分追求難度而犧牲了表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。2.適度提升語言水平：在確保表達(dá)無誤的基礎(chǔ)上，考生可以適當(dāng)?shù)厝谌胍恍└呒壴~匯和高級句型。技巧1

巧用高級表達(dá)

在確保正確的前提下,使用高級詞匯,可以提升作文檔次,以下為初中階段普通詞匯與高級詞匯轉(zhuǎn)換表。動詞（詞組）

普通詞匯高級詞匯help幫助give…a

hand幫助hope希望expect希望look

forward

to

sth./doing

sth.期待某物/做某事普通詞匯高級詞匯influence影響make

a

（big）

difference

to對……有（很大）影響know知道understand理解

realize

意識到like喜歡be

interested

in…/have

a

stronginterest

in…

對……（非常）感興趣fall

in

love

with愛上……續(xù)表普通詞匯高級詞匯meet遇見come

across遇見remember記得keep…in

mind記得/記住……solve處理deal

with處理use使用make

good/full

use

of…/put…to

good

use充分使用……visit參觀pay

a

visit

to參觀續(xù)表普通詞匯高級詞匯should應(yīng)該be

supposed

to應(yīng)該decide

to

do

sth.

決定做某事make

a

decision

to

do

sth.決定做某事make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.下定決心做某事try

to

do

sth.盡力做某事make

every

effort

to

do

sth./spare

no

effort

to

do

sth.不遺余力做某事續(xù)表普通詞匯高級詞匯want

to

do

sth.想要做某事feel

like

doing

sth./would

like

to

do

sth.

想要做某事be

about和……有關(guān)be

related

to/have

something

to

do

with和……有關(guān)續(xù)表形容詞

普通詞匯高級詞匯good/great好的wonderful極佳的

excellent

優(yōu)秀的bad糟糕的terrible/awful糟糕的rich富有的wealthy富有的important重要的be

of

importance重要的普通詞匯高級詞匯useful有用的be

of

use有用的many許多（修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)）quite

a

few/plenty

of/a

large

number

of許多much許多（修飾不可數(shù)名詞）quite

a

little/a

great

deal

of許多續(xù)表副詞/介詞（短語）普通詞匯高級詞匯firstly

第一，首先first

of

all/to

begin

with/to

start

with

首先secondly

第二，其次besides/what’s

more/in

addition

而且；此外lastly

最后last

but

not

least

最后但同樣重要的是not

不……not…at

all

一點(diǎn)都不……普通詞匯高級詞匯now

現(xiàn)在nowadays

現(xiàn)如今at

present

目前sometimes

有時from

time

to

time/once

in

a

while

有時so

因此therefore

因此

as

a

result

結(jié)果續(xù)表普通詞匯高級詞匯suddenly

突然all

of

a

sudden

突然very非常pretty/quite/rather/especially/more

than

非常in

my

opinion

依我看as

for

me/from

my

point

of

view/for

my

part/as

far

as

I’m

concerned

在我看來續(xù)表技巧訓(xùn)練1.Lucy

liked

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.（用have

a

strong

interest

in升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________Lucy

had

a

strong

interest

in

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.2.I

have

decided

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.（用make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.升格句子）________________________________________________________I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.3.The

local

clubs

are

trying

to

attract

more

young

people.（用make

every

effort

to

do

sth.升格句子）______________________________________________________________________The

local

clubs

are

making

every

effort

to

attract

more

young

people.4.The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

many

people.（用a

large

number

of改寫句子）___________________________________________________________________The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

a

large

number

of

people.5.Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

So

he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.（用as

a

result升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________________Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

As

a

result，he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.技巧2

巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯

靈活運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯可以使文章條理清楚、連貫通順。寫作中常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯有：1.表示順序：first（ly）;

second（ly）;

third（ly）;

to

begin

with;

to

start

with;

at

first;

at

last;

in

the

end;

next;

then;

after

that;

finally…2.表示并列：either…or;

neither…nor;

both…and;

not

only…but

also;

as

well

as;

together

with…3.表示遞進(jìn)：besides;

what’s

more;

what’s

worse;

in

addition…4.表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but;

however;

after

all;

unluckily…5.表示對比：while;

on

the

one

hand…，on

the

other

hand;

For

one

thing，…

For

another，…6.表示讓步：though;

although;

even

if/though…7.表示總結(jié)：in

a

word;

in

short;

all

in

all;

generally

speaking…技巧訓(xùn)練1.Jim

can

play

basketball

well.

He

can

also

play

the

violin

well.（用not

only…but

also…

升格句子）____________________________________________________________________Jim

can

not

only

play

basketball

well

but

also

play

the

violin

well.2.Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

And

it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.（用what’s

more升格句子）________________________________________________________________Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

What’s

more，it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.3.It

was

raining

hard

outside.

The

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.（用although升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________Although

it

was

raining

hard

outside，the

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.4.We

must

study

hard.

We

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.（用on

the

one

hand，on

the

other

hand升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________________________On

the

one

hand，we

must

study

hard;

on

the

other

hand，we

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.5.Lucy

kept

on

reading

books.

She

was

busy

in

the

past.（用even

if連接句子）______________________________________________________________Lucy

kept

on

reading

books

even

if

she

was

busy

in

the

past.技巧3

巧用比較等級

在寫作中恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用形容詞和副詞的比較等級，可以使文章表達(dá)更多樣化。除了形容詞和副詞比較等級的基本用法，以下常用句型也可以為作文增分添彩：比較等級常見句型例句原級比較as+形容詞/副詞原級+as…

表示“和……一樣……”I

am

as

tall

as

my

best

friend

Liz.比較等級常見句型例句比較級the+比較級...，the+比較級...，表示“越……，就越……”The

harder

you

work，the

luckier

you

will

be.比較級+and+比較級/more

and

more+多音節(jié)形容詞/副詞，表示“越來越……”O(jiān)ur

motherland

is

getting

stronger

and

stronger.續(xù)表比較等級常見句型例句最高級A+be動詞+one

of

the+形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示“A是最……之一”Mo

Yan

is

one

of

the

greatest

writers

in

the

world.A+be動詞+the+序數(shù)詞+形容詞最高級+名詞+范圍，表示“A是……中第……最……的……”The

Yellow

River

is

the

second

longest

river

in

China.續(xù)表技巧訓(xùn)練1.Mike

is

strong.

John

is

strong，too.（用“as+形容詞/副詞原級+as”升格句子）__________________________Mike

is

as

strong

as

John.2.If

you

exercise

more，you

will

have

fewer

health

problems.（用“the+比較級，the+比較級”升格句子）______________________________________________________________The

more

you

exercise，the

fewer

health

problems

youwill

have.3.The

park

is

getting

beautiful.（用“比較級+and+比較級”升格句子）____________________________________________The

park

is

getting

more

and

more

beautiful.4.The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

a

famous

wonder

in

China.（用“one

of

the+形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”升格句子）__________________________________________________________________The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

one

of

the

most

famous

wonders

in

China.技巧4

巧用復(fù)合句狀語從句

在復(fù)合句中，用作狀語的從句叫狀語從句。學(xué)生可用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞將兩個簡單句連接起來，構(gòu)成一個狀語從句。如：

My

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old.

He

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.→Though

/Although

my

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old，he

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.

（雖然）我弟弟只有11歲，但他已經(jīng)能在周末分擔(dān)家務(wù)了?？忌谑褂脿钫Z從句時應(yīng)注意：1.

根據(jù)句意使用正確的引導(dǎo)詞（組）；2.

在含有時間狀語從句和條件狀語從句的復(fù)合句中，若主句為一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時表將來；①引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句的詞（組）：when，as，while，after，before，until/till，as

soon

as，whenever等。②引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句的詞（組）：if，unless，as

long

as，once等。3.

若主句是祈使句或主句中含情態(tài)動詞，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時表將來?！緺钫Z從句具體講解見課堂精講冊P157】賓語從句

在復(fù)合句中，若由一個句子充當(dāng)賓語，這個句子叫作賓語從句，賓語從句必須是陳述語序，即“連接詞+主語+謂語+其他成分”。常見的連接詞有從屬連詞that，whether，if；連接代詞what，who，whom，whose，which等；連接副詞when，where，how，why等。如：I

believe

that

you

can

achieve

your

dream

by

working

hard.

我相信你可以通過努力實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想?？忌谑褂觅e語從句時應(yīng)注意：1.

分析語境及從句的句子成分，使用合適的引導(dǎo)詞；2.賓語從句應(yīng)使用陳述句語序；3.

使用正確的時態(tài)?！举e語從句具體講解見課堂精講冊P155】定語從句

在復(fù)合句中，修飾某一名詞或代詞的從句叫作定語從句。定語從句通常置于它所修飾的名詞或代詞之后，被定語從句修飾的詞叫先行詞。兩個句子由關(guān)系詞連接起來，常見引導(dǎo)定語從句的關(guān)系詞有：1.若先行詞為人，且定語從句缺主語或賓語：定語從句由who，whom，that引導(dǎo)，如：My

sister

is

the

girl

who/that

is

standing

under

the

tree.

我姐姐就是站在樹下的那個女孩。（先行詞是the

girl，指人，定語從句缺少主語，用who/that引導(dǎo)）2.若先行詞為物，且定語從句缺主語或賓語：定語從句由that，which引導(dǎo)。如：I

saw

a

tree

that/which

has

many

beautiful

flowers

in

that

village.

我在那個村子里看到了一棵開滿漂亮花朵的樹。（先行詞是a

tree,指物，定語從句缺少主語，用that/which引導(dǎo)）考生在使用定語從句時應(yīng)注意:1.分析先行詞及從句成分，使用正確的關(guān)系詞；2.

若關(guān)系詞在定語從句中作主語，需結(jié)合先行詞判斷定語從句謂語動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)；3.

使用正確的時態(tài)?！径ㄕZ從句具體講解見課堂精講冊P159】技巧訓(xùn)練1.The

girl

was

sad.

She

couldn’t

say

a

word.（用so...that...升格句子）________________________________________________The

girl

was

so

sad

that

she

couldn’t

say

a

word.2.I’ll

visit

my

grandparents.

The

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.（用as

soon

as升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________I’ll

visit

my

grandparents

as

soon

as

the

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.3.Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard.

We

can

win

the

basketball

match.（用in

order

that升格句子）______________________________________________________________________________Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard

in

order

that

we

can

win

the

basketball

match.4.How

do

you

learn

English?

I

want

to

know

your

ways

of

learning

it.（用how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句升格句子）______________________________________I

want

to

know

how

you

learn

English.5.Miss

Li

is

my

teacher.

She

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.（用who引導(dǎo)的定語從句升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________Miss

Li

is

the

teacher

who

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.6.I

like

this

book.

It

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.（用which引導(dǎo)的定語從句升格句子）__________________________________________________I

like

the

book

which

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.7.我希望我的建議可以幫助你與父母保持良好的關(guān)系。（漢譯英）__________________________________________________________________________________________________I

hope

（that）

my

suggestions/advice

can

help

you

（to）

have

a

good

relationship

with

your

parents.8.他撒謊的原因是他害怕受到懲罰。（漢譯英）________________________________________________________________________The

reason

why

he

told

a

lie

was

that

he

was

afraid

of

being

punished.技巧5

增加句式多樣性

特殊句式或特殊結(jié)構(gòu)可以豐富文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，恰當(dāng)使用特殊句式可以為書面表達(dá)加分。以下為常用的特殊句式/結(jié)構(gòu)：感嘆句結(jié)構(gòu)例句What+形容詞+不可數(shù)名詞（+主語+謂語/系動詞）What

sweet

water

it

is！結(jié)構(gòu)例句What+a/an+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)（+主語+謂語/系動詞）What

a

kind

girl

she

is！What+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)（+主語+謂語/系動詞）What

kind

girls

they

are！How+形容詞/副詞（+主語+謂語/系動詞）How

beautifully

she

dances！How+主語+謂語How

time

flies！續(xù)表倒裝句

倒裝句可以起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用或驚嘆作用。在寫作中，常用的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)主要有：結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句There

be+主語（人/物）+地點(diǎn)狀語/時間狀語某地/某時有某人/某物There

is

a

big

playground

in

our

school.Here+動詞/be動詞+名詞這里是/有……Here/There

is

a

photo

of

my

family.There+動詞/be動詞+名詞那里是/有……結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句so+be/助動詞/情態(tài)動詞+主語某人也……Bob

is

tall.

So

am

I.neither+be/助動詞/情態(tài)動詞+主語某人也不……Harry

doesn’t

like

going

shopping.

Neither

do

I.續(xù)表結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句only位于句首，強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語時倒裝只有……才……Only

in

this

way

can

we

work

out

the

problem

successfully.續(xù)表用it作形式主語或形式賓語的句型it作形式主語1.It

seems

that…

好像/似乎……

如：It

seems

that

there

is

going

to

be

a

heavy

rain.

看來要下大雨了。2.It

takes/took

（sb.）+一段時間+to

do

sth.

做某事花費(fèi)（某人）……（時間）。如：It

took

me

four

weeks

to

finish

reading

this

book.

讀完這本書花了我4個星期。3.It’s+adj.（+for/of

sb.）+to

do

sth.

做某事（對某人來說）是……/（某人）做某事是……如：It’s

difficult

for

me

to

keep

exercising

in

the

morning，but

I

will

try

to

do

it.

對我來說，堅(jiān)持在早上鍛煉是困難的，但是我會盡量堅(jiān)持。4.It’s+adj.+that

從句

……是……

如：

It’s

exciting

that

Quan

Hongchan

is

coming

to

our

city.

全紅嬋要來我們城市了，真令人激動。5.It’s

believed/said/reported

that...人們相信/說/據(jù)報道……

如：It’s

believed

that

doing

sports

is

good

for

health.人們相信做運(yùn)動對健康有益。it作形式賓語

find，make，consider，feel等詞后接的賓語為從句或動詞不定式時，常用it作形式賓語，真正的賓語（從句/動詞不定式）后置。如：I

find

it

interesting

to

travel

to

Qinhuangdao.

我覺得去秦皇島旅游很有趣。技巧訓(xùn)練1.It’s

a

fine

day

today.（用感嘆句升格句子）_______________________What

a

fine

day

today!2.Miss

Bai

is

kind

and

caring.（用感嘆句升格句子）_________________________________How

kind

and

caring

Miss

Bai

is!3.莉莉不喜歡古典音樂。我也不喜歡。（漢譯英）____________________________________________Lily

doesn’t

like

classical

music.

Neither

do

I.4.只有通過多讀書，你才能提高閱讀速度。（漢譯英）_______________________________________________________________Only

by

reading

more

books

can

you

increase

your

reading

speed.5.Amy

helps

her

classmates.

She

considers

it

as

her

duty.（用it作形式賓語升格句子）________________________________________________Amy

considers

it

her

duty

to

help

her

classmates.6.Learning

maths

well

is

difficult

for

me.（用it作形式主語升格句子）________________________________________It

is

difficult

for

me

to

learn

maths

well.7.我覺得利用這個軟件學(xué)英語很有趣。（漢譯英）____________________________________________________I

find

it

interesting

to

learn

English

by

using

this

app.技巧6

巧擴(kuò)要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)寫原因

用來表示原因的詞匯有because，because

of，for，since，as，thanks

to，for

the

reason

that等。如：

I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend.

→I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend

because/as/for

my

good

friend

will

arrive

in

Beihai

on

Saturday

morning.擴(kuò)寫事例

用來引出例子的短語有for

example，such

as，like…，Let’s

take…for

example等。如：

Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

→Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

For

example，it

can

make

us

become

healthier.擴(kuò)寫條件

用來表示條件的詞匯有if，unless，as

long

as等。如：

You

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.

→If

you

want

to

buy

a

nice

present

for

your

sister，you

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.擴(kuò)寫目的

用來表示目的的詞匯有so

that，in

order

that，in

order

to，so

as

to，動詞不定式等。如：

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard.

→I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard

so

that/in

order

that

I

can

realize

my

dream

of

being

a

scientist.擴(kuò)寫結(jié)果

用來表示結(jié)果的詞匯有so，therefore，as

a

result，so…that…等。如：

Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

→Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

Therefore，she

joins

this

club.

so后接句子時，不用逗號。therefore后接句子時，需用逗號隔開。擴(kuò)寫感受

用來表示想法的詞匯有in

my

opinion，from

my

point

of

view，as

for

me等。如：

There

are

many

good

ways

to

learn

English

well.

→There

are

many

go