四級作文專題-(一)

四級作文評分標準評判作文四級考試作文主要看內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、語言三個方面。內(nèi)容不跑題即可，注意：1.不要妄圖以情動人；2.不要妄圖在構(gòu)思上出奇制勝。結(jié)構(gòu)上牢記總分總：先寫主題句(TopicSentence)，再寫分論點，最后寫總結(jié)句(Conclusion)。語言最重要，往往使評分產(chǎn)生重大差異，語言要模仿和包裝。寫完之后修改注意：（內(nèi)容方面盡量不要修改）1、字母大小寫2、怪符號3、單詞拼寫4、主謂一致5、動詞時態(tài)6、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)使文章富有表現(xiàn)力的手段：1、使用有難度的詞匯；2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動詞或整個句子；3、使用被動語態(tài)；4、使用倒裝句；(notonly...butalso...；only...)5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習慣中的動詞和形容詞。作文專題(一)對比選擇型Par.1S1開門見山，直入主題,表明對某事人們各有不同看法。Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson…Thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeopleasto…Whenaskedabout…,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.作文專題(一)對比選擇型方案一：S2&3.分述兩種不同看法。Somepeopleprefer…Otherstendto…Somepeopleconsider…However,othersthink…Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat…Intheiropinions,…Besides…方案二：S2-4.也可只陳述一種觀點，并給出理由。作文專題(一)對比選擇型方案一：Par.2分述兩種觀點的不同理由Somepeoplemaysay…Theyholdthisopinionbecause…However,othersbelieve…Theyarguethat…方案二：Par.2陳述觀點二的理由However,othershold…Theymaintain…And…作文專題(一)對比選擇型Par.3自己的觀點、理由及總結(jié)全文Personally,Iaminfavorof…Firstly,…Secondly…Mostimportantofall…Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,we/Imayreasonablyconcludethat…Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iamfor…Foronething,…Foranother,…Forinstance,…Therefore,asstatedaboveSpecialistorGeneralist1）有人認為專業(yè)人士更有發(fā)展前途2）有人認為通才更有發(fā)展前途3）你的看法SpecialistorGeneralistPar.1Thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeopleastowhetherastudentshouldbeaspecialistorageneralist.Somepeopleconsiderthatitisbestforcollegestudenttofocusondevelopingskillsinonefield.However,othersthink

thataversatilegraduateismorewelcomedinthecompetitivejobmarket.SpecialistorGeneralistSomepeoplemaysaythatitisimpossibletodemandcollegestudentstobecomeanall-roundgeneralistwithin4years.Theyholdthisopinionbecausetheybelievethatastudentcannotspendenoughtimeonseveralfieldsatthesametimebecauseofthelimitationofenergy.However,othersbelievethatcollegestudentsshouldstretchthemselvestoasmanyfieldsaspossible.Theyarguethatgeneralistswhohaveknowledgeonseveralareasarehighlydemanded.SpecialistorGeneralistPar.3Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformeropinion.Firstly,Idon’tthinkitisadvisablethatcollegestudentsequallyspendtheirtimeandenergyonseveralfieldsatthesametime.Secondly,enterprisesusuallyofferspecialistshighersalaries.Mostimportantofall,thedevelopmentofhigh-techneedsspecialists.Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,Imayreasonablyconcludethattobeaspecialististherightchoiceformoststudents.

專題(二)現(xiàn)象解釋型Par.1擺出現(xiàn)象。…h(huán)asbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.And…h(huán)asalwaysarousedthegreatconcern.Whatimpressesusmostis…Thereasons…arevaried.Wehavewitnessed…Accordingto…,…And…Manyreasonscontributeto……h(huán)asbeenbroughtintofocus.Nowadays,…Inaddition,…Manyreasonscontributeto…專題(二)現(xiàn)象解釋型Par.2分析原因Amongthevariousreasons,…playsanimportantpart.Thatistosay…Whatismore…Forexample…Tobeginwith,…Moreover,…Inaddition,…Asaresult…Generallyspeaking,…Firstofall,...Moreover,…Therefore,…專題(二)現(xiàn)象解釋型Par.3自己的觀點、依據(jù)及總結(jié)全文Whentalkingabout…Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…Inbrief,…Astome,…Firstofall,…Besides,…Toconclude…AsfarasIamconcerned,…Asweknow,…Furthermore,…Inaword,…TheHarmofPCGames1)現(xiàn)在電腦游戲在校園里很流行2)電腦游戲的危害3)怎樣正確對待電腦網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲TheHarmofPCGamesPar.1Students’playingPCgameshasbeenbroughtintofocus.Nowadays,manystudentsoftenspendtheireveningsplayingsuchgames.Inaddition,theharmresultedfromPCgamesbringgreatconcernoftheparentsandthesociety.Manyreasonscontributetotheconcern.TheHarmofPCGamesPar.2Generallyspeaking,thereasonsfortheincreasingconcernonstudents’playinggamescanbelistedasfollows.Firstofall,playingPCgamesisanenormouswasteoftimeanditwillmakeushavelittletimeforourstudy.Moreover,thosewhoplayPCgamesdayandnightwillbeharmedphysicallyforlackofrestandsleep.Therefore,wemaysayplayingPCgamesreallydoharmtous.TheHarmofPCGamesPar.3AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldtrytoresistthetemptationofPCgamescarefully.Asweknow,studyisourpriority,andweshouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeandenergyongames.Furthermore,mostofusarenotfinanciallyindependentandweshouldn’tputanotherburdenonourparents.Inaword,weshouldtrytoavoidtheharmsofPCgame.OnStress1.隨著生活節(jié)奏的加快,越來越多的現(xiàn)代人體會到了來自生活和工作的壓力2.壓力產(chǎn)生的原因3.我的看法OnStressPart1

1.Nowadays,stresshasgraduallybecomeanoticeablepartofoureverydaylifeinmodernsociety.2.Foronething,manypeoplebecomeillbecauseoftheLong-termstressandstrainintheirwork.3.Foranother,manypeoplefindithardtorelaxthemselvesafterworktime.4.it’sobviousthatweshouldlearnaboutthereasonofstress.OnStressPart25.Manyremarkablefactorscontributetotheupwardstressindexofcityresidents.6.Firstofall,thecompetitionforthejobscausesgreatestpressureonemployees.7.Inaddition,uncertaintyaboutthefuturemakesthesituationevenworse.8.Thirdly,thestressofmodernlifeisalsooneofthemainfactor.OnstressPart39.Astome,Ibelievethatthestressindex