Unit 5What were you doing when the rainstorm came習(xí)題課件人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè) Period 6 Section B （3a-3b 單元主題寫作）

UNIT5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?Period6SectionB(3a-3b單元主題寫作)寫作任務(wù)假如你是校報(bào)EnglishWorld的記者李華，11月10日的早上，你的同學(xué)John在騎自行車去學(xué)校的路上碰到了一起交通事故，事故受害人是一個(gè)16歲的女孩。在John的幫助下，女孩得救了，事后女孩寫來(lái)一封感謝信。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)John的事跡，并以“JohnSavedaGirlfromaCarAccident”為題，為校報(bào)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道。提示：1.Howdidthecaraccidenthappen?2.WhatdidJohndo?3.WhatshouldwelearnfromJohn?要求：詞數(shù)不少于80。思路點(diǎn)撥[謀篇布局]理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。JohnSavedaGirlfromaCarAccidentHowWhatResultcrossthestreet,playwith,hit,runawaybreakherleg,getoff,call120,takecareofingoodhealth,agoodexample[遣詞造句]就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)完成句子。1.一個(gè)女孩正在過(guò)馬路，這時(shí)一輛車開(kāi)了過(guò)來(lái)。Agirlwas_____________________________whenacarcameup.2.那個(gè)女孩沒(méi)有看到車來(lái)了，因?yàn)楫?dāng)時(shí)她正在玩手機(jī)。Thegirldidn’tseethecarcomingbecauseshewas__________________herphoneatthattime.crossingthestreetplayingwith3.John從自行車上下來(lái)，跑向那個(gè)女孩。他立刻打了120。John__________________hisbikeandrantothegirl.He__________________atonce.4.John照顧那個(gè)女孩，直到救援到來(lái)。John___________________________thegirluntilhelparrived.gotoffcalled120tookcareof[巧妙銜接]本文使用了when,because,until等連詞,使短文更加連貫。[連句成篇]JohnSavedaGirlfromaCarAccidentOnthemorningofNovember10th,Johnwasridinghisbiketoschool.Ontheway,hesawacaraccident.Agirlwascrossingthestreetwhenacarcameup.Thegirldidn’tseeitcomingbecauseshewasplayingwithherphoneatthattime.Thecarhitherandranaway.Thegirlbrokeherleg.Atthattime,Johngotoffhisbikeandrantothegirl.Hecalled120atonce.AndJohntookcareofthegirluntilhelparrived.Nowthegirlisingoodhealth.Johnhelpedthegirlwithoutthinkingtwice.Heisagoodexampleforustolearnfrom.假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給美國(guó)筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學(xué)王紅在回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺堋?.上周五，一棵樹被大風(fēng)吹倒……2.王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝……3.樹干太沉，她搬不動(dòng)，然后……4.你認(rèn)為……參考：block擋??；branch樹枝；trunk樹干要求：詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作實(shí)踐DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawatreewasblowndownbythestrongwindandblockedtheroad.Shepickedupthebranchesimmediatelyandthenputthemonthesideoftheroad.Thenshetriedtomovethetrunk,butitwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveiteventhoughshetriedherbest.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Manypeoplecametohelp,andfinallytheymoveditaway.Howha