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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Aboutamonthago,myhusbandandIfoundkindnessinanunlikelyplace:standinginlineataSubwaysandwichshoptopickupaquickdinner.Itwasextremelybusyonthisparticularnight,andInoticedadadbehinduswithhislittlegirl,wholookedtobearoundfour.Themanseemedastiredasmyhusband,butthelittlegirlwascheerfulandexcitedasshewaitedforhersandwichandcookie.Iwatchedasthemanbehindusgotclosertothefrontoftheline.Hestartedtolookworried.Rightbeforewecheckedout,Iheardthemansaytothewomanwhohadmadehissandwichesthathewassorrytojustleavehisoutbecausehedidn’thaveenoughmoneytopayforthemall.Helookedveryembarrassed.Hislittlegirlcontinuedjumpingaroundexcitedly.Iquietlyaskedthecashiertoaddtheman’swholeordertoours.Ipaidthe$87.73,andwegotoutoftherebeforethemanbehindusknewwhathadhappened.LikemanyotherssinceCOVID19hit,ourfamilyoffivewaslivingononeine.Iwasholdingourdebitcard(借記卡)andknewthatweonlyhad$90.16inouraccount.Thatwasallwewouldhaveuntilpaydaythreedayslater.Butstill,itfeltgreattobeabletohelpthatfamily,eventhoughwewouldbeoutofmoneyforafewdays.Whathappenednextwasamazing.MyhusbandwentbacktothatSubwaythenextweektopickupfivesandwichesthatIthoughtwouldcost$44.58.Therewas$47inouraccount.Butitturnedoutthatthedinnercostmorethanwehadonthecard.Myhusbandtoldthemtoputhissandwichbackbecausehecouldn’taffordit.Thenhepaidforthefoursandwichesandheadedtoourcar.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:大約一個(gè)月前,“我”和丈夫在一家賽百味三明治店排隊(duì)買晚餐時(shí),發(fā)現(xiàn)身后一位帶著小女孩的男士因錢不夠而無(wú)法支付所點(diǎn)食物?!拔覀儭彪m經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù),但仍悄悄為其付了款。一周后,丈夫再次去買三明治,因費(fèi)用超出卡內(nèi)余額正準(zhǔn)備退回自己那份時(shí),發(fā)生了后續(xù)的事情。伏筆及回應(yīng):伏筆:“我們”家庭靠一份收入生活且卡內(nèi)余額僅夠支付自身訂單及幫助他人后的三天生活?;貞?yīng):再次購(gòu)物時(shí)因余額不足出現(xiàn)尷尬局面,后得到他人幫助。伏筆:男士因沒(méi)錢支付食物而尷尬,小女孩卻不知情仍興奮。回應(yīng):后續(xù)未提及小女孩反應(yīng),重點(diǎn)在大人之間的互動(dòng)與善意傳遞。伏筆:“我”悄悄為男士付款,他未察覺(jué)?;貞?yīng):后續(xù)男士以自己的方式回報(bào)善意,形成善的循環(huán)。伏筆:丈夫再次去同一家賽百味買三明治。回應(yīng):在這家店經(jīng)歷了余額不足與得到幫助的情節(jié)。伏筆:丈夫準(zhǔn)備退回自己那份三明治。回應(yīng):因他人幫助得以帶回所有三明治。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):情感線:從丈夫因余額不足的窘迫與無(wú)奈,到因他人幫助的驚喜與感激,最后雙方因善意傳遞而心懷溫暖與欣慰。故事線:丈夫準(zhǔn)備退回三明治時(shí),女店員跑來(lái)告知有人已為他付款,原來(lái)是上次被幫助的男士,他以這種方式回報(bào)了“我們”。主旨升華句:“Asingleactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,cancreatearippleeffectthatspreadsfarandwide,touchinglivesinunexpectedways.”(一個(gè)小小的善舉,無(wú)論多么微不足道,都能產(chǎn)生漣漪效應(yīng),以意想不到的方式影響他人的生活并廣泛傳播。)“Kindnessisalanguagethatthedeafcanhearandtheblindcansee.Ittranscendsallbarriersandenrichesthehumanspirit.”(善良是一種聾人能聽(tīng)見(jiàn)、盲人能看見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)言。它超越所有障礙,豐富人類的精神世界。)“Inthetapestryoflife,actsofkindnessarethegoldenthreadsthatbindustogether,weavingapatternofloveandpassion.”(在生活的織錦中,善舉是將我們聯(lián)系在一起的金線,編織出愛(ài)與同情的圖案。)“Thebeautyofkindnessliesnotinthemagnitudeofthegesturebutinthepurityoftheheart.Ithasthepowertotransformboththegiverandthereceiver.”(善良之美不在于舉動(dòng)的大小,而在于心靈的純凈。它有能力改變施與者和接受者。)“Whenkindnessisgivenfreely,itreturnstenfold,fillingtheworldwithwarmthandhope,oneactatatime.”(當(dāng)善良被自由地給予,它會(huì)十倍返還,一次一個(gè)善舉,讓世界充滿溫暖與希望。)寫(xiě)作示范一:

Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Shetoldhimthatthemanhehadhelpedlastweekhadeinearlierandprepaidforhisorder.Myhusbandwasstunned.Hecouldn'tbelievethatthemanhehadassistedwithoutexpectinganythinginreturnhadrememberedhiskindnessandrepaiditsopromptly.Hethankedtheworkerandgotintothecar,awarmfeelingspreadingthroughhischest.

Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.Therewasnoneedforwords.Thesimpleactofnoddingconveyedtheirmutualunderstandingandrespect.Thatnight,asourfamilysatdowntoeatthesandwiches,wetalkedabouthowkindnesscouldebacktousinthemostunexpectedways.Werealizedthatevenindifficulttimes,asmallactofkindnesscouldmakeabigdifferenceandcreateabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.寫(xiě)作示范二:

Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Shehandedhimanoteandsaidthemanwhowasshortofmoneylasttimehadleftitforhim.Thenoteread,“Thankyouforyourkindness.Iwashavingatoughday,andyoumadeitbetter.Nowit'smyturn.”Myhusbandwasdeeplytouched.Herealizedthathissmallactofhelpinghadaprofoundimpactontheman.Hetookthesandwichesandgotinthecar,hisheartfullofgratitude.

Thetwomennoddedatoneanotherandwentontheirway.Itwasasilentexchangeofgratitudeandrecognition.Weknewthatthisencounterwasnotjustaboutsandwichesbutaboutthepowerofkindness.Itmadeusmoredeterminedtocontinuetobekindinthefuture,knowingthatourkindnesswouldnotgounnoticedandwouldinspireotherstodothesame.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Asheopenedthedoor,oneofthefemaleworkersrantohim.Whenhewasconfusedlywonderingwhatshewasfor,theworkerhandedhimhissandwich.Withoutaword,sheranbackintothestore.Withagratefulheart,heassumedthattheladyhadjustgiven

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