高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+好奇的杰森與姐姐的生日驚喜+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)好奇的杰森與姐姐的生日驚喜1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenJasonwaseatingbreakfast,hismothersaid,“Afterbreakfast,Jason,Iwantyoutogointotownwithme.It’syoursister’sbirthday,andweneedtoshopforhergifts.”Jasonwaseagertogo,becausebuyinggiftswasalwaysfun.Astheydrovetotown,Jasoncouldn’thelpbutaskthequestionthathadbeenonhismindsinceyesterdaywhenAuntNancycame.“What’sinthebigboxthatDadtooktothebarn(畜棚),Mom?IsitsomethingAuntNancyboughtforMegan’sbirthday?”“It’sasurprise,Jasonanddon’tgonearthatbarntoday.Doyouhearme?”4續(xù)寫原文Jasonknewnothingwouldchangehermind.Onlynowhewasmorecuriousthanever!Backhome,MeganranouttomeetJason.“Jason,Jason,I’msixyearsold!”shecried,jumpingupanddown.“Iknow,Iknow.”Jasongaveherabighug.Soonthehousewasfilledwithexcitement.MegansatonthechairwatchingwhileMomandAuntNancywerepreparingthebirthdaydinner.Dadwouldn’tbebackforatleasttwohours.Jasonwentoutsidetryingtothinkofsomethingtodo,buthisthoughtskeptreturningtotheboxinthebarn.5續(xù)寫原文Jasonwishedhecouldjustturnbacktothehouse,buthislegscarriedhimintothebarn.Heopenedtheboxandfoundalittledoginit!“Megan’sgoingtoloveyou!”Hesecretlywishedthedogwasforhim.Afterall,MomandDadknewthathehadbeenwantinghisowndog.SoonJasonwasplayinghappilywiththedog,andheforgotthatheshouldn’tbeinthebarn.Suddenly,thedogranoutofthebarnasfastasitcouldandintothefield.6段首句Paragraph1：Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.Paragraph2：Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了早餐時，媽媽告知杰森要和她進城給姐姐梅根買生日禮物，杰森卻對爸爸拿到畜棚的大盒子充滿好奇，媽媽警告他別靠近?；丶液?，家里洋溢著梅根生日的歡樂氛圍，而杰森滿腦子都是盒子。趁爸爸還沒回來，他忍不住走進畜棚打開盒子，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面是一只小狗，他開心地和小狗玩耍，還私心希望小狗是自己的。但玩著玩著小狗突然跑向田野，杰森可能將面臨如何向家人交代擅入畜棚以及小狗丟失的問題，故事在此留下懸念。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.杰森從畜棚出來后，心急如焚地四處尋找小狗。他的雙眼瞪得大大的，不放過任何一個角落，嘴里不停地呼喊著小狗的名字，豆大的汗珠從額頭滾落。他深一腳淺一腳地在草叢中奔跑，不小心被絆倒了好幾次，但他顧不上疼痛，立刻爬起來繼續(xù)尋找。隨著時間的流逝，他的心里越來越絕望，淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)。他深知自己闖了大禍，不僅違背了媽媽的叮囑，還可能讓姐姐失去這份珍貴的生日禮物。最終，他拖著沉重的腳步，懷著忐忑不安的心情往家走去，想著該如何面對家人。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”派對上，當(dāng)梅根打開最后一份禮物后，爸爸神秘兮兮地說：“等一下，我馬上回來?！贝蠹叶济婷嫦嘤U，不知道爸爸要干什么。不一會兒，爸爸抱著那只小狗走了進來。杰森看到小狗，驚訝得合不攏嘴。爸爸笑著解釋說，他其實早就看到杰森進了畜棚，也明白他對小狗的喜愛。原本打算在梅根的派對結(jié)束后，給杰森一個驚喜，把小狗送給他。但是看到小狗跑掉后，他便立刻出去尋找，好在最終找到了。接著，爸爸把小狗正式送給了杰森，大家都為杰森感到高興，派對的氣氛也變得更加歡樂溫馨，杰森抱著小狗，臉上洋溢著幸福的笑容，心中暗暗發(fā)誓以后一定不再調(diào)皮搗蛋、違背父母的話了。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.Hisheartwasthumpingwildlyinhischestasherushedoutintotheopenfield.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,butJasonwasoblivioustothebeautyoftheday.Hecalledoutthedog'snameatthetopofhislungs,hisvoicecrackingwithdesperation."Comebackhere,littlefella!"heshouted.Hescouredeveryinchofthefield,partingthetallgrasswithhishands,hopingtocatchaglimpseofthefurrycreature.Butastheminutestickedby,hishopebegantowane.Thedogwasnowheretobeseen.Tearsstartedtostreamdownhisface,notonlybecausehewasafraidoflosingthedogbutalsobecauseheknewhehaddonesomethingterriblywrong.Withaheavyheartandasinkingfeelinginhisstomach,heslowlymadehiswaybacktothehouse,tryingtocomeupwithanexcusetotellhisparents.14范文呈現(xiàn)Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”Everyoneintheroomexchangedpuzzledglances.Jason'sheartskippedabeat,wonderingwhathisfatherwasupto.Afewminuteslater,Dadwalkedthroughthedoor,holdingthelittledoginhisarms.Thedogwaswaggingitstailexcitedly,asifitknewitwasabouttobepartofawonderfulcelebration.Dadsmiledbroadlyandsaid,"Jason,Isawyougointothebarnearlier.Iknowhowmuchyou'vealwayswantedadog,sothislittleguyisforyou."Jason'seyeswidenedindisbeliefandthenfilledwithtearsofjoy.Hecouldn'tbelievethathisfatherhadknownallalongandhadplannedthissurprise.TheroomeruptedincheersandapplauseasJasoncarefullytookthedogfromhisfather'sarms.Fromthatmomenton,thedogbecameJason'sbestfriend,andhelearnedanimportantlessonabouthonestyandpatience.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog,hisheartpoundinglikeadruminhischest.Withthesuncastingabrightglareoverhead,hedashedintothefield,shoutingthedog'snameatthetopofhislungs,desperationclingingtoeverysyllable.Tearingthroughthetallgrass,hiseyesscannedeverynookandcranny,butitwasallinvain.Nowherecouldthelittlefurrycreaturebefound.Itwasnotonlythefearoflosingthedogthatbroughttearsstreamingdownhischeeks,butalsotherealizationofhisdisobedience.Slowlyanddejectedly,hemadehiswaybacktothehouse,hismindracingtofabricateanexcusethatmightsomehowlessenthewrathhewassuretoface.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”Inaninstant,alleyeswerefixedonthedoor,curiosityhangingthickintheair.Momentslater,incameDad,holdingthelittledoginhisarms.Behold!Itwasasightth