高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+制表匠亨利的時光與人生之悟+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)制表匠亨利的時光與人生之悟1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inaworldwheretimewasthemostvaluablecurrency,amannamedHenrylivedalifeofmonotonous(單調(diào)乏味的)routine.Everydaywasamirrorimageofthelast,filledwiththetick-tockoftheclockthatdictatedhiseverymove.Henrywasaskilledwatchmaker,andhiscreationswereadmiredfortheirprecisionandbeauty.However,theirony(諷刺)ofhisprofessionwasnotlostonhim;despitehisabilitytocontrolthemeasureoftime,hefeltasiftimewascontrollinghim.Tomakemattersworse,thereharboredadeepregretinhisheart—hissonRichard,whoworkedinanothercity,seldomcontactedhim.Theywereliterallystrangerslivingfarapart.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,anelderlywomanvisitedHenry’sshop,seekingawatchwithapeculiarrequest.Shewantedatimepiecethatdidnottelltheexacttimebutratherremindedthewearerofthefleetingandtemporarynatureoflife.“Thiswatchisalsoformyson,whooncedidsomethingassociatedwiththeconceptoftime,buthe…”shesuddenlypaused,andobviouslytherewasaslumpinherthroat.ButshequicklycomposedherselfandtoldHenryshewouldcomeforthewatchonemonthlater.Intrigued(感覺著迷的),Henryacceptedthechallenge,pouringhissoulintothecreationofauniquewatch.Hedesigneditwithnonumbers,onlytwohands—onemovingrapidlyandtheothersoslowlyitwasalmoststill.5續(xù)寫原文Ashecompletedthewatch,hefoundhimselffascinatedbyitsunconventionaldesign.Thehandsseemedtodancearoundtheface,avisualmetaphorforthepassageoftime.Themoreheobservedit,themoreitmadehimreflectonhisownlife.Herealizedthatinhispursuitofperfectionandorder,hehadforgottentoliveandappreciatethepresentmoment.6段首句Paragraph1：Onemonthlater,theelderlywomanreturnedtocollectherwatch.Paragraph2：Asthewomanleft,Henryfeltaprofoundsenseofchange.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9故事圍繞著制表匠亨利展開。亨利生活單調(diào)，雖能掌控手表的時間精準度，卻覺得被時間操控，且與在外地工作的兒子理查德關(guān)系疏離。一天，一位老婦人來定制特殊手表，不要顯示準確時間，而要提醒生命短暫，這引起了亨利的興趣，他接受挑戰(zhàn)并精心打造。完成后，他被這獨特設(shè)計吸引，開始反思自己因追求完美和秩序而忽略了當下生活。這個過程或許會成為亨利轉(zhuǎn)變生活態(tài)度的契機，也可能讓他重新審視與兒子的關(guān)系，未來他可能會采取行動改變現(xiàn)狀。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Onemonthlater,theelderlywomanreturnedtocollectherwatch.一個月后，老婦人如期回到亨利的店鋪取表。亨利滿懷期待地將那只獨特的手表遞給她，眼中閃爍著自豪的光芒，這畢竟是他耗費心血的得意之作。老婦人接過手表，仔細地端詳著，手指輕輕撫摸著表盤上沒有數(shù)字的設(shè)計，臉上露出了一絲難以言喻的神情，似悲傷又似欣慰。她輕聲說道：“這表真的很特別，就像我對兒子的思念一樣獨特?！焙嗬滩蛔柕溃骸澳膬鹤拥降自趺戳?？”老婦人的眼眶瞬間紅了，她哽咽著講述起兒子曾經(jīng)是個爭分奪秒、一心追逐事業(yè)成功的人，卻因此忽略了家庭和生活的美好，后來在一場意外中離世。亨利聽著，心中不禁泛起層層漣漪，開始反思自己對待時間和生活的態(tài)度是否也存在同樣的問題。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Asthewomanleft,Henryfeltaprofoundsenseofchange.當老婦人離開后，亨利獨自坐在店鋪里，一種深刻的改變之感在心底油然而生。他的目光落在那些擺放整齊的工具和尚未完成的手表零件上，但思緒卻飄到了遠方。他意識到自己一直以來都被時間的精準性所束縛，如同被關(guān)進了無形的牢籠，機械地重復(fù)著每一天，忽略了生活中那些真正重要的瞬間和情感。他決定不再這樣渾渾噩噩地生活下去，要主動打破這種沉悶的現(xiàn)狀。他想起了久未聯(lián)系的兒子理查德，心中涌起一股強烈的渴望，想要立刻見到他，修復(fù)他們之間疏遠的關(guān)系。于是，亨利站起身來，開始整理店鋪，準備暫時放下手中的工作，踏上前往兒子所在城市的旅程，去重新?lián)肀睿一啬切┍蛔约哼z失在歲月長河中的珍貴情感和時光。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Onemonthlater,theelderlywomanreturnedtocollectherwatch.Henryhadbeeneagerlyanticipatingherarrival,thefinishedwatchlyingcarefullyonthecounter.Assheenteredtheshop,hegreetedherwithawarmsmileandpresentedthetimepiecewithatouchofpride.Thewoman'seyeswidenedinadmirationasshetookthewatchinherhands,gentlyturningittoexamineeverydetail."It'strulyremarkable,"shewhispered.Henry'scuriositygotthebetterofhim,andhetentativelyaskedaboutherson.Thewoman'sexpressionsaddened,andshetookadeepbreathbeforespeaking."Mysonwasabrilliantyoungman,alwayschasingaftersuccessandthenextbigthing.Hewassoconsumedbytimethatheforgottoliveinthemoment.Andnow...he'sgone."Tearswelledupinhereyes,andHenryfeltalumpforminhisthroat.Herwordshithimhard,makinghimquestionhisownlifechoices.14范文呈現(xiàn)Asthewomanleft,Henryfeltaprofoundsenseofchange.Hesankintohischair,lostinthought.Thewatchhehadcraftedhadnotonlybeenajobbutarevelation.Forthefirsttimeinalongwhile,hesawthefutilityofhismonotonousexistence.Hehadbeenaslavetotime,justlikethewoman'sson.Determinedtobreakfreefromthiscycle,hemadeasuddendecision.Hewouldclosetheshopforawhileandgotovisithisownson,Richard.Henryquicklybegantomakearrangements,hisheartpoundingwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Ashepackedasmallbag,hethoughtaboutwhathewouldsaytoRichard.Thisjourney,hehoped,wouldbethestartofanewchapterinhislife,onewherehewouldcherisheverymomentandrebuildtheconnectionwithhisson.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onemonthlater,theelderlywomanreturnedtocollectherwatch.Henry,havingspentcountlesshoursmeticulouslycraftingit,presentedtheuniquetimepiecewithbatedbreath.Asthewomanentered,hereyeswereimmediatelydrawntothewatch,whichboastedanunconventionaldesignwithnonumbersandtwohands,onescurryingrapidlyandtheothercreepingalongatasnail'space."It'sexactlywhatIenvisioned,"shemurmured.Overwhelmedbycuriosity,Henrycouldn'thelpbutinquireaboutherson.Withaheavyheart,thewomanrecountedhowherson,oncesoengrossedintheratraceoflife,hadtragicallypassedaway."ItwasonlyafterhewasgonethatIrealizedhowmuchtimewehadwasted,"shelamented.Henrywasdeeplyaffected,realizinghetoohadbeenaprisoneroftime'srelentlessmarch.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Asthewomanleft,aprofoundsenseoftransformationwashedoverHenry.Sittingthere,lostincontemplation,heunderstoodthatthiswatchhadservedasawake-u