作文 06 貴州卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文解析

作文06貴州卷2021年真題在線高中生涯即將開(kāi)始。假設(shè)你叫李明，你對(duì)于高中的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)有什么規(guī)劃呢？畢業(yè)之際，校團(tuán)委將舉辦一場(chǎng)高中英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃分享會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearning為題，準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，和同學(xué)們分享一下你的學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃。需提升項(xiàng)目高中英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃一、語(yǔ)音（pronunciation）、聽(tīng)力多聽(tīng)多讀課文（texts），多聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)新聞節(jié)目（newsprograms），觀看英語(yǔ)電影二、寫(xiě)作（writing）記英文日記：不要把一切都翻譯成漢語(yǔ)（translateeverythingintoChinese），應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行思考三、語(yǔ)法（grammar）看些語(yǔ)法書(shū)，并請(qǐng)教老師四、心態(tài)保持輕松（stayrelaxed），滿(mǎn)懷信心（beconfident）寫(xiě)作要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.行文流暢，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名或所在地等信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearningI’mLiMing.IloveEnglish,butit’salittledifficultforme.Idecidetotrymybesttolearnitwell.Here’smyplanforSeniorEnglishlearning._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnlyinthiswaycanIlearnEnglishwellinseniorhighschool.Ihopeit’shelpfulforyou.Thankyou.考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求根據(jù)題目所給要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于高中英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃的短文。文章要點(diǎn)要齊全，切忌遺漏。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)。題目已給出要點(diǎn)提示，學(xué)生將要點(diǎn)提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文即可，但要注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)法的正確使用，最好使用first…second等詞，使文章銜接自然、敘述流暢。滿(mǎn)分范文MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearningI’mLiMing.IloveEnglish,butit’salittledifficultforme.Idecidetotrymybesttolearnitwell.Here’smyplanforSeniorEnglishlearning.First,pronunciationandlistening.Idecidetolistentoandreadmoretexts,listentomorenewsprogramsandwatchEnglishmovies.Second,writing.KeepinganEnglishdiaryisgoodformyEnglishwriting.IwilllearntothinkinEnglishinsteadoftranslatingeverythingintoChinese.Third,grammar.TolearnEnglishgrammarwell,IwillreadsomegrammarbooksandaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Fourth,mentality.IwillstayrelaxedandbeconfidentaboutmyEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIlearnEnglishwellinseniorhighschool.Ihopeit’shelpfulforyou.Thankyou.真題在線（2021年貴州銅仁）百年建黨之際，銅仁市各個(gè)學(xué)校都在開(kāi)展愛(ài)國(guó)愛(ài)黨主題教育活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是張華，將參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)演講比賽慶祝黨的生日，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示及要求，以“Howtobearesponsiblestudent”為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆粋€(gè)有作為、有責(zé)任感的學(xué)生。要求：1.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.句子通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，符合邏輯；3.包含所有提示內(nèi)容，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.書(shū)寫(xiě)正確規(guī)范，卷面整潔。提示：1.愛(ài)國(guó)愛(ài)黨，有理想，誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，善良感恩；2.努力學(xué)習(xí)，樹(shù)立節(jié)約意識(shí)，不要浪費(fèi)(如:食物，紙張，水電等)；3.保持身心健康，多參加課外活動(dòng)和體育鍛煉；4.熱愛(ài)自然，保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，愛(ài)護(hù)動(dòng)植物。參考詞匯keepone’spromise,bethankfultosb,setthemindofsavingBoysandgirls,July1stwillbeourParty’s100thbirthday.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourmotherland.Wehaveasenseofdutytomakeourcountrymoreandmorepowerful.Whatshouldwedotobearesponsiblestudent?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!考題解析【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)和要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出應(yīng)該如何做一個(gè)有作為、有責(zé)任感的學(xué)生，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。

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寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要與已給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾融合起來(lái)，用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，提出建議可以多使用should來(lái)表達(dá)，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。滿(mǎn)分范文Boysandgirls,July1stwillbeourParty’s100thbirthday.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourmotherland.Wehaveasenseofdutytomakeourcountrymoreandmorepowerful.Whatshouldwedotobearesponsiblestudent?First

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want.Thanksforlistening!2020年一、材料作文1．下面是一篇未寫(xiě)完的短文，請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀，為短文寫(xiě)一個(gè)30﹣40詞的結(jié)尾。續(xù)寫(xiě)文字完整。Thereisadebate(討論)inourEnglishclass.Thetopicisthatwhetherwecanbringourmobilephonestotheschool.GroupAsaysthatitisgoodforstudentstodoso.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】范文：Thereisadebate(討論)inourEnglishclass.Thetopicisthatwhetherwecanbringourmobilephonestotheschool.GroupAsaysthatitisgoodforstudentstodoso.Theythinkstudentscancalltheirparentsifnecessary.Andtheycanlistentomusic,sendmessages,surfonthenetandeventakephotosbyusingthemobilephones.GroupBdon'tthinkteenagersshouldusemobilephones.Theythinkmobilephonesarenotgoodfortheirhealth.Andusingmobilephonesisawasteoftime.Ourgroupholdtheviewthatstudentscanuseamobilephonebecauseitcanhelpustolearnmoreabouttheworld.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按議論文格式寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭，介紹A、B小組的不同看法及理由；接下來(lái)介紹我們組的看法及理由。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，分析A、B小組的不同看法；在描述理由時(shí)，應(yīng)分析詳細(xì)；并且分析小組的看法和理由等需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。2．一場(chǎng)新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，對(duì)各行各業(yè)影響很大，使人們對(duì)未來(lái)的工作選擇有了新的認(rèn)識(shí)和思考。請(qǐng)你以"Whatismydreamjob?"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校英語(yǔ)手抄報(bào)上，談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來(lái)職業(yè)選擇的想法。內(nèi)容：1.疫情前的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想和原因（2點(diǎn)）；2.疫情后的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)和原因（2點(diǎn)）；3.現(xiàn)階段應(yīng)該怎么做（2點(diǎn)）。要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、學(xué)校名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：scientist,engineer,policeman/policewoman,teacher,doctorWhatismydreamjob?Ihavemanydreams.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillbeagoodstudent.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Whatismydreamjob?Ihavemanydreams.Iwantedtobeascientistbecausescientistscaninventmanyhigh-techproductstomakeourlifemoreconvenient.IalsowantedtobeateacherbecauseIliketogetalongwithchildrenanditisarespectablejob.Butatthebeginningof2020,COVID-19brokeoutsuddenlyandmydreamhaschangedsincethen.NowIwanttobeadoctorbecauseIwanttohelppeopleinneed.Whenourcountryandpeopleareintrouble,doctorsandnursesdevotethemselvestosavingpeople’slives.Theyareheroes.Iwillbeagoodstudentinordertomakemydreamcometrue.Iwillstudyhardfromnowonandgotoamedicalcollege.IhopeIcanrealizemydreamoneday.【詳解】題干解讀：這篇短文要求以Whatismydreamjob?為題，介紹一下自己理想的工作。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先介紹疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因；然后介紹發(fā)生疫情之后，自己理想的工作發(fā)生了變化以及原因；最后簡(jiǎn)述一下現(xiàn)階段應(yīng)該怎樣做來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主敘述，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)或第三人稱(chēng)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章采用了兩段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段介紹了疫情前后自己的理想工作以及原因；第二段介紹了現(xiàn)階段自己如何努力實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。短文敘述清晰、條理，理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中用到了簡(jiǎn)單句、狀語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等句式或結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：getalongwith；atthebeginningof；sincethen；inneed；introuble；cometrue；fromnowon。句型：because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)、目的狀語(yǔ)；hope后跟賓語(yǔ)從句；動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)。3．假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校剛剛開(kāi)學(xué)，正在開(kāi)展“HappyMonth”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以“LearntoBeHappy”為題，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂(lè)生活。內(nèi)容包括:1.新冠疫情使學(xué)校延遲開(kāi)學(xué);2.通過(guò)上網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文、數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ)等課程;3.“Happy,Month”活動(dòng)和你的心情:4.如何快樂(lè)生活(至少2點(diǎn))。寫(xiě)作要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒COVID—19LearntoBeHappyGoodmorning,everyone!We’reveryhappytobebacktoschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeallofuscanlivehappilyinthisschool.Thankyouforyourlistening!【答案】例文LearntoBeHappyGoodmorning,everyone!I'mveryhappytobebacktoschool.TopreventtheCorid-19,ourschoolhasdelayed(putoff)theopeningofthisterm.Butwedidn'tstopstudying.OurschoolgaveusonlinecoursessuchasChinese,Math,Englishandsoon.Wewereveryhappy.Nowourschooliscarryingouttheplan“happyMonth”.Howtobehappy?First,Ithinkweshouldhavelifeaims,withlifeaims,wecanliveahappyandmeaningfullife.Then,wemustkeephealthy.What’smore,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.Ihopeallofuscanlivehappilyinthisschool.Thankyouforyourlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李華，學(xué)校剛剛開(kāi)學(xué)，正在開(kāi)展“HappyMonth”活動(dòng)，要求你以“LearntoBeHappy”為題，題干內(nèi)容提示，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂(lè)生活。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：putoff，suchas，soon，keephealthy，bereadyto。句型：Ithinkweshouldhavelifeaims.我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該有生活目標(biāo)。Ithink后接賓語(yǔ)從句。What’smore,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)備好幫助別人。bereadytodosth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事。4．全球新冠疫情依然嚴(yán)峻，而我國(guó)的疫情防控成就令人矚目，全國(guó)萬(wàn)眾一心，團(tuán)結(jié)抗疫的畫(huà)面令我們永生難忘。你的美國(guó)筆友Michael想了解你對(duì)此的所見(jiàn)所聞和所思所想。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，回一封郵件。提示：（所見(jiàn)所聞）我們政府采取了很多措施，執(zhí)行（carryout）隔離（quarantine）治療（reatment）的政策（policy）；興建（build）許多特殊的（special）醫(yī)院；許多優(yōu)秀的（excellent）醫(yī)護(hù)人員自愿（volunteer）去幫助災(zāi)區(qū)（disasterareas）.（所思所想）作為學(xué)生，我們要保護(hù)好自己，比如……（至少兩點(diǎn)）；希望全世界人民……。（worktogether；savemorelives）要求：1.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.句子通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，符合邏輯；3.必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，但不要逐字逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.務(wù)必書(shū)寫(xiě)正確規(guī)范，卷面整潔。DearMichael,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure—mail.NowI’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou.SinceCOVID—19brokeout,ourgovernmenthastakenmanymeasures.First______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【答案】例文DearMichael,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.NowI’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou.SinceCOVID-19brokeout,ourgovernmenthastakenmanymeasures.First,wehavecarriedoutquarantinetreatmentpolicy.Second,manyspecialhospitalshavebeenbuilt.Third,manyexcellentdoctorsandnursesvolunteeredtohelpthepeoplewholivedinthedisasterareas.Asstudents,wemustprotectourselves.Forexample,keepourhomecleanandoftenopenthewindowtokeepthefreshair.Trytoavoidgoingoutsideorgoingtoplaceswheretherearemanypeople.Washyourhandsasoftenaspossible,especiallybeforemealsandafterreturningfrompublicplaces.What’smore,weshouldwearamaskwhengoingout.IIhopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives.Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：對(duì)于寫(xiě)作題考生需認(rèn)真審題，全面了解寫(xiě)作要求，理清思路，確定短文體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美國(guó)筆友Michael寫(xiě)信介紹自己的所見(jiàn)所聞和所思所想，屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要注意格式正確，用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行敘述。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文首先直入主題I’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou，然后分別介紹政府的三點(diǎn)防疫舉措和個(gè)人的防護(hù)措施，最后表達(dá)希望Ihopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives。本文是“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)，以第一人稱(chēng)為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)三種時(shí)態(tài)展開(kāi)陳述；內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，方法合理，表達(dá)流暢，條理清晰，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：高分短語(yǔ)：wouldliketodo,sharesth.withsb.,asstudents,stayathome,goout,carryout,volunteertodo,livein,forexample,trytodo,avoiddoing,asoftenaspossible,what’smore,allovertheworld.高分句型：1).Third,manyexcellentdoctorsandnursesvolunteeredtohelpthepeoplewholivedinthedisasterareas.（定語(yǔ)從句）2).Forexample,keepourhomecleanandoftenopenthewindowtokeepthefreshair.（并列祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)）3).Ihopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives.（賓語(yǔ)從句）【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。例文中，F(xiàn)irst,Second,Third,What’smore等詞的運(yùn)用，增強(qiáng)了本文的條理性。二、書(shū)信作文5．中國(guó)扶貧基金會(huì)為了支援西部地區(qū)教育事業(yè)，將聘請(qǐng)澳大利亞外籍教師前往該地區(qū)任教英語(yǔ)。假如你是該地區(qū)希望中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生，名叫張華，請(qǐng)你給即將前往你學(xué)校的澳大利亞外籍教師Mr.Green寫(xiě)一封信，歡迎他來(lái)任教，并簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校和英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹你們學(xué)校和班級(jí)的情況(地理位置，班級(jí)人數(shù)等)；2.你們?cè)谟⒄Z(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困惑(請(qǐng)寫(xiě)2點(diǎn))；3.你們的希望或建議(請(qǐng)寫(xiě)2點(diǎn))。要求如下：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)音規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名稱(chēng)等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：inthewestofChina西部地區(qū)；Australia澳大利亞DearMr.Green,WewarmlywelcomeyoutoteachusEnglishinXiWangMiddleSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】例文：DearMr.Green,WewarmlywelcomeyoutoteachusEnglishinXiWangMiddleSchool.IamastudentofGradeNineinHopeMiddleSchool.MynameisZhangHua.Nowletmeintroducemyschooltoyou.OurschoolisinasmallvillageinthewestofChina.It'shardtoliveherebecauseofpoverty.Therearefiveclassesinourschool.Therearefortystudentsinourclass.Thesechildrenareverylovely.WehavenoprofessionalEnglishteacherhere.TheteacherswhoteachothersubjectsteachusEnglish,soourEnglishisverypoor.MostofourEnglishpronunciationisnotright.IhopewecanhaveanEnglishteachertoteachusEnglish.Ihopethatthegovernmentwillinvestinourvillagesothatwecangetagoodeducation.Yours,ZhangHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，要求以張華的名義給即將任教的外籍教師格林先生介紹學(xué)校和英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況。內(nèi)容需包括三點(diǎn)：一是學(xué)校和班級(jí)情況；二是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的困惑；三是表達(dá)希望和建議。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述書(shū)信內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，介紹學(xué)校和班級(jí)、自己存在的困惑以及建議和希望；寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意按要點(diǎn)分段敘述，使文章有層次感和邏輯性。6．2020年3月3日是聯(lián)合國(guó)第七個(gè)"世界野生動(dòng)植物日"，我國(guó)提出了"維護(hù)全球生命共同體"的主題。我們的世界因這些生物而豐富多彩、妙趣橫生。保護(hù)它們，就是守護(hù)我們的未來(lái)。下面，讓我們一起來(lái)聽(tīng)聽(tīng)熊貓惜惜的傾訴吧！假如你是熊貓惜惜，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給人類(lèi)朋友寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的書(shū)信。要求：1.信中包含所給信息內(nèi)容；2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2.書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。1.基本信息：13歲，來(lái)自四川，中國(guó)的象征；愛(ài)好（自主發(fā)揮）。2.我的煩惱：朋友少，家園常常遭到破壞……3.我的愿望或建議（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩條）。參考詞匯：symbol(n.象征)、destroy(v.破壞)Dearfriends,MynameisXixi._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Xixi【答案】例文：Dearfriends,MynameisXixi.I’moneofyourfavoriteanimals—Panda.IcomefromSichuan,China.Iam13yearsold.IamanationaltreasureofChinaandasymbolofChina.Iusuallyliketoplaywithmyfriends.Ialsolikeclimbingtreesandsittingonthetrees.Ilikebamboosbest.It’smyfavoritefood.ButI’vehadsomeproblemsrecently.MyhomeisoftenbrokenandIdon’thavemuchroomtomovearound.Myfriendsarefewerandfewerbecausesomepeoplehavedestroyedmyhome.ThereisnoonetoplaywithmeandIamverylonely.Myfavoritefoodisgettinglessandless.I’mreallysad.Ihopehumanfriendscanhelpme.Ihopethatpeoplecanprotecttheenvironmentandgivememorespacetolive.Ifyoucancutdownfewertrees,myfriendsandIwillbeveryhappy.Yours,Xixi【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇書(shū)信作文。主要是以熊貓惜惜的身份向人類(lèi)寫(xiě)一封信。先是介紹自己，然后告訴自己的煩惱以及期待和愿望。要把題目中給出的要求都寫(xiě)進(jìn)去，要注意人稱(chēng)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換和時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用，還要注意語(yǔ)句之間的連貫。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫(xiě)。第一段是對(duì)自己簡(jiǎn)單的介紹；第二段介紹自己的一些煩惱和憂(yōu)慮；第三段寫(xiě)自己的期望。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思通俗易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：oneof；comefrom；playwith；likedoing；movearound；cutdown。句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；Ihope+賓語(yǔ)從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。三、話(huà)題作文7．某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展關(guān)于良好生活習(xí)慣的征文大賽，請(qǐng)以“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文參加此次大賽。要求如下：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；2.征文應(yīng)包含第一節(jié)所有信息（1.What’syourfavoritefood?2.Howoftendoyouexercise?3.Howmanyhoursdoyousleepeverynight?4.Howdoyourelaxyourselfinyourdailylife?5.Whatdoyouthinkofyourlivinghabits?）；3.重點(diǎn)談?wù)劻己玫纳盍?xí)慣對(duì)你的積極影響和作用；4.征文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthierGoodlivinghabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusinmanyways.Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.Iusedtoprefermeattofruitorvegetables.ButnowItryallkindsoffood.What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.Everyoneneedssleep.Ihaveeighttotenhours’sleepatnight.Withenoughsleepatnight,Icanbereadyforschoolactivities.InsparetimeI’dliketodosomereading.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.Ithinkmylivinghabitsareprettyhealthy.Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.Ilookmuchstrongerthanbefore.Ithinkitisgoodlivinghabitsthatmakemehealthierandhealthier.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話(huà)題作文，要求補(bǔ)充完題目“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”后寫(xiě)一篇短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文分三段，第一段用于引出GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthier這一話(huà)題，第二段則根據(jù)第一節(jié)的五個(gè)要點(diǎn)對(duì)自己的良好生活習(xí)慣進(jìn)行了描述，第三段則對(duì)自己的生活習(xí)慣進(jìn)行了評(píng)價(jià)并肯定了健康生活習(xí)慣給自己帶來(lái)的積極影響。例文層次分明，思路清晰，敘述流暢，文中用了許多高分句型及短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：usedtodo，prefer…to…，allkindsof，what’smore，bereadyfor，atthebeginning。句型：（1）What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.（and連接的并列句）（2）Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（3）Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）8．請(qǐng)將文章用0.5毫米黑色簽字筆寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。安全對(duì)于每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都很重要。作為中學(xué)生,我們可能遇到哪些安全問(wèn)題?該怎樣處理呢?校團(tuán)委決定組織一次安全教育主題班會(huì),請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,以HowtoKeepSafe為題寫(xiě)一篇英文發(fā)言稿。中學(xué)生安全問(wèn)題及對(duì)策一、交通安全:遵守交通規(guī)則。二、食品安全:注意飲食安全。三、活動(dòng)安全:上下樓梯靠右行;體育鍛煉要小心:不允許私自下河游泳。四、交友安全:注意網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友安全。遇險(xiǎn)建議遇到危險(xiǎn)要保持冷靜,保證自身安全,然后及時(shí)報(bào)警或向家長(zhǎng)、老師求助。寫(xiě)作要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整,要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.表達(dá)通順,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息;4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoKeepSafeHello,everyone.Safetyisveryimportantforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,asstudents,wemustalwayskeepsafetyinmindandvalueourlives.【答案】例文HowtoKeepSafeHello,everyone.Safetyisveryimportantforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe.Firstly,wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Secondly,weshouldpayattentiontothefoodsafety.Besurenottoeattoomuchjunkfood.Thirdly,whenwegoupstairsordownstairs,weshouldkeeptotheright.Becarefulwhiledoingsports.Remembernottoswimintheriveralone.What'smore,we'dbetternotmakefriendsonline.Wemuststayawayfromdangerouspeoplearound.Ifwegetintotrouble,wemustkeepcalmandsafefirstandthencallthepolice,theteachersorparentsforhelp.Inaword,asstudents,wemustalwayskeepsafetyinmindandvalueourlives.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文。以“如何保持安全”為題展開(kāi)描述，文中闡述中學(xué)生的安全問(wèn)題及對(duì)策，以及遇險(xiǎn)的建議。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文采用的是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)采用的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用事態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。句子通順，邏輯性強(qiáng)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：payattentionto注意；toomuch太多；what’smore而且；hadbetter(not)dosth最好（不）做某事；inaword總之。句子：Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe用的是倒裝句；Besurenottoeattoomuchjunkfood用的是祈使句；whenwegoupstairsordownstairs,weshouldkeeptotheright中when引導(dǎo)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。2019年一、材料作文1．假如你是遵義育才中學(xué)的大明，你們學(xué)校與上海陽(yáng)光中學(xué)正在實(shí)施"山與海對(duì)話(huà)"（

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sincerely，Daming【詳解】本題是一篇材料作文，也是書(shū)信作文。注意書(shū)信格式。本文人稱(chēng)主要是第一稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，提示要點(diǎn)就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：親愛(ài)的小海：我很高興聽(tīng)到你來(lái)遵義是因?yàn)樯脚c海的項(xiàng)目對(duì)話(huà)?，F(xiàn)在讓我告訴你一些關(guān)于我和我的城市的事情。我今年14歲。我很外向，喜歡交朋友。我喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，喜歡打球和跑步。我也喜歡集郵。我們的學(xué)校生活非常豐富多彩。我們不僅可以很努力地學(xué)習(xí)，而且可以在課后做各種活動(dòng)。放學(xué)后，我們經(jīng)常做一些運(yùn)動(dòng)，如打籃球、排球、乒乓球等。我加入了籃球俱樂(lè)部。我每周四下午放學(xué)后打籃球，遵義自然環(huán)境優(yōu)美，有許多著名的風(fēng)景名勝和歷史古跡，如遵義海龍屯城堡和遵義會(huì)議遺址。如果你想了解更多有關(guān)遵義的歷史和文化，可以上網(wǎng)了解。歡迎來(lái)到我的城市！我很期待見(jiàn)到你。謹(jǐn)上，大明【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫(xiě)作六步法：1.審題：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿(mǎn)充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯(cuò)誤：拼寫(xiě)是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫(xiě)作文：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀整潔。2．（卷號(hào)）2239054062428160（題號(hào)）2243742310350848（題文）假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。要求如下：1.重點(diǎn)分享你在處理學(xué)習(xí)困難方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)以及你下一步學(xué)習(xí)或生活的打算；2.郵件不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I'mgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Lookingbackonthreeyearsofjuniorhighschoollife,therearemanygainsanddifficulties.IhavemanydifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Attheverybeginning,listeningseemedalittledifficultforme.SoIhavebeendoingalotoflisteningpractice,suchaslisteningtotapes,watchingEnglishTVprograms.AndIfounditreallyhelpedalot.Infact,therearesomemorehelpfulwaystolearnEnglishwell.Forexample,IenjoysingingEnglishsongsandIwanttojoinanEnglishcluborfindapenpalfromEnglish-speakingcountries.Ibelievethatnothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.Iamabouttostarthighschoollife,Iwillcontinuetoworkhard,Ihopeyoubravelyfacejuniorhighschoollife,haveahappyjuniorhighschoollife.【詳解】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ),如:SoIhavebeendoingalotoflisteningpractice,suchaslisteningtotapes,watchingEnglishTVprograms.，這些文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。3．A．下面是一篇未寫(xiě)完的短文，請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀，為短文寫(xiě)一個(gè)30-40詞的