專題01 觀點看法類-備戰(zhàn)2022中考英語六大類作文高分秘笈

寫作指導(dǎo)一般來說，觀點看法類文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基礎(chǔ)，還考查考生的邏輯能力。具體來說就是上下文的銜接過渡和文章層次的體現(xiàn)。文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系主要由過渡性的詞和短語來完成，在修辭中稱為"啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合"。"啟"就是開頭，"承"就是承接，"轉(zhuǎn)"是轉(zhuǎn)折，"合"是綜合或總結(jié)。1.用于表示"啟"的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落或文章的開頭。此類過渡性的詞和短語有first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,lately等。2.用于表示"承"的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落中的第一個擴展句中。此類過渡性的詞和短語有second,inaddition,besides,then,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,forexample,certainly,obviously,inotherwords,still,atthesametime,nodoubt等。3.用于表示"轉(zhuǎn)"的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落中的第二個擴展句中。此類過渡性的詞和短語有but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,otherwise,while,despite,inspiteof等。4.總之，要做好書面表達，需要大家把握以下幾個原則：細讀提示，抓要點：選擇句型，準(zhǔn)表達；確定線索，巧組合；適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，保完整；規(guī)范書寫，爭高分；細查全文，除筆誤。一、寫作方法——十句作文法第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，提出問題并通過問題點明全文主題；第二句為擴展句，進一步說明和支持主題句。另外，也可調(diào)整兩句的順序，由第一句說明情況，第二句提出問題。第二段為正文，共七句。第一句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相一致。第二句至第七句為擴展句，說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意運用好過渡詞，以使行文流暢。第三段為結(jié)尾，簡化為一句，是對全文的總結(jié)，并說明作者自己的觀點。三段之間的銜接要靈活運用＂啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合＂的過渡手段。二、應(yīng)急百寶箱遇到要點不會表達怎么辦？詞數(shù)不達標(biāo)怎么辦？不要急，＂一代，五加，一擴＂幫你輕松解決問題。＂＂具體說來就是：1.以實代虛——寫實2.增加限定語——定語、狀語等3.增加例子——forexample,suchas4.增加原因——進一步說明5.加套語（詞塊）6.加格言、諺語等——進一步說明7.擴充建議——自主發(fā)揮，點到即可三、注意事項1.觀點鮮明，文章一定有一個明確的中心論點——主題。2.層次分明，一個中心論點通常有幾個分論點支持，層次要分明，過渡要自然。3.最后一段一般要總結(jié)全文，得出一個符合邏輯的結(jié)論，突出中心思想。4.通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時。5.語言簡潔有力，一般不采用口語。常用表達一、開頭句型As

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how...寫作模板觀觀點看法類作文的整體結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的模式可循，可以先寫對比的一方面，再寫另外一方面；也可以將對比的兩個方面的不同點——比較著寫。對比觀點看法類作文的寫作摸板Thetopicof主題isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavourite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof理由一.What’smore,理由二.Moreover,理由三.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.First,理由一.Second(Besides),理由二.Third(Finally),理由三.Frommypointofview,Ithink我的觀點.Thereasonisthat原因.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformer(later)issurelyawisechoice.典例一（2021?廣西中考）正值中國共產(chǎn)黨（theCommunistPartyofChina）建黨100周年，“感黨恩、學(xué)史力行”。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎么做呢？請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容要點：1.學(xué)習(xí)黨史，了解紅色文化，弘揚（carryforward)共產(chǎn)黨精神；2.尊敬師長、團結(jié)同學(xué)、刻苦學(xué)習(xí)；3.積極參加各項有意義的活動：唱紅歌，講紅色故事等；4.你的感想。參考詞匯：（僅供參考）要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，語法正確，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的姓名、地點和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Itisthe100thanniversary（周年紀(jì)念）ofthefoundingoftheCommunistPartyofChinathisyear.WemustgivethankstothePartyandpracticewhatyouhavelearnedfromhistory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】Itisthe100thanniversary（周年紀(jì)念）ofthefoundingoftheCommunistPartyofChinathisyear.WemustgivethankstothePartyandpracticewhatyouhavelearnedfromhistory.Weshouldstartfromthefollowingaspects.Firstofall,weshouldstudythehistoryofthePartytounderstandtheredculture,andthencarryforwardthespiritoftheCommunistParty.Second,weshouldrespectteachers.Weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmatesandstudyhard.Finally,weshouldtakeanactivepartinallkindsofmeaningfulactivities,suchassingingredsongs,tellingredstoriesandsoon.UndertheleadershipoftheCommunistPartyofChina,people’slifeisgettingbetterandbetter.Wemustloveourmotherlandandourpartyevenmore.Weshouldmakecontributionstothecountry!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，介紹作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該做的事情：學(xué)習(xí)黨史，了解紅色文化，弘揚共產(chǎn)黨精神；尊敬師長、團結(jié)同學(xué)、刻苦學(xué)習(xí)；積極參加各項有意義的活動：唱紅歌，講紅色故事等，最后表達自己的感想等。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，內(nèi)容全面，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。典例二（2021?遼寧中考）根據(jù)有關(guān)部門調(diào)查，我國部分青少年每天勞動時間過少。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，說一說你平時參加勞動的情況，談一談對養(yǎng)成良好勞動習(xí)慣的看法。提示詞：社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)communityvoluntaryservices；生活技能lifeskills；責(zé)任感asenseofresponsibility要求：1.不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；2.根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊；4.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。李華參加勞動的情況養(yǎng)成良好勞動習(xí)慣的重要性在校打掃教室……?提高基本的生活技能?學(xué)會照顧自己?擁有責(zé)任感在家清洗餐具，洗衣服，做飯……社區(qū)做社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)，如去養(yǎng)老院看望老人……I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】I’mLiHua.Asateenager,Iamsupposedtoformgoodworkinghabits.It’sgoodformydevelopment.Atschool,Icleanmyclassroomregularlyandkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.Athome,Idothedishesandwashmyownclothes.Ialsohelpmyparentscookanddothehousework.BecauseIamamemberofthisfamilyandtheyaremyduty.Atcommunity,Ioftendocommunityvoluntaryservicesatweekends,likevisitingoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shouse.Itisimportantforustoimproveourbasiclifeskillsandweneedtolearntolookafterourselves.What’smore,weshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，介紹平時參加勞動的情況以及談一談對養(yǎng)成良好勞動習(xí)慣的看法。注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己平時參加勞動的情況；第三段介紹養(yǎng)成良好勞動習(xí)慣的重要性。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。典例三（2021?江蘇中考）公眾健康日（7月7日），旨在倡導(dǎo)“全民健康，快樂為本”的理念。隨著生活水平的提高，健康越來越受到重視。你們準(zhǔn)備組織一個關(guān)于“健康”主題的演講活動，請你根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)備一篇題為Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife的演講稿。Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife健康包括身體（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。身體健康1.健康飲食；2.適當(dāng)鍛煉；3.充足睡眠。心理健康1.積極樂觀；2.與人為善；3.……（至少一點）希望……（至少一點）注意事項：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【優(yōu)秀范文】HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearandclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?Firstly,weshouldkeepourbodieshealthy.Notonlydoweneedtoeathealthyfood,butwealsoneedtoexerciseinaproperwayeveryday.Forexample,wecanrunfor30minuteseverymorningorplaysportsafterschool.Meanwhile,westillneedenoughsleepeveryday.Secondly,mentalhealthisalsoveryimportant.Weneedtoloveourlifeandtrytobeactive.Weneedtogetalongwellwithothersaswell.Whenwe’resad,wecancommunicatewithourparents,teachersandfriendsfrankly.Inaword,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveahealthybodyandmind,andthenwecanhaveahealthyandhappylifeeveryday.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們以Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife為題寫一篇文章，發(fā)表一下自己對“健康”這一話題的看法。題目中用表格列出了文章應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容：首先介紹健康的分類；然后分別介紹如何保持身體健康和心理健康；最后提出自己的希望。學(xué)生們可以聯(lián)系自己的日常生活，根據(jù)表格中的提示，再增加一些細節(jié)信息，用正確的英語進行表達。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、第一人稱為主敘述。寫作時應(yīng)主語：首先文章要點全面，應(yīng)包括題目中列出的所有要點，并對心理健康和希望進行補充。其次應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點以及與漢語表達方式的不同，使用正確的詞匯和句型，以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句和其他句式的使用，提升文章檔次。最后應(yīng)注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。典例四（2021?河南中考）水滴石穿，繩鋸木斷。堅持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。請以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”為題，根據(jù)以下要點和要求，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學(xué)校的英語主題演講活動。1.要點：1）你每天在堅持做什么；2）你堅持這么做的理由；3）它會給你帶來怎樣的影響或改變。2.要求：1）文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2）詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【優(yōu)秀范文】OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.IloverunningandIhavekeptrunningforthreeyears.WhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatsportsandrunningwasalwaysmyweakness.Ioftenfailedinmyrunningtest.Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.Sometimes,IwassotiredthatIreallywantedtogiveup.ButIkepttellingmyselfthatIcouldmakeit.NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttokeeprunning.NowIdomuchbetterinrunning.I’mveryproudofmyselfandI’mreadyforanychallengeinthefuture.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。要求以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”為題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己堅持做的事、這么做的理由以及給自己帶來的影響和改變；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。預(yù)測一【題目要求】Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Iamnolongeralittlechild"（以"我不再是一個孩子"為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）背景：如今，我們的父母一方面對我們百般呵護，一方面又時常抱怨我們長不大.請給你的父母寫一封信，證明你不再是一個孩子了（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入字數(shù)）.Thefollowingisforreferenceonly：Dearparents____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursxxx【參考范文】IamnolongeralittlechildDearparents,Iama16-year-oldgirlnow.Iamnotalittlechildanymore.So,dearmomanddad,pleasedon’ttreatmeasalittlebaby.Ihavechangedalot,Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,Iamstrongerandastallasyou.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.SinceIhavegrownup,Icandoalotofthingsbymyself.Forexample,Icandohousework.Icanworkinthefield.Ialwayshelpoldpeoplewhentheyareintrouble.AlltheteachersandstudentsthinkI’magoodgirl.Thereisnoneedforyoutoworryaboutme.Dearmomanddad,pleasetrustme.It’stimeformetobeindependentnow!Yoursxxx預(yù)測二【題目要求】你校設(shè)想在"英語周"期間進行一次英語演講比賽，為此你對部分同學(xué)進行了問卷調(diào)查，了解他們參與比賽的意愿，請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕南敕?。要求?.文章必須包括以上所有的信息，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；2.你的想法必須在兩個句子以上；3.詞數(shù)：90左右，文章開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：演講比賽speechcontestIhaverecentlydoneasurveytoknowifstudentswouldliketojoinintheEnglishspeechcontest.Herearetheresults.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】IhaverecentlydoneasurveytoknowifstudentswouldliketojoinintheEnglishspeechcontest.Herearetheresults.Moststudentssurveyedwouldliketotakepartinthecontest.Theythinkitwillhelpthemimprovetheirspeakingskillsandbecomemoreconfident.Besides,theycanlearnfromothers.However,27%ofthestudentswon’tjoininthecontest.Someofthemarenotbraveenoughtospeakinpublic,whileothersareafraidthattheywillfail.What’smore,theyhavetospendalotoftimepracticing.Asforme,I’dliketojoininthecontest.Icanmakesomenewfriendsandchallengemyselfatthesametime.預(yù)測三【題目要求】某英語報開展“HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblems”征文比賽。請你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容要點如下:1.雖然我們時常感到壓力,但是應(yīng)該找到合適的方式來解決壓力?？梢赃x擇穿像藍色和白色一樣的冷色調(diào)來使我們自己感到放松；2.我們應(yīng)該足夠細心，因為“失之毫厘，謬以千里”；3.也應(yīng)該在課業(yè)和業(yè)余愛好之間取得平衡；4.任何時候都不要失去信心。通過努力學(xué)習(xí)，我們會實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。5.有問題時，我們...要求1.內(nèi)容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)90個左右開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.第5點的內(nèi)容需展開合理想象，用2-3句話HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblemsWestudentsalwayshavealotofproblemswithourschoolwork.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadviceisvaluable.【參考范文】Westudentsalwayshavealotofproblemswithourschoolwork.Althoughweoftenfeelstressed,weshouldfindsuitablewaystodealwithstress.Wecanwearcalmcolorslikeblueandwhitetomakeusfeelrelaxed.Weshouldbecarefulenoughbecause“amissisasgoodasamile”.Weshouldalsoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Trytoplanyoursparetimewell.I’msurewecandoalmostanythingifwenevergiveup.Moreover,wewillmakegreatprogressthroughhardwork.However,whenhavingproblems,wecanaskpeoplearoundusforhelp.It’snotwisetokeepourworriestoourselves.Ihopemyadviceisofgreatvalue.預(yù)測四【題目要求】給Mr.Know先生寫一封信，關(guān)于你學(xué)校的規(guī)矩太多啦，比方說，必須穿校服，不能打耳洞，不能抽煙喝酒打架等。課堂上認真聽課，不能遲到，不能亂丟垃圾，等等。不允許你做這個，不允許你們做那個，并提出你的看法。你認為你們應(yīng)該被允許做一些事情，并希望得到他的幫助。要求：1.語言通順、流暢。2.80詞左右。3.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：listentotheteachercarefully,keepeveryrule,breaktherule,weshouldbeallowedtodosomething,notjustbetoldtodoeverything.DearMr.Know,Ihavetoomanyrulesinmyschool.Ican’tstandit.SoIamwritingtoaskforhelp_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________FromastudentLiLei【參考范文】DearMr.Know,Ihavetoomanyrulesinmyschool.Ican’tstandit.SoIamwritingtoaskforhelp.Firstofall,Ican’teatfoodinclassandthrowlittereverywhere.Secondly,ImustlistentotheteachercarefullyandIhavetobequietinclass.ThenIcan'tbelateforclass,andIcan'tsmoke,drink,fightandsoon.ButIthinktheserulesarewhatImustfollowbecausetheyaregoodforus.What’smore,IhavetowearauniformandI'mnotallowedtopiercemyearsorfightwithmyclassmates.Oh,Idon’tlikethematall!Ineedyourhelp.Ithinkweshouldbeallowedtodosomething,notjustbetoldtodoeverything.FromastudentLiLei預(yù)測五【題目要求】關(guān)于學(xué)生減負的話題已經(jīng)爭論很長時間了，但是仍然不