2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+未給小費(fèi)后42.4+萬美元支票的波折+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)未給小費(fèi)后，42.4萬美元支票的波折1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文It’scommonknowledgethatserversusuallyrelyontipmoneytotopupaprettysmallsalary.Sousuallyit’spolitepracticetotipthem,eveniftheydon’tdoasatisfyingjob.KarenVinacourandherdaughterfeltasthoughatipwasn’treasonableduringtheirvisittoapizzeria,however.In2019,VinacourandherdaughterwerehavinglunchatthefamedNewYorkeateryPatsy’sPizzeria.TheirserverthatdaywasArmandoMarkaj,a27-year-oldwhowasservingslicesandotherdishes.4續(xù)寫原文Vinacourandherdaughterquestionedwhythereweren’tmorepicturesofwomenonthewalls.Whentheservershrugged(聳肩)andsaid,“Maybewomendon’teatalotofpizza?”,sheandherdaughtergotalittleannoyedsotheydidn’ttiptheserver.Instead,sheandherdaughtergathereduptheirthingsandleft.Unfortunately,theyleftoneveryimportantthingbehind:aCitibankcheckfor$424,000.WhenMarkajcleanedthetable,hefoundthemoney,butwhenheranoutside,themotheranddaughterhadleft.Sohehandeditovertotherestaurant’sowner,FrankBrija.Theythoughttheownerofthemoneywouldcomebacktoaskforthecheck.“Wethoughtforsureitwasabillionaireorsomethingwhocameinhere,becausewhowalksaroundwithachecklikethat?”hesaid.5續(xù)寫原文Asitturnedout,Vinacourwasusingthemoneyforadownpaymentonahouseshehadseeninthearea.Themoneywastheretired79-year-oldsocialworker’slifesavings.SheandherdaughterhadbeenlookingatthehouseandstoppedatPatsy’sforaquicklunchafterward.Thenextnightsherealizedthecheckwasmissingandcalledherdaughter.Herdaughtersearchedthroughthetrashbin(垃圾桶)andeverywherebuthadnoluck.Theycouldn’trememberwheretheyleftthecheck.6段首句Paragraph1：Atthesametime,withnoonetoclaimthecheck,MarkajandBrijadecidedtodosomething.Paragraph2：Puttingdownthephonefromthepolice,theexcitedVinacourimmediatelywenttotherestaurant.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了通常給服務(wù)員小費(fèi)是禮貌之舉，但2019年，凱倫?維納庫爾和女兒在紐約知名披薩店帕齊披薩店用餐時(shí)，因服務(wù)員的一句回復(fù)不滿，未給小費(fèi)。她們離開時(shí)，遺落了一張42.4萬美元的花旗銀行支票，這是79歲退休社工維納庫爾的畢生積蓄，原打算用于購房首付。服務(wù)員阿爾曼多?馬爾卡伊清理餐桌時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)支票，交給了餐廳老板弗蘭克?布里亞。兩人等待失主，而維納庫爾和女兒次日才發(fā)現(xiàn)支票丟失，四處尋找無果。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Atthesametime,withnoonetoclaimthecheck,MarkajandBrijadecidedtodosomething.與此同時(shí)，由于一直無人認(rèn)領(lǐng)支票，馬爾卡伊和布里亞決定采取行動(dòng)。他們深知這張巨額支票對(duì)失主的重要性，內(nèi)心充滿擔(dān)憂。經(jīng)過一番商討，他們迅速聯(lián)系了當(dāng)?shù)鼐?，詳?xì)地說明了發(fā)現(xiàn)支票的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及支票的相關(guān)信息。警方隨即展開調(diào)查，仔細(xì)查看餐廳及周邊的監(jiān)控錄像，走訪附近的商戶和路人，試圖尋找線索。馬爾卡伊和布里亞也在社區(qū)內(nèi)積極傳播消息，通過張貼啟事、在社交媒體發(fā)布信息等方式，期望能盡快找到失主。盡管之前未收到維納庫爾母女的小費(fèi)，但此刻他們心中只有一個(gè)念頭，就是將這筆錢物歸原主。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Puttingdownthephonefromthepolice,theexcitedVinacourimmediatelywenttotherestaurant.維納庫爾接到警方的電話后，激動(dòng)不已，立刻前往餐廳。一進(jìn)門，她就看到馬爾卡伊和布里亞站在那里，手中拿著那張令她魂?duì)繅?mèng)繞的支票。她快步走上前，眼中閃爍著淚花，先是向兩人真誠地道歉，為自己之前未給小費(fèi)的行為感到愧疚。隨后，她對(duì)他們拾金不昧的高尚品德贊不絕口，并當(dāng)場(chǎng)拿出一筆可觀的錢作為酬謝。然而，馬爾卡伊微笑著婉拒了，他表示歸還支票是自己應(yīng)該做的，看到維納庫爾找回積蓄，他感到由衷的高興。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Atthesametime,withnoonetoclaimthecheck,MarkajandBrijadecidedtodosomething.Theywereacutelyawareofthesignificanceofthislarge-sumchecktoitsowner,andtheirheartswerefilledwithanxiety.Afterathoroughdiscussion,theypromptlycontactedthelocalpolice,elaboratingonthetime,placeoffindingthecheck,andallrelevantdetails.Thepoliceimmediatelylaunchedaninvestigation,meticulouslyexaminingthesurveillancefootageoftherestaurantanditssurroundings,andinterviewingnearbymerchantsandpassers-byinanattempttofindclues.MarkajandBrijaalsoactivelyspreadthenewswithinthecommunity.Theypostednoticesandsharedinformationonsocialmedia,hopingtoquicklylocatetheowner.DespitenotreceivingatipfromVinacourandherdaughterpreviously,theironlythoughtnowwastoreturnthemoneytoitsrightfulowner.14范文呈現(xiàn)Puttingdownthephonefromthepolice,theexcitedVinacourimmediatelywenttotherestaurant.Assoonassheentered,shesawMarkajandBrijastandingthere,holdingthepreciouscheckthathadhauntedherdreams.Sherushedforward,hereyesglisteningwithtears.First,shesincerelyapologizedtothemfornottippingbefore,feelingashamedofherbehavior.Then,shehighlypraisedtheirnoblevirtueofhonestyandimmediatelytookoutasubstantialamountofmoneyasareward.However,Markajsmiledandpolitelydeclined.Hesaidthatreturningthecheckwastherightthingtodo,andhewassincerelyhappytoseeVinacourrecoverhersavings.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Atthesametime,withnoonetoclaimthecheck,MarkajandBrijadecidedtodosomething.Deeplycognizantofthecheck'sgravityforitsowner,theywastednotimecontactingthelocalpolice,furnishingeverydetail.Thepolice,inturn,launchedameticulousinvestigation,poringoversurveillancefootageandcanvassingpotentialwitnesses.MarkajandBrijaalsotooktothecommunity,postingnoticesandleveragingsocialmedia,allinthehopeofreunitingthecheckwithitsrightfulowner.Theiractofintegritytranscendedthelackofatip.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Puttingdownthephonefromthepolice,theexcitedVinacourimmediatelywenttotherestaurant.There,MarkajandBrijaawaitedwiththemuch-sought-aftercheck.Overcomewithemotion,Vinacourfirstapologizedprofuselyfornottipping