2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：森林中老虎與我的生死守護+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習森林中，老虎與我的生死守護1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Myunclewasaforestofficerandthistimehebroughtmethere.Hishousewasintheforest.Whenwearrived,Ericsawusandcamerushingtoopenthegardengate.Hewasanelderlymanwhodidmyuncle’scookingandotherhouseholdwork.“Howareyou?”Icalledout.“I’mallright,”hesaid,“butPapalisn’t.”Myuncle,whowalkedaheadofus,stoppedandasked,“WhyEric,whatiswrongwithourfriend?”“Fromthedayyouwent,shehasnotbeeneatingproperly,”answeredEric.Myunclelookedworried.4續(xù)寫原文“WhoisPapal?”IaskedEric.“Why!Don’tyouknow?Heresheis.”Iturnedround.Myheartskippedabeat.TherewasPapal,aRoyalBengaltiger,givingmyuncleatremendouswelcomebylicking(舔)hisface.Thenshecaughtsightofmeandcamestillwhileshesniffedmeallover.Butwhenshetriedtolickmyface,Ialwaysrefused.LaterIwastoldthatPapal’smotherwaskilledwhenshewasonlytendaysold.Ifeltsorryforher.Soonmyuncleleftforwork.Iwonderedhowtopassmytime.TherewasasmallpondbehindthehouseandIlikedtositbesideit.Igotup.ImmediatelyPapalmovedhertailtoshowshehadseenmemove.Icouldnolongerbearthefeelingofbeingconstantlywatchedbytwosilenteyes.Iwalkedoffangrilyandsatbesidethepond.“WOOSH!!!”Iheardasplashingsound.Ilookedup.Papalhaddivedintothewaterandwasswimminginthepond.Soonshecameoutofthepondandsatbreathinginfrontofme.ThenPapalgrowled(咆哮).5續(xù)寫原文Afterawhile,Papalgrowledagain—thistimetherewassomethingurgentinhergrowl.Icouldnothelpturningbackandlookingather.Shewasstaringatsomethinginfrontofme.Ilookedinthesamedirectionandbrokeintoacoldsweat(冒冷汗)!Therewasasnakelessthansixfeetaway!6段首句Paragraph1：Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.Paragraph2：ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了“我”隨身為森林官員的叔叔來到森林中的住所，結識了叔叔的幫傭埃里克。得知一只叫帕帕爾的孟加拉虎因叔叔離開而食欲不振。帕帕爾母親早亡，“我”對它心生憐憫。叔叔去工作后，“我”在屋后池塘邊休息，帕帕爾也跟了過來。突然，帕帕爾發(fā)出帶有緊迫感的咆哮，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)前方不到六英尺處有一條準備攻擊“我”的蛇。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.當球朝我飛來時，我腦海中一片空白，身體仿佛被定住了一般。曾經那些在球場上的失敗經歷如潮水般涌上心頭，讓我差點放棄。然而，就在這關鍵時刻，我看到了教練充滿期待的眼神，聽到了隊友們?yōu)槲壹佑偷暮艉?。我心中涌起一股力量，告訴自己不能退縮。我迅速調整狀態(tài)，全力奔跑，精準判斷球的落點，然后用盡全身力氣，一腳將球踢向對方球門。足球在空中劃過一道漂亮的弧線，直奔球門而去。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.隨后我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己緊緊抱住了帕帕爾。我心中滿是感激與后怕，若不是它，我恐怕早已被蛇咬傷。帕帕爾用頭蹭了蹭我，仿佛在安慰我。從那以后，我和帕帕爾的關系變得更加親密。我會陪它在森林里散步，看它在池塘里歡快地游泳。它也總是像忠誠的衛(wèi)士一樣，時刻守護在我身邊，我們成為了彼此信賴的好朋友。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thesnakewasreadytoattackme.Inthenickoftime,Papalrushedforwardlikeanarrowleavingthebow.Sheletoutaloudroar,whichmadetheleavesaroundtremble.Thensheleapedhighintotheairandstruckthesnakewithhersharpclaws.Thesnaketwisteditsbodynimblytoavoid,butPapalkeptchasingitandusedherbodytosuppressthesnake.Afterafiercestruggle,Papalfinallymanagedtobitethesnake'svitalpointandsubdueit.Atthismoment,Iwasstillinshock,mylegsweak,andIslumpedtotheground.14范文呈現(xiàn)ThenIfoundmyselfhuggingPapal.Myheartwasfilledwithgratitudeandfear.Ifithadn'tbeenforher,Imighthavebeenbittenbythesnake.Papalrubbedherheadagainstme,asiftocomfortme.Fromthenon,therelationshipbetweenPapalandmebecameevencloser.Iwouldaccompanyherforwalksintheforestandwatchherswimhappilyinthepond.Shewasalwayslikealoyalguard,stayingbymysideallthetime,andwebecamegoodfriendswhotrustedeachother.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thesnakecoiled,readytostrike.Inaninstant,Papal,withaspeedrivalingthatofabullet,launchedherselftowardstheserpent.Adeafeningroarescapedherjaws,causingtheveryleavestoquakeinfear.Vaultingintotheair,herrazor-sharpclawsslashedthroughtheair,aimingforthesnake.Thesnake,withremarkableagility,wriggledtoevade,yetPapal,undeterred,relentlesslypursued,usinghermassivebodytopinthesnakedown.Afteraferociousbattle,Papal,withavice-likegrip,sankherteethintothesnake'svulnerablespot,finallysubduingit.Atthatmoment,Iwaslefttrembling,mylegsbucklingbeneathme,andIcollapsedontotheground,stillreelingfromtheshock.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Then,almostinstinctively,IfoundmyselfembracingPapal.Overwhelmedbygratitudeandlingeringfear,Irealizedthathaditnotbeenforher,Iwouldhavesurelyfallenvictimtothesnake'svenomousbite.Papal,inturn,nuzzledagainstme,asiftosoothemyfrayednerves.Fromthatdayforward,ourbonddeepenedexponentially.Iaccompaniedheronleisurelystrollsthroughtheforest,delightinginwatchingherfrolicint