13 杜絕校園欺凌創(chuàng)建和諧校園2022年中考英語時(shí)文熱點(diǎn)話題作文

13杜絕校園欺凌，創(chuàng)建和諧校園2022年中考英語時(shí)文熱點(diǎn)話題作文一、講稿1．近日，“校園欺凌”（bullyinginschool）已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，閱讀完上面的帖子后你有何感想？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的寫作要求，寫一篇演講稿談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括：1.“校園欺凌”對(duì)我們有什么危害？2.碰到此類事件，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做？請(qǐng)?zhí)岢鰞牲c(diǎn)建議。3.人人有責(zé)保持校園安全，并呼吁同學(xué)們抵制“校園欺凌”。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不必抄寫在答題卡上。Goodafternoon,everyone.TodayIamgoingtotalksomethingaboutbullyinginschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou【答案】Goodafternoon,everyone.TodayIamgoingtotalksomethingaboutbullyinginschool.Inmyopinion,bullyingcanmakeusfeelunsafeandunhappy.Itmakesushardtolearnatschoolandgetonwellwithothers.Noonehastherighttohurtus.Ifsomeonebulliesusorweseebullyinghappening,weshouldn'tbeafraidtostopit.First,weshouldtrustourselvesandtellthemit'snotrighttodolikethat.Second,wecanaskteachersandparentsforhelp.It'severyone'sdutytomakeschoolssafe.Ihopeallofusshouldbefriendlytoothersandsaynotobullying.That'sall.Thankyou.【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇演講稿談?wù)勀銓?duì)“校園欺凌”的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：TodayIamgoingto……，Itmakesushardto……，Ifsomeonebulliesus……，It'severyone'sdutyto……，Ihope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我演講稿的目的是談?wù)摗靶@欺凌”，接下來介紹“校園欺凌”的危害以及如何面對(duì)這個(gè)問題，最后呼吁同學(xué)們抵制“校園欺凌”。此處talkabout,inone’sopinion,makesbdosth,getonwellwithsb,beafraidtodosth,asksbforhelp,befriendlyto等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。二、看圖作文2．請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以＂Howdoyoubehaveatschool?＂為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1）請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖片；2）如果你受到欺負(fù)時(shí)，你該如何應(yīng)對(duì)(至少2點(diǎn)）；3)針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做(至少2點(diǎn)）。注意：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3）100詞左右，已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（1（2參考詞匯：beat,kick,respect,harmonious(和諧的),stopbullying(欺凌)Howdoyoubehaveatschool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureOne,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howdoyoubehaveatschool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureOne,wecanseeagroupofstudentsholdingsticks.Theyarebeatingandkickingotherstudents.InPictureTwo,anelderandstrongerstudentisaskingformoneyfromothers.Thisiscalledschoolbullying.IfImeetbullyingatschool,Iwillfirstobeytheirordersandgivethemmypocketmoneytoprotectmyself.Inthisway,Icankeepmyselfsafe.Safetyisalwaysthefirst.Then,Iwilltellwhathappenedtobothmyparentsandmyteacherssothattheycanhelpme.Iwon’tkeepittomyselfbecausemaybethebadguyswillgotoyounexttime.Asastudent,Ithinkweshouldrespecteachother.Ifwehavedifferentideas,we'dbetterdiscussinsteadoffighting.Besides,weshouldhelpthoseclassmateswhoareintrouble.Let'sstopbullyingandbuildaharmoniousschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以＂Howdoyoubehaveatschool?＂為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1）請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖片；2）如果你受到欺負(fù)時(shí)，你該如何應(yīng)對(duì)(至少2點(diǎn)）；3)針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做(至少2點(diǎn)）。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來時(shí)為主；本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：agroupofstudents；askingfor；protectmyself；keepmyselfsafe；sotha；insteadoffighting；insteadoffighting。句型：賓語從句IfImeetbullyingatschool,Iwillfirstobeytheirordersandgivethemmypocketmoneytoprotectmyself.Ithinkweshouldrespecteachother.目的狀語此句Then,Iwilltellwhathappenedtobothmyparentsandmyteacherssothattheycanhelpme.原因狀語從句Iwon’tkeepittomyselfbecausemaybethebadguyswillgotoyounexttime.3．請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以＂Howtobehave(表現(xiàn))atschool?＂為題寫一篇短文。要求：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖片，并針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做（至少2點(diǎn)）；2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名；3.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：beat,kick,laughat,respect(尊重),harmonious(和諧的)HowtoBehaveatSchool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureOne,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoBehaveatSchool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureOne,agroupofstudentsarelaughingatapoorboybecausehefailedintheexam.InPictureTwo,twogirlsarebeatingtheirclassmate.Howrudetheyare!Weshouldsaynotosuchthings.Asastudent,Ithinkweshouldrespecteachotherandbefriendlytoothers.Ifwehavedifferentideas,we’dbetterdiscussinsteadoffighting.Besides,weshouldhelpourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.Let’splayaroleinbuildingaharmoniousschool.【解析】這篇作文要求我們觀察圖片，根據(jù)圖片所示的內(nèi)容，以HowtoBehaveatSchool為題目，寫一篇文章。首先我們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，圖片中給我們展示了校園中的一些不好的現(xiàn)象，即校園欺凌，有武力上的，也有精神上的。我們應(yīng)先把圖片中的內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)要闡述一下，然后針對(duì)校園欺凌這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法，并談一談自己在學(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做。這樣我們的文章就有了大體的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)，寫作時(shí)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并分段敘述，這樣比較有條理，層次比較清晰。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來敘述，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。單詞、句型、語法要合乎英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~和短語，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，使句式準(zhǔn)確，然后再點(diǎn)綴一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語和較復(fù)雜的句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，使文章的表達(dá)更加流暢、連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文分兩段，第一段中作者描寫了圖片中展示的內(nèi)容，作者觀察仔細(xì)，描述得也非常準(zhǔn)確，雖然是簡(jiǎn)單的兩句話，但意思非常明確。第二段中作者對(duì)校園欺凌這種現(xiàn)象發(fā)表了自己的看法，并提出建議，我們?cè)趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何表現(xiàn)。這一部分的內(nèi)容非常充實(shí)，所提建議也很合理。這種分段敘述使文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理。短文中使用了正確的語法，句式表達(dá)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，且文章中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如InPictureOne,agroupofstudentsarelaughingatapoorboybecausehefailedintheexam.、Howrudetheyare!、Asastudent,Ithinkweshouldrespecteachotherandbefriendlytoothers.、Ifwehavedifferentideas,we’dbetterdiscussinsteadoffighting.、Besides,weshouldhelpourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.等。4．請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容,以“Howtobehave(表現(xiàn)）atschool?”為題寫ー篇短文。要求：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖片,并針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做(至少2點(diǎn)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.80個(gè)詞左右,已給出的部分不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：beat,kick,laughat,respect(尊重),harmonious(和諧的)HowtoBehaveatSchool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureOne,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoBehaveatSchool?Thereissomethingunpleasanthappeningatschool.InPictureTwo,twogirlsarebeatingtheirclassmate.InPictureOne,agroupofstudentsarelaughingatapoorboybecausehefailedintheexam.Howrudetheyare!Weshouldsaynotosuchthings.Asastudent,Ithinkweshouldrespecteachotherandbefriendlytoothers.Ifwehavedifferentideas,we’dbetterdiscussinsteadoffighting.Besides,weshouldhelpourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.Let’splayaroleinbuildingaharmoniousschool【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖片,并針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，人稱為第一、三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Thereis……，twogirlsarebeating……，Ithinkweshould……，Let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了兩幅畫的內(nèi)容，接下來介紹針對(duì)這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做，最后我們?cè)跔I建和諧校園應(yīng)起作用。此處agroupof,laughat,eachother,befriendlyto,beintrouble,playaroleindoingsth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。三、材料作文5.同學(xué)之間的友誼本該是純真的，但是最近在少數(shù)校園里出現(xiàn)了一些不和諧的現(xiàn)象，有些學(xué)生欺凌(bully)自己的同學(xué)，對(duì)同學(xué)造成了傷害，請(qǐng)你寫一篇80詞左右文章，說說你對(duì)此事的看法，要求如下：1.寫寫你身邊曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的或你聽說過的校園欺凌事件(school-bullies)，以及你對(duì)這件事的看法。2.請(qǐng)給那些被欺凌的同學(xué)三點(diǎn)建議，該如何面對(duì)同學(xué)的欺凌。3.呼吁大家都來阻止校園欺凌，共建平安美好校園。注意：詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Recently,Iheardthattherewasanincidentofmanypeoplebeatingupagirl.Mostofthepeopleinvolvedwerebetween12and16yearsold.Thisisaterribleschool-bullies.Theincidentnotonlydamagedthephysicalandmentalhealthofgirls,butalsochallengedthemoralbottomlineofschools,thepublicandthelaw.Firstofall,ifyou'veeverexperiencedschoolbullyingorareexperiencingit,weshouldbebraveenoughtosay“no”tothiskindofbehavior.Besides,wecanaskteachersandparentsforhelpwhenwecan'thandleitourselves.What’smore,takeuptheweaponoflawandfightagainstthisunhealthyphenomenon.It’severyone’sdutytomakeschoolsafe.Ihopeallofusshouldbefriendlytoothersandsaynotoschool-bullies.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求就社會(huì)中的校園欺凌現(xiàn)象寫一篇文章。根據(jù)題目要點(diǎn)可知，第一段講述自己聽說或身邊發(fā)生過的校園欺凌事件，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)事件的看法；第二段闡述我們應(yīng)該怎樣應(yīng)對(duì)校園欺凌行為，提出至少三點(diǎn)建議；最后一段升華主題，呼吁人們構(gòu)建良好的校園環(huán)境。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主題為“校園欺凌”；文章需以第一人稱為主，淺談自己的建議和看法；以一般過去時(shí)敘述校園欺凌事件，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)闡述建議觀點(diǎn)；文章要點(diǎn)要齊全，邏輯要清晰，可使用what’smore、besides等詞匯厘清文章脈絡(luò)，使讀者一目了然。6．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1．謹(jǐn)慎交友；2．不參與打架斗毆；3．面對(duì)校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。參考詞匯：self--protection(自我保護(hù))；bully(n.&v．欺凌)；personalsafety(人身安全)；haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆)Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowcanweprotectourselvesatschoolSchoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself--protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehaviors.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool”為題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容，從謹(jǐn)慎交友、不參與打架斗毆、面對(duì)校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)等方面寫一篇短文；注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來展開寫作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。7．近幾年來，校園欺凌(schoolbullies)事件時(shí)有發(fā)生，學(xué)會(huì)自我保護(hù)是我們中學(xué)生需要具備的一種意識(shí)和能力，我們應(yīng)該珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，做好自我保護(hù)。請(qǐng)以HowCanWeProtectOurselves為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勗谏钪形覀儜?yīng)該怎樣自我保護(hù)(self﹣protection)。提示：1.不單獨(dú)游泳；2.謹(jǐn)慎交友；3.遇到危險(xiǎn)報(bào)警或向老師求助；4.飲食及交通安全等…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowCanWeProtectOurselvesSelf-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Buthowcanweprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Besides,weshouldn’tcrowdeachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.Last,summeriscoming,wemustrememberit’sdangeroustoswimalone.Inshort,everyoneneedstolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“HowCanWeProtectOurselves”為題寫一篇短文，介紹自我保護(hù)的方法。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，文章可從飲食、交通、出行、緊急避險(xiǎn)等方面展開。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章以第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時(shí)按照要點(diǎn)分段敘述，可使用First、Second等增強(qiáng)文章的條理性。四、書信作文8．假如你是李華,校園英文報(bào)的編輯,近日收到讀者John的來信，談?wù)摰剿灰恍┩瑢W(xué)欺負(fù)的經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給John寫一封回信。寫作要點(diǎn):1.安慰他不要害怕和差愧；2.學(xué)校也正在采取相關(guān)措施:1月16日(周四)晚上8點(diǎn)在學(xué)校會(huì)議室有一個(gè)關(guān)于如何應(yīng)對(duì)校園欺凌的講座。3.你的建議:(至少兩點(diǎn))寫作要求:1.80詞左右，第一句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.必須包含以上寫作要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。4.語句通暢，語法正確，書寫工整。參考詞匯:欺凌n.bullying欺凌者n.bullies措施n.measuresDearJohn,Iamsorrytolearnwhathashappenedtoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】DearJohn,Iamsorrytolearnwhathashappenedtoyou.Ithinkyoushouldbebravetofaceitanddon'tbeafraidorshamedbecauseitisnotyourfault.Ourschoolistakingactiontosolveschoolbullying.What'smore,alectureonhowtodealwithbullyingwillbeheldintheschoolconferenceroomonThursday,Jan.16th,at8p.m.Inmyopinion,youshouldtellyourexperiencetoyourteachersandparents,theyareadultsandtheywillhelpyou.Meanwhile,youcantalktothemwhobullyyou,askwhytheydoitandputtheminyourshoes.Tellbulliesnobodyshouldbebulliedandbullyingitselfiswrong.Iamsureeverythingwillbebetter.Yours,LiHua【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文。要求根據(jù)針對(duì)John的問題和提示的內(nèi)容給John回信。寫作時(shí)要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；將題目要求的要點(diǎn)都很好地融入到文章當(dāng)中，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：happento；takeaction；Inmyopinion；Meanwhile等。句型：Meanwhile,youcantalktothemwhobullyyou,askwhytheydoitandputtheminyourshoes.使用了定語從句和賓語從句。Iamsureeverythingwillbebetter.使用了賓語從句。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清文章的要求和要點(diǎn)；其次，理順自己的行文思路；再次緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過渡；最后要仔細(xì)檢查是否有單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤和標(biāo)點(diǎn)的誤用等，還要注意是否出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，有無重復(fù)遺漏，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。五、話題作文9．近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問題等嚴(yán)重后果。請(qǐng)以“Myopinionsaboutschoolbullying”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?.Whatdoyouthinkofschoolbullying?2.Whatwillyoudoifyouarebulliedoryouseesomebodyelsebeingbullied?要求：1.所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2.80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問題mentalhealthproblems.Myopinionsaboutschoolbullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyopinionsaboutschoolbullyingSchoolbullyingisabigproblemthathasgotmoreandmoreattentioninsociety.Beingbulliedcanmakestudentsfeelscaredorupset.Somestudentsareafraidofgoingtoschool.Schoolbullyingcanevenleadtomoreseriousmentalhealthproblems.Sohowshouldwestopschoolbullying?IfIseesomebodybeingbulliedorIambullied,Iwilltelltheteachersormyparentsatonce.Itisnotagoodideatodoanybadthingstothebulliesonmyown.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)校園欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如makesbdo,beafraidof,leadto,mentalhealthproblem,atonce,onone’sown,itisnotagoodideatodoanybadthingstothebulliesonmyown中it作形式主語以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上面五個(gè)問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。提示：1.謹(jǐn)慎交友。2.不參與打架斗毆。3.面對(duì)校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。參考詞匯：1.self-protection（自我保護(hù)）2.bully(n./v.欺凌）3.personalsafety（人身安全）4.haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆）HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture,doyouthinkso?【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：在學(xué)校我們?nèi)绾伪Ｗo(hù)自己？幾乎每個(gè)學(xué)校都有欺負(fù)學(xué)校的行為。在我的學(xué)校里，我們有時(shí)會(huì)被欺負(fù)，一些學(xué)生會(huì)受到傷害，所以在學(xué)校欺負(fù)別人或被欺負(fù)對(duì)我們來說真的很不好。當(dāng)我們遇到校園欺凌的麻煩時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該阻止任何校園欺凌。例如，在發(fā)生欺凌行為之前，我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜。與他人交朋友時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該總是友好和樂于助人。以下是我關(guān)于制止學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一些想法。首先，我們將學(xué)習(xí)如何自我保護(hù)，因?yàn)槲覀兊娜松戆踩亲钪匾摹５诙?，我們要時(shí)刻與他人和睦相處，不能有任何暴力行為。最后，遵守校規(guī)也是避免學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一種方式。我希望將來學(xué)校里不會(huì)發(fā)生欺負(fù)學(xué)生的事，你這么認(rèn)為嗎？【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。寫作六步法：1.審題：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯(cuò)誤：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。11.讀寫綜合練習(xí)近年來，校園欺凌（SchoolBullies）事件時(shí)有發(fā)生，學(xué)會(huì)自我保護(hù)是中學(xué)生需要具備的能力，我們應(yīng)該珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，結(jié)合自我認(rèn)識(shí)，談?wù)勗趯W(xué)習(xí)生活中我們中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣自我保護(hù)，健康快樂地成長。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，完成A,B兩項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)。用完整的英語句子或簡(jiǎn)略的英語答語回答下面五個(gè)問題。11．Doschoolbulliessometimeshappeninyourschool?_______________________________________________________________________12．Areschoolbulliesgoodorbadformiddleschoolstudents?_______________________________________________________________________13．Whatwillyoudowhenyouareinthetroubleofschoolbullies?_________________________________________________________________________14．Whatkindoffriendsdoyouliketomakeatschool?________________________________________________________________________15．Whatareyourideasaboutstoppingviolence(暴力）atschool?______________________________________________________________________【答案】11．No,theydon’t./Yes,theydo.12．Theyarebadformiddleschoolstudents.13．Staycalm/Askparents(teachers)forhelp./Callthepolice/…14．She/Heiskind/helpful/friendly/likesstudying…15．IhateschoolBullies,Ihopethatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.【解析】11．題意：校園欺凌在你的學(xué)校時(shí)有發(fā)生嗎？此題是開放性題目，要根據(jù)事實(shí)回答，“有”回答是Yes,theydo；“沒有”回答是No,theydon’t.。12．題意：校園欺凌對(duì)中學(xué)生是有好處還是壞處？本題考查常識(shí)，我們都知道校園欺凌對(duì)中學(xué)生是沒有好處；故答案是Theyarebadformiddleschoolstudents.。13．題意：當(dāng)你遇到校園欺凌事件時(shí)，你會(huì)怎么做？此題是開放性題目，只要回答合理即可，注意觀點(diǎn)正確；故答案可以是Staycalm/Askparents(teachers)forhelp./Callthepolice/…。14．題意：你喜歡在學(xué)校交什么樣的朋友？此題是開放