2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：基特的出現(xiàn)：為艾瑪驅(qū)散體育課的陰霾+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)基特的出現(xiàn)：為艾瑪驅(qū)散體育課的陰霾1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthestudentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn’tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhyherthighs(大腿)weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltassmallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys—theloud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.4續(xù)寫原文Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.OnemoreyearandI’llhavegraduatedandwon’thavetotakethisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensofcuriouseyes.Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn’taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownonherdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,I’mKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.Youmightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn’tgethurtmoreseriously.It’snowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”AfterKit’sintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcouldsomeonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.5段首句Paragraph1：Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Paragraph2：Onedayafterayear,Ireceivedane-mailfromthemagazine.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8艾瑪因?yàn)樯聿谋韧g人胖，在體育課上總是遭受同學(xué)的嘲笑和異樣目光，這讓她非常自卑，滿心期待著畢業(yè)后能擺脫體育課。然而，新同學(xué)基特的到來改變了這一切?；赜兄?dú)特的外表，臉上還有一道疤痕，但她自我介紹時(shí)表現(xiàn)得十分自信，這讓艾瑪大為震驚。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.午餐時(shí)間，艾瑪像往常一樣和幾個(gè)同學(xué)坐在餐桌旁，這時(shí)基特朝他們走了過來?；貪M臉笑容，大方地跟大家打招呼，隨后在艾瑪身旁坐下。她興致勃勃地和同學(xué)們分享自己以前學(xué)校的各種趣事，還時(shí)不時(shí)開個(gè)小玩笑，逗得大家哈哈大笑?；刈⒁獾桨斠恢蹦徽Z(yǔ)，便主動(dòng)找她聊天。她真誠(chéng)地夸贊艾瑪今天的衣服顏色很適合她，這讓艾瑪既驚喜又害羞。接著，基特?zé)崆榈匮?qǐng)艾瑪放學(xué)后一起去看新上映的動(dòng)畫電影，說那是她一直期待的。艾瑪猶豫了一下，想到自己很少有這樣的社交活動(dòng)，最終還是點(diǎn)頭答應(yīng)了。這個(gè)邀請(qǐng)讓艾瑪心里涌起一股暖流，原本平淡的一天也變得不一樣了。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onedayafterayear,Ireceivedane-mailfromthemagazine.周五，可怕的體育課時(shí)間到了，但這次，基特和她在一起。當(dāng)同學(xué)們都在跑道上集合時(shí)，艾瑪?shù)男奶挥勺灾鞯丶涌?，眼神中透露出緊張?；孛翡J地察覺到了艾瑪?shù)牟话?，她走上前，輕輕拍了拍艾瑪?shù)募绨颍抗鈭?jiān)定地說：“別擔(dān)心，有我在?！迸懿竭^程中，那些愛嘲笑人的同學(xué)又想對(duì)艾瑪說些難聽的話，基特立刻大聲制止：“請(qǐng)你們別這樣，每個(gè)人都有自己的獨(dú)特之處，不應(yīng)該被嘲笑?！痹诨氐谋Ｗo(hù)下，艾瑪感受到了從未有過的勇氣。她不再害怕別人的目光，而是專注地向前奔跑，每一步都充滿了力量。這堂體育課，艾瑪徹底改變了以往的感受，她和基特一起，勇敢地邁出了自信的步伐。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Kitworeabigsmileandgreetedeveryonewarmly.ThenshesatdownbesideEmmanaturally.Shebegantoshareinterestingstoriesaboutherpreviousschoolvividly.Fromtimetotime,shemadesomefunnyjokes,whichmadeeveryoneburstintolaughter.NoticingthatEmmawasratherquiet,Kitstartedaconversationwithher.ShesincerelycomplimentedEmmaonhertasteinclothes,sayingthatthecolorofherdresssuitedherverywell.ThismadeEmmafeelsurprisedandshy.Then,KitinvitedEmmatowatchanewly-releasedanimatedmovieafterschool,sayingthatshehadbeenlookingforwardtoitforalongtime.Afteramomentofhesitation,Emmanoddedandagreed.ThisinvitationmadeEmmafeelwarminside,anditaddedatouchofcolortoherordinaryday.13范文呈現(xiàn)Onedayafterayear,Ireceivedane-mailfromthemagazine.MyheartracedasIsawthesender'sname.Withtremblinghands,Iclickedtoopenit.Tomygreatjoy,theeditorhighlypraisedmystory.Hesaidthatthecharactersinmystorywerevividandtheplotwastouching.TheywerewillingtopublishmyworkinthemagazineandaskedifIhadmoreworksforcooperation.Tearsfilledmyeyes.Iimmediatelysharedthegoodnewswithmyfamilyandfriends,especiallymyhigh-schoolfriendwhohadinspiredme.Thissuccessmadememoredeterminedtokeepwritingandpursuemydream.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedovertothem.Withabeamingsmileonherface,KitgreetedeveryonecordiallyandthenseatedherselfbesideEmma.Shelaunchedintovividaccountsofherexperiencesatherpreviousschool,punctuatingherstorieswithhilariousjokesthathadeveryoneinstitches.SensingEmma'sreticence,Kitmadeapointofengagingherinconversation.ShecomplimentedEmmasincerelyonherfashionsense,statingthatthecolorofheroutfitwasparticularlyflattering.ThisunexpectedpraiseleftEmmabothsurprisedandflattered.Subsequently,KitextendedaninvitationtoEmmatocatchanewly-releasedanimatedmovieafterschool,expressingherlong-standinganticipationforit.Afteramoment'shesitation,Emmaacquiesced,herheartwarmedbythegesture.Thissimpleinvitationtransformedwhathadpromisedtobeanordinarydayintosomethingspecial.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)OnFriday,itwastimeforthedreadedPEclass,butthistime,Kitwasbyherside.Asthestudentsassembledonthetrack,Emma'sheartpoundedwithanxiety,hernervousnesspalpable.Kit,ever-perceptive,noticedEmma'sdisquietimmediately.SheapproachedandgaveEmma'sshoulderareassuringpat,saying,"Don'tworry.I'vegotyourback."Duringthe